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Team Otori - SEISHUN COUNTDOWN (TV SIZE) [CatchTheBeat]

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brenkip
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Sunkiss
Hello! I'm not sure if you're ready for mods, but I just had a few things to say

[Rain]

00:07:875 - This jump would have to be memorized in order to make it. Consider making this a shorter jump or a HD.

I personally believe that these jumps will add more feel to the song.

00:09:620 - Move note 7 to x:221 y:280

00:11:779 Move note 2 to x:451 y:256

00:12:007 move note 3 to x:254 y:64

01:19:053 move note 2 to x:430 y:152

01:22:348 move note 1 to x:167 y:240

01:22:689 move note 2 to x:441 y:160

01:23:030 move note 3 to x:277 y:80

01:23:484 move note 4 to x:16 y:80

01:21:666 move note 4 to x:437 y:80

good luck on this!
Topic Starter
brenkip

Blind Justice wrote:

Hello! I'm not sure if you're ready for mods, but I just had a few things to say

[Rain]

00:07:875 - This jump would have to be memorized in order to make it. Consider making this a shorter jump or a HD.
I didn't change this much but I changed it so it the jump wouldn't have to be memorized.

I personally believe that these jumps will add more feel to the song.

00:09:620 - Move note 7 to x:221 y:280
Done
00:11:779 Move note 2 to x:451 y:256
Done
00:12:007 move note 3 to x:254 y:64
Done
01:19:053 move note 2 to x:430 y:152
Done
01:22:348 move note 1 to x:167 y:240
Done
01:22:689 move note 2 to x:441 y:160
Done
01:23:030 move note 3 to x:277 y:80
Done
01:23:484 move note 4 to x:16 y:80
Done
01:21:666 move note 4 to x:437 y:80
Done
good luck on this!
thank you! your suggestions were helpful in making my map flow+feel much better ^^
-rage
Hello from my queue.

[General]
I like the Salad and Platter background, but i feel like the Showtime diff background should match with the others.
Recommendations?
I've never seen the anime ;w; but i found some that look similar to the background used for salad and platter
http://i.imgur.com/olcaCCf.jpg
http://40.media.tumblr.com/eef7e71e4b4d ... 3_1280.jpg
http://40.media.tumblr.com/36251fbc3420 ... 1_1280.jpg

i'm sorry if you don't like those, i just thought i'd give suggestions ;w;

[Salad]
Change to AR6. The AR and the OD should always be the same
  1. 00:05:507 (3,4,5,6) - put those in a straighter line, just so it looks kinda better and they look more symetrical.
  2. 00:21:189 (1) - move this closer to the previous note, jump feels pretty long there. (they don't need to be super close together, just put it far enough to use the dash but in my opinion, this jump should be shorten just a little)
  3. 00:28:689 (3) - same thing as the point above.
  4. 00:56:189 - a note could be added between the (6,7). I feel like it could work well with the vocals and it makes it a little less boring considering this part is just sliders for a while.
  5. 01:05:507 (1,2,3) - something feels odd for me about this one, i feel like it's just a little too difficult for a Salad. The way i see it, you have to move quickly after the 1 and dash through the 2 to make it on the next slider, does it feel too difficult for a salad? maybe move all these notes a little closer .
  6. 01:12:439 (7,8) - i wouldn't recommend stacking like that, you could move the 8 further away from the 7.
[Platter]
Change to AR8 and OD8. it feels better for a Platter diff.
  1. 00:14:370 (7,8) - no stacking, it makes it a little boring.
  2. 00:27:325 (10) - make this slider more horizontal
  3. 00:46:416 - in this part, you could really use the vocals to make a sort of Hyperdash slider jump to circle (or the oposite), i feel like 00:46:416 (7) - doesn't work at that part and could be replaced.
  4. 00:57:553 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - this plays really weirdly. i would recommend not putting the 7 in a vertical position so then it would be easier to hit the hyperdash and hit the next notes (seriously, i miss the hyperdash all the time). and the stream could be more in a straight/symetrical way.
  5. 01:03:007 (5) - horizontal shape plz
[Showtime]
AR9 + OD9
  1. 00:00:507 - you can set the first inherited timing point at the same line as the first timing point (just so the first slider is the same SV as the one after that.)
  2. 00:09:598 (1,2) - make these more horizontal, the vertical shapes make it boring a little.
  3. 00:46:416 (5,1) - Hyperdash these
  4. 00:49:143 (7,8) - space out these notes a lot more.
That's all i have to say, good luck with this map!
MoelittleC Hime
Hello, here is the rookie modder littlec.
I'd like to mod the Showtime diff.
If you can attentively read my reply, I would really appreciate that. ^.^
Thank you very much !
Here goes my word. xd

