1. Another - 4Key (4.1 stars, 1185 notes)
2. Hyper - 4Key (2.95 stars, 901 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (1.82 stars, 506 notes)
4. Zan's Blue Another - 4Key (4.67 stars, 1514 notes)

Big thanks to KK, and everyone who helped me before :3

Spy wrote:

你才做一張青龍是在Another Seiryu什麼

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Spy wrote:

你才做一張青龍是在Another Seiryu什麼

跟你说我这张超爽

hikikuman wrote:

Column: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Hyper

00:00:516 - and 00:00:673 - loud sound. add note at 3 //fix in different way
00:05:228 (5228|3) - delete
00:08:369 (8369|0) - move to 2 // keep
you can choose 1 : 00:09:940 (9940|0) - move to 2 or 00:10:097 (10097|0) - move to 2 // keep the pattern
00:17:479 (17479|2,17793|1) - ctrl J
00:27:374 (27374|3) - move to 3
00:27:688 (27688|2,27845|1) - ctrl J
00:31:929 (31929|0) - delete //k
00:32:086 (32086|3,32243|2) - ctrl J
00:32:557 (32557|0) - move to 4
00:32:714 (32714|3) - move to 1
01:31:615 (91615|1) - ^
01:32:243 (92243|2) - move to 2
^^changed some part

Normal

00:00:516 (516|2) - move to 2 //different pitch
00:03:657 (3657|1) - move to 3 ^^
00:04:599 (4599|0) - move to 2
00:04:913 (4913|2,5070|1) - move to 1
00:14:023 (14023|1) - ^
00:14:337 (14337|2,14652|3) - ctrl J
00:15:594 (15594|1) - move to 4// keep the pattern
00:15:908 (15908|3) - move to 3
00:16:851 (16851|2,17479|3) - ctrl J// keep the pattern
00:23:762 (23762|0) - move to 2
00:24:076 (24076|3) - move to 1// keep the pattern
00:24:704 (24704|0) - move to 3
00:25:018 (25018|2) - move to 1
00:26:589 (26589|1) - ^
00:26:903 - re-arrange // keep the pattern
00:28:474 (28474|3) - move to 1
00:29:102 (29102|2) - move to 4// keep the pattern
00:29:730 (29730|2) - move to 2
00:30:673 (30673|3) - move to 1// keep the pattern
00:30:987 (30987|0) - move to 3
01:17:322 (77322|3) - move to 3
01:17:793 (77793|0) - delete// keep the pattern
01:22:819 (82819|2,83133|1) - move 1 to right
01:23:133 (83133|2) - move to 1
01:23:447 (83447|3) - move to 3
01:23:762 (83762|1) - move to 1
01:23:762 (83762|2) - move to 4// keep the pattern
01:24:076 (84076|0) - ^// keep the pattern
01:24:390 (84390|2) - move to 1
01:24:704 (84704|3) - move to 2// keep the pattern
01:25:018 (85018|1) - move to 4
01:25:961 (85961|3,86275|2) - ctrl J// keep the pattern
01:26:589 (86589|1,86589|3,86903|2,86903|0) - ctrl J
01:28:631 (88631|1) - move to 1// keep the pattern
01:29:259 (89259|2) - move to 4
01:49:835 (109835|0) - delete

Sorry i can't mod 'Another'. It had more than 4 stars.
Good luck:3

SpectorDG wrote:

wow xD goodluck SY :3

Spy wrote:

