Memme - China Dress · forum

Kyle Y

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2015-12-10T10:32:26+00:00

Sorry for being late.
here is my file, Ky's Beginner, 1.65 stars
unhitsound

I will hitsound it when I have the first modding.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: China Dress.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 61811
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:China Dress
TitleUnicode:China Dress
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:Linada
Version:Ky's Beginner
Source:O2Jam U
Tags:[ Shana Yami ] iedesu [-AKiTOSHi-]
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"china.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,51039,55228
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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72782,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
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100211,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
100554,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
111182,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,53,53
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 164,72,255
Combo4 : 45,150,255
Combo5 : 128,128,255

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Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2015-12-10T10:33:38+00:00

Don't worry i'll hitsound myself

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2015-12-10T23:33:51+00:00

Random IRC in the midnight

23:37 Kalibe: so
23:37 Kalibe: you have errors in tags
23:38 Linada: i don't have any lol
23:38 Kalibe: add akitoshi and ky to tags
23:38 Linada: oh
23:38 Linada: fuck yes
23:38 Linada: i'm nob
23:38 Linada: dumb
23:38 Linada: aki is already
23:38 Kalibe: also in combo colour
23:39 Linada: several combo colours is allowed, and i only used more in extra
23:40 Kalibe: but combo colour is differnt in few diffs
23:40 Kalibe: change audio lead-in to 2000 ms just to be safe
23:40 Kalibe: aibat have problems with it
23:41 Kalibe: on iedesu's Another
23:41 Kalibe: 00:50:939 - snap to 00:50:925
23:41 Kalibe: ups
23:41 Kalibe: 00:50:939 - snap to 00:50:925 - it's unsnapped green line
23:42 Kalibe: so let's go to Hyper
23:42 Kalibe: 00:02:668 (5) - missing NC
23:43 Kalibe: 00:05:411 (4) - ^
23:43 Linada: wait
23:43 Linada: what are you talking i iedesu's ?
23:43 Kalibe: okkk
23:43 Kalibe: nope but you can change it 
23:45 Linada: let's go hyper
23:45 Kalibe: 00:08:154 (4) - also NC it
23:46 Kalibe: 00:13:811 (6,6) - ^
23:47 Kalibe: 00:34:725 (2,3,4) - spacing looks tiny imo
23:48 Kalibe: 00:41:068 (4,5) - ctrl g this rhythm, delete circle and change slider to 1/1. Of course then NC it
23:48 Kalibe: xD
23:48 Linada: fixed
23:49 Kalibe: 00:41:239 (5,6) - Why spacing so high compared to 00:41:497 (6,7) - ?
23:50 Kalibe: 00:42:439 (1,3) - swa pp NC
23:50 Kalibe: 00:43:811 (1,2) - also make this circle 1/1 slider
23:50 Kalibe: 00:52:211 (5) - missing NC
23:51 Kalibe: 00:54:954 (5) - ^
23:51 Kalibe: Prepare to NC hell
23:51 Kalibe: 01:03:182 (5) - 
23:51 Kalibe: 01:05:925 (6) - 
23:52 Kalibe: 01:06:954 (1,3) - swap
23:52 Kalibe: 01:08:668 (8,1) - ^
23:52 Kalibe: 01:10:554 (1,1) - unnessesary NCs imo
23:53 Kalibe: but if you keep it
23:53 Kalibe: 01:11:068 (1,4) - swap
23:53 Kalibe: 01:12:097 (1,3) - ^
23:53 Kalibe: bcs SV change
23:53 Kalibe: 01:18:954 (1) - delete NC
23:54 Kalibe: 01:23:411 (1,2) - fix blanket
23:55 Kalibe: 01:24:097 (2) - move to x: 224 y: 164
23:56 Kalibe: 01:32:668 (1) - unnessesary NC
23:57 Linada: why i'm really bad at NC xD
23:57 Kalibe: xD
23:58 Kalibe: 01:34:382 (8,1) - ah you could do better blanket owo
23:58 Linada: osu!nazi
23:58 Linada: new game
23:58 Linada: so nice
23:58 Linada: :D
23:59 Kalibe: :^)
23:59 Linada: extra have shitty NCs too i guess
23:59 Linada: xD
23:59 Kalibe: 01:36:097 (7,1) - swap NC
00:00 Kalibe: 01:37:982 (1,1,1) - why NC AAA
00:00 Kalibe: xD
00:00 Kalibe: 01:47:068 (5,1) - swap
00:01 Kalibe: 01:58:725 (1) - delete NC
00:01 Kalibe: ok
00:01 Linada: 01:37:982 (1,1,1) - i keep
00:01 Linada: :3
00:02 Kalibe: full hp regeneration
00:02 Kalibe: xD
00:02 Linada: and yea it can help
00:02 Linada: bcz my diff can be hard for hyper
00:02 Linada: many streams
00:04 Kalibe: ok
00:04 Kalibe: so that's all
00:05 Linada: extra ?
00:05 Linada: no NC ?
00:05 Linada: wtf
00:05 Linada: you're sick ?
00:05 Kalibe: ah
00:05 Linada: i can't believe that i did 0 mistake in 1 Diff
00:05 Linada: xD
00:05 Kalibe: 00:11:068 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - nice
00:06 Linada: what colours do you have here ?
00:06 Linada: bcz when ppl send me screenshot, it's never same colours
00:06 Linada: ._.
00:07 Kalibe: grey red
00:07 Linada: uff cool
00:07 Linada: bcz i use rarely grey
00:07 Linada: only when slow pattern, or noticeable with red
00:08 Kalibe: 00:26:839 (6) - you can NC for reading goods
00:08 Kalibe: 00:28:211 (8,1) - swap NC
00:09 Kalibe: 00:38:325 (6,1) - this spacing is weird imo
00:09 Kalibe: 00:38:154 (5,6) - prefer ctrl g
00:10 Kalibe: 00:42:611 (6,1) - swap NC
00:16 Kalibe: ..
00:16 Kalibe: 00:45:354 (5,1) - swap nc
00:16 Linada: wat hapned ?
00:16 Kalibe: my internet
00:16 Kalibe: xD
00:16 Linada: xD
00:17 Kalibe: 00:47:839 (1,4) - swap
00:17 Kalibe: 00:49:297 (4,1,1) - this isn't stack perfectly
00:17 Kalibe: or i'm blind
00:17 Kalibe: x.x
00:18 Linada: 4 is stacked
00:18 Linada: but
00:18 Linada: 00:50:325 (1) - on this too
00:18 Linada: stack leniency make it more stacked =w=
00:18 Kalibe: 01:00:611 (1) - add one repeat?
00:19 Kalibe: 01:06:439 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - <3
00:19 Linada: 01:00:611 (1) -
00:19 Linada: if i add a repeat, i do ctrl g
00:19 Kalibe: 01:14:154 (8,1) - swap
00:20 Kalibe: yea
00:20 Kalibe: 01:16:211 (1,4) - swap
00:21 Kalibe: 01:25:125 (6,1) - ^
00:21 Kalibe: 01:27:697 (8) - also add repeat and ctrl g
00:22 Linada: nah
00:22 Linada: and make it triple
00:22 Linada: i remove the 1/8
00:22 Kalibe: oh oka
00:23 Kalibe: 01:41:582 (6,1) - swap
00:23 Kalibe: 01:43:639 (1) - unnessesary nc
00:24 Kalibe: 01:52:382 (5,6,7) - this actually sounds weird
00:24 Kalibe: downbeat on end should be clickable
00:24 Kalibe: bwzzfewf
00:25 Linada: i make it clickable
00:25 Linada: so i nc on it
00:25 Linada: and swa p?
00:25 Kalibe: ctrl g
00:25 Kalibe: yup
00:26 Kalibe: and nc on 01:52:554 (7) - 
00:26 Kalibe: 01:53:239 (2,3,4) - hmm
00:27 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/lQVMy/5f040d6690.jpg
00:27 Kalibe: i hear this rhyth,
00:27 Kalibe: m*
00:27 Kalibe: ok that's all
00:28 Linada: yep
00:28 Kalibe: oh
00:28 Kalibe: and the last one
00:29 Kalibe: uncheck widescreen on Ky, Yami and iedesu's diffs
00:30 Kalibe: ok so should i send it to forum?
00:30 Linada: yea
00:30 Linada: i also removed grey color off diffs

