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yuiko - Azuma no Sora kara Hajimaru Sekai (Short)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年12月17日 星期四 at 19:37:24

Artist: yuiko
Title: Azuma no Sora kara Hajimaru Sekai (Short)
Source: 恋×シンアイ彼女
Tags: koi kakeru shinai kanojo eroge galgame us:truck yuikonnu kencho tsukuyomi
BPM: 85
Filesize: 11839kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.15 stars, 122 notes)
  2. Kanojo (3.8 stars, 338 notes)
  3. Kencho's Normal (1.88 stars, 221 notes)
  4. Yomi's Hard (2.82 stars, 335 notes)
Download: yuiko - Azuma no Sora kara Hajimaru Sekai (Short)
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#6
夢うつつに、かすかな足音を聞いた。
なんとなく
目を覚ましたら、美しい思い出の続きが、俺を待っている
そんな予感がした。

Maybe many people hate Sena's route, but I still think it worth reading.
And I hope you can like it.
烤老板只用了一秒就听出是yuiko,是在下输了

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Theme song Opening:Duca - 記憶×ハジマリ by Meg(image--)
Route Ending:yuiko - 東の空から始まる世界 (Short) by KaedekaShizuru
Insert song & Last Episode Ending:yuiko - GLORIOUS_DAYS (Short) by Karen
Last Episode Ending (Full Ver.):yuiko - GLORIOUS DAYS by Garden

Storyboard collab with yf_bmp and thanks a lot to xiejun19940903, Sakuya Minagamixmoe.
Kanojo as Insane by me. Done
Hard by Tsukuyomi. Done
Normal by Kencho. Done
Easy by me. Done

If you want to get the full size bg in this storyboard, click here (about 10MB per file):
Himeno Sena
Shindou Ayane
Komari Yui
Shijou Rinka


Lyric+BK


東の空から始まる世界(Short Ver)
ボーカル:yuiko
作詞:yuiko/作曲:Meis Clauson

まだ見ぬ明日を見ようとしてた
君の声だけを聞いて
世界はこんなに広いのだと
気付かせてくれた

息を吸って見上げてみよう
そこは綺麗な夢に見た場所
やわらかな風吹いて…


幾億もの涙が作る世界
ねぇ気付いてたの?
最初の言葉 繰り返して
愛しい気持ちだけは
もう届いてるの? 君のもとへ


優しい瞳に見つめられたら
もどかしくなる二人の距離を
囁きながら近づいていくの
願いはひとつ


幾億もの涙が溢れ出してく
そんな毎日を繰り返すように
僕らはまた 新しい夢を開く
ねぇ 二人で行こう

幾億もの涙が作る世界
ねぇ気付いてたの?
最初の言葉 繰り返して
いつでも笑ってたいよ
どんな時だって傍にいるから

Short or Short Ver ? Here is the answer:
Fushimi Rio
Sena is moe, 剧情 is shabi
shionelove
welcome back
pocket-Gao
这个静流
xmoe_old
まだ見ぬ明日を見ようとしてた
曾试图展望那尚未造访的明天
君の声だけを聞いて
只是倾听你的声音
世界はこんなに広いのだと
気付かせてくれた
就让我察觉到了世界是如此宽广

息を吸って見上げてみよう
深吸一口气,去仰望看看吧
そこは綺麗な夢に見た場所
那里是曾经出现在梦中的美丽场所
やわらかな風吹いて…
一阵柔和的风吹起

幾億もの涙が作る世界
数亿滴眼泪创造了这个世界
ねぇ気付いてたの?
吶、你已经注意到了吗?
最初の言葉 繰り返して
重复一遍又一遍那最初的话语
愛しい気持ちだけは
只有这份爱意
もう届いてるの? 君のもとへ
已经传达到你的耳中了吗?