[General]
下次找我摸圖之前先把Spread搞定 干

[Normal]
00:18:735 (18735|1) - 刪了吧，抓主音就行
00:21:248 (21248|3) - 同刪，不需要這個 - 背景小小声的那个主音
00:23:133 - 這裡在幹嘛 ? 不知道是在壓難度，還是有什麼抓音想法在這裡，不過單憑個人感覺就是覺得在壓難度然後抓重音罷了，如果是這樣的話你還是乖乖地抓主音，難度其實差不多 - 不了，抓重音跟前面区分一下
00:33:186 - 前面都抓主音了，這裡突然又換感覺很奇怪，我還是覺得抓主音好多，後面好像有類似的，不提了 - 这段可以
00:58:474 (58474|0) - 刪掉吧，感覺好多
01:00:987 (60987|3) - 刪吧，跟上面一樣
01:06:013 (66013|3) - 刪
上面三个因为跟背景的低音所以还是保留，不是很需要为了主音的那个感觉删，饱满一点好
01:14:495 - 你這個是刻意漏的 ? - 刻意漏的，鼓刚好在这个地方有停一下，刻意漏一个有停顿感
01:33:657 (93657|2,93814|1,93971|0,94128|3,94285|2,94442|1,94599|2) - 坦白說這個排列對上這個節奏違和感很重，rearrange吧 - 妥

[Hyper]
00:01:379 - 這個再多補一個怎麼樣 ?
00:37:112 (37112|3,37269|0) - 這2個應該是同音才對
00:58:945 - 1/4補上，爽
01:01:458 - 同
01:03:971 - 同
01:06:484 - 同
01:19:678 - 說實話我還是會抓主音，只是簡化版的，不過你這樣抓也沒什麼不對，我個人覺得很無聊就是了 - 1/2的bass也不错
01:29:730 - 不，該換抓音了
Hyper其他都ok

[Another]
01:19:050 (79050|3) - 停在01:19:364 - 然後01:19:364 - 換成note，移到2，01:19:521 - 再多補一個在2
01:28:474 (88474|0,88631|1) - 別懷疑，同音
Another全部OK

大概這樣吧，這次做的曲子比較單調，我沒辦法給你太多的建議，但是圖基本上有抓到感覺的，Nice job

victorica_db wrote:

another
01:27:217 - 其实我不建议抓这段鼓 抓了承上启下都不舒服 - //有道理，但这段这么土嗨只跟主音的话丢鼓太无情了
01:07:112 - 全写双键 -//妥

做的不错 增加了交互之后 感觉爽

有妹子好 //有妹，有青龙，有水晶，完美

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1,2,3,4,5,6,7


[General]
-BG : ok
-Mp3 : ok
-Hitsound : no hs
-Difficulty : ok
-AI Mod : ok

Normal

00:21:406 (21406|3) - i think it more suit to mov to 3. following song //the main sound in the back ground are same pitch, so keep it as same col
01:49:835 (109835|0) - movwe to 2. prev. col is empty //ok

Hyper

01:12:139 (72139|3) - move to 3 //01:11:824 (71824|3,71981|3,72139|3) - those three are the same, so keep the pattern

no issues found in other diff
tha's all
some small check.
this map is looks good for me glad u like it :3


mod done

Zan - wrote:

4.65☆

Sky_Demon wrote:

我明明很努力了 req沒有減少的跡象是怎樣啦 嗚嗚.. //[b]摸摸

key:|1|2|3|4|[/b]

Normal
00:01:301 (1301|1,1458|2) - 砍掉 改成LN從00:01:301 - ~00:01:458 - 因為跟這種音是相似的→00:00:830 (830|3) - - 这个保留，我的想法是想保留00:01:458 - 这种比较明显的音，这样的话这种短LN摆起来不好看还有点难所以普通的Note写到就好
00:06:170 (6170|3) - 移動到00:06:091 - 的3列 這裡你只需要取明顯的聲音就好 - 没有移而是加了，因为那个音也是我想保留的
00:22:976 (22976|0) - 移動到3 在這裡JACK 能讓玩家感受到音的變化
00:27:060 (27060|0,27374|1,27688|2,28002|3) - 這些可以都放到同一列 感覺會不錯 作為一個玩家的觀點 - 音乐有点慢慢上升感觉，所以还是保持楼梯吧
00:39:783 (39783|1,40097|2) - CTRL+G JACK部分是為了增手感 同時聲音相同
00:42:139 (42139|1,42453|0,42767|3,43081|1) - 建議同一列 手感up - 主音是有变化的，想把那个感觉写出来，头两个音相同可以jack
01:10:568 (70568|0,70725|1) - CTRL+G 手感up
01:15:280 (75280|1,76536|2) - 這兩棵不需要 音不明顯 乍聽之下只會覺得是多出來的 沒有意義 - 保留吧，个人觉得这个锣还是蛮明显的
01:17:165 (77165|2,77322|3) - 這兩個適合JACK
01:19:050 (79050|1) - 個人建議換成NOTE
^雖然是長音沒錯但改成NOTE能夠帶給人一種斷點的感覺然後立刻接這個→01:19:364 (79364|2) -
01:37:269 (97269|2,97898|1) - 這兩個不需要 HD裡不錯 但在NM裡只需要強調明顯的音這些就好→01:37:426 (97426|0,97584|1,97741|2,98055|3,98212|2,98369|1) -