Linada

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Linada 2015-12-10T23:35:37+00:00

Kalibe wrote:

I still don't know how to NC =w=

23:37 Kalibe: so
23:37 Kalibe: you have errors in tags
23:38 Linada: i don't have any lol
23:38 Kalibe: add akitoshi and ky to tags
23:38 Linada: oh
23:38 Linada: fuck yes
23:38 Linada: i'm nob
23:38 Linada: dumb
23:38 Linada: aki is already
23:38 Kalibe: also in combo colour
23:39 Linada: several combo colours is allowed, and i only used more in extra
23:40 Kalibe: but combo colour is differnt in few diffs
23:40 Kalibe: change audio lead-in to 2000 ms just to be safe
23:40 Kalibe: aibat have problems with it
23:41 Kalibe: on iedesu's Another
23:41 Kalibe: 00:50:939 - snap to 00:50:925
23:41 Kalibe: ups
23:41 Kalibe: 00:50:939 - snap to 00:50:925 - it's unsnapped green line
23:42 Kalibe: so let's go to Hyper
23:42 Kalibe: 00:02:668 (5) - missing NC
23:43 Kalibe: 00:05:411 (4) - ^
23:43 Linada: wait
23:43 Linada: what are you talking i iedesu's ?
23:43 Kalibe: okkk
23:43 Kalibe: nope but you can change it 
23:45 Linada: let's go hyper
23:45 Kalibe: 00:08:154 (4) - also NC it
23:46 Kalibe: 00:13:811 (6,6) - ^
23:47 Kalibe: 00:34:725 (2,3,4) - spacing looks tiny imo
23:48 Kalibe: 00:41:068 (4,5) - ctrl g this rhythm, delete circle and change slider to 1/1. Of course then NC it
23:48 Kalibe: xD
23:48 Linada: fixed
23:49 Kalibe: 00:41:239 (5,6) - Why spacing so high compared to 00:41:497 (6,7) - ?
23:50 Kalibe: 00:42:439 (1,3) - swa pp NC
23:50 Kalibe: 00:43:811 (1,2) - also make this circle 1/1 slider
23:50 Kalibe: 00:52:211 (5) - missing NC
23:51 Kalibe: 00:54:954 (5) - ^
23:51 Kalibe: Prepare to NC hell
23:51 Kalibe: 01:03:182 (5) - 
23:51 Kalibe: 01:05:925 (6) - 
23:52 Kalibe: 01:06:954 (1,3) - swap
23:52 Kalibe: 01:08:668 (8,1) - ^
23:52 Kalibe: 01:10:554 (1,1) - unnessesary NCs imo
23:53 Kalibe: but if you keep it
23:53 Kalibe: 01:11:068 (1,4) - swap
23:53 Kalibe: 01:12:097 (1,3) - ^
23:53 Kalibe: bcs SV change
23:53 Kalibe: 01:18:954 (1) - delete NC
23:54 Kalibe: 01:23:411 (1,2) - fix blanket
23:55 Kalibe: 01:24:097 (2) - move to x: 224 y: 164
23:56 Kalibe: 01:32:668 (1) - unnessesary NC
23:57 Linada: why i'm really bad at NC xD
23:57 Kalibe: xD
23:58 Kalibe: 01:34:382 (8,1) - ah you could do better blanket owo
23:58 Linada: osu!nazi
23:58 Linada: new game
23:58 Linada: so nice
23:58 Linada: :D
23:59 Kalibe: :^)
23:59 Linada: extra have shitty NCs too i guess
23:59 Linada: xD
23:59 Kalibe: 01:36:097 (7,1) - swap NC
00:00 Kalibe: 01:37:982 (1,1,1) - why NC AAA
00:00 Kalibe: xD
00:00 Kalibe: 01:47:068 (5,1) - swap
00:01 Kalibe: 01:58:725 (1) - delete NC
00:01 Kalibe: ok
00:01 Linada: 01:37:982 (1,1,1) - i keep
00:01 Linada: :3
00:02 Kalibe: full hp regeneration
00:02 Kalibe: xD
00:02 Linada: and yea it can help
00:02 Linada: bcz my diff can be hard for hyper
00:02 Linada: many streams
00:04 Kalibe: ok
00:04 Kalibe: so that's all
00:05 Linada: extra ?
00:05 Linada: no NC ?
00:05 Linada: wtf
00:05 Linada: you're sick ?
00:05 Kalibe: ah
00:05 Linada: i can't believe that i did 0 mistake in 1 Diff
00:05 Linada: xD
00:05 Kalibe: 00:11:068 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - nice
00:06 Linada: what colours do you have here ?
00:06 Linada: bcz when ppl send me screenshot, it's never same colours
00:06 Linada: ._.
00:07 Kalibe: grey red
00:07 Linada: uff cool
00:07 Linada: bcz i use rarely grey
00:07 Linada: only when slow pattern, or noticeable with red
00:08 Kalibe: 00:26:839 (6) - you can NC for reading goods
00:08 Kalibe: 00:28:211 (8,1) - swap NC
00:09 Kalibe: 00:38:325 (6,1) - this spacing is weird imo
00:09 Kalibe: 00:38:154 (5,6) - prefer ctrl g
00:10 Kalibe: 00:42:611 (6,1) - swap NC
00:16 Kalibe: ..
00:16 Kalibe: 00:45:354 (5,1) - swap nc
00:16 Linada: wat hapned ?
00:16 Kalibe: my internet
00:16 Kalibe: xD
00:16 Linada: xD
00:17 Kalibe: 00:47:839 (1,4) - swap
00:17 Kalibe: 00:49:297 (4,1,1) - this isn't stack perfectly
00:17 Kalibe: or i'm blind
00:17 Kalibe: x.x
00:18 Linada: 4 is stacked
00:18 Linada: but
00:18 Linada: 00:50:325 (1) - on this too
00:18 Linada: stack leniency make it more stacked =w=
00:18 Kalibe: 01:00:611 (1) - add one repeat?
00:19 Kalibe: 01:06:439 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - <3
00:19 Linada: 01:00:611 (1) -
00:19 Linada: if i add a repeat, i do ctrl g
00:19 Kalibe: 01:14:154 (8,1) - swap
00:20 Kalibe: yea
00:20 Kalibe: 01:16:211 (1,4) - swap
00:21 Kalibe: 01:25:125 (6,1) - ^
00:21 Kalibe: 01:27:697 (8) - also add repeat and ctrl g
00:22 Linada: nah
00:22 Linada: and make it triple
00:22 Linada: i remove the 1/8
00:22 Kalibe: oh oka
00:23 Kalibe: 01:41:582 (6,1) - swap
00:23 Kalibe: 01:43:639 (1) - unnessesary nc
00:24 Kalibe: 01:52:382 (5,6,7) - this actually sounds weird
00:24 Kalibe: downbeat on end should be clickable
00:24 Kalibe: bwzzfewf
00:25 Linada: i make it clickable
00:25 Linada: so i nc on it
00:25 Linada: and swa p?
00:25 Kalibe: ctrl g
00:25 Kalibe: yup
00:26 Kalibe: and nc on 01:52:554 (7) - 
00:26 Kalibe: 01:53:239 (2,3,4) - hmm
00:27 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/lQVMy/5f040d6690.jpg
00:27 Kalibe: i hear this rhyth,
00:27 Kalibe: m*
00:27 Kalibe: ok that's all
00:28 Linada: yep
00:28 Kalibe: oh
00:28 Kalibe: and the last one
00:29 Kalibe: uncheck widescreen on Ky, Yami and iedesu's diffs
00:30 Kalibe: ok so should i send it to forum?
00:30 Linada: yea
00:30 Linada: i also removed grey color off diffs

