Fight69 wrote:

Hello there Hyguys ! o/ Hi

[General]

Your mp3 is not rankable (320kbps), so, here is a new one for you ! thx
http://www.mediafire.com/?kd75wx93npj5qpb
The new offset is : 7766

Oh, and btw
Why Insane don't have the same timing than the other diffs ? o.o fix'd
The timing should be the same on each diff

[Insane]

01:15:400 (1) - What about finishing this spinner at 01:16:840 ? (and then add some circles like that : http://puu.sh/AuC ) k



Here is a star for you /o/
~Starz'd !

nickopet2007 wrote:

Now I can't get this song out of my head, lol.

One thing though, with this new mp3:
Offset NEEDS to be reduced 25ms. Then Scale to new timing. why? who cares , did

Good Luck getting this ranked.
Star~

Revengexsoyah wrote:

HI


~Normal~
00:18:802 : try this http://puu.sh/F87 no
really that sounds better is not it ? D:
03:04:402 : Finish ? k
03:12:082 : ^ ? k

~Insane~
03:04:402 : Finish AGAIN ? Xd K
03:12:082 : ^ ¿ xD K


Very Very Fine map thx


star and good luck thx

Charles445 wrote:

This mod may make you a bit annoyed, but I think these modifications are for the better.

General
You spelled lepidopodus wrong in the tags!
This map was pending before the 192 bitrate rule so it can pass.
640x480 background? Awfully low resolution

misja056's body
Capitalize Body in the name of the difficulty. k
AR +2 or +3
02:45:149 (1) - This spinner needs a new combo
Bleh
done
Medium Body

SPOILER

AR +1 or +2 [b]bleh[/b]
00:17:309 - New combo
00:17:789 - Remove new combo
00:19:709 - New combo
00:21:149 - New combo
00:22:589 - Remove new combo
00:23:069 - New combo
00:27:389 - New combo
00:27:389 (4,5) - I'd put the finish not on the 5 but on the end of the 4 slider
00:42:269 - New combo
00:42:749 - Remove new combo
00:44:189 - New combo
00:44:669 - Remove new combo
00:51:869 - Remove new combo
01:23:869 - That really doesn't seem right. that's called 1/3.
01:30:749 - Remove new combo
01:37:949 - Wowowow why is there a 3 on the spinner?! :<
01:53:309 - Remove new combo
01:57:149 - Remove new combo
02:00:989 - Remove new combo
02:02:909 - New combo
02:04:829 - Remove new combo
02:06:749 - New combo
02:07:229 - Remove new combo
02:09:149 - Remove new combo
02:10:589 - New combo
02:11:549 - Remove new combo
02:16:349 - Remove new combo god what an new combo mod

Insane Body i will continue mod tomorrow i'm gonna sleep :<

SPOILER

00:27:869 (4,5) - I'd flip the finish on these wats flip
00:31:949 - Remove new comb k
00:35:789 - Remove new combo k
00:39:629 - Remove new combo k
00:47:309 - Remove new combo
00:48:029 - New combo
00:48:989 - Remove new combo
00:51:149 - Remove new combo
00:54:989 - Remove new combo
00:56:669 - Remove new combo
00:56:669 - Remove new combo
01:02:429 (4) - Visibly too far from the 5, move it to the left once thx i didnt notice
01:03:229 (1) - Move left twice, down twice
01:06:749 (4) - Move up once
01:07:549 (7) - Move up once
01:07:709 (8) - Move right once
01:10:589 (8) - Move up once
01:10:909 - New Combo
01:12:349 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this http://puu.sh/1eeH
01:17:309 (2) - That's misleadingly close
01:19:229 (8) - Move left twice
01:20:029 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this http://puu.sh/1ef6
01:20:669 - Remove new combo
01:22:589 - Remove new combo
01:24:509 - Remove new combo
01:26:269 - Remove new combo
01:26:269 (4,5,6,7) - Make these parallel
01:29:789 - New combo
01:30:269 - Remove new combo
01:30:269 (4,5,1) - That spacing is really bad
01:30:749 - New combo
01:30:869 - Remove new combo
01:31:709 - New combo
01:31:829 - Remove new combo
01:34:109 - Remove new combo
01:34:589 - Remove new combo
01:41:069 - Remove new combo
01:44:669 - Remove new combo
01:48:749 - Remove new combo
01:56:429 - Remove new combo
01:58:109 - Remove new combo
02:00:269 - Remove new combo
02:04:109 - Remove new combo
02:05:789 - Remove new combo
02:07:949 - Remove new combo
02:17:789 - Remove new combo
02:18:269 - New combo
02:19:709 - Remove new combo
02:20:189 - New combo
02:26:909 - Remove new combo
02:31:229 - Remove new combo
02:31:709 - New combo
02:34:349 - Remove new combo
02:42:869 - Remove new combo
02:43:229 - New combo
02:43:829 - Remove new combo
02:43:829 (3,4) - Bad spacing
02:48:989 - I woulda ended the map right here, lol
03:04:870 - Get creative, map this break
03:13:470 - ^^
03:19:709 - New combo
03:21:629 (1,2,3,4) - This entire combo has bad bad spacing
03:28:589 - Remove new combo
03:30:989 - Remove new combo
03:31:229 - New combo