Hyper
00:01:772 (1772|3,1851|2,1929|1,2008|0,2086|3,2165|2,2243|1,2322|0) - 改成散打 你試打看看 會比階梯更能體現在這裡的特色
00:06:091 (6091|1) - 移動到3 這裡適合JACK - 人性，换jack太难 Orz
00:11:824 - 比起在這邊雙鍵 這裡更適合→00:12:453 - 前者音不明顯 後者可以作為這裡階梯的結尾 - 前者删了后者保留单Note，HD我还是想把双键留给比较重的音
^如果00:12:453 - 加了 這裡也要加 同樣的音→00:12:767 - 因为上面没加所以
00:22:505 (22505|0,22505|1,22662|2,22662|3) - 各砍一個 你只需要強調這個重音就好→00:22:819 (22819|0,22819|1,22976|3,22976|2) -
00:32:557 - 00:32:872 - 建議把這裡的重音寫出來 可加可不加 看你 这个保留，感觉没太大区别
00:58:395 - 00:58:709 - 這兩個音也建議寫出來 單調是好事 很順手 但打起來卻沒有自己在按那個音的實感 - 这简化的主音把明显的1/4写出来就好，试了一下这些音加出来打的时候影响手感（感觉怪怪的
^如果決定要加 後續同樣的地方要修正
01:14:652 (74652|3,74652|0) - 因為有類似鈸的音才雙鍵? 那這裡要補上→01:15:908 - - 都改成1note了
01:18:029 - 加上 因為這裡有抓這些音→01:17:479 (77479|1,77557|2,77636|0,77714|1) -
01:19:364 (79364|3) - 這個音不是這樣的 它是有斷開的 50%仔細聽聽 希望你能改掉它
01:28:474 (88474|0,88631|3) - 可JACK JACK才能帶出有斷斷續續音的那種感覺
01:29:102 (89102|0,89259|1) - ^ 不，这两个是不同的
01:38:526 (98526|3,98683|2) - ^ 这也是不同的
01:38:290 - 01:38:447 - 如果是我 這兩個我也會寫上 因為前面抓了一大串的階梯了 這裡突然斷開但背景同樣的音還是持續著 感覺會怪

