^

just a couple of comments:
1. why not rename the difficulties a little, 5.5* is way to high for an insane but 4.21* looks about right (idk if the difficulty is super inflated in them or something so if it is disregard this but still), you could rename insane to another and hyper to insane, or hyper to insane, insane to extra, extra to extreme, extreme to ultra idk
just avoids confusion is all

2. why is the od so low, od 6.6 on a 5.5* is weird honestly, but the main one is od4 on a 4.21*, literally just why (also maybe raise the od above 8 on excors, it fits the difficulty/harshness of it more imo)

3. maybe make the AR transition a little smoother, ar8.5 might be a little low for hyper but it's okay imo, ar9 for insane is a little too low i think, especially considering the jump from ar9 to ar9.7 from the gap between insane and extra, even though (at least imo) the gap is relatively small in difficulty (Extra is a lot more streamy but otherwise straightforward in the same way as Insane just a little harder)

i'd make a comment about mapping 1/4 that isn't there being overdone, but i'm not exactly great at mapping and people seem to do it a lot so w/e

best of luck pushing this forward!

SkyLifeHope wrote:

Reddit wrote:

Uh any chance on making a actual insane difficulty? The insane you have right now is over 5* and the only thing lower than that is a Hyper , also good luck on the map

I don't see anything wrong with the difficulty gaps.

Just saying that there really is.

it'll have something wrong when it reaches a 1.5 star gap


IMO though

i had much problem with the diff names and stuff.... but ok
i gonna try making some harder and some easyer.

later :3

well.. i not really see there a problem...

Or at least make the difficulty gap considerably low in lower diffs and relatively high diff gap at the end is fine too but that does not mean 3* difficulty gap at the end, but in the example you provided... That is not a common case for 2* difficulty gap which seems to wide.

Or make a slowly increasingly difficulty gap is fine too.

ok, i will try :3

Can I help you about ctb?

i have no idea with CTB.... emmm maybe idk

Update...
my RealLife currently fuck me up, i work on the maps as soon as possible :>
(btw.. still searching "Extreme" mods :3 )

don't do ctb pls
it'll make things hard for you

Routing isn't a good example for diff spread to start with, since the mapper had mapped the extra and comfort with a very specific style in mind, in which a difficulty in between is difficult to make, adding to the fact that the song is essentially 288 bpm

Can I make ctb, please ?

if you really have to...
sure

also... little update ... im working on a storyboard

The_CJ wrote:

also... little update ... im working on a storyboard

stay determinated xD

i have to say..... this Storyboard is....wow. it really makes fun xD
maybe i overdid it again ....

new mapper smell

... ?

Is that good?

Hi, my quick mod by request!

General:
Add an epilepsy warning, it's a great storyboard, but VERY flashy.
(v found here v)




Good luck and stay determined! ^o^

[-Reol] wrote:

Hi, my quick mod by request!

General:
Add an epilepsy warning, it's a great storyboard, but VERY flashy.
(v found here v)

Insane

- First of all i think you should change the AR from 9 to something between 9,2 to 9,4 to lower the object density since it might cause trouble reading patterns at 240 BPM.

00:34:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - you left out a tick between the stream and the slider, you should either leave a bit of space between those or fill the tick with another stream circle.

00:49:866 (4,1) - try putting an equally spaced circle on the red tick between those, the pause feels really awkward and the music seems to allow it.

01:09:366 (1,2) - good opportunity to use a 1/4 stream or sliders instead of 1/2 sliders.

01:25:366 (1) - ^

Extra

I actually didn't find anything significant here, seems good!

Extreme

Not a lot because i am unsure about alot of things.
- This might come down to preference but a suggestion would be to make 01:09:366 (1) - shorter and have it repeat 1/4 instead of 1/2.

Good luck and stay determined! ^o^

I WILL,

and thanks

Hey from my modding queue for NM

General:

GREAT FREAKING STORYBOARD

If you want to rank this, don't you need a <2* map? Because your mapset doesn't have one, and I think it's unrankable without :/

-M4x's Easy:

This is too hard for an Easy, rename it Advanced I think

00:52:616 (4,5) - make this one slider, there's a continuous note here

Don't see more mistakes here ^^ Nice diff. Flow could be a little better, and such long singletaps are really too hard for an Easy diff.