優しい瞳に見つめられたら
若是被你那温柔的眼瞳凝视
もどかしくなる二人の距離を
两人间那种令人焦躁不已的距离
囁きながら近づいていくの
会在低语声中不断缩短
願いはひとつ
唯有一个愿望

幾億もの涙が溢れ出してく
数亿滴眼泪夺眶而出
そんな毎日を繰り返すように
仿佛再一次重复那寂寞的每一天
僕らはまた 新しい夢を開く
我们又拥有了新的梦想
ねぇ 二人で行こう
吶,一起踏上旅程吧

幾億もの涙が作る世界
数亿滴眼泪创造了这个世界
ねぇ気付いてたの?
吶、你已经注意到了吗?
最初の言葉 繰り返して
重复一遍又一遍那最初的话语
いつでも笑ってたいよ
想永远与你欢笑
どんな時だって傍にいるから
无论何时我都在你的身边


Kencho
I love this song^^
做完啦
Kencho's Normal
zyoi
hai
yuiko竟然來唱gal,花生嚇得上了她

[Kanojo]
00:25:415 (8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980962
00:27:092 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980972
00:28:592 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980978
00:28:945 (1,2) - 感覺不太整齊,你可以用00:28:945 (1) - ctrl+H然後ctrl+J
00:30:357 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980989 這樣放能順過去00:31:062 (4) - 也不太難看
00:32:827 (4) - 拐彎?
00:34:239 (7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981000
00:34:592 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981009
00:35:827 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981012
00:38:827 (5) - ctrl+G?
00:52:239 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981017
[Yomi's Hard]
01:01:945 (7) - NC?
02:25:415 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981045 這樣?
[Easy]
00:30:357 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981065

完。
moonlightleaf
好慢的歌,有点懒

yomi的Hard 滑条慢死了

啃球的bg好评

[Kanojo]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981031

00:24:709 (5,6,7) - 这个突然 而且00:25:239很大声却不跟

01:04:239 (4,5,6) - ^

02:06:357 (4,5,6) - ^

00:34:239 (7) - 这可以换俩单点跳

00:36:004 (4) - ctrl+g

01:07:768 (5,6) - 4单点跳

01:19:062 (5,6) - ^

02:21:180 (5,6) - ^

01:10:415 加note跳

01:13:768 (8) - 换俩单点跳

01:21:180 (4,5) - 换滑条

02:23:298 (4,5) - ^

01:23:298 - 01:44:827 break 太怪也长,估计没梗,快map

02:04:062 加note

02:12:533 ^

02:34:239 (6) - DS远点
Kencho
啃球的bg好评
sjoy
[Kanojo]
00:16:239 (5) - 这里跟吉他比较好
01:07:768 (5) - 换滑条嘛
01:19:592 有音阿
这个BREAK 感觉很莫名阿 ,接不上去的感觉 建议做掉
01:45:180这段 BREAK 感觉可以 参考烤肉 肯抽 不要这么懒 都是单点 太蠢了
02:06:709 (6) - 换滑条
02:29:474 有音 应该这里做个滑条

[烤肉]
00:59:651 (7,8,1) - 这个有点蠢,前面用滑条试试

[肯抽]
00:21:180 (3) - 4不用了,直接3 延长吧,滑条那么短 不舒服
02:28:945 (3,4,5) - 直接用 2个1/2 吧 没必要那么复杂
02:33:886 (3) - 同 00:21:180 (3)
Kinomi
SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:東の空から始まる世界 (Short)
Artist:yuiko
ArtistUnicode:yuiko
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:Yomi's Hard
Source:恋×シンアイ彼女
Tags:koi kakeru shinai kanojo eroge galgame us:truck yuikonnu kencho tsukuyomi
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add some hitsound
Flower
It is dumb to use romaji as diff name, which sounds like using "gansijiye" or other hanyu pinyin as diff name. Especially this is a moe gal op.

(More shinken mod coming soon)


[nvpengyou]
01:22:945 - 这段是没做完?我先忽略
01:01:945 - 跟音乐加个1/8三连?嘛加不加随你,跟着音乐渐入高潮我比较喜欢
01:18:004 (3,4) - 适当调整间距,当前4的尾巴和3的尾巴靠的有些近,让人有些迷惑(我会把4向下移动一些,改善flow。当然01:19:062 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - 也要随之调整)
02:06:004 (3,4,5,6) - 跳跃未跟随音乐,因为这里的人声和鼓点是较弱的,
02:11:651 (3,4,5) - 纯粹个人喜好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3990846
02:23:298 (4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - ???因为不让人dt所以来个尾杀好了

