1. Winter Sky - 7Key (3.92 stars, 3521 notes)

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Glad to see you back~

Eternalie wrote:

Nyaho Reika-kun
sorry for long long delay~ uwu

hope it can help

mod

[diff diff desu]
00:00:894 - from here to here : 00:02:494 - Remove one of the hitsound , double piano hitsound of the same note is abit loud imho it's still correct I think good idea
01:24:694 (84694|0) - move to another collumn ? and that can adjust to other same notes such as : 01:25:494 (85494|6) - 01:27:094 (87094|0) - and such
(just stating cause it dosn't really have the same sounds even well you already removed two notes so it's concistently correct , well just a suggestion feel free) i think its good idea, but i think this placement good enough for finger xD
01:41:494 (101494|2,101594|1) - ctrl+J could make a cool pattern really cool, fit to the song
02:18:494 - from here to here : 02:19:694 - thoos notes could be only 1 simple note or two notes , suddenly becoming 3 is special well that can be a good thing too ^w^
03:02:694 (182694|6) - add note for piano (not neccesary here i think) still dont know if this triple or quadruple note.
03:03:494 (183494|0) - add note for piano this one is kind of important imho saved me, added
03:03:694 (183694|3) - add piano note ^ same, i think its triple
03:27:894 - add another note according to next section concistency : 03:31:094 (211094|4,211094|5,211094|2) - if you hear it deeply, there's another synth .-.
03:28:494 - add another note it doesn't neccesary
03:34:294 - ^ same doesnt have other synth/piano
03:34:894 - again desu doesnt have other synth/piano
04:10:294 - you could add one for hit hat here (or just keep it empty it's okay since it's forced jack here) i lost the "hat" sound if i didn't. added

piano '9'

Yoshiap wrote:

I'm kinda surprised this is only rated 3.89*. Then again, I've long since passed the point of being able to judge difficulty at that level.

and as time passes on

[General]
SB not done yet. HS not done yet (?) making SB doesn't easy i i do hitsounding, finding the perfect image for this song quite difficult
I'm pretty sure the romanization should be Arpeggio, though don't quote me on this.
EDIT: Sauce? Admittedly does not look like an official source.

http://anraku.nothing.sh/akisora/2010fuyusora/ <- the official, Arpeggio is english pronounced, Arupejio is japanese pronounced (unless the album nor the title written like this 冬空のArpeggio / Arpeggio )

[Patterning]
01:04:894 - Starting from here, I don't quite inderstand how you determine the # of notes per line. It almost seems completely arbitrary. I'll make an effort to get everything right here, but I'm not sure.
01:30:494 - Maybe you copy the sounds from here? Not sure. At least there's consistency between the repeats. it's different even there's same key.

01:46:294 - Drums usually get a larger beat, but it continues the LN+2 notes pattern for the softer sounds. Seems kinda weird.
Actually, now that I notice it, this happens a couple times previously as well. 00:29:494 - , 00:32:894 - , 00:35:894 - (to a lesser extent), and so on. Not entirely sure how to feel about any of this. Maybe what you have already is fine, who knows. I'll stop mentioning this thing for the rest of the mod. i don't layers "bass" sound at first phase

02:19:294 - Switching to 3 notes per chords here seemed like a bit much, especially since one note repeats in each column. nice idea, removed single note avoid repeater

03:13:694 - I am slightly concerned about these jacks. Given that this is a relatively easy map, it is extremely awkward to have a jack with other notes be on the same hand. This part is biased towards right thumb players... i don't think all jacks are placed on the left hand (or maybe i forgot to update)
03:14:094 - As well as here. i think it's fit
03:15:294 - This one is just really awful. moved the stream note
03:15:694 - This one is fine on the other hand. both hand are fit
03:16:694 - As well as this (kinda annoying that its 3 notes in a row though, but it fits) it's following piano, but the others are followed by repeating synth x.x

03:30:894 (210894|5,211094|5) - Feels kinda bad. moved to middle column
03:31:694 (211694|1,211894|1,212094|1) - Same here, though less avoidable since you run out of columns. In general though, nothing to be too concerned about. maybe moved it to 1 should be better

[SV's]
02:58:494 - Maybe start a slowdown here that leads up to 03:00:094 - ? Would make it seem like a much less sudden stop. i've always thinking of this, but lack of idea how to make good slowdown. now i just put the slowdown though it still not smooth x.x
03:38:494 - Starting from here, it feels like its picked back up to a normal pace, so going to 0.85x makes it seems a bit lacking. The song seems normal, but the scrolling is stills low which is annoying. Admittedly, its hard to add a speedup later in that case. this part may be "normal" but less instrument used than the "kiai" parts

Somewhat short, since I couldn't really find anything wrong with it.

