Replay: http://puu.sh/ocMUK/83d45f972b.osr
General Thoughts: Although I love Megalovania, I was disappointed by this map because there were very little (if any) interesting rhythms in it.

00:45:241 - Seems like it's missing a circle.

00:55:866 (3) - This doesn't really fit here.

00:56:741 (3) - This doesn't match any rhythm.

00:57:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These 16th notes seem unnecessary.

01:05:366 (1) - This part can use a stream/16th notes, until 01:05:678.

01:06:116 (1) - Slider is 1/2 beat too early.

01:07:366 - The rhythm that is mapped here is boring compared to the rhythm in the music. The rhythm in the bass is much more interesting. For example,


01:09:366 (1) - 01:25:366 (1) - The melody has 16th notes here, but there aren't any 16th notes mapped.
01:11:116 (1,2,3) - 01:27:366 (1,2,3) - The melody doesn't have 16th notes here, but 16th notes are mapped.

01:15:366 (1,2,3,4) - 01:16:366 (1,2,3,4) - 16th notes here don't really make sense.

01:19:366 (1) - 01:21:366 (1,2) - Either make this a long slider, or make it 16th note ticks, or stream.
01:20:366 (1,2,3,4) - 8 sliders here would match the melody:


01:28:366 (1,1,1,1) - This doesn't fit the music.

01:29:366 (1,2,3,4) - Something like this would fit the music better:


01:31:991 (2,3,4) - This doesn't fit the music.

01:32:366 (1,2,3,4) - The music doesn't become less intense, but the difficulty suddenly dropped off for no reason.

01:34:366 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doesn't really fit the music.

01:36:366 (1,2,3,4) - Put 01:37:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) here instead.

01:38:366 (1) - You can map a more interesting rhythm here:


01:39:366 to 01:55:366 - The rhythm in the bass is much more interesting than what you have mapped here.

01:53:616 (2,3) - These don't really make sense.

01:57:991 - 01:58:991 (7) - 01:58:991 (7) - 01:58:991 (7) - 01:58:991 (7) - The rhythm would be more interesting if you added a circle here.

01:58:991 (7) - 02:10:991 (1) - This doesn't match anything.

02:14:366 (1) to 02:14:366 (1) - The rhythm in the bass is much more interesting than the rhythm mapped here.

02:18:116 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't match anything.

02:19:866 (3,4) - The guitar melody is playing 16th notes here.

02:23:366 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Groups of 3 8th notes would work better here. Example:


02:29:366 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1) - The gaps don't match the music.

02:33:366 (1,2,3,4) - This place could use 16th notes.

02:44:991 (1) - Separate the last 3 ticks of this slider to match the melody.

02:47:366 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 03:07:116 (4) - Doesn't match anything.

00:51:116 (5) - sliders that exchange the stream are okay but the reverse one doesn't fit


01:01:244 - feels like i note is missing


01:02:866 - also over here OpieOP


01:06:116 - i'm a horrible person :<


01:07:367 up to 01:10:991 - since the map is fast and full of consistency the reading part here seems a little hard for someone who doesn't know the map and it's still hard even after few tries maybe a little more spacing to it


01:15:991 - such a troll circle lol


01:16:991 - goddammit such troll :>


01:21:366 up to 01:23:241 - i don't think that this part should be slowed down maybe some little patterns could do the trick


01:26:241 - i'm still a horrible person QWQ


01:58:991 - maybe 1/2 slider feel better


02:21:866 (2) - where is the speed D: how about some single tabs with a slider at 2:22:241


02:27:741 and 02:28:866 up to 02:29:241 - it is one of the faster parts in the song and i don't think that you have to be slow in that part since the map isn't like stamina killing


02:47:366 up to 02:51:303 - perfect solution for no deathstream

- First of all i think you should change the AR from 9 to something between 9,2 to 9,4 to lower the object density since it might cause trouble reading patterns at 240 BPM.

00:34:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - you left out a tick between the stream and the slider, you should either leave a bit of space between those or fill the tick with another stream circle.

00:49:866 (4,1) - try putting an equally spaced circle on the red tick between those, the pause feels really awkward and the music seems to allow it.

01:09:366 (1,2) - good opportunity to use a 1/4 stream or sliders instead of 1/2 sliders.

01:25:366 (1) - ^

I actually didn't find anything significant here, seems good!

Not a lot because i am unsure about alot of things.
- This might come down to preference but a suggestion would be to make 01:09:366 (1) - shorter and have it repeat 1/4 instead of 1/2.