[kaolaoban]
00:24:533 (4) - 建议缩短1/2跟鼓点,否则就最好00:25:239 - 跟人声
02:01:768 (8,1) - 这个跳有点不明不白的,因为歌词并没有特别的转折啊,建议还是原地赛跑

[啃球]
00:16:768 (3) - 这个还是后移1/2跟顾比较舒服,不然的话,反正00:17:298 - 也有个音最好跟着
00:20:474 (1) - 1改成单点,然后00:20:827 - 改成1/4的滑条会比较好打,而且1的开头和结尾也没有什么连贯性,还是单点干脆。只是说说
02:28:945 (3,4,5) - 同第一个
02:33:180 (1,2,3,4) - 同第二个

[Easy]
01:22:945 - 这段是没做完?我先忽略
你真的很有耐心做完难度……我都懒到先对称再复制粘贴噜

就这么多了=。= Good luck~!
Kencho
sjoy

sjoy wrote:

[Kanojo]
[肯抽]
00:21:180 (3) - 4不用了,直接3 延长吧,滑条那么短 不舒服 參考了花花的改法
02:28:945 (3,4,5) - 直接用 2个1/2 吧 没必要那么复杂 改了
02:33:886 (3) - 同 00:21:180 (3) ok

Flower

Flower wrote:

[啃球]
00:16:768 (3) - 这个还是后移1/2跟顾比较舒服,不然的话,反正00:17:298 - 也有个音最好跟着 ok
00:20:474 (1) - 1改成单点,然后00:20:827 - 改成1/4的滑条会比较好打,而且1的开头和结尾也没有什么连贯性,还是单点干脆。只是说说
02:28:945 (3,4,5) - 同第一个
02:33:180 (1,2,3,4) - 同第二个


嗚嗚星數降了0.01,不是0.94的倍數了
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Kinomi
change the rhythm as flower said
finish hitsounds system
http://puu.sh/lu9qu/ef6048ba36.rar
Narcissu
抱歉……我手上還有3個圖要摸……我冷靜了一下還是給你北方飛機和星好了 :D
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
first to Flower:


Enjoy

Enjoy wrote:

hai
yuiko竟然來唱gal,花生嚇得上了她 吓得你上了她

[Kanojo]
00:25:415 (8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980962 no thx
00:27:092 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980972 OK 不过还是稍微有点不一样
00:28:592 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980978 OK
00:28:945 (1,2) - 感覺不太整齊,你可以用00:28:945 (1) - ctrl+H然後ctrl+J
00:30:357 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3980989 這樣放能順過去00:31:062 (4) - 也不太難看 我知道 故意这样放的
00:32:827 (4) - 拐彎? 额……没看懂
00:34:239 (7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981000 no thx,这里是指向00:33:886 (6) 的
00:34:592 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981009 饶命
00:35:827 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981012 no thx
00:38:827 (5) - ctrl+G? no thx
00:52:239 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981017 no thx

[Easy]
00:30:357 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981065 这个就不必啦

moonlightleaf

moonlightleaf wrote:

好慢的歌,有点懒 专业慢歌www

yomi的Hard 滑条慢死了 居然嫌慢=A=

啃球的bg好评 二妹这个loli控 我要报警

[Kanojo]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3981031 thx for test play

00:24:709 (5,6,7) - 这个突然 而且00:25:239很大声却不跟

01:04:239 (4,5,6) - ^

02:06:357 (4,5,6) - ^ 全部只跟鼓点

00:34:239 (7) - 这可以换俩单点跳 并无必要

00:36:004 (4) - ctrl+g 翻转就没意思啦

01:07:768 (5,6) - 4单点跳

01:19:062 (5,6) - ^

02:21:180 (5,6) - ^ 没看懂什么意思……?