Genkishi wrote:

Hi.....The Insane Mode

so first this map is pretty nice but in my suggestions here you need to add these hitsounds:
*= no
/= k

00:16:109 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3 *
00:16:829 - add a whistle on the start of the slider number 1 *
00:17:309 - add a whistle on the start of the slider number 2 *
00:18:269 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 5 *
00:18:749 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 1 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow *
00:19:229 - add a whistle on the start of the slider 2 and at the end of it but don't add whistle on the reverse arrow *
00:19:709 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3 *
00:19:949 - add a clap on hit circle number 4 /
00:20:189 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 5 *
00:21:509 - add a whistle on the hit circle number 3 * (..)

Sooooo,this part is the intro....


Nice Beatmap

1. In the tags, you mispelled lepidopodus, "lepidodupos".
2. For some reason, the BG image is in the storyboard as well, comes in at the end and doesn't do anything. Guess you put that in accidentally? I would delete it.

1. 00:15:389 (1) - Add whistle in begin slider because the Hard have it whistle so you need keep it consistency hitsound also that sense lot too so is good if you add begin slider
2. 00:17:789 (4) - add clap on begin slider look like you did patterns after and this not so i guess you missing add here
3. 00:18:749 (5) - add clap
4. 00:19:229 (1) - add whistle in begin slider is same explained at 00:15:389 (1)
5. 00:23:069 (1) - ^ same also add clap in end slider
6. 00:24:509 (3) - add clap in begin sldier and add whistle in end slider
7. 00:25:469 (1) - add clap
8. 00:25:949 (2) - add whistle in end slider
9. 00:28:829 (1) - add finish if you keep it consistency with anothe diff "Expert body"
10. 00:31:229 at 00:45:629 - is sooo lack hitsound you should really add hitsound clap in whit tick 2nd and 4nd
11. 00:32:669 (2) - add finish that lot sense because lyrics and drums
12. 00:36:509 (3) - ^ same
13. 00:40:349 (3) - ^ same
14. 00:44:189 (3) - ^ same
15. 00:46:109 (1) - Add whislte ? that really sense becayse the lyrics is women and drums is strong that lot sense imo
16. 00:47:069 (2) - add clap in end slider i guess you forget add
17. 00:49:949 (1) - add whistle in begin slider same explained at 00:46:109 (1)
18. 00:53:789 (1) - ^
19. 00:57:629 (1) - ^
20. 01:01:469 at 01:30:749 - add clap 1nd and 3nd white tick? like you did in Expert body that sense lot imo
21. 01:39:869 (1) - add finish in begin slider that sense lot same explained at 00:32:669 (2)
22. 01:41:789 (1) - ^ same
23. 01:45:629 (3) - ^ same
24. 01:49:469 (4) - ^ same
25. 01:39:869 at 01:54:749 - again lack hitsound you should really add hitsound clap in whit tick 2nd and 4nd
26. 01:55:709 (2) - you forget add clap in end slider

1. 00:32:669 (2) - I feel this need New combo because the Lyrics and drums are too strong that sense lot
2. 00:36:509 (3) - ^ same
3. 00:40:349 (3) - ^ same
4. 00:44:189 (3) - ^ same
5. 01:41:789 (3) -new combo and at 01:43:229 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:43:709 (2) - put new combo like this http://puu.sh/14Jut
6. 01:45:629 (3) - at 01:47:549 (2) ^ same
7. 01:49:469 (4) - at 01:51:389 (2) ^ same
8. 01:53:309 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/14Jwr that sense lot because the lyrics is still continue
9. 01:39:869 at 01:54:749 (2) - that 100% copy-paste with 00:31:229 at 00:46:109 ? the copy-paste is fine but you can't same place pleasse try get another place or remap this part
10. 01:54:749 at 02:10:589 - again 100% copy-past same place try get another past