eheh thanks :3

Kyle Y

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Kyle Y 2015-12-12T06:02:18+00:00

Linada wrote:
I still don't know how to NC =w=]

In Easy and Normal diff (advance diff, depend the diff like Normal or like Hard more) , nc every 8 beats (on big white ticks)
Just like

In > hard diff
nc every 4 beat, on the other words, nc every big ticks
just like

If sth like this

Then you can nc at blue (1) OR green (1)
DO NOT DO BOTH
In most of the case I will nc slider blue slider 1 and purple slider 6 becasue the 1/2 beat before the big tick, usually there is a strong and loud downbeat making you map on it.

btw, please ask Yami to check on nc, just like the above figure, 00:05:411 - should nc here instead of 00:05:925 - becasue nc need to be consistent.
Yami placed nc at 00:02:668 (1) - and 00:08:154 (1) - , but why not 00:05:411 (6) - ?

For >Insane
Also need to follow the rule for >Hard.
But then addition rules here.
Just like this:

SPOILER

You can see me I nc at red instead of big tick.
When you consider the pattern I use, if you nc at 2, it will be weird.
Therefore, nc can also used as emphasising patterns, or making pattern more clear to read.

For all diffs, nc when every SV change.

Basically follow the rules above, but of course there is exception just like

SPOILER

But then remember nc need to be consistance.
Over-using nc also make to map hard to read.

SPOILER

This is a old map, therefore, do not follow the pattern.
http://puu.sh/lSscy/78e50d60fe.jpg

Linada

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Linada 2015-12-12T19:34:46+00:00

Thanks for the tips ahahah <3

ColdTooth

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ColdTooth 2015-12-12T19:44:43+00:00

Hello there! From my queue!

[Ky's Beginner]

00:09:011 (4,1) - Blanket is slightly off

01:04:211 (4,1) - ^

[AKiTOSHi's Standard]

00:16:211 (3) - don't think this fits

01:52:554 (4,5) - could try blanketing these

[Yami's Hard]

Nothing to find

[Hyper]

Also nothing to find suspicious. Solid difficulty

[iedesu's Another]

00:50:497 (1) - I think this is pushed back to 00:50:325 -

Also why is there a weird pause before the break, doesn't fit in

[Extra]

00:58:039 (6) - ctrl + g?

Solid map.

no kds if nothing was fixed

Linada

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Topic Starter

Linada 2015-12-12T20:05:58+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
Hello there! From my queue!

[Extra]

00:58:039 (6) - ctrl + g? i also did this in the previous one

Solid map.

no kds if nothing was fixed

Thanks for the mod ! :3

Grrum

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Grrum 2015-12-13T07:58:43+00:00

Hello. Here because I asked for M4M. Hope this helps!

[Kya's beginner]

00:09:697 (1) – This is not only off the grid, it leaves the play area. Move to the right by a lot.

00:15:182 (1) – It could be interesting to ctrl + G this and move the pattern the other way to show the changes between the measures.

Hitsounds (the ideas can apply to other difficulties, I'm just too lazy to go into detail on all of them):
00:19:297 (3) – Try using a clap instead of a finish for the hitsound pattern of this section.
00:35:068 (2) – Some other places too like the tail of this might prefer a clap instead of a finish.
00:42:611 (1) – and here
01:10:039 (1) – also on the revere and tail of this and on the head of 01:11:582 (2) - .
If you agree, then examine the rest yourself.
However, I think you should remove the clap at 01:43:982 (2) – since this feels like too much clap. It works in the higher difficulties since there's more rhythm to work with, but I sounds odd here.

