1. Hard (4.88 stars, 355 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 512 notes)
3. Normal (2.28 stars, 195 notes)

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
I think the greenish combo color is blending with the background, having a hard time reading it. thats the whole points! okay okay, made it greener

[Insane]
00:33:051 (1) - Note and approach circle can be barely seen. mmm, why not, -moved-
02:43:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this spacing decceleration doesn't really fit this part. fine fine, made it pure "jumps"

[Hard]
01:20:194 (2) - Could barely see this slider due to it's color and the fact that's being overlapped by the previous one. bwahahahaha (?)
01:45:736 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern is kind of confusing but that's me. I like this though @_@?

[Easy]
01:11:451 (1,2) - This doesnt seem to flow well, if you could rotate (2) so that (1) flows better into it then, rearrange (3) to continue the flow it would be better. you mean how it looks...? c-changed?

[Overall]
Really nice map, i hope that mod post helped X_X since everything felt so nice when playing i barely could come up with something better than what you had. @_@ you don't have to come up with something "better"

[Colors]
Combo1 : 128,0,255
Combo2 : 247,62,62
Combo3 : 221,32,140
Combo4 : 120,114,248

James2250 wrote:

I would expect the whistles after 01:11:451 on all difficulties to be louder as the music gets louder - ends at 01:49:851 (Would almost expect kiai on that section) couldn't think of a good kiai time, so didn't
Combo color 3 and 4 look veryy similar to me.. meh -fiddles around- ... -removes one of the two-
Do you need "Fires" in tags? the original song is called Flame of Hokkai or Fires of Hokkai? (poor translation, but yea)
Why is JPEG bg so big...ok ...ok


Normal:
Could use slightly more hitsounds at the start
00:43:337 (5) - add note? o-o? nope
00:46:251 (4) - ^ ^
00:48:994 (4) - ^ ^ don't want the extra notes
Don't need to list them all, will leave it up to you
02:44:708 (1) - cool? o-o; (dunno what it is...exactly XD)

Hard:
00:35:108 (3) - no whistles before this point? tried to build up the hitsounds slowly.. -.-
00:41:622 (2,1) - Don't like anti jumps if they can be avoided waaaah? you notice how far apart they are on the time?!
(00:43:337 (3) - same kind of comments as Normal) =3=; no
01:32:536 (4,5,6,7,8) - don't like random spacing change here changed to all 2x (just moved one of the stacks)
Guess you can keep your odd little jumps, they aren't too hard to read

Insane:
01:06:822 (3,1) - I would expect the new combo to be on the 3 on all of these. I guess for the jumps later its ok but I would still say put it on the first of the 3 notes (alot of these) the whole reason the combos are like this right now are to match jumps later ...
Another example is 02:34:594 (4,1). I would expect the new combo to be on 4 as it just follows the music more I get what you mean, but its how I mapped it x-x;
Map is confusing as always but~ ~

No reason to kudosu if I change something, you get kudosu >_> (even if you have most saved up and don't spend it)
PM me and I will bubble after any fixes

Alace wrote:

Maybe offset -5ms ?

osuplayer111 wrote:

Offset 143