01:10:415 加note跳 只跟鼓点

01:13:768 (8) - 换俩单点跳 slider尾的鼓点已经很弱了 没有必要跳

01:21:180 (4,5) - 换滑条

02:23:298 (4,5) - ^ no thx

01:23:298 - 01:44:827 break 太怪也长,估计没梗,快map 我就是要break来咬我(run

02:04:062 加note 干脆加俩1/8上连打

02:12:533 ^ 这里就不必了

02:34:239 (6) - DS远点


sjoy

sjoy wrote:

[Kanojo]
00:16:239 (5) - 这里跟吉他比较好 其实一直都是跟鼓点啊……
01:07:768 (5) - 换滑条嘛 依旧只跟鼓点
01:19:592 有音阿 所以说都是跟鼓点不跟vocal啊
这个BREAK 感觉很莫名阿 ,接不上去的感觉 建议做掉
01:45:180这段 BREAK 感觉可以 参考烤肉 肯抽 不要这么懒 都是单点 太蠢了 不想做太难 而且重复旋律太多 没梗没意思
02:06:709 (6) - 换滑条
02:29:474 有音 应该这里做个滑条 all no fix, sorry


Flower

Flower wrote:

It is dumb to use romaji as diff name, which sounds like using "gansijiye" or other hanyu pinyin as diff name. Especially this is a moe gal op.

(More shinken mod coming soon)


[nvpengyou]
01:22:945 - 这段是没做完?我先忽略 故意的break 重复旋律太多没梗没意思+不想太难
01:01:945 - 跟音乐加个1/8三连?嘛加不加随你,跟着音乐渐入高潮我比较喜欢 我也喜欢 add in, thx
01:18:004 (3,4) - 适当调整间距,当前4的尾巴和3的尾巴靠的有些近,让人有些迷惑(我会把4向下移动一些,改善flow。当然01:19:062 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - 也要随之调整) 整体向右移动了一点
02:06:004 (3,4,5,6) - 跳跃未跟随音乐,因为这里的人声和鼓点是较弱的, 我觉得还好啦
02:11:651 (3,4,5) - 纯粹个人喜好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3990846 no thx
02:23:298 (4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - ???因为不让人dt所以来个尾杀好了 但实际上还是很多人轻松DT啊233

[Easy]
01:22:945 - 这段是没做完?我先忽略 故意break 理由见上
你真的很有耐心做完难度……我都懒到先对称再复制粘贴噜 这个花花太懒了

就这么多了=。= Good luck~!

Thank you all !
肯爷和烤老板也辛苦了 update

Narcissu wrote:

抱歉……我手上還有3個圖要摸……我冷靜了一下還是給你北方飛機和星好了 :D
这个水仙君 北方飞机是啥
Chaoslitz
[General]
  1. Metadata不是(Short Ver)嗎?
  2. Unused hitsounds: normal-hitfinish.wav
  3. 統一下Combo Colours
  4. 這個太深色了吧
  5. 這個sb的我不太清楚
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:710 - 沒用的綠線
  2. 00:07:768 (3,5) - 這兩個最好不要重疊啦,影響讀圖
  3. 00:23:298 (1,2) - 00:34:592 (1,2) - Easy難度不要重疊比較好
  4. 00:56:474 - 漏clap?
[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 00:56:475 (4) - 02:29:651 - Clap
  2. 01:02:121 (2) - 這樣放flow好d
[Yomi's Hard]
  1. 有unsnapped object

改完叫我
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]
  1. Metadata不是(Short Ver)嗎? lyric里带Ver 但CD list里是Short不带Ver http://puu.sh/lKZRB/9f68e7d1fd.jpg =下我犯傻了 sb里居然写错 fixed
  2. Unused hitsounds: normal-hitfinish.wav deled
  3. 統一下Combo Colours 这个烤老板 fixed
  4. 這個太深色了吧 可能吧 不过最多仅限insane上 而且我用默认皮肤试玩了 不管是全黑还是全亮 都是看得清的
  5. 這個sb的我不太清楚 我问了QAT 等回复ing
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:710 - 沒用的綠線 deled
  2. 00:07:768 (3,5) - 這兩個最好不要重疊啦,影響讀圖 test的时候可以看到00:09:886 (5) 出现的时候00:07:768 (3) 已经彻底消失了 我觉得应该没问题吧
  3. 00:23:298 (1,2) - 00:34:592 (1,2) - Easy難度不要重疊比較好 fixed
  4. 00:56:474 - 漏clap? add in
咦 insane居然没……
thanks
waiting for GDer

edit:bakari回复说sb不行 我得另想办法
hard all fixed
Kencho

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 00:56:475 (4) - 02:29:651 - Clap ok
  2. 01:02:121 (2) - 這樣放flow好d
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Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
update
I need a period of time to fix the storyboard.
sorry Chaos