Another
00:02:714 (2714|2,2714|0) - 嘗試改成短LN怎麼樣? 為了驅方它跟其他雙鍵的差別*因為同為雙鍵代表的音是不同的 - 保留，LN写这个音l感觉怪怪的
00:06:720 - 這裡要加 跟這些相同的聲音→00:06:327 (6327|2,6406|1,6484|3,6484|0,6563|2,6641|1) -
00:08:369 (8369|3,8447|2,8526|1,8605|0) - 我會建議這樣的排列改掉 作為玩家我得說很順手 作為麻婆我得說太單調
00:09:625 (9625|0,9704|1,9783|2,9861|3) - ^
00:10:568 - 個人是覺得沒必要到3鍵 因為它也只比前面的雙鍵音重了一點點點點點點而已
00:10:882 (10882|0) - 短LN? 都已經Another可以嘗試看看屌一點的抓音 也沒有變很難呀你說是吧
00:11:353 - 為什麼雙鍵 同為雙鍵比起他們是不同的吧→00:11:353 (11353|0,11353|3,11510|0,11510|2) -
00:11:667 (11667|3) - LN?
00:13:081 - ~00:18:107 - 這段的音其實我是建議你抓的細一點 因為同樣的抓音你前面兩個難度都已經用過了 可以嘗試一下別的 - 这个拒绝，我的想法是这里用单调的抓音（除了主音背景音没有很明显）， 然后00:18:107 加入double的低音部分给人一种越来越紧凑的感觉
00:21:248 - 三鍵 目的是要把這個音跟其他雙鍵區分開來 音色它明顯的重了很多同時還有鼓的聲音
^如果你加了 這裡也要補00:21:563 - 因為是同樣的音 - 这个感觉和上面那个差很多啊
00:22:819 - 00:22:976 - 建議改成3鍵 雖然會破壞漂亮的譜面 但缺乏手感 而且這音明顯也比其他雙鍵重 - 对，这的确比前面的重，但是三键还是留给后面那个更明显的音就行，这里用12 34的排列突出一下就行
00:25:882 (25882|2) - 怎麼細部的音這段只跟了這種的? 其他還有很多漏了 雖然不清楚我不建議你硬抓 - 那我还是都放弃了吧
^不過砍了那個音之後你可以改變抓音方式 好比說主因都雙鍵來體現這裡的特色更有感 (這難度缺少爆發感作為觸手我得說感覺很差00:26:903 - ~00:28:159 - 好歹也把白線的音抓了吧 太單調了 - 要的就是这个感觉，这里没鼓而且一下子静下来，note量也应该减少
00:40:882 (40882|2,40882|1) - 這個為什麼雙鍵? 好吧我大概知道你想表達什麼音 那這裡也應該要雙鍵才對→00:41:039 - 00:41:196 -
00:42:139 (42139|0,42453|1,42767|2,43081|3) - 怎麼突然單鍵了 跟這音是一樣的吧?→00:41:824 (41824|0,41824|3) - 那就都单了
01:15:908 - ~01:17:165 - 階梯太單調
01:19:364 (79364|0) - 移動到2 JACK來表現這個音更合適
01:28:474 (88474|0,88631|0) - 短LN? - 感觉没必要
01:29:102 (89102|3,89259|0) - ^ - 这两个音在蓝线就结束，这种1/4的短LN摆起来显得突兀感觉也没出来。。。。
*這首歌有很多可以用短LN來寫的特色音 可是都沒寫感到有點小遺憾* 我还期待我能加些比较爽的SV ...

作得很好 Nice Map

祝你好運! 星星

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[Hyper]

00:02:872 - 这种音色之前的都有加 这里也加上吧

00:06:798 (6798|0,6798|1,6955|3,6955|2,7112|0,7112|1) - 这三处放一个就好了 - 有主音也有鼓

00:21:563 - 两个

00:36:327 - 有音 - 这段只跟主音所以鼓忽略

00:39:468 (39468|0,39468|3) - delete - why...锣和镲的声音啊，前后都有加

00:45:908 - 补一个 - 背景这种低沉琴音都没抓，比如00:48:421 -

01:08:369 (68369|3) - delete - 为啥... 这个音前后都有加double啊

01:09:940 (69940|3,70254|3) - 这两处 加两个note - 一个足矣，前面我也一个啊01:07:112 -

噫，这曲子不加变速能玩嘛，变速玩家如是说道（雾 我不是变速玩家） 变速苦手Orz

[Another]

00:13:317 - 加一个

00:13:709 - 加一个到4 1/2/3/4

00:14:573 - 加一个

00:15:830 - 加一

00:16:458 - 加一
^上面这些我要无情reject了 ;w; ，这段比较安静所以只跟主音，和后面慢慢加进来的鼓做对比，都抓的话不仅太满而且也没什么感觉

00:23:133 (23133|3) - delete 镲的音

01:26:432 (86432|2) - 类似如此的全部改成一个note 01:23:919 (83919|2) - 比如这里 01:24:861 (84861|1) - 这里 01:25:175 (85175|2) - 这里 我就不一一列举了 改成一个
double是为了背景的bass，kiai可以爽

不错啊 好图 加油啦
我才不会告诉你我花了二十分钟

Critical_Star wrote:

