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Nakagawa-Kanon
Mapper 31
태고는 안넣을 생각?
Kotone
Shalon
resnap
too many spinner o.o
00:56:843(3) - 1 grid left

Bima
resnap
Good Job Bima :)
00:42:289(5) - no clap
00:43:180(1,3,5,7) - no finish & add clap
00:43:774(2,4,6,8) - add finish & no clap
01:10:506(1) - no finish & add clap
01:11:101(2) - add finish & no clap
01:28724(1) - Extend to next line

dksslqj
00:01:200(break) - too fast to break...
other great

KRZY
Red Time Section>Green Time Section
Meiri
Thanks Karen ;)
I M Bit Weak About Hit Sound :(

^^

Shalon, I'll Update It After I Back From University ~
Joon
Event!!
Meiri
Wow, Thanks For Your Kudosu Star !
There Is 4Red + 1White LoL ~

Updated, Thanks Karen :3

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu
James
heh, christmas chimes sounds good in this song

KRZY's:
hey hey hey whats with the red lines?

Dk's:
its good.
i always thought anything you throw at 1/6 and 1/3 patterns are good.
this is one example that my thought is not correct..

Bima's:
00:35:871 (4) - move at 00:35:970?

Whats the last diff? anyways no problem in there~
Shiro
General:
Audio lead-in is not the same in all diffs.
Correct offset is 1,020. Remember to resnap all the notes.

My Color:
00:34:269 (1) - I think that's too confusing - anti-jump and the note is partially hidden by the hitbursts.

Bima's Color:
00:35:871 (4) - This one's too close to (3), unless it was mistimed.
01:06:366 (5) - How about making this perfectly symmetrical ? move the point on the vertical axis that's down one grid up, then move the end point two grids left

Dk's Color:
Circle size +1 at least please, right it's just rage-inducing
00:34:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing issues: they are spaced evenly while they aren't spaced evenly timewise
00:48:526 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really think these jumps are too much, especially with such small circles

KRZY's Color:
What's with the red lines D: make your timing sections inherited please
besides that, diff seems fine
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

Odaril wrote:

General:
Audio lead-in is not the same in all diffs.
Correct offset is 1,020. Remember to resnap all the notes.
I have no idea with offset, cuz I heard so many opinion with offset.

I'll think about it, and I'll ask some more people,

thx for your sincerely mod, Odaril ;)
Torran

[Shalon] wrote:

1002 and 1020, what is correct?
osu! Timing Help!
  • I would go with 1020.
Also, KRZY's diff has WAY too many timing points!
KRZY

soradg123 wrote:

[Shalon] wrote:

1002 and 1020, what is correct?
osu! Timing Help!
  • I would go with 1020.
Also, KRZY's diff has WAY too many timing points!

It means I care about hitsound volumes.

Thanks for the timing help though.
Nakagawa-Kanon
[quote="Odaril]Dk's Color:
Circle size +1 at least please, right it's just rage-inducing
00:34:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing issues: they are spaced evenly while they aren't spaced evenly timewise
00:48:526 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really think these jumps are too much, especially with such small circles
[/quote]


I won't fix all

아 그리고 제 난이도 리스냅좀
Sure
[My]
Resnap all notes!
00:37:257 (2) - spacing


[Bima's]
Start Kiai time at 00:53:297


[Dk's]
Star diff rating is wrong. Try to decrease HP Drain by 1 tick. It will be 5.00


Go Go :)
Amagami SS <3
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

ykcarrot wrote:

[My]
Resnap all notes!
00:37:257 (2) - spacing


[Bima's]
Start Kiai time at 00:53:297


[Dk's]
Star diff rating is wrong. Try to decrease HP Drain by 1 tick. It will be 5.00


