- Nice Beginning
00:37:154 - Make SV 2.0 instead of 2.5, 2.5 is a little too fast and very hard to read with mods activated
00:38:417 - ^
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01:03:680 - ^
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01:03:680 - ^
01:06:522 (20) - this note should probably be a d, maybe change the stream around that, you could make 01:06:364 (18) - k if you do that
01:16:707 (86) - maybe make this k to coincide with the guitar sound on that beat
01:23:575 (54) - maybe move to 01:23:654 - for better synergy with the vocals
01:24:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - this stream is fine as it is, but it could be made more interesting, while also matching with the song, maybe think about something there, this is up to you though
01:32:259 (44,45,46) - maybe change the colors here, sounds better imo
maybe move 01:43:312 (149) - to 01:42:996 (146) - and 01:43:549 (151) - to 01:43:628 - i think doubles would fit quite well here and it would suit the way you mapped doubles at other places
01:48:601 (197) - or 01:48:443 (196) - maybe put d here, too much k spam imo
01:56:496 (23,24) - maybe shorten the sliders so they end at the white tick and place a k where they would end normally, it's also fine as they are but this plays better imo
02:00:759 (46,49) - maybe put d here to accentuate some of the lower notes and to put variety into this k spam
02:22:391 (184) - k to accentuate the guitar sound
02:29:259 (54) - move to 02:29:338 - to synergize more with the vocals, also sounds more natural imo
02:30:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - again, this stream is fine as it is, but you could make it more interesting, while still having it fit to the music... it's a bit boring to play as it is imo, 02:32:338 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - these notes also should be reversed imo, because the guitar doesn't change pitch at this point 02:32:338 (23) - but changes to a lower pitch here 02:32:496 (25) - instead
an alternative to changing that might just be to make 02:32:338 (23) - be a k instead, as this fixes it too
02:37:944 (44,45,46) - maybe change the colors on these notes, it would sound and play better imo
02:54:128 (196,197) - make one of these notes a d, to make some difference in this kat spam, it's too monotonous imo
03:37:075 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - this part of the stream sounds kinda weird, maybe change the colors here 03:37:154 (28,30,31) - i think that fits better, or just do something else there, up to you
03:41:891 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - this part of the stream seems a bit off again, maybe tweak some stuff there, just go for some more normal patterns in there, i think that should straighten things out
04:20:812 (48,51,54,57) - maybe change these to d to differentiate the difference in pitch from the ones starting here 04:22:075 (60) -
04:26:970 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,1) - this last part sounds kinda weird again, i would reccomend changing the colors here to fix this 04:27:207 (114,117,118) -
04:57:759 (160) - k to accentuate the guitar sound
05:29:496 (196,197) - change one of these notes to d, to add some difference between this kat spam, again it is perfectly possible to put a d there, so why not do it?
05:36:128 (258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - this stream is perfectly fine, but i would suggest making it a bit more complex since it is the last stream in the map and it is perfectly possible to make it more complex without disregarding the music