1. Easy (1,69 stars, 187 notes)
2. Hard (4,54 stars, 405 notes)
3. Insane (4,89 stars, 541 notes)
4. Normal (3,43 stars, 265 notes)

Charles445 wrote:

Oh god, the tickrate makes it sound so epic
Oh god, a well done map, this will be hard

General
It feels kinda copypasta this song is copypasta too

Easy

SPOILER

01:16:690 Unused timing section
01:21:491 ^^^^
03:21:653 ^^^^
02:46:849 New Combo
02:49:099 ^^^^
02:49:099 This offbeat bit might confuse newbies (it confused me well enough) - I think about it
02:50:000 Make this spinner start at 02:50:450
03:25:253 New Combo
03:27:503 ^^^^
03:28:403 Make this spinner start at 03:28:853
fixed

Normal

SPOILER

01:30:042 Unused timing section
01:33:642 ^^^^
01:39:643 ^^^^
01:44:443 ^^^^
01:49:244 ^^^^
01:54:044 ^^^^
02:44:449 ^^^^
02:49:250 ^^^^
01:38:142 This touching the slider is strange.
01:42:943 ^^^^
fixed

Hard
01:43:243 (7,8) Oh you bastard

Not really much to say except for timing points.
Love the work you put into this. Star.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's your mod

[Overall]
I suggest editting the video and take out the audio that is in it to lower the filesize for your beatmap. Video doesn't contain any audio already (but .avi and .mp3 files have the same name).
100 BPM flat is much better, with an offset of 19249. Resnap.Changed. Thanks!
[Easy]
01:19:241 (2) - Maybe extend this to the next white tick, since the singer holds the note "time" Just a personal opinion.
01:24:041 (2) - ^
01:38:442 (2) - ^
03:06:051 (1,2,3,4) - A bit of a tricky spot for an easy difficulty, since you have a 1/4 slider, and a hit circle on 1/4. Could be confusing to beginning players. Changed a bit, but combo at 02:40:84 and 03:00:051 are even harder, I think.
This difficulty is nicely done.

[Normal]
01:58:544 (8) - Spacing.
02:03:345 (8) - ^
02:08:145 (7) - ^
I'm thinking those small jumps were intentional. I'll ignore them. Personally, I don't like seeing jumps in a normal difficulty map.

[Hard]
Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty +1 OK
This is okay.

Hmm. Star.

I suggest using a custom hit sound.
http://www.mediafire.com/?qhx7guqrodxyatm

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi! Nice map! You've done a good job

[General]

The combo colours see a bit... I don't know, mhm, they lack energy. I'd recommend you to make them a little more intense.
more intense? give me colors code


[Easy]

1:04:849 (1-2) - I don't like the way that the previous blue slider overlaps 1. Consider moving 1 & 2 some grids right so they don't get overlapped.

1:14:449 (1-2) - Same as before, but instead of moving them right, move them left.

1:21:949 (T) - x0,5 on an easy map? mhmm... I'm not saying "no way!", but keep in mind this is for a noob player, and such a change could get him in trouble. I'd suggest to get this inherited timing section removed.
all fixed

[Normal]

24:799 - I'd add a circle here, maybe with a clap.

1:28:549 (1) - You keep a really good symmetry all across the map, so this here shouldn't be the exception. I'd suggest to move this 3 grids up and 2 left.

1:47:749 (1) - Same as before, but 2 grids right.

1:58:549 (8) - Remove this jump, maybe?

2:03:349 (8) - Same as before.

3:26:299 (6) - This slider should end 1/4 before. Try it and see if you like it better!
all not fixed

[Hard]

29:449 - You left like a second unmapped. I understand you might have done it on purpose, but I'd like it better if it was mapped. no


31:849 - Same as before no


1:48:199 (2) - I'd move this one grid left so the beggining of the slider is exactly under that green 5. Sorry if I'm being too picky u.u ok




Anyway, great map! It can be seen you put a lot of effort on it. Star!

Hyguys wrote:

[Easy]
Circle Size +1?
00:21:049 Whistle
00:28:249 Remove Whistle put Clap
00:30:649 Whistle
00:30:949 Add slider like THIS - In easiest diff? No
00:33:049 Whistle
00:33:349 Add slider like THIS

[Normal]
Circle Size +1?
fine

[Hard]

^ make equal

Total Rating = 6.9 -
sorry , i can't give you a star ><'

1. 01:56:149 (3,4) - suggest using a x2.0 spacing snap here
2. 01:57:349 (2,3) - ^ the same thing happens a lot, it's up to you. the current situation is fine but a bit weired in playing
3. 01:33:949 (T) - the break here is really short, cancel it?
4. 02:13:099 (T) - a break time longer than 15s? not sound good
5. some parts are repetive, maybe some different patterns? others look good

1. 01:18:949 (6,7) - use x2.0 spacing
2. 01:23:749 (6,7) - ^
3. 02:13:099 (T) - a break time a bit long, less than 30s so it's ok but you'd better do something here

1. ah, the break... others are well done

Hyguys wrote:

Total Rating = the best map ever. 10.0 , KUDOS STAR.

Combo1 : 160,44,22
Combo2 : 248,202,20
Combo3 : 20,165,235
Combo4 : 97,34,117

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Try to change BG to 1024x768 ?? fixed
- Use these colors ?? OK, but it seems they blend with the background

Combo1 : 160,44,22
Combo2 : 248,202,20
Combo3 : 20,165,235
Combo4 : 97,34,117

Easy;
- Good !! >w<

Normal;
- Good !!

Hard;
- Great !!