Go Go :)
Amagami SS <3

All done
Meiri
lovhin456
Hey ~ Requested mod and I'm here :3

General;
- Make the audio lead-in for all diffs the same ?? 2000 would be okk

Info of the Song;
- Title >> Should be "Koi wa Mizu-iro" By the way read this viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 before you change the title if you don't know how to change it ~
- Tags >> Remove yukana since that is already in artist

My Color;
- 00:20:029 (1,2) >> I don't like how (1) is so close to (2) end
- 00:33:099 (3,4) >> Make this 2 into a slider
- 00:34:287 > One grid down
- 00:43:792 >> Delete this note ??
- 00:53:297 >> Add a finish
- 01:09:336 >> Kiai time ends here

Bima's Color;
- 00:42:307 >> Delete note ??

KRZY's Color;
- Is okk ~

Dk's Color;
- I don't understand some new combos but other than that this diff is okk ~ also, is going to be a pain to SS this in CtB with all those jumps but they're fun too xD

* Star ~ :3
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
fixed
aRiskOfRain
Can't mod, the download won't work. Full submit it and see if it works then.
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
Remove audio from video. If you don't know how to do this, please let me know and I can do it for you.

[Skin]
can you crop the edges on the comboburst.png? There's a little bit you can reduce on the left and right sides.

[My Color]
00:12:901 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'd be better off mapping through the spinner.
00:17:653 (1) - ^ Same thing with the next time you use this particular pattern
00:35:376 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please, not in an easy. Simplify these rhythms or use short one-repeat sliders.

[Bima's Color]
It's all technically fine... though it felt kind of bland. The rhythms were all stagnant and felt against the swing-like beat of the song.

[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason.
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well.
Really fun difficulty here.

[Dk's Color]
*One note* *break* wut
00:20:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Cool rhythm. Too bad most of it isn't even in the song.
The diff is neat, but all the made up rhythms kind of kill the mood a bit for me.
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

Garven wrote:

As per your request:
[My Color]
00:12:901 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'd be better off mapping through the spinner.
00:17:653 (1) - ^ Same thing with the next time you use this particular pattern
00:35:376 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please, not in an easy. Simplify these rhythms or use short one-repeat sliders.
All done the mod sentences for normal, thx for mod.

about the video, I'll fix it asap, but not in now.
Meiri

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Remove audio from video. If you don't know how to do this, please let me know and I can do it for you.

[Skin]
can you crop the edges on the comboburst.png? There's a little bit you can reduce on the left and right sides.

[My Color]
00:12:901 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'd be better off mapping through the spinner.
00:17:653 (1) - ^ Same thing with the next time you use this particular pattern
00:35:376 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please, not in an easy. Simplify these rhythms or use short one-repeat sliders.

[Bima's Color]
It's all technically fine... though it felt kind of bland. The rhythms were all stagnant and felt against the swing-like beat of the song.

[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason.
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well.
Really fun difficulty here.

[Dk's Color]
*One note* *break* wut
00:20:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Cool rhythm. Too bad most of it isn't even in the song.
The diff is neat, but all the made up rhythms kind of kill the mood a bit for me.
Wew . .
Bland . .

Anyway, I'll Try To Perfect It
KRZY

Garven wrote:

[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason. I think I will keep these two as they are. Thanks for the suggestion though XD

Garven wrote:

01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well. Fixed.

Garven wrote:

Really fun difficulty here.
Thanks for the compliment :D

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

KRZY wrote:

Garven wrote:

[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason. I think I will keep these two as they are. Thanks for the suggestion though XD

Garven wrote:

01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well. Fixed.