Dec 7 edit:
update new storyboard by yf's modify.
all ready
Chaoslitz
Bubbled
Karen
[General]
  1. combo 4 也太深了,前面三個暖色突然出现一个深色有点奇怪
  2. http://puu.sh/lOWWQ/c83d72405a.jpg 有没有这张图的原图啊,这个被裁过了,求发一份
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:121 (4) - Easy里我觉得就老老实实一个锚点,不要搞这样奇怪的形状找麻烦了,而且也并不好看
  2. 00:48:709 (4) - ^
  3. 01:14:121 - 加Finish,其他难度一样,这种音乐里很明显的还是跟一下
  4. 01:22:592 (4) - ^
  5. 00:10:945 - ^
  6. 02:16:239 - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:474 (1,2,3) - 这些都应该加点音效
  2. 02:33:533 (2,3) - ^
  3. 02:23:651 - 是不是漏了finish
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:474 (3,4,5) - 前面那个加了clap这3个也可以加,如果觉得吵起码加第二个
  2. 00:25:062 (7) - 移到这种位置舒服多了 http://puu.sh/lOYtn/363f45e80a.jpg
  3. 00:57:886 (3,4) - 远一点,都跟00:57:180 (1,2) - 差不多了
  4. 01:00:004 (1,2) - 这也可以远一点,相比后面来说未免也太近了
  5. 01:23:298 - 从来没见过这样不合曲的break>_>,01:45:180 - 这种地方才应该break,然后01:56:474 - 开始
  6. 02:04:062 (3,1) - 我觉得换NC,三连很突然
  7. 逆flow看起来虽然很酷,但是用多了也会觉得别手

除了红字必须改其他随便
Kencho

Karen wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:474 (1,2,3) - 这些都应该加点音效
  2. 02:33:533 (2,3) - ^
  3. 02:23:651 - 是不是漏了finish
All Fixed
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Azuma no sora kara hajimaru sekai (Short).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61768
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Azuma no Sora kara Hajimaru Sekai (Short)
TitleUnicode:東の空から始まる世界 (Short)
Artist:yuiko
ArtistUnicode:yuiko
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:Kencho's Normal
Source:恋×シンアイ彼女
Tags:koi kakeru shinai kanojo eroge galgame us:truck yuikonnu kencho tsukuyomi
BeatmapID:820905
BeatmapSetID:372552

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.4
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:3.8
ApproachRate:4.6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

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123,71,79592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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123,309,84004,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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35,205,88945,2,0,P|71:195|108:194,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,196,89651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,235,90004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,156,90357,2,0,P|358:120|358:82,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,52,91062,6,0,L|190:56,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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141,251,92474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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366,277,126004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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225,110,128475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,32,128827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,122,129180,2,0,L|320:159,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,162,129886,2,0,L|407:236,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,331,130592,6,0,B|339:319|339:319|233:333,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,349,131651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,228,132710,2,0,L|135:153,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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327,91,134122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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245,337,137298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,270,138710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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289,130,139768,2,0,P|251:130|214:125,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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64,285,141710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,235,143298,2,0,L|271:160,1,75,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,129,143827,2,0,L|317:54,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,5,144357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Karen wrote:

