2016-02-24 18:52 Grimbow:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/45996612016-02-24 18:52 Grimbow: Nice!
2016-02-24 18:52 Grimbow: Are you trying to get this ranked?
2016-02-24 18:53 Edo: yes
2016-02-24 18:53 Edo: but i need the kudosu:/
2016-02-24 18:53 Edo: for rank
2016-02-24 18:53 Edo: or idk
2016-02-24 18:53 Edo: an beatmap taiko nominator
2016-02-24 18:54 Grimbow: The star prioroty gets higher the more mods you get
2016-02-24 18:54 Grimbow: So you should look for people to mod your map
2016-02-24 18:55 Edo: who people look for mod my map :v
2016-02-24 18:55 Grimbow: You can either post in taiko mod queues [https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/60 here] asking for one or PM people directly
2016-02-24 18:56 Grimbow: I would mod it but I am leaving in an hour and it may take longer than that to mod
2016-02-24 18:57 Grimbow: I can give you an idea of something to change if you'd like though?
2016-02-24 18:57 Edo: yes why not
2016-02-24 18:58 Grimbow: Okay, I really like the intro, but when it gets to 01:03:582 - things start getting weird
2016-02-24 18:58 Grimbow: are you following the chimes here?
2016-02-24 19:00 Edo: yes
2016-02-24 19:00 Grimbow: Okay
2016-02-24 19:01 Grimbow: You follow them well at 01:09:415 - but at the start it doesn't
2016-02-24 19:01 Grimbow: 01:04:415 (314) - should be a k
2016-02-24 19:01 Grimbow: and 01:04:748 (315) - should be a d
2016-02-24 19:01 Grimbow: since 01:04:415 (314) - is a higher pitched chime than 01:04:748 (315) -
2016-02-24 19:01 Grimbow: 01:05:748 (318,319) -
2016-02-24 19:02 Grimbow: same with these two
2016-02-24 19:02 Grimbow: if you highlight them at the same time and press ctrl+g, it will swap the notes around
2016-02-24 19:02 Grimbow: that will make it follow the chimes better
2016-02-24 19:02 Grimbow: 01:07:082 (322,323) -
2016-02-24 19:02 Grimbow: same with these notes, if you understand?
2016-02-24 19:03 Edo: maybe i understand
2016-02-24 19:03 Edo: juste swith the 2 different note
2016-02-24 19:03 Edo: right ?
2016-02-24 19:03 Grimbow: Yes, do you understand why you are swapping them?
2016-02-24 19:03 Edo: swapping is an transposition ?
2016-02-24 19:04 Grimbow: Yes
2016-02-24 19:04 Grimbow: 01:08:415 (326,327) -
2016-02-24 19:04 Grimbow: these ones too
2016-02-24 19:04 Edo: ok i understand now
2016-02-24 19:04 Grimbow: Okay, good! c:
2016-02-24 19:05 Grimbow: If you can change that whole section to follow the chimes that section will play really nicely
2016-02-24 19:05 Edo: ok i remember
2016-02-24 19:06 Grimbow: And another thing
2016-02-24 19:06 Grimbow: at 01:48:582 - you can hear a faint bass note
2016-02-24 19:06 Grimbow: you could add a d here to map it
2016-02-24 19:07 Edo: wait i take my headphone
2016-02-24 19:07 Grimbow: Ah, it's only noticeable if you have headphones on I think
2016-02-24 19:08 Grimbow: It's not too important, it's just something I noticed when playing
2016-02-24 19:08 Edo: ohh i listen too !
2016-02-24 19:08 Edo: ok i see
2016-02-24 19:08 Grimbow: if you go through those slow parts and add d notes where you hear them that would be another thing that improves it
2016-02-24 19:09 Edo: yay i listen hear more
2016-02-24 19:11 Edo: 00:51:415
2016-02-24 19:11 Edo: oups
2016-02-24 19:12 Grimbow: I really like that part!
2016-02-24 19:12 Grimbow: 00:52:748 (258) -
2016-02-24 19:12 Grimbow: That should be a k though
2016-02-24 19:12 Grimbow: with a finish on it!