Yo YS~
mod requested~
just some suggestion below, feel free to reject :v

column 1 2 3 4


Normal
00:26:903 (26903|3,26903|2) - i think single note here is enough, not really a loud impact here - sure
00:27:060 (27060|0,27374|1,27531|0,27688|2,28002|3) - hmm, i will prefer to make 1/2 stream here. it fits nice to the sound and it won't make hard for normal diff :3 (star rating +0.01) - nah... make song different with Hyper and Another diff
00:35:070 - add a note here like u do at 00:40:097 (40097|1) - fix
01:19:678 - start this part,maybe u can follow the "tededededede" by using a LN for it example: 01:20:306 (80306|0) - change into LN end 01:20:934 - like this kind of sound - lol, i know this part is boring and i get you point, but i decide just follow the simple drum should be fine
01:49:835 (109835|0) - just suddenly appear this note lol - surprise MADAFAKA ok deleted


Hyper
00:07:426 (7426|0,7426|3,7584|1,7584|2,7741|0,7741|3,7898|1,7898|2,8055|3,8055|0) - maybe http://puu.sh/lAobW/89f6263036.png - ok looks good
01:20:306 (80306|1,80306|3,80463|0,80620|3,80620|2,80777|1,80934|0,80934|2) - why la no 1/4 stream? it could be nice and fit to the sound well - i decide i will be kind in this diff so only follow the bass and drum should be ok
01:22:819 (82819|0,82819|2,82976|3,83133|1,83133|2,83290|0,83447|3,83447|1) - here also la add la lalala (after adding all these star rating +0.04) still fine la ^ same reason as above la
01:25:332 (85332|2,85332|0,85489|1,85646|3,85646|0,85803|2,85961|3,85961|1) - and so on ba if u accept~


Another
00:02:636 - actually there is sound here too like 00:02:479 (2479|2) - 00:02:479 deleted one
00:13:709 - add la like 00:16:222 (16222|3) - k
00:22:191 - add at 1? is fine to have double here - doesn't sounds quite loud, so keep it as 1
00:27:217 - 00:27:845 - maybe add a note? - oh, this is a clam part so keep it as 1 ln only

Zanny Another Blue
00:57:374 - 00:57:688 - aren't here supposed to be double note? like here 00:59:887 (59887|3,59887|0,60201|3,60201|0) -
01:01:694 - 01:01:929 - here should double if u are following those main sound like 00:59:180 (59180|0,59180|2) -
01:20:385 (80385|3) - here single but 01:22:898 (82898|2,82898|0) - here double?


nice map la, give u star la

Critical_Star wrote:

Zanny Another Blue
00:57:374 - 00:57:688 - aren't here supposed to be double note? like here 00:59:887 (59887|3,59887|0,60201|3,60201|0) -
01:01:694 - 01:01:929 - here should double if u are following those main sound like 00:59:180 (59180|0,59180|2) -
01:20:385 (80385|3) - here single but 01:22:898 (82898|2,82898|0) - here double? /// i have my own reason, but can't explain well

paperlens wrote:

[Zan]
01:18:029 - add?

01:37:269 - maybe you did wrong in this part? I think should be like this or something else (?)

01:40:097 - add?

MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.SY
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
是否水，顺其自然吧。看完跑男深夜想起欠摸

[Normal]
00:09:311 (9311|0) - 建议移至别的轨，音不同
00:11:039 (11039|2) - 这个嘛，感觉还是用短条好点 //保留
00:11:667 (11667|3) - 这个移到2，音高。用1 2 4 3也可以
00:18:735 - 这个没看懂为啥不加。与这音相同00:21:248 (21248|3) -
00:35:228 (35228|1) - 00:40:254 (40254|3) - 前面要是换成短条了，这里也要换。否则无视。
00:57:060 - 这一段，感觉一些音不抓更好。下面列出（我就不给出全部了，你知道哪些就好。抓主音）//背景的bass不是主音，所以抓满
00:57:217 (57217|1,57531|0) - 00:58:474 (58474|3,58788|1) - 00:59:730 (59730|1,60044|1) - 01:00:987 (60987|3,61301|2) -
kiai还可以增加难度01:20:463 - 01:20:777 - 红线主音可加，后面以此类推//人性一下，鼓就好
01:37:269 (97269|3,97898|0) - 这两条LN会不会有点长
01:38:840 (98840|3) - 这个换成短条，这种音短条，尾部配点效果是不错的。