1. 00:20:189 (5) - add clap the repeat ? because is sense lot
2. 00:27:389 (2) - add clap in end slider that sense lot
3. 00:32:669 (2) - add finish in begin slider is same explained in "Sweet body"
4. 00:36:509 (3) - ^ same
5. 00:40:349 (3) - ^ same
6. 00:56:909 (4) - you forget add clap here if you keep it consistency
7. 01:08:189 (3,4) - the finish is don't sense for me remove it?
8. 01:41:789 (1) - ^ same add finish in begin slider that sense lot same explained at 00:32:669 (2)
9. 01:45:629 (3) - ^ same
10. 01:49:469 (4) - ^ same

1. 00:32:429 (5) - need stack with 00:33:389 (2) - start slider
2. 01:07:709 (2) - this slider is not same shape at 01:08:669 (4) try same shape
3. 01:41:549 (5) - again stack with 01:42:509 (2)

1. Your mp3 is 205 kbps, which is a bit higher than 192 kbps (ranking criteria). However, it's VBR (variable bitrate), so decline any requests to reencode it and full submit, since it's allowed for VBR.
2. Your light gray colour is way too pale and blends with background, consider changing it.

1. Add pop and/or punk to the tags
2. Make everything more quiet. Lower 100% volume down to 80, the same goes for 89%.
3. 02:44:920 - 0% volume is unrankable. If you need it for a reason, use 5% — it won't hurt.
4. 03:35:069 — add a kiai fountain?

1. 00:46:109 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:01:469 (1) and such — claps on the big white ticks don't go well with vocal, consider removing/replacing with something
3. 01:32:189 - either start break here by dragging its beginning forward (to emphasize vocals), or add a note
4. 01:39:869 (1) - please no. I hear these claps again, better place them at 2nd and 4th ticks where possible because it really fits the song better
5. 03:35:309 (1) - I don't think you need to keep this spinner since main part of the music ends at 03:35:069

• 
  AR +1, because it's Hard and I can't see a thing. +2, even (if you are okay with it)

1. 00:30:509 (3) - add finish to the end
2. 00:34:349 (2) - make a better beat blanket
3. 00:37:949 — you seem to stop hitsounding objects at all. Please, bring clap rhythm back
4. 01:03:869 — and again, stop leaving things unarranged
5. 01:43:469 (2) - make a better beat blanket
6. 01:47:069 — continue clapping. Again
7. 02:05:309 (2,3,4) - fix spacing, it should be plain 0.1 to avoid random amound of free space between the elements
8. 02:09:629 (2) - ^
9. 02:34:109 — clap reminder

1. Increase SV a bit? The current one seems to be kind of low for me

1. 01:00:869 (3) - there is no note in music, therefore, it's hard to get it right. Better remove it
2. 01:32:189 (1) - add finish. Also, remember what I've said about claps on 1st tick before. Consider changing them to 2-4 scheme ("default" one)
3. 02:10:589 — no. By putting a repeating slider, you skip the big white tick here, which means a new part of music. osu! is a rhythm-based game, so I guess you need to add a new object appearing here or right after that tick (read as "remove repeating slider and make another kind of thing")
4. 02:45:389 (1) - start it on the blue tick after previous slider
5. 03:00:509 — add a note
6. 03:11:069 (3) - add finish to the end?

1. I suggest you make the hitsound volume to at least 75% or 80%.
2. You have "misja056" & "lepidopodus" in the tags even though their difficulties are no longer in your mapset, please remove them in each diff unless you're re-adding them.
3. Try Offset 15, if not you can ignore this one.
4. Considering removing the countdown on "Insane".
5. There are some unused bookmarks in all diffs, just click the reset button below in Editor to resolve this.
6. That BG is 640x480, at least find one that is 800x600.
7. There is some unsnapped inherited points on this mapset, i'll point them out for you:
   
   Kiai

   