01:04:554 (1,3) – Try to get these being the same curvature. I think I'd like the design more if these two sliders were symmetrical across the line that 01:05:582 (2,4) – make.

01:21:354 (2) – This slider end is at y=0. If it were at any the x coordinate, it would overlap the HUD at the top. So even though this isn't a problem, I'd feel safer if you were able to lower it.

[Aki's Standard]

00:16:211 (3) – circle instead?

01:10:039 (1) – claps on the ends of these?

[Yami's Hard]

00:04:897 (4) – moving this to 133, 199 would give this a more polygonal shape. If you're trying to avoid the overlap with 00:04:039 (5) - , then maybe move (2) and (3) down some to give yourself some room.

00:07:297 (2) – try removing the reverse and have a circle or slider on 00:07:639 – instead to hit that beat of the melody.
00:08:668 (2,3) – Maybe do something similar here

00:09:182 (3,4,5,1) – This flow is a little awkward into a ¼ rhythm, imo.

00:27:011 (4,5,6,7,1) - Try this having more structure by making a square and blanketing (5) better like: http://puu.sh/lTaNQ/cbb080b9c7.jpg. If this looks too geometrical for you, then try rotating it 15 degrees.

00:30:611 (2,3) – This anti-flow is stacked, but this isn't 00:41:582 (5,6) - . I kinda get that the added drums in the later part could signify that, but I'd rather it be consistently un-stacked the whole way through.

00:37:125 (1,1) – This does not look good to me. Try moving 00:38:325 (1) – to 356, 180 or 352, 182 if you don't want to stack.

00:50:325 (2,3) – This jump seems a bit big. Since 00:50:839 (3) – is the start of a low energy section, it has low energy, and it's not part of the melody before it, so I'd like to see this have 1.2x spacing like at 352, 312

01:04:211 – I think it'd make more sense to have a circle here
01:31:296 (5) - applies here too

01:05:582 (5) – I think it'd fit the rhythm nicer if this were a ½ slider and there was a circle on the downbeat at 01:05:925 -
01:33:010 (5,6) – applies here too

01:09:011 (1) – Such a long reverse slider doesn't really give the player rhythm to work with, so it's easy to lose track of the rhythm. Imo, you're trying to get too much of the ¼ rhythm, whereas a rhythm like this does the job fine http://puu.sh/lTcim/9676a04230.jpg.
01:36:439 (1) – applies here too
01:41:925 (1) – and here

01:12:782 (1) – I'd prefer to have this section mapped out than to have it be a break

01:41:239 (4) – I'd like to see this being clickable

[Hyper]

For some reason, I thought the size of the circles was really small, but CS 4 doesn't seem wrong

00:05:411 (1) – Move the red node to y = 132 to better divide the slider in half.

00:05:925 (2,3,4,5) - I prefer having it be more curvy, being horizontal has too much of a geometry kind of feel to it. http://puu.sh/lTxdd/c47547df79.jpg

00:12:439 (1,2) – Curve (1) to blanket?

00:15:182 (1,2) – Too horizontal for me, try putting in an angle or curving some

00:15:525 (2,3,4,5) – This has really weak structure. Specifically, the angle 00:15:525 (2,3,4) – makes does not look good next to the angle 00:15:868 (3,4,5) – makes. Do ctrl + Shift + D to make a hexagon, rotate it if you want, and use this structured shape to help guide your flow: http://puu.sh/lTxH3/48cb3a51fb.jpg . This is just one example and there's other stuff than can work, so think about it and see what you like.
01:51:354 (1,2,3,4,5) – Similar ^

00:20:325 (5) – Make the red node more in the center/halfway
00:25:810 (5) - ^
00:30:954 (4) - ^

00:20:325 (5,1) – You might be able to blanket the end of (1) in (5)

00:42:611 (1,2) – blanket?

00:47:411 (5) – blanket better? (5's head farther than 5's tail)

01:10:211 (2,3,4) – why the triple here and the reverse slider at 01:37:468 (1) – and 01:48:611 (2) - ? Some people will say that's inconsistent, but I don't have a problem with inconsistency if there's a good reason for it. However, I think it should be the other way around. The earlier pattern should have a weaker/less intense rhythm than the latter one for better pacing.

01:20:668 (5,2) – blanket?

01:22:211 (1,2,3,4,5) – This looks a bit odd. Try rotating the square 15 degrees clockwise or use a pentagon for your structure (quick example): http://puu.sh/lTzIx/7e28ae51de.jpg

01:28:554 (1,2,3,4,5) – This doesn't look like a nice curve. Use ctrl + Shift + F on a slider for a nicer one.

[iedesu's Another]

00:43:125 (3) – This slider goes over some ¼ notes, which is a little atypical of your style that likes to cover a lot of them. Try going with a rhythm that catches these, say: http://puu.sh/lSU4m/ff95800968.jpg

01:10:211 – and 01:10:382 – are strong notes that I'd prefer to see clickable, and right now the rhythm doesn't express it. Consider a rhythm like: http://puu.sh/lSThO/5fe04d0fc8.jpg or similarly http://puu.sh/lSTjH/dada1e4631.jpg
If you do obviously apply to other places

01:37:468 (2,3,4) - If you keep the above, then this looks a little too similar to it. It'd be nice if if you could not have these on the same side of the map doing almost the same motion to establish a slightly more unique pattern.

01:11:326 (3,3) – This overlap is really small, which I kind of don't like. Try moving it to 224, 276

01:27:868 (1,2,3) – Notice how this is a decrease in energy. I'd like this to feel like a bigger decrease. I also feel like this section starting at 01:23:754 (1) – is a little too restful (mostly in terms of spacing) and would like to see this be a little more intense. That would make the decrease feel bigger. This is pretty subjective though.

01:32:325 (2) – Consider making this two circles instead, or even a triple
01:33:011 (4) - ^
01:43:297 (2,4) – If so, apply here too

02:01:811 (1) – For using so much ¼ rhythm, ending on a reverse slider seems a little week for you. Try something like: http://puu.sh/lSUY2/60fd427c1b.jpg

[Extra]

00:21:354 (4) – Try this as two circles instead?

00:22:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) – I think you go a little too far on the spacing increase. We're still early into the map and getting comfortable with it, so go a little easier on the early challenges. Try a spacing of 1.2 or 1.3 on the latter stream.