[Hyper]
00:45:751 (45751|1,46065|3) - 00:48:264 (48264|3,48578|1) - 00:50:777 (50777|3,51091|2) - 00:53:290 (53290|3,53605|0) - 摆同一轨，因为00:49:364 (49364|3,49678|3,49992|3) -
↑感觉这里是没分清主次吧，认真看下排列还有抓的音吧
00:55:018 (55018|2) - 可LN到00:56:432 - 结束 //显得有点突兀
01:37:584 (97584|0,97662|1,97741|3,97819|2) - 换楼梯
01:37:898 (97898|0,97976|1,98055|2,98133|3) - 换1423//没理由啊...
01:39:783 - 这后面跟上面提的同理

[Another]
00:21:563 (21563|3,21720|2) - 排列单调，快随音高爽Ctrl+G
01:19:364 (79364|1,79521|1) - 这两个，是否统一一下 00:02:714 (2714|0,2714|2,2872|3,2872|1) - //没错都是vocal但是double的那个有背景音
00:02:714 (2714|2,2714|0,2872|1,2872|3) - 三键//贴错？
01:28:788 (88788|3) - 移到2

这曲子，怎么跟sdvx一样，有够吵，卡三小。
听的有点烦，看看明天是否继续摸。

NixoNS wrote:

Nice map!
9.5/10

Another:

00:05:070 Instead of using this double, try using the same two notes you ended with at 00:04:913 it will feel a lot better

This diff is perfect dude, good job.

NixoNS wrote:

Zan's Blue Another:

00:11:824 I think this would have been better: http://puu.sh/lWJoL/04f971ee5f.jpg /// hard to play la sb

00:20:934 A jumptrill would really feel great here, here's an example: http://puu.sh/lWJBO/c2c4ff7ef4.png /// why doublet three times? i won't make this harder la

00:32:243 Again, a jumptrill here is perfect, example: http://puu.sh/lWJNZ/3cc24dbbbc.jpg /// simpler best

01:37:819 The jacks part should not start from here but from here 01:37:898 /// correct one

Rizqy wrote:

lazy

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Rizqy wrote:

lazy

i have spend much time to checking that . . .
so, i hope you can respect my effort

didn't reply is okay . . . but at least i can see changes, even a "few" on your diff
or at least your feedback is good to improve my modding skill

thank you~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

net, tenet tenet net net net . . . woww
here's mod as requested

|1|2|3|4|

mod insideeeeeeee

[Normal]

1. 00:01:301 (1301|1,1458|2) - Ctrl G ? i just feel this sound is same 00:01:615 -
2. 00:06:170 (6170|0) - i suggest you to delete this one and move this 00:06:091 - to 1, feel awkward to play cuz the main sound is only sounded 2 times
3. 00:34:756 (34756|3) - make this note same column ? . . . just like you do in 00:39:783 -
4. 00:40:254 (40254|3) - move to 3 for better balance
5. 00:41:039 (41039|1,41196|0) - Ctrl G ^
6. 00:42:767 (42767|1) - same sound as 00:42:453 (42453|0) - so i suggest to make it same column too . . . like you do in 00:41:824 (41824|3,42139|3) -
7. 00:54:861 - add LN here ? according to long sound (start here) - feeling a bit awkward for this LN, so no changed for this
8. The rest in this diff are just awesome . . . good job
   no reply = fix
   