Garven wrote:

Really fun difficulty here.
Thanks for the compliment :D
updated in school

학교에서 업뎃
Mikkuri
Star ~
minyeob
아직 자세히는 안 봤는데 일단
[My color]
나머지 난도가 다 겟난인 걸 고려하면
Shalon's color가 더 적절해 보입니다만

모딩보증용으로 쿠도별 남겨요~
HakuNoKaemi
star!
minyeob
[My color]
00:36:960 (1) - 노트가 너무 위로 치우쳐져 있지 않은가 싶습니다. 예전에는 이런노트를 "offscreen"이라 칭하면서 트집이 심했는데 지금은 뭐라고 안하나 보네요. 그냥 참고 :)

[dk]
00:01:020 (1) - 00:05:772 (1) 개인적으로 이 부분, 맘에 들지 않네요 수정을 강력히 권장합니다.
00:34:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - 여기서 올300이 뜰 수 있나 D:
Nakagawa-Kanon
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
updated
minyeob
OK, Bubbled for now~
Zekira
Fuck I totally mistook the title for Mizuiro Blood's ending

Fuck

Lol
arien666

Zekira wrote:

Fuck I totally mistook the title for Mizuiro Blood's ending

Fuck

Lol
Hey! that comment was mine!!! ;_;
Andrea
[Overall]

Audio Lead-In is different on every difficulty. Open every difficulty as .osu in Notepad and put AudioLeadIn: 2000.

Also, I'm not sure about the timing... do you mind to ask someone expert for it please? I have to pop for now.
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Audio Lead-In is different on every difficulty. Open every difficulty as .osu in Notepad and put AudioLeadIn: 2000.

Also, I'm not sure about the timing... do you mind to ask someone expert for it please? I have to pop for now.
Thx for check my map :D

I fixed the audio lead-in at all diffs to same. and, I'll ask the timing asap, when I got to home.(in now, I should go to school :d )
Vendemmia
:shock: :lol:
Mucha_old
I love 七咲(´・ω・`)
Shana
별이 다아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아




i like this song

AMAGAMI SS! XD
Zekira
Offset-BPM
1030-101.00
10528 - 101.000
31914 - 102.000
34300 - 101.000
36676 - 101.33
43805 - 101.000
53300 - 101.000

Go fix. Don't forget to check sliders, snapped notes, location of green points, etc.
Nakagawa-Kanon
banvi
:oops:
KRZY
제키라덕분에 이 난이도에서 가장 많이 까이던 00:52:418 (9,10,11,1) 부분을 고치는데 성공

슬슬 랭크시키잣

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu
Meiri
기다려 주셔서 감사합니다 !

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now :(
Meiri

[Shalon] wrote:

unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now :(
:shock:
sorry, how that's happen D: ?!
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

[Shalon] wrote:

unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now :(
:shock:
sorry, how that's happen D: ?!
That mean I can't boot my computer.

but today, I buy new main board... my money :(
Andrea
You still didn't fixed Audio Lead-In on Dk's Color. Please fix it >_<

Timing seems fine now, though.
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

osuplayer111 wrote:

You still didn't fixed Audio Lead-In on Dk's Color. Please fix it >_<

Timing seems fine now, though.
oops, that's my mistake :(

thx to re-check, and sorry to bother you :(
Andrea
That's fine, let me know when you update so I can check it.

I still see "Latest version but not approved" >_<

EDIT: Seems good now.

Re-Bubbled~
James2250
I would double check your timing points on all the difficulties. For example why does 'Bima's Color" have a timing section with 101.33 BPM at 00:03:703 when none of the other difficulties do

Also that is some really odd timing..
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

James2250 wrote:

I would double check your timing points on all the difficulties. For example why does 'Bima's Color" have a timing section with 101.33 BPM at 00:03:703 when none of the other difficulties do

Also that is some really odd timing..
Fix bima's timing, and I'll ask about timing for other timing experts, thx a lot to check my map :D
Doomsday
Alrighty. For the timing, most looks alright, even though a few offsets are off, and those 101.33 BPM parts are too fast I think.

For the timing, I got:

BPM: 102.00 Offset: 1,040
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 31,924
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 34,299
BPM: 101.27 Offset: 36,686
BPM: 101.27 Offset: 43,823
BPM: 101.00 Offset: 53,324

Damn offset changing constantly :(
Doomsday
Oh wait. I missed something. When I posted my timing, I missed one of the points I made. Silly me.