00:33:182 (2) – Rotate this by 30 degrees clockwise at selection center so the pattern is easier to read and overall looks nicer. Also not sure if using 1/8 slider is worth it, but that's for you to decide.

00:42:954 (2) – Why deviate from the melody here? Putting in a filler note like so lets you stay on the melody, which feels nicer to me: http://puu.sh/lTsip/9dbe8e9338.jpg . If you do, make sure you jump into 00:43:125 – because in testing I had mine too small XD

00:45:011 (1,2,3,4,1) – What's the reason for this having large spacing? Personally, I think it has the same intensity in the song as 00:46:982 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , and actually less intensity than 00:48:439 (2,3,4,5,1) - . I'd prefer to see this have normal spacing, and I don't think that makes the map any less interesting.

01:03:525 (3) – Try having this as ¼ slider to have the same feel but also catch that important ¼ rhythm (you may have to reduce the jump after it then). I think I would just continue the stream since really that's what the melody is doing, but it's your map.

01:06:696 (2,3) – This circle you're making is really wide. It might just be me being bad at reading/streams, but I like having a thinner spiral like http://puu.sh/lTv4M/00c85a79d9.jpg or http://puu.sh/lTv1h/b33b649f3b.jpg (this one looks bad I know)

01:10:554 (1,2,3) – The prev is bigger than the next, which I disagree with since the next note is higher pitched, which to me feels like it is more intense and thus should have bigger spacing into it.
Similarly, I think having 01:11:411 (3,1) – be smaller is okay as long as you increase the spacing of the stream at 01:11:582 (1) – to like .9x so that the intensity of the stream feels rising like the pitch in the song.

01:17:411 (2,1) – The spacing into (1) could be bigger to emphasize that beat and pitch change and bring in a little more excitement to go with the added intensity of the stream before it.

01:18:268 (1,3,4,6) – These two sets of blankets could be improved a little (tail is farther than head)

01:22:725 (3) – Consider making this a ½ slider → circle instead?

01:23:754 (1) – I missed having the clap hitsounds in this section after this.

01:27:697 (8,9,1,2,3) – Pretty subjective (as with a lot of stuff in this mod), but I think continuing the general triangle flow and using the same spacing here doesn't express the lowered pitch of the new combo. I liked something like this: http://puu.sh/lTu9U/b12187ce29.jpg

01:30:268 (7) – This is very far to the left (slider end at x=-24). Please move this to the right to keep it on the grid more.

01:30:868 (2,3,4,5,6) – Same issue as the one below this, though I wouldn't use the same solution as below
01:36:610 (5,6) – What's the reason for giving increased energy onto these two notes? I hear an increase in pitch that occurs on 01:36:439 (3) - , but why start increasing distance on (5)? As for me, I like the idea of slowing it down on (2), so maybe try something like: http://puu.sh/lTtr2/9012f03da1.jpg

01:35:754 (7) – Try this as being 2 circles instead

01:41:925 (3,4) – If you don't change the issue at 01:03:525 (3) – and keep this as is, then the spacing into (4) is a little too big for me, especially since the anti-flow into a stream makes it feel harder. Try making it a little smaller and possibly flow smoother into the stream.

01:42:611 (10) – Try this as being 2 circles instead

01:49:982 (1,2,3,4,5) – This DS should be higher than 1.1x since it is (imo) the most intense stream of the song, but currently has almost the same spacing as 00:22:725 (1,2,3,4) - . This change should hopefully let you start the stream at 01:48:439 (1,2,3,4,5) – with a DS of 1.0x so that way you don't lose too much intensity there, which is what is happening now.

01:59:411 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – This is the climax of this section, so I feel like it deserves higher spacing. Try a DS of around 2.6x

02:01:639 (2,1) – Try ending with this rhythm and see if you like it: http://puu.sh/lTtPt/9426858d56.jpg

Alright, I'm done. Good luck!

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2015-12-13T11:24:30+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
[AKiTOSHi's Standard]

00:16:211 (3) - don't think this fits converted (2) to 1/1 slider.

01:52:554 (4,5) - could try blanketing these I will break my flow so no. sorry.

pinataman wrote:
[Aki's Standard]

00:16:211 (3) – circle instead? fixed on the prev. mod.

01:10:039 (1) – claps on the ends of these? I removed the Claps on the head instead. Claps aren't fit in this part imo so ye.

Thanks for the mod!

I'm scrub

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[Metadata]
Title:China Dress
TitleUnicode:China Dress
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:Linada
Version:AKiTOSHi's Standard
Source:O2Jam U
Tags:[ Shana Yami ] iedesu [-AKiTOSHi-] Kyle Y
BeatmapID:832097
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Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2015-12-13T12:22:39+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hello. Here because I asked for M4M. Hope this helps!

[Hyper]

For some reason, I thought the size of the circles was really small, but CS 4 doesn't seem wrong yea i was feeling same, fixed to 3.8

00:05:411 (1) – Move the red node to y = 132 to better divide the slider in half.

00:05:925 (2,3,4,5) - I prefer having it be more curvy, being horizontal has too much of a geometry kind of feel to it. http://puu.sh/lTxdd/c47547df79.jpg

00:12:439 (1,2) – Curve (1) to blanket?

00:15:182 (1,2) – Too horizontal for me, try putting in an angle or curving some

00:15:525 (2,3,4,5) – This has really weak structure. Specifically, the angle 00:15:525 (2,3,4) – makes does not look good next to the angle 00:15:868 (3,4,5) – makes. Do ctrl + Shift + D to make a hexagon, rotate it if you want, and use this structured shape to help guide your flow: http://puu.sh/lTxH3/48cb3a51fb.jpg . This is just one example and there's other stuff than can work, so think about it and see what you like.
01:51:354 (1,2,3,4,5) – Similar ^

00:20:325 (5) – Make the red node more in the center/halfway
00:25:810 (5) - ^
00:30:954 (4) - ^

00:20:325 (5,1) – You might be able to blanket the end of (1) in (5)

00:42:611 (1,2) – blanket?

00:47:411 (5) – blanket better? (5's head farther than 5's tail)

01:10:211 (2,3,4) – why the triple here and the reverse slider at 01:37:468 (1) – and 01:48:611 (2) - ? Some people will say that's inconsistent, but I don't have a problem with inconsistency if there's a good reason for it. However, I think it should be the other way around. The earlier pattern should have a weaker/less intense rhythm than the latter one for better pacing. i'm kind of ok, but the second part is really streamy, and player have to rest a bit (it's still a 4.5 star, so players don't have much stamina, and it's right after the longest stream of the map) if i have more complaints i'll change

01:20:668 (5,2) – blanket?

