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IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-09-26T09:05:20+00:00

[Easy]
00:34:287 (1) - Finish.
00:44:089 (1,2,3,4) - This is out of the rhytm,move all these notes back to previous white tick and additional note to 00:46:168 then.
Also,add some finishes,it'll sound more various.
00:56:861 (3) - If'd you placed this note at 00:56:762 and added a finish it would sound awesome.But I'm not sure if it's a good idea for easy difficulty to place notes at blue tick,so it's optional.
01:00:425 (1) - Add a finish,you may add only at the first note,but try to use it on all repeats.
01:09:930 (1,2,3,4) - Also,finishes may sound interesting.
Oh,and 3 spinners in a row looks silly for the ending.

[Bima]
00:35:920 (4,5) - No,it's out of the rhytm,at least 2 last notes.Remove them,or add at 00:36:366(00:36:663).
00:41:416 (4) - Finish?
00:51:218 (2,3,4) - It's hard to read.I hear only 2 notes: 00:51:366,00:51:960.
01:00:425 (1) - Finish.
01:09:930 - ^

[KRZY]
00:18:742 (4) - Repeat isn't in the right place.
It's mapped on 1/6,I'm not sure it was the right decision.

[Dk]
Overmapped to me.

[Shalon]

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Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2010-09-26T09:48:33+00:00

SadKangaroo wrote:
[Easy]
00:34:287 (1) - Finish.
00:44:089 (1,2,3,4) - This is out of the rhytm,move all these notes back to previous white tick and additional note to 00:46:168 then.
Also,add some finishes,it'll sound more various.
00:56:861 (3) - If'd you placed this note at 00:56:762 and added a finish it would sound awesome.But I'm not sure if it's a good idea for easy difficulty to place notes at blue tick,so it's optional.
01:00:425 (1) - Add a finish,you may add only at the first note,but try to use it on all repeats.
01:09:930 (1,2,3,4) - Also,finishes may sound interesting.
Oh,and 3 spinners in a row looks silly for the ending.

done

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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KRZY 2010-09-26T10:04:25+00:00

Fixed one suggestion out of the two moddings.

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-09-26T13:08:14+00:00

SPOILER

[Bima]
00:35:920 (4,5) - No,it's out of the rhytm,at least 2 last notes.Remove them,or add at 00:36:366(00:36:663).
00:41:416 (4) - Finish?
00:51:218 (2,3,4) - It's hard to read.I hear only 2 notes: 00:51:366,00:51:960.
01:00:425 (1) - Finish.
01:09:930 - ^

Thanks SadKangaroo

And It's Fixed Now ^^

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

Zetsubou Sensei

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Zetsubou Sensei 2010-09-26T21:59:06+00:00

Hey.

- Remove countdown on all dffs

[Easy]
- Add a 1 second lead-in
Seems fine.

[Bima's Color]
01:27:158 (1) - end this spinner on the blue tick 01:28:792 (although i dont like it on blue ticks...it sounds better)
Seems fine.

[KRZY's Color]
- Add a 1 second lead-in
Seems fine.

[Dk's Color]
- Add a 1 second lead-in
Seems fine.

~STAR

James2250

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James2250 2010-09-27T02:31:41+00:00

Your mp3 is 320kbps (unrankable)
Here is a 256kbps one
http://www.mediafire.com/?fgxbk104u8bgw5j
(your offset might have to be adjusted)

I would have a 1.5 second lead-in for every difficulty
As stated above remove all countdowns

Easy:
Some of the notes are kind of close to the end of spinners for Easy, but might want to see if you can fix that

Bima's Color:
OD +1
00:46:763 (7,8) - align
01:06:366 (5) - move this entire combo down slightly so this doesn't go so close to hp bar?
01:27:158 (1) - end 1/6 earlier like the other difficulties?

KRZY's Color:
Nice

Dk's Color:
Odd having a break right at the start, I would map it and either include another one later on or just not have one
OD -1 in my opinion

Nice maps~
*star*

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-09-27T03:45:49+00:00

Modding at KRZY's request! Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
Try to remove the audio from the video to reduce filesize.
mp3 bitrate is 320 kbps, reduce to 256 kbps or lower.