Showtime

Feeling:The style is good and the notes or sliders fits the rythm.
General changing:
①.I think you can change the OD to 8 to 8.5 and remain the AR
②.For the sampleset and volume in the "Timing and Control Points", some of the hit sound can be changed to normal mod to emphasize the click or the Kiai part. In addition, the volume here can also changeable.
③. The slider with lots of little fruits and some of the streams can be more bend to fit the inertia after the red dash.For example: Stream begin with 00:43:234 (1) and the stream begin with 00:43:575 (4) can be changed as the graph below:


Detailed points:
00:00:507 (1) - I think you can put your green line on 00:00:620 which aims at changing the slider speed here at the beginning of the song.
00:08:461 (2) - From here to 00:09:598 (1) the first slider's choose is a little bit inappropriate. You can deal with these 3 clicks just as you do between 00:11:416 (1) to 00:13:234 (1) .
00:13:916 (2) - 00:14:598 (3) Hyperdash here and the backward 00:14:825 (1) here can move a bit left
00:33:007 (2) - 00:33:234 (3) A little bit too far with no red fruit. Note 2 can be moved to x:336 y:192 or x:320 y:192
00:47:098 (1) - Dash between this note with the slider begin at 00:46:416 (5) is not comfortable. You can choose to let it become a red fruit dash or add some transition notes here.
01:06:757 (3,1) - Hyperdash
01:07:325 (1,2,3,4) - Arrangement of the nots here make it difficult to control the plate to get all especially with 01:07:666 (4,1) occurs
01:17:212 (2,3) - A little bit too far here. Slider 3 can change to x:352 y:192
01:23:007 (3) - I think is better to make like this (the graph below) because there is only half beat between slider 2 and 3 so player need to dash here and a little bit hard to get all the small fruits.

That's what I want to say.
Nice song, I like it ^.^.
Good luck with this map ! xd
Topic Starter
brenkip

klonoa wrote:

Hello from my queue.

[General]
I like the Salad and Platter background, but i feel like the Showtime diff background should match with the others.
Recommendations?
I've never seen the anime ;w; but i found some that look similar to the background used for salad and platter
http://i.imgur.com/olcaCCf.jpg
http://40.media.tumblr.com/eef7e71e4b4d ... 3_1280.jpg
http://40.media.tumblr.com/36251fbc3420 ... 1_1280.jpg