Normal:

00:19:366 (1,2,3) - stacking issue
00:36:116 (2,1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing, shouldn't be the case on a Normal diff, all other spacing issues won't be pointed out one by one, but be careful
00:57:366 (1) - not allowed anymore those kinds of sliders are also very hard to read, so make this different (you won't be able to rank this)
01:01:366 (1,2,3,4) - stacking issue
02:14:116 (6,7) - stacking issue
02:21:366 (3,4) - ^
03:00:241 (2,3,4) - too difficult to read for a normal diff

Hard:

00:32:241 (1,1) - stacking issue
00:33:366 (2,1) - ^
00:42:866 (3,2) - ^
00:44:741 (3,2) - ^
00:46:366 (1,1) - ^
00:52:991 (5,6) - too hard for a hard (yeah sounds dumb)
00:52:991 (5,6,2) - stacking issue
00:53:866 (2,5,6) - ^
01:06:366 (3,1,2,3) - ^
01:23:866 (3,1) - make 1 start where 3 is
01:27:866 (3,4,1,2) - stacking issue
01:28:866 (3,4,2) - ^

Thereare more overlaps in the rest of the map too, be careful about this.

Won't mod the higher diffs, don't feel like I'm experienced enough to add my word to those.

Overall, I can see that you're kinda new to mapping. You need to remake the lower diffs, the difficulty level is not adapted for the * rating or the names of the difficulties

I can also see that you put a lot of work into this, and wouldn't want to see your work go to waste. I'd suggest you find an experienced mapper, with some ranked diffs, who'd be glad to help you with the map. Good luck in the future ~

Hi Nm from my Queue

Good luck

Can I borrow your map for osu! ctb Thailand tournament?

If you want

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey from my modding queue for NM

General:

GREAT FREAKING STORYBOARD

If you want to rank this, don't you need a <2* map? Because your mapset doesn't have one, and I think it's unrankable without :/

-M4x's Easy:

This is too hard for an Easy, rename it Advanced I think

00:52:616 (4,5) - make this one slider, there's a continuous note here

Don't see more mistakes here ^^ Nice diff. Flow could be a little better, and such long singletaps are really too hard for an Easy diff.

Normal:

00:19:366 (1,2,3) - stacking issue
00:36:116 (2,1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing, shouldn't be the case on a Normal diff, all other spacing issues won't be pointed out one by one, but be careful
00:57:366 (1) - not allowed anymore those kinds of sliders are also very hard to read, so make this different (you won't be able to rank this)
01:01:366 (1,2,3,4) - stacking issue
02:14:116 (6,7) - stacking issue
02:21:366 (3,4) - ^
03:00:241 (2,3,4) - too difficult to read for a normal diff

Hard:

00:32:241 (1,1) - stacking issue
00:33:366 (2,1) - ^
00:42:866 (3,2) - ^
00:44:741 (3,2) - ^
00:46:366 (1,1) - ^
00:52:991 (5,6) - too hard for a hard (yeah sounds dumb)
00:52:991 (5,6,2) - stacking issue
00:53:866 (2,5,6) - ^
01:06:366 (3,1,2,3) - ^
01:23:866 (3,1) - make 1 start where 3 is
01:27:866 (3,4,1,2) - stacking issue
01:28:866 (3,4,2) - ^

Thereare more overlaps in the rest of the map too, be careful about this.

Won't mod the higher diffs, don't feel like I'm experienced enough to add my word to those.

Overall, I can see that you're kinda new to mapping. You need to remake the lower diffs, the difficulty level is not adapted for the * rating or the names of the difficulties

I can also see that you put a lot of work into this, and wouldn't want to see your work go to waste. I'd suggest you find an experienced mapper, with some ranked diffs, who'd be glad to help you with the map. Good luck in the future ~

Thanks , and about the Diff names. i ask Desperate-kun he said its ok as longest there is a clear diff increase, so i hope its ok

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi Nm from my Queue

MOD

General : many overlapping problems like u have the whole space to map and u stack things in center which makes the patterns overlaps
normal is little hard for normal new players like avoid stacks and fix spacing should be equal because normal players can react fast if object is close and its actualy not close nice SB.
Normal
00:19:366 (1,2,3) - overlap 00:19:366 (1) - make cruvy slider like this those straight sliders look kinda dull make them curvy and flowing with the song
00:21:866 (3,1) - the spacing is same as the other note while its not here this can be confusing for normal players pls use distance snap
00:26:991 - 1/2 revers here?
00:34:241 (2,1) - overlaps
00:35:366 (1,2) - staking this can be confusing for normal difficulty i recommand u avoid that
01:00:616 (2,1) - overlap
01:12:366 (1,2,3,4) - avoid that in normal
01:24:866 (2,3) - blanket and spacing
01:27:616 (2,3) - blanket like this
01:28:616 (1,3) - overlap it even overlaps the arrow of the revers slider which that not good
01:29:616 (3,1,2) - ^
Hard
00:23:491 (3,1) - overlap
00:23:866 (1) - remove nc
00:25:866 (1) - ^ i dont think its needed
00:37:116 (2,3) - stack
many overlap issues i wont mention all u can find and fix
01:39:366 (1) - remove nc
01:40:366 (4) - nc
02:37:366 (1,2) - blanket like this