01:22:211 (1,2,3,4,5) – This looks a bit odd. Try rotating the square 15 degrees clockwise or use a pentagon for your structure (quick example): http://puu.sh/lTzIx/7e28ae51de.jpg

01:28:554 (1,2,3,4,5) – This doesn't look like a nice curve. Use ctrl + Shift + F on a slider for a nicer one.

FIXED all !!

[Extra]

00:21:354 (4) – Try this as two circles instead? done

00:22:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) – I think you go a little too far on the spacing increase. We're still early into the map and getting comfortable with it, so go a little easier on the early challenges. Try a spacing of 1.2 or 1.3 on the latter stream. yea redcued

00:33:182 (2) – Rotate this by 30 degrees clockwise at selection center so the pattern is easier to read and overall looks nicer. Also not sure if using 1/8 slider is worth it, but that's for you to decide. fixed, and yea i'd like to keep the 1/8, since there is a sound on 1/8

00:42:954 (2) – Why deviate from the melody here? Putting in a filler note like so lets you stay on the melody, which feels nicer to me: http://puu.sh/lTsip/9dbe8e9338.jpg . If you do, make sure you jump into 00:43:125 – because in testing I had mine too small XD fixed

00:45:011 (1,2,3,4,1) – What's the reason for this having large spacing? Personally, I think it has the same intensity in the song as 00:46:982 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , and actually less intensity than 00:48:439 (2,3,4,5,1) - . I'd prefer to see this have normal spacing, and I don't think that makes the map any less interesting. i noticed that some poeple don't hear the "wind" sound behind thoses notes, and i think it make this stream really strong so i'd like to keep it

01:03:525 (3) – Try having this as ¼ slider to have the same feel but also catch that important ¼ rhythm (you may have to reduce the jump after it then). I think I would just continue the stream since really that's what the melody is doing, but it's your map. yea 1/4 is better

01:06:696 (2,3) – This circle you're making is really wide. It might just be me being bad at reading/streams, but I like having a thinner spiral like http://puu.sh/lTv4M/00c85a79d9.jpg or http://puu.sh/lTv1h/b33b649f3b.jpg (this one looks bad I know) i keep mine

01:10:554 (1,2,3) – The prev is bigger than the next, which I disagree with since the next note is higher pitched, which to me feels like it is more intense and thus should have bigger spacing into it.
Similarly, I think having 01:11:411 (3,1) – be smaller is okay as long as you increase the spacing of the stream at 01:11:582 (1) – to like .9x so that the intensity of the stream feels rising like the pitch in the song. i disagree that the prev if bigger than the next and i changed the stream like you said

01:17:411 (2,1) – The spacing into (1) could be bigger to emphasize that beat and pitch change and bring in a little more excitement to go with the added intensity of the stream before it. yea

01:18:268 (1,3,4,6) – These two sets of blankets could be improved a little (tail is farther than head) yep

01:22:725 (3) – Consider making this a ½ slider → circle instead? fixed

01:23:754 (1) – I missed having the clap hitsounds in this section after this. changed

01:27:697 (8,9,1,2,3) – Pretty subjective (as with a lot of stuff in this mod), but I think continuing the general triangle flow and using the same spacing here doesn't express the lowered pitch of the new combo. I liked something like this: http://puu.sh/lTu9U/b12187ce29.jpg it play better now !

01:30:268 (7) – This is very far to the left (slider end at x=-24). Please move this to the right to keep it on the grid more. fixed

01:30:868 (2,3,4,5,6) – Same issue as the one below this, though I wouldn't use the same solution as below
01:36:610 (5,6) – What's the reason for giving increased energy onto these two notes? I hear an increase in pitch that occurs on 01:36:439 (3) - , but why start increasing distance on (5)? As for me, I like the idea of slowing it down on (2), so maybe try something like: http://puu.sh/lTtr2/9012f03da1.jpg yea fixed

01:35:754 (7) – Try this as being 2 circles instead fixed

01:41:925 (3,4) – If you don't change the issue at 01:03:525 (3) – and keep this as is, then the spacing into (4) is a little too big for me, especially since the anti-flow into a stream makes it feel harder. Try making it a little smaller and possibly flow smoother into the stream. changed the stream

01:42:611 (10) – Try this as being 2 circles instead yep

01:49:982 (1,2,3,4,5) – This DS should be higher than 1.1x since it is (imo) the most intense stream of the song, but currently has almost the same spacing as 00:22:725 (1,2,3,4) - . This change should hopefully let you start the stream at 01:48:439 (1,2,3,4,5) – with a DS of 1.0x so that way you don't lose too much intensity there, which is what is happening now. you're right, but now i feel the last one really hard to catch (but heh it's part of the difficulty)

01:59:411 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – This is the climax of this section, so I feel like it deserves higher spacing. Try a DS of around 2.6x yep

02:01:639 (2,1) – Try ending with this rhythm and see if you like it: http://puu.sh/lTtPt/9426858d56.jpg i don't like =w=

Alright, I'm done. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod !

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2015-12-13T13:57:36+00:00

Sorry for the late reply on your mods

busy studying for exams.

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Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2015-12-13T14:16:36+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
Hello there! From my queue!

[Ky's Beginner]

00:09:011 (4,1) - Blanket is slightly off

01:04:211 (4,1) - ^ fixed for both

pinataman wrote:
[Kya's beginner]

00:09:697 (1) – This is not only off the grid, it leaves the play area. Move to the right by a lot. okay...

00:15:182 (1) – It could be interesting to ctrl + G this and move the pattern the other way to show the changes between the measures. remain, if do so, the flowing if weird.

Hitsounds (the ideas can apply to other difficulties, I'm just too lazy to go into detail on all of them):
00:19:297 (3) – Try using a clap instead of a finish for the hitsound pattern of this section.
00:35:068 (2) – Some other places too like the tail of this might prefer a clap instead of a finish.
00:42:611 (1) – and here
01:10:039 (1) – also on the revere and tail of this and on the head of 01:11:582 (2) - .
If you agree, then examine the rest yourself.
However, I think you should remove the clap at 01:43:982 (2) – since this feels like too much clap. It works in the higher difficulties since there's more rhythm to work with, but I sounds odd here.
above hs modding just leave to linada, since he responses to hitsound.
01:04:554 (1,3) – Try to get these being the same curvature. I think I'd like the design more if these two sliders were symmetrical across the line that 01:05:582 (2,4) – make. Nothing about this 2 slider, if do so, the pattern here is quite hard to map for the following parts

01:21:354 (2) – This slider end is at y=0. If it were at any the x coordinate, it would overlap the HUD at the top. So even though this isn't a problem, I'd feel safer if you were able to lower it.okay...