i'm sorry if you don't like those, i just thought i'd give suggestions ;w;
changed it to one of the ones above : )
[Salad]
Change to AR6. The AR and the OD should always be the same fixed
  1. 00:05:507 (3,4,5,6) - put those in a straighter line, just so it looks kinda better and they look more symetrical. done
  2. 00:21:189 (1) - move this closer to the previous note, jump feels pretty long there. (they don't need to be super close together, just put it far enough to use the dash but in my opinion, this jump should be shorten just a little) didnt change this much because i wanted it to feel like a kind of long jump here
  3. 00:28:689 (3) - same thing as the point above. done
  4. 00:56:189 - a note could be added between the (6,7). I feel like it could work well with the vocals and it makes it a little less boring considering this part is just sliders for a while. added
  5. 01:05:507 (1,2,3) - something feels odd for me about this one, i feel like it's just a little too difficult for a Salad. The way i see it, you have to move quickly after the 1 and dash through the 2 to make it on the next slider, does it feel too difficult for a salad? maybe move all these notes a little closer . moved them a bit closer but not much since the vocals drag out a bit here long but quick i wanted it to feel like that.
  6. 01:12:439 (7,8) - i wouldn't recommend stacking like that, you could move the 8 further away from the 7. fixed
[Platter]
Change to AR8 and OD8. it feels better for a Platter diff. fixed
  1. 00:14:370 (7,8) - no stacking, it makes it a little boring. fixed
  2. 00:27:325 (10) - make this slider more horizontal done
  3. 00:46:416 - in this part, you could really use the vocals to make a sort of Hyperdash slider jump to circle (or the oposite), i feel like 00:46:416 (7) - doesn't work at that part and could be replaced. made the hyperdash and replaced note 7 with just a horizontal slider
  4. 00:57:553 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - this plays really weirdly. i would recommend not putting the 7 in a vertical position so then it would be easier to hit the hyperdash and hit the next notes (seriously, i miss the hyperdash all the time). and the stream could be more in a straight/symetrical way. fixed
  5. 01:03:007 (5) - horizontal shape plz
done
[Showtime]
AR9 + OD9 fixed
  1. 00:00:507 - you can set the first inherited timing point at the same line as the first timing point (just so the first slider is the same SV as the one after that.) made it so the second slider has the sv change. first slider had no change in the first place. my mistake
  2. 00:09:598 (1,2) - make these more horizontal, the vertical shapes make it boring a little. done
  3. 00:46:416 (5,1) - Hyperdash these done
  4. 00:49:143 (7,8) - space out these notes a lot more. done
That's all i have to say, good luck with this map!

MoelittleC Hime wrote:

Hello, here is the rookie modder littlec.
I'd like to mod the Showtime diff.
If you can attentively read my reply, I would really appreciate that. ^.^
Thank you very much !
Here goes my word. xd

Showtime

Feeling:The style is good and the notes or sliders fits the rythm.
General changing:
1. I think you can change the OD to 8 to 8.5 and remain the AR i prefer to keep them both the same
2. For the sampleset and volume in the "Timing and Control Points", some of the hit sound can be changed to normal mod to emphasize the click or the Kiai part. In addition, the volume here can also changeable.
3.The slider with lots of little fruits and some of the streams can be more bend to fit the inertia after the red dash.For example: Stream begin with 00:43:234 (1) and the stream begin with 00:43:575 (4) can be changed as the graph below:

this is kind of the same as how i had it but i did change it a bit, similar to the image you provided but not by much
Detailed points:
00:00:507 (1) - I think you can put your green line on 00:00:620 which aims at changing the slider speed here at the beginning of the song. did it for the second slider since the song begins fast and then slows down a bit
00:08:461 (2) - From here to 00:09:598 (1) the first slider's choose is a little bit inappropriate. You can deal with these 3 clicks just as you do between 00:11:416 (1) to 00:13:234 (1) . i think its fine where it is
00:13:916 (2) - 00:14:598 (3) Hyperdash here and the backward 00:14:825 (1) here can move a bit left done. does make the jump much more comfortable and less of a jump that has to be memorized
00:33:007 (2) - 00:33:234 (3) A little bit too far with no red fruit. Note 2 can be moved to x:336 y:192 or x:320 y:192 made note 2 to 3 a hyperdash
00:47:098 (1) - Dash between this note with the slider begin at 00:46:416 (5) is not comfortable. You can choose to let it become a red fruit dash or add some transition notes here. i think its fine as is.
01:06:757 (3,1) - Hyperdash added
01:07:325 (1,2,3,4) - Arrangement of the nots here make it difficult to control the plate to get all especially with 01:07:666 (4,1) occurs made it more straight
01:17:212 (2,3) - A little bit too far here. Slider 3 can change to x:352 y:192 changed coordinates
01:23:007 (3) - I think is better to make like this (the graph below) because there is only half beat between slider 2 and 3 so player need to dash here and a little bit hard to get all the small fruits. done


thank you once again ^^
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