Good luck

<3 Tanks i took all thats lazyboy007's mod not already fixed,

02:47:366 (1,2,3,4) - maybe more sliders if it's ok

Insane

00:34:241 (1) - Remove NC to keep combo colors more consistent.
00:36:616 (2) - It would look nicer if you moved this to x:288 y:352 (sorry, accidentally moved this in grid level 4. Just move it to there by switching to that grid level).
00:36:241 (6) - Move this note further down as it's way to close to (4).
00:47:616 (2) - How about rotating this slider 15° anticlockwise to keep it parallel with (1) and (3)?
00:50:366 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistent with the stream.
01:22:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you accidentally made this a 1/2 burst when it's clearly supposed to be 1/4.
01:34:866 (6) - Maybe extend this repeat slider one tick to create a better transition to 01:35:366 (1)?
01:37:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe consider making this section a flower stream instead of a bunch of 1/4 sliders?
01:46:366 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Remove the claps; the music becomes quieter in this section.
01:48:366 (1) - ^
01:53:866 (2,1) - ^
01:49:366 (1,1) - Sorry, but these sliders look really ugly (like 2009 ugly). Perhaps change their shape to something else and move them further apart horizontally from each other.
01:54:366 (1) - Remove NC.
01:56:991 (1) - ^
01:58:241 (1) - ^
02:04:991 (7) - ^
02:00:991 (1) - ^
02:05:866 (1) - NC this.
02:08:741 (6) - Move to x:304 y:160 to structure better.
02:09:491 (2) - Move to x:320 y:224 for same reason.
02:10:991 (1) - Remove NC.
02:17:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks pretty cluttered in editor. Move (3,4) further away from (1,2), and same thing with (5,6).
02:24:616 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing here randomly gets further apart for no reason, especially after (4). I don't hear anything in the song that indicates it getting more intense. Make the spacing in (5,6,7) match closer with (2,3,4).
02:38:866 (3) - Move to x:96 y:96.
02:54:116 (5) - Move to x:224 y:256.
02:55:116 (5) - Move to x:336 y:240.
02:57:366 (1,2,3,4) - Looks really bad when (3) overlaps with (1). Also, change the curve of these sliders so that they blanket nicely with (4).
03:00:116 (5) - Move to x:256 y:176.
03:01:116 (1) - Remove NC.
03:05:366 (1,2) - Fix this blanket.
03:07:366 (1) - Remove whistle and clap.

Please make it for human.

Thx, going to change it soon <3

Just saying, it would make more sense if you renamed easy -> normal and normal -> advanced.

tbh....alien v2 ?


if this gets ranked pls rank this https://osu.ppy.sh/b/441890 and https://osu.ppy.sh/b/305258 too

half of the streams and jumps in the last diff are making no sense at all and are not even supporting any rhythm
other diffs are actually "okay" but the last one...pls seriously ?

good luck with that tho,bye quality maps~

[quote="Code of Conduct: Modding and Mapping":1337]Unless the concept behind a beatmap is fundamentally flawed from the start, modding should aim to improve the map in its current design - not force your own style upon it. If you truly believe the map has too many significant issues to address individually, try to give a general statement of why this is the case and what direction you think the map should go in to get back on track.Not to bring you down or anything, but i highly doubt this can be ranked in its current state.

There's a huge spread gap between the hyper and insane, and the top diff(s) lack any sort of support for the music (basically 1/2 1/4 spam everywhere cuz " lulz difficulty mapping xD" with no actual thought behind the rhythms and spacings placed).

VINXIS wrote:

new mapper smell

Since you're a newer mapper, your knowledge isn't enough to support such high end mapping that requires a more advanced grasp of the editor.

All I can say is, remap and reconsider your top difficulties? I know that sounds awful but there's no way these top diffs can get through the ranking process without a serious overhaul, and frankly, it'd take a very skilled mapper to be able to create a good, high-level difficulty for this song.

Sorry if this makes you feel bad or makes me come off as a dick or something, I just think it's better to tell you now than for you to find out later.

I recommend you check out some of these videos too, they may help guide you in the right direction:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8FhlB4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rAYm50d6XMw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v1_HRo-lWWI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3BC_I2ufqC8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7jYwSVjiSo
pishi make a playlist pls

well i can try to remap... later...
RealLife is currently more important, or i'm fucked

Also, Fort wanted to Mod Excors, we had some Modding Sessions, but hes not gone online since 3 Weeks, (or i always miss him)

So yeah, let me fix my Reallife, then i try to fix this map

The_CJ, why did you remove all the other diffs? Please tell me this is temporary.

Nope. sadly not, i remove al other and gonna remapp Insane, Fort is Modding Excords and i try to find 2 -3 Guess Diffs

Can I do ctb diff?

Goooooooood Mappppppp