[General]
  1. combo 4 也太深了,前面三個暖色突然出现一个深色有点奇怪 四个combo color对应四个女主啊 人哥乃应该看出来了吧 之前超市也说过 我看了下全亮全闇都看得清
  2. http://puu.sh/lOWWQ/c83d72405a.jpg 有没有这张图的原图啊,这个被裁过了,求发一份 都给你啦
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:121 (4) - Easy里我觉得就老老实实一个锚点,不要搞这样奇怪的形状找麻烦了,而且也并不好看
  2. 00:48:709 (4) - ^ 嘛……blanket强迫症吧233
  3. 01:14:121 - 加Finish,其他难度一样,这种音乐里很明显的还是跟一下
  4. 01:22:592 (4) - ^
  5. 00:10:945 - ^
  6. 02:16:239 - ^ all add in, insane同
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:474 (3,4,5) - 前面那个加了clap这3个也可以加,如果觉得吵起码加第二个 好 但是后两个把音量降到30%
  2. 00:25:062 (7) - 移到这种位置舒服多了 http://puu.sh/lOYtn/363f45e80a.jpg noop, 00:24:357 (4,5,7) 是连在一起的
  3. 00:57:886 (3,4) - 远一点,都跟00:57:180 (1,2) - 差不多了 移到X456 Y252
  4. 01:00:004 (1,2) - 这也可以远一点,相比后面来说未免也太近了 嘛 是有点……不过就这样吧
  5. 01:23:298 - 从来没见过这样不合曲的break>_>,01:45:180 - 这种地方才应该break,然后01:56:474 - 开始 嗯我知道 我从最开始听完这曲子打算开坑的时候就已经决定了break这段
  6. 02:04:062 (3,1) - 我觉得换NC,三连很突然 好的
  7. 逆flow看起来虽然很酷,但是用多了也会觉得别手
原来我这个叫逆flow啊……无意中就做成这样了

除了红字必须改其他随便
这个人哥 冲着会长来的?不错不错 :)
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Karen
Qualified

香草
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Karen wrote:

Qualified

香草
人哥乃怎么见到妹子就香草 变态
thank you
Okoayu
the length and spots for the breaks in Insane and Easy kind of ruin this imo
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Okoratu wrote:

the length and spots for the breaks in Insane and Easy kind of ruin this imo
When I first time heard this song and wanted to map it, I decided to break like this.
I don't want insane too hard, repeat refrain is boring and map with piano more interesting, not too hard and also not too easy.
That's my idea.
Sorry for my poor English. I hope you can like and enjoy it, not only my this map, but also the gal Koi-kakeru Shinai Kanojo. Thank you.
shionelove
congraz
-Nanaka-
Glatz :)
Tari
Hello!
[Kencho's Normal]

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Some quality issues I have in some difficulties that I recommend you fix :

[Insane]

  1. 00:11:651 (4,5) - This overlapping doesn't look nice, and if you want to further emphasize the next note I would rather you put the notes above like this : http://puu.sh/lWBZQ.jpg .
  2. 00:16:768 - Add a note? The whole rhythm really needs work. What are you trying to follow here? just the white ticks? Try to spice the rhythm up a bit. there are apparent sounds there.
  3. 02:21:357 - ^ Obvious vocals here, try to make easier for others to follow your vocals.
  4. 02:29:827 - ^ More and more like these
  5. 02:18:180 - ^ Be more explicit to what you are following please.
  6. 00:24:357 (4,5,6,7) - Again overlapping issues, you could space them apart to make the whole pattern look more appealing. http://puu.sh/lWCe1.jpg
    [*}
  7. 00:44:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/lWCkT.jpg . I would advise you to not make the notes touch like this, as it ruins how the note it looks.
[Kencho's Normal]

  1. 00:20:827 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit hard for a normal. I mean using 1/4 in normal, Its better you stick to mostly 1/2 and 1/1 to balance diff spread.
You should really map the breaks. If not, Try to place the breaks like in Yomi's diff. The place where yomi puts the breaks makes more sense because that's where the slow part of the song is. Such a short song doesn't need break times for people to recover. Place the breaks like the other guest difficulty mappers please. The way they place it makes more logical.