   [Hard]
9. 00:00:516 - try this? http://puu.sh/m16Ku/510aa1478c.jpg i just feel fine enough with that flows, cuz 00:01:301 (1301|2,1379|1,1458|0) - was different from your pattern before . . . so the below pattern can be different too
10. 00:05:699 - why not same column ? the sound is just like your previous pattern in this timing 00:04:913 -
11. 00:06:798 (6798|0,6798|1,6955|3,6955|2,7112|1,7112|0) - cuz of this part is turned into calm . . . maybe reduce 1 note on that is good way http://puu.sh/m16Tl/fb7c2ac3c3.jpg
12. 00:08:369 - try this ? http://puu.sh/m16Xy/429f065c6f.jpg lol it jus was really fun to press :3
13. 00:13:081 - start here . . . will be better if you decide to follow synth sound, it's better than just follow kick sound with 2 2 2 motes only . . . example http://puu.sh/m174q/f510c154b1.jpg - nah... follow the kick to make some different with other diff
14. 00:20:856 (20856|2) - delete this one, stream is just start here 00:20:934 - - im sure here have a stream sound
15. 00:22:819 - you can hear this part is exactly same http://puu.sh/m177X/e7b60fd275.jpg
16. 00:23:762 (23762|0,23762|1) - 00:26:275 (26275|0,26275|2) - etc . . . decide to delete it ? following synth + kick are just awesome imo . . . try that - ikr, but the drum sounds are so clear, so i wouldnt delete it...
17. 00:58:474 - and so on . . . you leave it blank ? . . . . hmm i suggest you do like this too in normal diff . . . cuz in normal diff is full of 1/2 notes OR you can add 1/2 notes in this Hard diff
18. 01:07:898 (67898|2,67976|1,68055|3) - move to 4 3 2 . . . cuz 01:08:212 (68212|2,68290|1,68369|0) - different sound . . . look at this 01:10:254 - this is very nice
19. 01:11:196 (71196|2) - move to 4 . . . like this part owo 01:10:882 (70882|3,70882|0) -
20. 01:28:474 (88474|3,88631|3) - move to 1, feels more balance here . . . then 01:28:788 (88788|0,88866|2,88945|1,89023|3,89102|0) - Ctrl H no changed this, cause only to note are same pitch in this part
    

Good Luck SanadaYukimura

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

mod

• 
  [Zan's Blue Another]

1. 00:02:479 (2479|1,2636|1) - suggest to delete this . . . actually the main stream sound is just stopped here 00:02:400 - ///there are still low-kick sounds
2. 00:07:112 - http://puu.sh/m17By/8402400a11.jpg try this la . . . feels better ///rearranged to other pattern
3. 00:13:081 - until here 00:18:107 - highly recommended . . . pls try to reduce some note usage . . . this part is just calm, i think no need to put so much note here . . . nah different story, the sound is just raise up in there 00:18:107 - so, it's okay for that /// good thought, reduced
4. 00:25:803 (25803|2,25961|1) - Ctrl G . . . avoid same column on this 00:25:489 (25489|2,25646|2) - feels better
5. 00:29:887 (29887|3) - move to 2 . . . cuz different sound with 00:29:730 (29730|2,29730|3) -
6. 00:32:243 - actually you can add 1/4 notes here . . . according to noisy sound :3
7. Start here 00:33:186 - i think no need to put continously 2 notes for synth sound here . . . hmm, synth sound is just calmed down again here, maybe just 1 note is enough for every red line on here (at least SR is not affected much for this change) for example http://puu.sh/m17ZE/654b58b20a.jpg ///aaaaaaaa really after playback and play and play, i still want to keep this section
8. 01:04:364 (64364|2,64442|3) - Ctrl G, for more balance
9. 01:06:484 (66484|2,66563|1) - Ctrl G . . . the sound is just changed . . . not like 01:06:091 (66091|1,66170|0,66327|1,66406|0) -
10. 01:11:196 (71196|2) - move to 4 teheee ///nope, keep for pattern
11. 01:17:165 (77165|3,77165|0,77322|3,77322|0) - add a note . . . just like you do at here 00:00:516 -
12. 01:21:484 - big sound is not on here . . . but on here 01:21:641 - (but i look on this diff, something like that is not exist) so i suggest to reduce 1 note on this 01:21:484 - like on this 01:26:667 -