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Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2015-12-14T16:57:11+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hitsounds (the ideas can apply to other difficulties, I'm just too lazy to go into detail on all of them):
00:19:297 (3) – Try using a clap instead of a finish for the hitsound pattern of this section. nah, there is definetly the finish HS on background
00:35:068 (2) – Some other places too like the tail of this might prefer a clap instead of a finish. same
00:42:611 (1) – and here ^
01:10:039 (1) – also on the revere and tail of this and on the head of 01:11:582 (2) - . i don't like it D:
If you agree, then examine the rest yourself.
However, I think you should remove the clap at 01:43:982 (2) – since this feels like too much clap. It works in the higher difficulties since there's more rhythm to work with, but I sounds odd here. yep, on easy it's quite too much

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2015-12-16T10:35:22+00:00

<3

Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2015-12-16T10:45:12+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
<3

keur

-[Seon]-

263 posts

Joined March 2013

-[Seon]- 2015-12-17T15:15:55+00:00

Hello, from my queue

mod

Hyper
00:36:782 (5,1) - move slider 5 slightly downwards for better flow
00:37:811 (4,1) - blanket is off
00:44:325 (3,4,5,6) - make this curve
00:45:011 (8,1) - bring 8 slightly downwards
00:49:468 (1) - remove NC
01:23:411 (1,2) - blanket
01:33:953 (6,7) - the placement of the slider is slightly different from the stream curve

Yami's Hard
00:27:697 (2) - maybe turn this slider into stream or repeating slider?
00:28:897 (1) - remove NC and put it here 00:28:554 (4)
00:29:925 (4) - NC
00:30:097 (1) - remove NC
00:50:839 (3) - overlap with 00:50:325 (2) -
01:03:868 (5,6) - gap between these are too big
01:08:668 (6) - NC
01:31:296 (5,6) - big gap

AKiTOSHi's Standard
00:37:125 (1) - position this slider slightly downwards
01:12:097 (3) - should make this into a repeating slider

Ky's Beginner
nothing's wrong here ._.

sorry I'm late, this is a nice map, good luck

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2015-12-19T03:02:31+00:00

XxSeonxX wrote:
Hello, from my queue

mod

[size=150]Yami's Hard
00:27:697 (2) - maybe turn this slider into stream or repeating slider? Nah
00:28:897 (1) - remove NC and put it here 00:28:554 (4) Why should I do that?
00:29:925 (4) - NC no
00:30:097 (1) - remove NC nah ah
00:50:839 (3) - overlap with 00:50:325 (2) - I meant to do that. Nothing wrong tbh
01:03:868 (5,6) - gap between these are too big Fixed
01:08:668 (6) - NC fixed
01:31:296 (5,6) - big gap fixed

Thanks for the mod.

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Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2015-12-19T12:11:05+00:00

XxSeonxX wrote:
Hello, from my queue

mod
Hyper
00:36:782 (5,1) - move slider 5 slightly downwards for better flow
00:37:811 (4,1) - blanket is off
00:44:325 (3,4,5,6) - make this curve
00:45:011 (8,1) - bring 8 slightly downwards
00:49:468 (1) - remove NC
01:23:411 (1,2) - blanket
01:33:953 (6,7) - the placement of the slider is slightly different from the stream curve
fixed all !

sorry I'm late, this is a nice map, good luck thanks ! :3

Acylica

Elite Mapper

295 posts

Joined September 2012

Acylica 2015-12-19T12:42:28+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
00:50:497 (1) - I think this is pushed back to 00:50:325 -

Also why is there a weird pause before the break, doesn't fit in

why? its fine already itself www

Acylica

Elite Mapper

295 posts

Joined September 2012

Acylica 2015-12-19T12:59:07+00:00

pinataman wrote:
[iedesu's Another]

00:43:125 (3) – This slider goes over some ¼ notes, which is a little atypical of your style that likes to cover a lot of them. Try going with a rhythm that catches these, say: http://puu.sh/lSU4m/ff95800968.jpg-fixed

01:10:211 – and 01:10:382 – are strong notes that I'd prefer to see clickable, and right now the rhythm doesn't express it. Consider a rhythm like: http://puu.sh/lSThO/5fe04d0fc8.jpg or similarly http://puu.sh/lSTjH/dada1e4631.jpg
If you do obviously apply to other places-I just follow the rhythm, and that is not problem imo.

01:37:468 (2,3,4) - If you keep the above, then this looks a little too similar to it. It'd be nice if if you could not have these on the same side of the map doing almost the same motion to establish a slightly more unique pattern.-^

01:11:326 (3,3) – This overlap is really small, which I kind of don't like. Try moving it to 224, 276-fixed

01:27:868 (1,2,3) – Notice how this is a decrease in energy. I'd like this to feel like a bigger decrease. I also feel like this section starting at 01:23:754 (1) – is a little too restful (mostly in terms of spacing) and would like to see this be a little more intense. That would make the decrease feel bigger. This is pretty subjective though.-that is intended for some rest, I know. because after that, there is kiai section, so I want to emphasis kiai by making easier previous part.

01:32:325 (2) – Consider making this two circles instead, or even a triple-? why
01:33:011 (4) - ^ -^
01:43:297 (2,4) – If so, apply here too -^

02:01:811 (1) – For using so much ¼ rhythm, ending on a reverse slider seems a little week for you. Try something like: http://puu.sh/lSUY2/60fd427c1b.jpg-nice catch

Acylica

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295 posts

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Acylica 2015-12-19T13:03:53+00:00

hi I'm a update www

osu file format v14

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AtHeoN

412 posts

Joined July 2012

AtHeoN 2016-01-03T16:12:49+00:00

quick mod?!

Extra

00:26:754 (5) - maybe it's only me but i don't hear any tripple here
00:45:011 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't feel like this needs such strong emphasising, so maybe reduce the spacing
01:34:039 (5,6) - make this a tripple?
01:39:525 (1,1) - I don't know why you stacked this but here 01:50:497 (6,7) - it's a jump
02:01:039 (3,4) - ctrl + g feels better for me

good map, keep it up

Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2016-01-03T17:32:53+00:00

AtHeoN wrote:
quick mod?!