* Go get a MAT/BAT ~~
* Star ~ (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★

Emaal wrote:

~|General|~
Delete .osb and full submit~ No. I can't find the topic about it, but blank .osb file is OK.

~|Easy|~
Move all the green timing points at least 1/8 before the note, so it doesn't sound wrong, but right. No again It's fixed in current osu version.

Really nice difficulty.

~|Normal|~
Same as in easy.
Nothing else.

~|Hard|~
Same as above.


Holy weasel, this is really good. Nice song choice and wonderful mapping!

James2250 wrote:

Isn't the easiest song to time....try Offset:19,233, BPM:99.990 (thanks for help bliss and ploy) my old timing; but I used 19 235 offset. OK, changed.
1100kb background is kind of big I optimized it to 560 kb.

Easy:
Seems fine, alot of blue ticks for beginners though

Normal:
01:05:299 (3,1) - try and avoid anti jumps fixed
01:58:249 (7,8) - spacing (don't have jump here) No, sorry. I really don't want to change it.
02:03:049 (7,8) - ^
02:07:849 (6,7) - ^
02:12:649 (6,7) - ^

Hard:
I don't follow all of the jumps but some can pass, go through and try and make sure the spacing on this difficulty is slightly more consistent
Alot of the sliders have very quiet timing sections at the end of them and sounds odd to me when following the song
00:57:049 (1) - remove new combo? ok
01:04:849 (4) - new combo ok
01:14:449 (4) - ^
01:37:249 (4,5) - spacing fixed
01:43:849 (8,1) - I wouldn't overlap no
01:50:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - keep spacing equal no, it's something like 01:45:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:55:549 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ random spacing changes will confuse players -- same for all the ones after this I know, but I think it fully follows the music.
02:35:149 (4,5) - still not the best jumps but I guess ok for a Hard
03:23:149 (4,5) - spacing

Not my favorite song but the maps are nice
Have a star~

jericho2442 wrote:

Easy
resnap all your notes ok

this plays 100% like a normal, so i do advise you to rename it :/ no

00:34:849 (1) - this note really dont play good for the diff, it feels abit random even though it does follow the music :/


Normal
01:58:242 (7,8) - the jump in these notes does not really suit the map, i cant feel a reason to ahve a jump, thus it feels much better without it oh, well. OK
same for all the rest of the jumps like this

02:55:698 (5) - new combo, to follow your pattern ok
03:06:049 (5) - new combo, to follow your pattern

hard
01:25:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump at (5) really plays too odd for the style of map your creating, if you do this, you will notice it flows better with the map I tried it. Maybe I do this after more request.

SPOILER

01:30:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do same to this pattern
01:45:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same again and do it for the rest of these patterns
01:50:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the jumps in this pattern again dont really suit, i do advise to give all these one spacing So can you answer me: how these and jumps like 01:25:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6) differ from jumps like 01:36:040 (1,1) and 01:28:539 (1,2,3)?
Maybe I need to delete all jumps or rename this diff to "super insane shit"?
01:56:142 (3,4) - the part like this really really plays bad, due to the notes before i kept trying to do these double speed :/, please give it the correct spacing fixed, I think

i kno the above seems like a lot of changes, but atleast just "try" it, it might make the map that bit easier but it really does improve the map a lot

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<3 the song, and if you fix up some of them jumps in Hard i will deff give you a star, its just atm the jumps feel too ahrd to suit the kind of song it is

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
Neat to play :3

[Normal]
Some 1/4 going but since BPM is 100 whatever :3

[Hard]
As jericho said, some jumps seem not good imo too [Example. sudden x4.00 spacing] This map doesn't have any 4x jumps - only 2x. So more examples will be great.
01:55:842 (2,3,4) - Is 3-4 spacing miss ;_;? It's exactly like 01:18:938 (5,6) or 01:23:739 (5,6). I add some unnecessary timing sections for showing spacing changes.
01:57:042 (1,2,3) - ^ 2-3
02:00:643 (2,3,4) - ^ 3-4
02:01:843 (1,2,3) - ^ 2-3
02:05:443 (2,3,4) - ^ 3-4
02:06:643 (1,2,3) - ^ 2-3
02:10:244 (2,3,4) - ^ 3-4
02:11:444 (1,2,3) - ^ 2-3



Little ambiguous for star-symbol...
Whatever, good luck :3 thanky

ps. no need kudosu :3

gyt wrote:

Emaal wrote:

~|Easy|~
Move all the green timing points at least 1/8 before the note, so it doesn't sound wrong, but right. No again It's fixed in current osu version.

1. Lower the HP by one.
2. Lower The Approach Rate by one?
3. Lower the Overall Difficulty by one?
4. I'm not so confident about those 1/4 sliders on an Easy. But they are following the beats and it plays alright, I suppose.
5. 00:21:033 (3)-Add a clap?
6. 00:26:433 (4)-Why not add claps on both the first reverse arrow and on the end?
7. 00:30:634 (1)-Add a clap?
8. 00:33:034 (1)-^?
9. 01:07:237 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
10. 01:17:138 (1)-^
11. 01:21:939 (1)-^?
12. 01:25:839 (1)-^

1. 00:33:034 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
2. 00:41:435 (2, 3)-On 2, it would be better if you add a clap on the beginning and remove the clap from the end. On, and remove the clap from 3. Doesn't sound right. =/
3. 01:16:838 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. And add a finish too?
4. 01:30:640 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

1. 01:30:640 (1, 5)-Add claps on the both of them?
2. 01:46:241 (5)-Add a clap?
3. 01:52:242 (4)^
4. 03:09:800 (x, 5)-Add a note on 03:09:800. :3 Then, space out 5 by using the distance snap. Something like this.