Narcissu wrote:

三澤秋 ::>_<::

about your 1~20 png , should be eliminate blank under normal circumstances like↓↓↓

SPOILER

ArcherLove wrote:

uda bagus _(:'3

shooting star deeeh wwwww

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

OMG Tsukasa !
can i join 4K version on here ?
pls ><

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1. Try "beat" SB for the Kiai, you must be know what I mean. Pulse ? jedam jedum kaya gambar osu di homescreen gitu ngikutin beat/BPM);
2. Tested with left mania column (Left screen placing), can't see some of the lyrics (Example, 00:26:894 - 1.png, yes not only that). On which placing are you SB-ing ? Or, for Cinema ?;
3. 03:49:294 - 55.png move too fast, make it slower;
4. Include the creator ? No need, it's you.

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1. 03:51:294 - Preview time ?

1. Still WIP;
2. My suggestion, remove Snare.wav or replace it with better Snare, because it sounds short. I checked the whole song and can't find the matching part for this HS. IMO;
3. Why not use default HS naming ? It's easier to use than "Sample Import".

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Kazamastar wrote:

template make this tidy, tbh hate it
mod request via PM
[General]
1. Metadata

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2. Design

1. Try "beat" SB for the Kiai, you must be know what I mean. Pulse ? jedam jedum kaya gambar osu di homescreen gitu ngikutin beat/BPM); pulse at start kiai is so bad ._.
2. Tested with left mania column (Left screen placing), can't see some of the lyrics (Example, 00:26:894 - 1.png, yes not only that). On which placing are you SB-ing ? Or, for Cinema ?;i dont know about other monitor, but i used widescreen support storyboard
3. 03:49:294 - 55.png move too fast, make it slower; okay will change
4. Include the creator ? No need, it's you.

ohh for avoiding copyright osb :v

3. BG

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4. Timing / BPM

1. 03:51:294 - Preview time ?

what make different with previous one ?

5. Hitsound

1. Still WIP;
2. My suggestion, remove Snare.wav or replace it with better Snare, because it sounds short. I checked the whole song and can't find the matching part for this HS. IMO; already replaced with better snare, i didnt know if its horrible
3. Why not use default HS naming ? It's easier to use than "Sample Import". i think sample import will more detailed

6. Difficulty

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LN : Long notes / Hold notes
PR : Pitch Relevancy
Stair : 0,1,2,3 / 3,2,1,0 (Ascending / Descending notes)
Trill : 0,1,0 / 3,2,3 (Like > / <)
Hammer (Jackhammer) : Notes on one same column 0,0,0 / 1,1,1

COLUMN

4K : |0|1|2|3|
5K : |0|1|2|3|4|
6K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|
8K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Winter Sky]
00:00:894 (894|1,894|4,1094|0,1094|5,1294|1,1294|4) -
and 00:02:494 (2494|1,2494|4,2694|0,2694|5,2894|4,2894|1) - Re-arrange, pattern not match with the pitch. It should be ascending (from left to right). 00:07:294 (7294|3,7294|1,7494|5,7494|2,7694|4,7694|3) - this part have the same sound and pitch too and arranged correctly. on the left notes its already used proper pitch, if you really wanted perfect pitch its imposibble because 7k
00:01:694 (1694|3,1694|0) - This part should be on right, higher pitch. i dont know where to place if its need to match the pitch, its hard >_<
00:03:094 - Missing 1 notes fixed
00:03:894 (3894|3) - To column 4 (Move to right once) it has same note
00:05:294 (5294|1) - To column 3 (Higher pitch) moved
00:07:694 (7694|4) - Move to 6 (Pitch) i think its already good position on here
From here, you may IGNORE some advice (yes, pitch), though the limit of column

00:08:494 (8494|5) - Move to 3, 00:08:494 (8494|6) - Move to 5, 00:08:694 (8694|2,8694|4) - Move to the right twice its confusing if you can't give some simple explanation, okay fixed
00:09:294 (9294|4) - Move to 6 why
00:10:094 (10094|6,10094|5,10294|4,10294|2) - Same as before done
01:52:694 - This and 01:52:894 - Add 1 more notes, that part have strong Kick i think many of player will focus on breakbeat instead the kick because the pattern itself were made for
02:33:494 (153494|3,153494|5,153594|4,153594|6,153794|2,153794|4,153894|5,153894|3) - Ctrl+J done
02:35:394 (155394|0,155394|2,155494|1,155494|3) - ^ it doesnt necessary. this part should be on low to high
02:48:894 (168894|0,168894|3,168994|1,168994|4) - and 02:49:494 (169494|0,169494|2,169594|1,169594|3) - ^ (High to low pitch on this Synth, feel free to ignore) why i ignore if its useful and posibble apply to pattern
03:02:694 - Add 1 notes on column 1/3 following the piano (IMO) added
03:04:494 (184494|5) - Move to 6 moved
03:09:494 (189494|2,189594|2) - Move to 4 (Pitch) this position already enough because its jack
04:16:894 - love the synth, map it till the end please piano is important
04:47:294 (287294|2,287294|5,287494|6,287494|1,287694|5,287694|3) - Same as before, pitch i have no idea here, actually this already better place

You have good style on mapping, mind the pitch. Star~
But pattern is more important Aki Misawa>Tsukasa>Piano>Pattern according to my mapping xDehueheuhe

Sorry for this short mod, almost perfect
EDIT: I mod before you update the map.