Extra

00:26:754 (5) - maybe it's only me but i don't hear any tripple here you're right, fixed
00:45:011 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't feel like this needs such strong emphasising, so maybe reduce the spacing i really want to emphasis this stream, since there is a "wind" song behind, which make it really strong imo, if i get more complaints i'll reduce/change
01:34:039 (5,6) - make this a tripple? yep
01:39:525 (1,1) - I don't know why you stacked this but here 01:50:497 (6,7) - it's a jump thoses haven't the same intensity, and as pinataman said:
pinataman wrote:
01:49:982 (1,2,3,4,5) – ~~This DS should be higher than 1.1x~~ since it is the most intense stream of the song
and i kinda agree with him
02:01:039 (3,4) - ctrl + g feels better for me fixed

good map, keep it up Thanks

Thanks for the mod !

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-01-04T11:01:07+00:00

XxSeonxX wrote:
AKiTOSHi's Standard
00:37:125 (1) - position this slider slightly downwards current one is fine.
01:12:097 (3) - should make this into a repeating slider converted into 1/2 slider + circle

omfg sorry I'm late my heart was broke so ye ;w;

aaaaaaaaaa

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Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2016-01-04T18:17:42+00:00

@GDers
I changed a really small thing for hitsounds, sneaky update

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-01-04T19:23:02+00:00

Hi from #modreqs
quick mod

Red - unrankable.
Bold - highly recommend to change.
Normal - suggestion.

[Easy]
Okay, I don't like those overlaps, but 00:01:811 (2,3) - this is fine and a lot of others like this one.
But, 01:30:611 (3,1) - overlaps like this is bad idea, because it hard to read if you are a newbie and because of this type of overlaps map can be dq.
01:33:011 (2,3) - why not blanket.
01:42:954 (1,3) - same issue here with the overlaps.

[Standart]
01:16:211 (2) - maybe ctrl+j, because 01:14:154 (4,5) - of those two.
01:40:554 (1) - you used 2/1 reverse slider once in kiai, do something like that.
Spinner in the end? From 02:01:725 - here to 02:03:182 - here.

Best of luck. ♥

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-01-05T21:21:44+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Beginner]

00:27:525 (3,4,1) - Quite a misleading flow for beginners imo, after player clicked on 00:27:525 (3) then they might go for 00:28:897 (1) instead of 00:28:554 (4) .

[Standard]

00:16:554 (3) - The angle is just weird lol, I would move the tail up a bit for a better flow with 00:16:897 (4) .
01:41:582 (3,4) - Since almost every sliders in that section have a clap on the head so it's just feel weird to put claps on the tails here, also these claps should be clickable so players won't get confused.
01:46:382 (2) - I can feel the missing clap somewhere
I'm not sure about the spread tho, maybe this diff should be a bit harder.

[Hard]

00:24:954 (1,2) - Hmm, I think if you do something like 00:22:382 (1,2) then this would be much easier to read because it's kinda similar to 00:19:468 (1,1) and players might misread the pattern completely.
01:18:954 (3,8) - LOL nice trap because almost every kicksliders in this diff are kinda sudden.
01:57:354 (3,5) - Looks very weird imo.
01:59:068 (3) - Touches the life bar. > http://puu.sh/mkQis/9344a1db70.png

Hope my mod helps! Good luck~

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-01-06T13:59:48+00:00

Namki wrote:
[Standart]
01:16:211 (2) - maybe ctrl+j, because 01:14:154 (4,5) - of those two. sorry, it ruins the circular pattern so no change.
01:40:554 (1) - you used 2/1 reverse slider once in kiai, do something like that. dood let them rest since they had hard time with 01:39:011 (2,3,4,5) - that newbs can possible to rekt. And it's not 2/1 but 1/1 reverse lol
Spinner in the end? From 02:01:725 - here to 02:03:182 - here. emphasizing 02:01:639 - is more sexy for me ;3

sorry no change ;w;

Electoz wrote:
[Standard]

00:16:554 (3) - The angle is just weird lol, I would move the tail up a bit for a better flow with 00:16:897 (4) . ok
01:41:582 (3,4) - Since almost every sliders in that section have a clap on the head so it's just feel weird to put claps on the tails here, also these claps should be clickable so players won't get confused. I removed some claps on slider head but I keep this pattern (Claps on tails) since the pitch of music is changed as well (that I want to emphasize more on Finish sounds to be clickable than claps)
01:46:382 (2) - I can feel the missing clap somewhere splitted to two 1/2 sliders
I'm not sure about the spread tho, maybe this diff should be a bit harder. at least I had 2★ above ;3

thanks♥

seks

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114,140,117354,2,0,L|52:130,2,55,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,150,117868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,159,118039,2,0,P|277:158|336:127,1,110,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,56,118725,2,0,L|396:-4,2,55,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,162,119411,6,0,L|493:170,2,55,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,150,119925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,135,120097,2,0,P|276:117|217:79,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,36,120782,2,0,L|32:37,1,82.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,118,121297,2,0,L|149:116,1,110,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Qiyana

1,585 posts

Joined April 2014

Qiyana 2016-01-14T02:39:59+00:00

Beginner

[General]
Bwah
[Modding Itself]
00:09:697 (1) - Using a bunch of hitsounds like that doesn't sound right.
00:37:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you look carefully, you can see that the pattern is the map is repititional. Try to reduce the pattern.
01:07:982 (2,3) - Blanket this more properly.
01:55:982 (4,1) - ^
02:00:782 (3) - NC
02:01:639 (1) - No NC there.

small fish

29 posts

Joined September 2013

small fish 2016-01-28T06:50:24+00:00

Extra:

00:45:011 (1,2,3,4,1) - the spacing on this stream seems a bit high, I don't think the music calls for that much emphasis.

idesu's another:

Consider raising the OD to 8

01:03:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - slowdown on this stream is very uncomfortable to play.

fun map, gl.

chainpullz

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Joined June 2013

chainpullz 2016-04-23T09:45:30+00:00

Satisfying map to pass with mods

Linada

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Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Linada 2017-07-16T10:24:32+00:00

revive w
remap w

Haruto

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Joined December 2013

Haruto 2017-07-16T10:25:33+00:00

r a n k

Linada

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Topic Starter

Linada 2017-07-17T15:30:54+00:00

Haruto wrote:
r a n k

g o n n a t r y

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