1. 00:32:669 (1) - Remove new combo because the next verse starts here at 00:34:589 (1) - .
2. 00:33:149 (3) - This could blanket 00:34:589 (1) - a bit better.
3. 00:36:509 (1) - Remove new combo, you're following the vocal here until the new combo started here at 00:38:429 (1) - .
4. 00:38:909 (2) - A blanket around 00:40:349 (1) - would be nice.
5. 00:40:349 (1) - Remove new combo.
6. 00:40:829 (2) - ^
7. 00:44:189 (1) - ^
8. 01:28:829 (2) - My suggestion:
   
9. 01:32:189 (x) - Maybe add a note with a finish here to signal the break?
10. 01:42:269 (1) - Remove new combo. Also this can blanket 01:43:709 (2) - a bit better.
11. 01:43:709 (1) - Add new combo here.
12. 01:44:189 (1) - Remove new combo here.
13. 01:46:109 (1) - ^
14. 01:49:949 (1) - Like before, you should clean up on some of these sliders and blanket them neatly~
15. 01:53:789 (1) - Remove new combo.
    
16. 02:18:269 (x) - A note with a finish here.

1. 00:17:535 (1) - Remove New combo.
2. 00:17:775 (2) - My suggestion
3. 00:17:789 (3) - Make this slider curving around 00:19:229 (1)- .
4. 00:21:855 (1) - Remove new combo.
5. 00:24:975 (1) - ^
6. 00:32:175 (4) - This slider could use a curving around 00:33:375 (1)- .
7. 00:34:335 (2) - ^ But for the slider end.
8. 00:37:695 (1) - Remove new combo.
9. 00:37:935 (2) - This should blanket (1) a bit better.
10. 00:40:335 (1) - Remove NC.
11. 00:42:015 (5) - Remove clap.
12. 00:48:015 (1) - Remove NC
13. 01:00:495 (2) - This should move a bit to the left.
14. 01:03:375 (1) - Remove NC.
15. 01:34:335 (1) - ^
16. 01:41:295 (4) - Curve this around (1) for a better blanket.
17. 01:42:495 (1) - Remove NC.
18. 01:43:455 (2) - Remove clap, also a new combo should go here
19. 01:47:775 (1) - Remove NC.

1. 00:56:189 (2) - My suggestion
2. 01:02:589 (4) - Snap this back to 1/6, it sounded offbeat a bit.
3. 01:08:189 (3) - Suggestion.
4. 01:08:669 (2) - Blanket this around (1) a bit better~
5. 01:15:309 (6) - Snap this 1/6th back.
6. 01:23:869 (4,5) - (4) & (5) are overlapping each other (see here), get rid of one of them and set it forward 1/6th.
7. 01:24:149 (6,7) - These should be a 1/6th forward for each of these two notes.
8. 01:24:509 (1) - This should blanket (2).
9. 01:26:429 (6) - This should blanket the slider-end of (4).
10. 02:15:389 (1) - This looks better pointed upwards.

George wrote:

---General---
Make a normal plz
Keep in mind I'm going off of 2015 guidelines, although maps that are made from years prior to 2013 or 2012 are fun and look good, they may use things that arent rankable in todays standards Okay

---Easy---
00:17:789 (4,1) - Eventually someone will condemn you for overlapping here If someone say this again I'm going to change it , but not now
00:51:869 (3,4) - Make these a straight line applied
01:22:589 (4,5) - think looks kind of odd, I don't think you should change it just yet though until someone with higher authority (such as a BN) says so applied
01:39:869 (1,2) - fix stack changed
02:34:109 (2) - move this left more fixed it but by moving the (1)

---Medium---
Rename this to hard
00:27:869 (3,1) - make these symmetrical ok
00:49:469 (6,1) - I'd fix this blanket ok
01:50:429 (3,4,5) - the DS here looks screwed up what's that?if it's distance snap ,it's completely perfect
01:57:869 (2,3) - fix blanket ok

---Insane---
00:55:709 (1,2) - fix symmetry applied
02:04:829 (1,2) - ^ applied
02:45:389 (1) - start on red applied

glhf

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M as arranged via pm c:

Easy

00:17:789 (4,5,1) - atleast try arranging this in a way that 4 is in the middle of 1 for the overlap? currently just looks a bit messy

00:21:149 (3,4) - watch your spacing

00:25:949 (2,1) - blanket could look much, much neater I think

00:31:229 (1,2,3) - would honestly play nicer if the movement between these was a bit smoother/curvier, meaning less sharp angles give me an example , like a pic

00:38:909 (2,3,4) - again, watch your spacing

00:48:509 (4,1,2) - spacing. I'm going to stop pointing this kinda stuff out. I REALLY REALLY think that this should be fixed though, makes the map look messy