Add this in too:
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 8,191

(Yeah, don't Kudosu this)
James2250
Was double checking everything and 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4,1) sounded really off on "My Color" (took me a while to see why).
BPM on that section (43,823) is 102.27 BPM on that difficulty but 101.27 on the rest. Make sure to fix that

Add that timing section doomsday gave to every difficulty then go through and make sure every offset and bpm matches up and call me back~
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

James2250 wrote:

Was double checking everything and 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4,1) sounded really off on "My Color" (took me a while to see why).
BPM on that section (43,823) is 102.27 BPM on that difficulty but 101.27 on the rest. Make sure to fix that

Add that timing section doomsday gave to every difficulty then go through and make sure every offset and bpm matches up and call me back~
fixed ;)
James2250
I have talked to a few more people and the timing still doesn't seem 100% (hard to believe as it is)......only thing I can suggest now is to call Lybydose for a final check. For the most part the timing seems fine but there are still a few places it seems off

Will do my mod here anyway, mostly just suggestions~

-Capitalize the title so it is (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (Follow this thread if you need help submitting with title change)
-The current slider slide sounds out of place for this song...try and make a custom one and make it quieter?
-Lead-in time seems slightly long atm, no big deal but I would leave it at 1.5 seconds on every difficulty
-If possible remove the audio from the video to save filespace

My Color:
You don't need to have those spinners completely silenced for the entire time
00:08:098 (1) - snapped incorrectly - sounds odd placed on offset too.....(listen on 25%)
00:20:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - odd pattern but I guess its ok
00:23:003 (5,1,2) - would all look neater if not touching
00:29:537 (1,3) - separate slightly more?
00:31:924 (1,3) - ^
00:39:352 (3,4) - could look neater
00:50:537 (1,2) - incorrectly snapped and move further away from the previous combo
01:02:828 (6) - new combo and remove new combo on 01:02:828 (6,1) to follow pattern
01:07:581 (6) - new combo?

Bima's Color:
Keep HP higher than the easiest difficulty? Maybe OD + 1 too
00:02:804 (5,1,2,3,4) - keep spacing between all these equal
00:49:747 - break looks odd here while playing

KRZY's Color:
Slightly more overlaps with sliders than I like but it doesn't look too bad
00:20:032 (7) - don't have completely silent notes, players don't like them

Dk's Color:
Whistle usage here is nicely done
00:20:924 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add hitsounds to all the notes around here?
00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - snapped error..? Spacing is off anyway
00:48:661 (2) - meant to be on blue tick?
00:51:031 (3) - ^
00:51:623 (5,1) - spacing
00:58:769 (4) - meant to be on blue tick?
Some snapping I am not sure of on this difficulty, I guess wait for timing check and then look at them all

Sorry for all the work, just want to make sure everything checks out nicely before this gets ranked~
Lybydose
ok wow, the timing on this song is all over the place. I made a few small changes and I think it's a bit better; it sounds good to me anyway. If someone could double check though, that would be great.

SPOILER
Offset | BPM

1040 | 101.20
8191 | 102.00
10532 | 101.00
11740 | 101.00
14690 | 101.00
15284 | 101.00
31917 | 102.00
34299 | 101.00
36686 | 101.27
38445 | 101.27
41425 | 101.27
43809 | 101.27
46196 | 101.27
53318 | 101.10
66386 | 101.10
67571 | 101.15
79448 | 101.15

heh, I say a few small changes and there are like 3x as many timing sections as before. Well, a few of them are just there to reset the metronome though.

also, Dk's Color has some snapping issues in some spots (and is ridiculously overmapped imo, especially during the quiet part), and the other diffs might have some notes go off when you resnap, so watch out
eveless
[Dk's color]
00:07:510 (4) - Dissymmetrical with 2
00:58:967 (4) - I think it's a sudden jump , and too sudden x_x Also a slider begin in here to 00:58:967 is better than now

[KRZY]
00:56:789 (8) - a litter off :<
01:26:591 (x) - add a note here

that's all
sorry for my late , have a star here
Kuzino
8-)
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
Fixed all timing, and checked all mods on my own diff.