2016-02-24 19:16 Edo: yeah i think
2016-02-24 19:18 Grimbow: if I post this chat in the maps thread would you give kudos for it?
2016-02-24 19:18 Grimbow: Only if you think I deserve it though!
2016-02-24 19:20 Edo: yeah sure
2016-02-24 19:20 Grimbow: Thank you!
2016-02-24 19:21 Grimbow: 02:50:082 (1,1) -
2016-02-24 19:21 Grimbow: you should ctrl+g these two notes
2016-02-24 19:22 Grimbow: the D would give a nice kick to the start of the kiai and the k would map the clap sound a bit better than the d
2016-02-24 19:22 Edo: yeah i remeber
2016-02-24 19:22 Edo: yeah sure
2016-02-24 19:23 Grimbow: and here
2016-02-24 19:23 Grimbow: 03:53:498 -
2016-02-24 19:23 Grimbow: you could add 3 d's to make the notes follow the synth like you did on the part before it
2016-02-24 19:23 Grimbow: 03:53:998 - same here
2016-02-24 19:25 Edo:
http://puu.sh/njZHG/dbdc69b52b.jpg2016-02-24 19:25 Edo: just like that ?
2016-02-24 19:25 Grimbow:
http://puu.sh/njZM6/2f8dee048c.jpg2016-02-24 19:25 Grimbow: like that
2016-02-24 19:26 Edo: ah k
2016-02-24 19:26 Grimbow: you don't have to do that though, I just think it'd follow the synth better
2016-02-24 19:26 Edo: yes it's more good
2016-02-24 19:29 Edo: i have a big dilemm
2016-02-24 19:29 Grimbow: what is it?
2016-02-24 19:29 Edo: after first drop
2016-02-24 19:30 Edo: hmmm who take the part of the map in chat ?
2016-02-24 19:30 Grimbow: 02:50:748 -
2016-02-24 19:30 Grimbow: here?
2016-02-24 19:30 Edo: no
2016-02-24 19:30 Grimbow: 00:21:415 -
2016-02-24 19:31 Grimbow: you may want to add kiai time there actually, since you have it at 04:37:415 - and that's the same kind of chorus
2016-02-24 19:32 Edo: i have added a kia time here no ?
2016-02-24 19:32 Grimbow: 00:21:415 -
2016-02-24 19:33 Grimbow: there's no kiai time here
2016-02-24 19:33 Edo: ahhh
2016-02-24 19:33 Edo: here no
2016-02-24 19:33 Edo: that more good with kia time here ?
2016-02-24 19:33 Grimbow: I think so, because you have kiai time 04:37:415 - here
2016-02-24 19:34 Grimbow: and they are the same kind of chorus
2016-02-24 19:34 Grimbow: 01:03:248 -
2016-02-24 19:34 Edo: hmmm yeah
2016-02-24 19:34 Grimbow: that would be the end
2016-02-24 19:36 Edo: 00:51:415 (246) -
2016-02-24 19:36 Edo: i disable kia time here
2016-02-24 19:36 Grimbow: Yeah that would be really nice emphasis!
2016-02-24 19:36 Edo: 00:53:415 (262) -
2016-02-24 19:36 Grimbow: and start it again there
2016-02-24 19:36 Edo: and restart here
2016-02-24 19:36 Grimbow: yes!
2016-02-24 19:37 Edo: 00:42:248 (201) -
2016-02-24 19:37 Edo: here to ?
2016-02-24 19:37 Grimbow: Stop there and start it again at 00:42:748 -
2016-02-24 19:38 Edo: yes i make kia here too
2016-02-24 19:38 Edo: just in this part
2016-02-24 19:38 Grimbow: Yeah
2016-02-24 19:38 Edo: 03:54:748 (343) -
2016-02-24 19:38 Edo: the dilemm
2016-02-24 19:38 Grimbow: there's a lot of quiet bass notes you could map there
2016-02-24 19:38 Edo: i make a drum and synthe here ?