01:13:949 (3,4) - not sure if doing this kinda thing in an Easy Diff is a good thing to do, as this might end up confusing newer players wat

01:16:349 (6,1) - ^ wat

01:39:869 (1,2) - no reason not to have this blanket 100% perfect as it requires little to no re-arrangement

02:11:549 (3,4,1) - really not sure if this kinda rythm is appropriate to use in an Easy, especially since you didn't use this after the first refrain

I'm going to be blunt here: Lots of sloppy/weird slidershapes, messy spacing and overall just not very nice to look at I think :c :(

Normal

00:16:349 (3) - feels like the second 'I' this repeat is covering should be clickable to me ok [?]

00:17:789 (5) - why not just use a normally curved slider here?

00:24:989 (5) - why not make the 'rock' clickable here? would just have to shorten the slider

00:38:669 (1,3) - stack these properly?

00:43:709 (3) - really unfitting. This downbeat should be clickable

00:56:189 (2,3) - these two look waaaayy to close ;w; the two sliderbodies are almost touching

00:59:549 (1) - why is the white beat being skipped? it REALLY feels like this should be clickable

01:15:229 (1,2,3,4) - would probably just keep it simple and map white ticks only here. not even sure what the extra circles are following here

01:22:109 (3) - downbeat should be clickable. Same goes for the next two instances this happens

01:34:589 (5,6,1) - this just looks really messy :c

01:36:989 (3,2) - try avoiding this overlap

welp these things honestly just keep repeating. Spacing ALSO feels rather messy at times, same goes for the slidershapes :c

Insane

00:21:869 (2,3) - really awkward flow here. should rotate 3 in a way that makes it easier to catch itnah

00:40:349 (1) - lower this a bit, it'll improve the flow

00:55:109 (4) - kinda weird to have this cover the third 'come on' nah

00:58:949 (5) - ^

01:01:469 (1) - this really calls for a slider imo, going along with the vocals here nah

01:05:309 (1,2) - should improve the blanket

01:31:949 (6,2,3,4) - overlap here honestly just looks messy :c

02:15:389 (1,2,3) - PLEASE have this blanket properly

It's probably because of how old this set is, but this style just looks really messy and unpolished to me. Sorry, but I'm not a fan :/

I still wish you the best of luck!

XeroiZi HD wrote:

Hi
I'm not an expert so please reply my mod properly so I can see your feedbacks :3

Mod Legends

| Unrankable. There's a chance that it's actually a bad idea to be mapped
| Highly Recommended. Always watch for it
| Suggestions. You can keep this alone if you don't like it
| Comments. Just a word of the map's part. You better not reply it to keep yourself happy

[Easy]

• 
  Nothing to say

[Medium]

1. 00:23:069 (1,2) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other
2. 00:34:349 (2,3) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
3. 00:49:949 (1) - Here's how to make a good slider nah
4. 01:12:029 (4) - Move it to x:200 y:256 so it'll be blanketed by 01:10:589 (3)
5. 01:20:669 (1,3) - Make sure they both have the same slider each other wat
6. 01:50:429 (3,4) - These two seems touching, try to make them untouching
7. 02:08:669 (1,2) - Avoid these two touching
8. 02:35:069 (4) - Tweak it a bit to the right so it won't touching the 02:34:589 (3)
9. 02:40:829 (1,2,3) - Is this supposed to be a blanket? If no, ignore this. If yes, make it like this

[Insane]

1. 00:24:989 (1) - Make the slider try to spooning/blanketing the tail of 00:24:029 (6) . Make it like this
2. 00:51:869 (1) - Move it to x:88 y:172 or so to make it blanketing 00:51:509 (5,6)
3. 01:11:389 (1,2) - Use DS here, it's hard to decide when to tap in 1/3 part song.
4. 01:13:469 (2,3,4) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect
5. 01:15:469 (1) - The spinner start should be at 01:15:469
6. 01:23:869 (4,5,6) - Whoa watch the spacing here, dude. make it like this. This is use 1/6 beat so make sure they're keep stacking each other since it's pretty fast and some people won't know what's next if it's 1/4 or 1/6
7. 02:00:989 (1) - Same problem as 00:51:869 (1) but move it to x:416y:176
8. 02:16:109 (3) - Here's how to make a good slider
9. 02:37:469 (1,2,3) - The pattern's symmetrycal is not perfect