Waiting for other mapper's response.

and,,, If possible, I won't talk about the timing anymore.
KRZY
This map really deserves a rank now, if only for all the effort the modders and the mappers put into it.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu
Sure
This beatmap /var/backup/beatmaps/20674 Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size)-novid.osz has not been uploaded correctly!
Full submit again please.
Nakagawa-Kanon
April_old
star :D
LuPiiTa
Meiri
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
all diffs are updated, waiting for BAT or MAT 's response.

As you can see my signature, I don't have enough time to manage this map.

Semester is starts 3/2, and then, maybe I can't log Osu! regurarly.

I want to make this map perfectly, That can ranked itself without many processes.
taNa_Coppola
nice song~
arien666
[My Color]
00:23:897 (1,2) - Swap new combo?

[Bima's Color]
01:19:137 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing as sight ;_; I know it's due to BPM but... orz

[KRZY's Color]
:3

[Dk's Color]
00:49:010 (3) - [Nazi] how about move 1 grid right and down?



Nice set but...
I can't confirm for bubble yet ;_;
sorry orz
Meiri

arien666 wrote:

[My Color]
00:23:897 (1,2) - Swap new combo?

[Bima's Color]
01:19:137 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing as sight ;_; I know it's due to BPM but... orz

[KRZY's Color]
:3

[Dk's Color]
00:49:010 (3) - [Nazi] how about move 1 grid right and down?



Nice set but...
I can't confirm for bubble yet ;_;
sorry orz
Okay Fixed :D :D
Thank's Arien !

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
Maybe I should talk with MAT or BAT one more time. I already talk with some of them..

but seems they forgot about this.

anyway, I really want to get ranked this map. this map have so many people's effort.

not only me and mappers,but all of modders, especially who checked this map's timing..

Edit: I tried to req some BAT or MAT, but I couldn't get mod. I'll try to talk with some other of them,

but.. I can't sure I can got mod.

I feel so sorry for guest-diff mappers to say like this, but I can't sure I can get ranked this.

this map seemed cursed. always lost chances.
DJPop
Too fast to lose your hope :D


Volume should be 60% maximum imo.

~My Color~
00:35:338 (2) - sounds better with 1/4 snaps

~Bima's Color~
01:28:790 (6) - 1/6 snap

~KRZY's Color~
00:48:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds better with 1/4 snaps

~Dk's Color~
00:34:744 (2,3,4,5) - not fit to the song D:


+Star
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
fixed my map only, I'll try to fixed all diffs to talk with mappers. thx a lot, DJPopd :D
KRZY
Fixed DJPop's mod, and what a fix that was. Thanks.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu
Topic Starter
[Shalon]
all diffs are fixed. ;)
minyeob
리버블되면 바로 저 찔러주세요 ㅇㅅㅇ...
DJPop
minyeob
Dk 대문자가 참 보기 안좋단 말이야....
Weez
OMG FINALLY been waiting for this song :D
congratz :)
kanpakyin
Congrats
.
KanaRin

kanpakyin wrote:

Congrats
.
Topic Starter
[Shalon]

Weezy wrote:

OMG FINALLY been waiting for this song :D
congratz :)

kanpakyin wrote:

Congrats
.

KanaRin wrote:

kanpakyin wrote:

Congrats
.
thx a lot ;) I'm so happy

EDIT : thx for all people who contribute my map.

and.. this is just kidding, haha.

-kevincela-
Gj shalon!
:D
KRZY
FUCK YEAHHHHHHHHH RANK
arien666
Good job :3

/me runs
Meiri
Congrats Shalon ;) !
IkkiMinami
I lke It 8-)

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