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Nice Song! I love it! But it contains lots of bad words. So you have to write it in your description
Warning: This map is only suitable for age of 18+ only and add 18+ to your tags
ฺBut in easy and normal. Try to make the rhythm into 1/1 and 1/2. So it will not confuse players
Kiai here 02:10:484 - and end it here 02:30:702 -
Let's get started on hard diff
HardI can't really know how you map on the rap parts. I don't know what are you following (Try to create your own rhythm or try to follow vocal?) So. I cannot mod it well.
Always use DS in your Non-jump part
Because this song is very slow. So 1/8 divisor should be used on some spots
00:01:109 - Use 1/8 And add this note to match the vocals.
00:41:626 (6,1,2,3) - Stacking like this will be very hard to read. Back and forth beats can be used when all four beats has same spacing (on the timeline).
00:46:843 - Without this note. Players will confused. Vocal starts here.
00:47:495 - You can add a note here
00:51:571 (7,8,9) - Do a 3/8 return slider to match the vocals. The 3/8 rhythm may be confusing so I suggest you to use a slider instead to make it easy to read
00:52:223 - ^
00:54:832 (1) - ^
00:56:626 - You can add note here.
01:00:376 (1) - 3/8 return slider please
01:04:615 (5) - Don't stack this please. It's really confusing.
01:06:897 - You can add note here.
01:11:952 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Killer stack. Stacking means beats that stacked has same spacing. Stack like this can kill a player without reasons.
01:19:778 (4,5,6,7,8) - Killer stack again
01:54:506 (5,6,1) - Try NOT to stack like this please. It's like you stop the flow and boost it.
02:04:615 (5,6,7,1) - ^ 6,7,1 Can be stacked
03:24:017 (2,3,4,5) - Don't stack like this pleaseeee
03:27:604 (3,4) - Which rhythm are you following?
NormalAlways NC every downbeats (Big white ticks)
00:18:310 (3,4) - This is confusing. You follow melody in the previous notes but you suddenly change it to follow vocals. The new players cwill cannot catch it.
00:24:506 (1) - Too short recovery time after spinner. this is
UNRANKABLE Just make sure that the hitcircle doesn't appear while spinning
00:29:560 (2,3) - Try to merge it into a single slider. Normal diff doesn't need to map all things.
00:37:876 (6,7,8,1) - This doesn't flow well. Try move some notes
01:05:267 - Break??? Break here doesn't feel good IMO.
01:47:006 (5) - Try to move 5 to x:220 y:30
01:47:006 - Break??
02:07:876 (5) - End slider here and make a 3/4 return slider here 02:09:180 -
02:16:517 (2,3) - as same as 00:29:560 (2,3)
02:33:963 - Too short recovery time after spinner. this is
UNRANKABLE03:02:332 (4,6) - Fix overlap please
EasyTry to NC every downbeats.
Looks fine. But
Every map must start and finish at same spot. So map 00:00:050 - please
00:57:441 (1) - Don't tease newbies by breaking the break with this note please. It can make players miss without a good reason.
01:39:180 (1) - Arrrggghhhhhh Nooooooo don't do this please^ above
02:00:049 (1,2,3) - I know that you don't want to stack. But please make it flow please.
02:31:354 (1,1) - Too short recovery time for easy diff
UNRANKABLEGood luck ranking this