All diffs look really nice except Insane. The insane needs some clean-up.
Kencho

Tari wrote:

[Kencho's Normal]

  1. 02:27:533 (1) - unsnapped slider end, you must resnap this note. Try clicking Timing and "Resnap all notes" ok, i fixed
Some quality issues I have in some difficulties that I recommend you fix :

[Kencho's Normal]

  1. 00:20:827 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit hard for a normal. I mean using 1/4 in normal, Its better you stick to mostly 1/2 and 1/1 to balance diff spread. ok, i change to 1/2 slider for more suitable diff spread. 02:33:533 (2) - here also change to 1/2 slider
Thanks your modding

SPOILER
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[Metadata]
Title:Azuma no Sora kara Hajimaru Sekai (Short)
TitleUnicode:東の空から始まる世界 (Short)
Artist:yuiko
ArtistUnicode:yuiko
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:Kencho's Normal
Source:恋×シンアイ彼女
Tags:koi kakeru shinai kanojo eroge galgame us:truck yuikonnu kencho tsukuyomi
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135,220,99533,6,0,P|132:257|137:294,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,335,100239,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,290,100592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,331,100945,2,0,L|403:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,208,101474,2,0,L|390:133,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102533,12,2,105180,0:1:0:0:
159,199,116474,6,0,P|100:208|41:199,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
191,79,117886,2,0,P|249:69|308:79,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
428,228,119298,6,0,P|437:287|428:346,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
308,196,120709,2,0,P|298:138|308:79,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
132,155,122121,6,0,L|12:162,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,121,124239,2,0,L|361:123,2,37.5,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
286,152,124769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
286,152,124945,6,0,B|274:301,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,277,126004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,327,126357,2,0,L|446:364,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,234,127063,2,0,L|486:159,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,118,127769,6,0,P|360:123|322:122,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,110,128475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,32,128827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,122,129180,2,0,L|320:159,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,162,129886,2,0,L|407:236,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,331,130592,6,0,B|339:319|339:319|233:333,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,349,131651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,284,132004,2,0,L|59:246,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,228,132710,2,0,L|135:153,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,133416,6,0,L|239:52,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,91,134122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,42,134474,2,0,L|486:50,2,75,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,138,135533,2,0,P|393:175|400:212,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,294,136239,6,0,P|388:256|316:270,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,337,137298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,293,137651,2,0,L|119:296,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,226,138357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,270,138710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,197,139063,6,0,P|387:160|386:123,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,130,139768,2,0,P|251:130|214:125,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,90,140475,2,0,L|123:52,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,163,141180,2,0,L|53:237,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,285,141710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,285,141886,6,0,B|115:271|115:271|210:292,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,312,142945,2,0,L|309:274,1,37.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,235,143298,2,0,L|271:160,1,75,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,129,143827,2,0,L|317:54,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,5,144357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,35,144709,6,0,L|82:46,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,128,145767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,187,146121,2,0,L|19:190,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,257,146827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
39,305,147179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,350,147533,6,0,B|174:359|174:359|214:325|267:331,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,346,148592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,266,148945,2,0,L|455:275,2,37.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,192,149651,2,0,L|349:117,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,139,150356,6,0,B|214:150|214:150|106:136,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,209,151414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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334,330,153180,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Tari wrote:

Hello!
[Kencho's Normal]

  1. 02:27:533 (1) - unsnapped slider end, you must resnap this note. Try clicking Timing and "Resnap all notes"


Some quality issues I have in some difficulties that I recommend you fix :

[Insane]

  1. 00:11:651 (4,5) - This overlapping doesn't look nice, and if you want to further emphasize the next note I would rather you put the notes above like this : http://puu.sh/lWBZQ.jpg . OK
  2. 00:16:768 - Add a note? The whole rhythm really needs work. What are you trying to follow here? just the white ticks? Try to spice the rhythm up a bit. there are apparent sounds there. sorry I don't want to follow bass here, drum only
  3. 02:21:357 - ^ Obvious vocals here, try to make easier for others to follow your vocals. ↑ as the same reason, no vocal but only drum
  4. 02:29:827 - ^ More and more like these
  5. 02:18:180 - ^ Be more explicit to what you are following please.
  6. 00:24:357 (4,5,6,7) - Again overlapping issues, you could space them apart to make the whole pattern look more appealing. http://puu.sh/lWCe1.jpg it looks nice
    [*}
  7. 00:44:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/lWCkT.jpg . I would advise you to not make the notes touch like this, as it ruins how the note it looks. OK but I think it is harder :P