2016-02-24 19:38 Edo: yes i hear
2016-02-24 19:39 Grimbow: You can follow the drum and vocals yes
2016-02-24 19:39 Edo: but i put just bass note and synthe part
2016-02-24 19:39 Edo: hmmm
2016-02-24 19:39 Edo: ok
2016-02-24 19:39 Edo: i try it
2016-02-24 19:39 Grimbow: I think if you just add notes where you can hear the bass it will be good
2016-02-24 19:40 Edo: i add a d note on bass and it's really good
2016-02-24 19:40 Grimbow: yeah \o/
2016-02-24 19:45 Edo: 04:46:915 (53) -
2016-02-24 19:45 Edo: i leave this part for calm part
2016-02-24 19:46 Edo: and after the under kia time i change this part with the synth
2016-02-24 19:46 Edo: 05:08:248 (179) -
2016-02-24 19:46 Edo: that good ?
2016-02-24 19:46 Grimbow: I think that bit is okay as it is
2016-02-24 19:47 Grimbow: 04:47:415 - you could add a k here but other than that I think this section plays well
2016-02-24 19:47 Edo: no it's not god :/
2016-02-24 19:47 Edo: ah yes
2016-02-24 19:47 Grimbow: If you'd like to change it that is your choice c:
2016-02-24 19:48 Grimbow: I think
2016-02-24 19:48 Grimbow: 04:42:665 - you could add a d here
2016-02-24 19:48 Edo: 04:56:082 (103) -
2016-02-24 19:48 Grimbow: and change 04:42:582 (31) - to a d
2016-02-24 19:48 Edo: kia time's end is good ?
2016-02-24 19:48 Grimbow: and that would make a nice pattern that follows the synth and vocals
2016-02-24 19:49 Grimbow: Yeah I think that is okay
2016-02-24 19:49 Grimbow: can I suggest some changes to the stream?\
2016-02-24 19:49 Edo: yeah np
2016-02-24 19:50 Grimbow: 04:56:165 (103) - change that to a k
2016-02-24 19:51 Grimbow: 04:57:165 (115) - that too
2016-02-24 19:51 Grimbow: 04:58:082 (126) - and that
2016-02-24 19:51 Grimbow: 04:58:248 - add a k here
2016-02-24 19:51 Grimbow: 04:58:415 (127) - and change that to a d
2016-02-24 19:51 Edo:
DD
2016-02-24 19:51 Edo: that really cool !!
2016-02-24 19:51 Edo: i approuve this pattern
2016-02-24 19:52 Grimbow: Glad you like it!
2016-02-24 19:52 Edo: i think it's done !
2016-02-24 19:52 Grimbow: One more thing
2016-02-24 19:52 Grimbow: Since it is a low bpm song
2016-02-24 19:52 Edo: i added all bass and i sync the pattern and the bass with vocal
2016-02-24 19:53 Grimbow: you can cchange the slider velocity to 1.60
2016-02-24 19:53 Grimbow: it will make the map easier to read
2016-02-24 19:53 Grimbow: in the timing section
2016-02-24 19:53 Edo: for all the map ?
2016-02-24 19:53 Grimbow:
http://puu.sh/nk1DM/c8057308d0.jpg2016-02-24 19:53 Grimbow: in that menu
2016-02-24 19:53 Grimbow: change the slider velocity to 1.60
2016-02-24 19:53 Edo: yeah it's right
2016-02-24 19:53 Grimbow: it makes the notes a little further apart so you can read them better c:
2016-02-24 19:54 Edo: yeah :3
2016-02-24 19:54 Grimbow: \o/
2016-02-24 19:54 Edo: ok so i try a final test and i update if it's right !
2016-02-24 19:54 Edo: o/
2016-02-24 19:55 Grimbow: Go ahead!
2016-02-24 20:03 Edo: ok done
2016-02-24 20:03 Edo: i thing it's good
2016-02-24 20:03 Edo: but more with you'r help thank !
2016-02-24 20:04 Edo: 4.02 star
2016-02-24 20:04 Grimbow: It's quite alright!
2016-02-24 20:04 Grimbow: I'll post this in the thread now c: Have a good day!
2016-02-24 20:04 Edo: thank one more ^^