You should really map the breaks. If not, Try to place the breaks like in Yomi's diff. The place where yomi puts the breaks makes more sense because that's where the slow part of the song is. Such a short song doesn't need break times for people to recover. Place the breaks like the other guest difficulty mappers please. The way they place it makes more logical.
My reason (Spoiler Warning)
OK, I should give the reason why I choose that part to break:
This song comes for galgame Koi-kakeru Shinai Kanojo, Niijima Yuu forward, as the ending song in 4 girls routs.
As you know, most of galgame has a perfect ending, but this one not. In Sena's route, she had left the actor with not any sign except a letter wrote "Never Meet Again", when every players think they can get together and get married in the end. Then the actor write a novel, and published it (he is an author) , to let Sena know he love her forever no matter where she was and what did she do. That is why I break the second half of refrain and map the piano. A day 3 years later, when the actor had a eyes closed rest in a park, he heard familiar footsteps. He believe that is Sena's footsteps, he firmly believe Sena come back. And we also believe. Then game end here. Niijima Yuu-san didn't specify the outcome. So here is the second refrain.
It can be expected:
Why I break the same part in Easy? ——Because of that is Easy diff. :o
But this song is the ending of all 4 girls. ——Sena is special, she is the 1st actress in all of this gal.
I don't care how GDer set break, maybe Yomi and Kencho is better, but Insane diff mapped by me and I Ciming it "Kanojo(Himeno Sena)", I'll let it be like this. If it dqed again by break, I think it unacceptable.
That's my idea.
I don't know whether these can convince you. And I hope you can understand.
Thank you very much. Sorry for my poor English and spoiler in my explanation.

By the way, I really don't know how these unsnap coming. This song with out a lot of red lines and I never changed timing. :?
I trust my GDer.
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Karen
holy...nice spoiler above!!11!
btw i kinda agree that the break time in Insane doesn't make much sense, osu! and galgame are two different games. Mapper's purpose is always supposed to make players enjoy the map with the music.
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-Atri-
星奏大法好
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru
OK Yomi convinced me.
Filled the break.
update
Tari
Rebubbled.

Good luck!
Chaoslitz
Qualified
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Tari wrote:

Rebubbled.

Good luck!

Chaoslitz wrote:

Qualified
Thank you !
也感谢人哥和爱抚烤老板还有肯抽
-Nanaka-
你回来了
Shad0w1and
好曲,果然黄油出好歌,可惜我推不动了
Underforest
Hey, little problem with the metadata

Artist should be: ゆいこんぬ
Romanised artist should be: yuikonnu

Well beatmapped :)
Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Underforest wrote:

Hey, little problem with the metadata

Artist should be: ゆいこんぬ
Romanised artist should be: yuikonnu

Well beatmapped :)
did you see the lyric photo in my creator words ?
Underforest
Yes, but "yuiko" is the abbreviation for her name. Her official name is "yuikonnu" in fact.

Proof:
Nico Nico userpage: http://www.nicovideo.jp/user/115613
Twitter: https://twitter.com/yuikonnu
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/yuikonnu/
Information about her: http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/Yuikonnu

Also, there so many ranked beatmaps with "yuikonnu" in artist

Topic Starter
KaedekaShizuru

Underforest wrote:

Yes, but "yuiko" is the abbreviation for her name. Her official name is "yuikonnu" in fact.

Proof:
Nico Nico userpage: http://www.nicovideo.jp/user/115613
Twitter: https://twitter.com/yuikonnu
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/yuikonnu/
Information about her: http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/Yuikonnu

Also, there so many ranked beatmaps with "yuikonnu" in artist

tired to debate with you.
If you think you're truth, you can be to ask qat to dq me.
so absurd
Underforest
It's just a suggestion and I was trying to help you :/ I will stop here, sorry
-Atri-
Both Yuiko and Yuikonnu is okay, as they're refering to same person
Skystar
Usually she uses yuikonnu for non-business stuff such as vocaloid covers, and yuiko for business - in this case it's the latter.
Sorarei
who is the composer of this song ? Meis Clauson or someone else ?
Vj-Agung
very dark... -_-
I do not like the color blue in this Beatmap ..:?

if you can change the color of blue in this Beatmap somewhat brighter, maybe other players (including me, can more easily play) ;)
lost memories
这首歌标题的东应该是读作ひがし 而非あずま吧。
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