[General]
Use 2 seconds audio lead-in on all your diffs
Disable countdown on all diffs as it doesn't even fit.

[Timing]
Offset -18 ms Make sure you do this: http://puu.sh/exC after fixing the unsnapped timing sections or else you'll get unsnapped timing sections again.
00:53:297 - Kiai must start here on the long white tick.

[Dk's Color]
00:01:020 (1) - Pointless note... remove or map through 00:02:208 this break and 00:06:663 this section.
00:20:029 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start of the slider.
00:43:792 (1) - ^
00:48:544 (1) - Add hitsound finish.
00:50:623 (1,2) - ^
00:53:198 - Unsnapped timing section (Ignore if you fix kiai as i mentioned on [Timing])
00:56:762 (6) - Add hitsound finish at the start of the slider.
01:02:703 (1) - ^
01:12:604 (1) - Silence this spinner so the "vroooooom" that sounds when spinning is unhearable, then add a timing section at the end with the volume back and a finish hitsound.
01:22:109 (1) - ^

[KRZY's Color]
00:01:020 ~ 00:07:851 - Reduce hitsound volume but not enough to silence it on this section.
00:08:148 (1,2) - Make a mirror of each other. Also could try a better arc if possible.
00:19:435 (5,6,7) - Make a Decrescendo instead of the sudden silence at (7) and possibly use whistle hitsounds on each as well. Also i think it would fit better if you rearrange them and the previous slider so that they go down instead of up, since the pitch goes lower on the instrument in this point.
00:31:218 (6) - Use a finish hitsound instead of a whistle?
00:31:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Change the finishes for whistles, then add finish on (4) and (7) and a whistle on (1).
00:55:574 (6) - Pac-Man slider, try to make a smooth curve instead?
01:00:425 (1,2) - Make a mirror of each other. Also could try a better arc if possible. (lolz copy/paste)
01:06:267 (10) - Add hitsound finish.
01:14:683 (1,2) - I guess you know what im going to say about theese. Refer to 00:08:148 (1,2)
01:17:059 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner, so that you dont hear the "vrooooom" from it.
01:19:435 (1,2) - Same as 00:08:148 (1,2)
01:21:812 (1) - Same as 01:17:059 (1) (inb4 copy pasted and flipped horizontally orz)

[Bima's Color]
Your wave sliders like 00:18:247 (4) Can look a lot better if the waypoints fly off the slider like for example:

SPOILER

00:50:623 (1,2,3) - This rythm feels awkward, idk what the combo is following the lyrics or the instruments X_X or maybe just (2) feels weird.
01:03:396 (6) - Barely visible note and appraoch circle. Unrankable.

[Easy]
Due to the softness of the song i recommend you silence all spinners spins with timing sections, then add another timing section right at the end so the hitsound can still be heard.
Considering you have guest diffs with InsertName's color, why not name this one My Color or something
00:01:020 ~ 00:07:752 - Reduce hitsound volume in this section.
00:34:287 (1,2) - Spacing too close! it looks even like an anti-jump, i suggest you stay away from changing spacing distance on the easiest diff, specially sudden changes like this.
00:50:623 (1,2) - Stack?
00:58:049 (1,2,3,4) - Align properly (that is align (1) below (3) while keeping (2) below (4) or something of the like)

[Overall]
I would prefer if you had less guest diffs and more own diffs

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-09-27T04:06:27+00:00

thx for mod for whole people who moded my map,

Here is school, so, maybe I can fixed it after 6~7hours.

arien666

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arien666 2010-09-27T04:07:33+00:00

Reminds me something song which is on Taiko DS2 orz
Whatever :3

Star orz

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-09-27T04:14:02+00:00

arien666 wrote:
Reminds me something song which is on Taiko DS2 orz
Whatever :3

Star orz

haha, I know what you say.

the same name's song is in taiko no datsujin DS2, (but, same thing is just name).

thx for star, and How can you post this time '~'?

KRZY

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KRZY 2010-09-27T04:26:57+00:00

Sakura Hana wrote:
[KRZY's Color]
00:01:020 ~ 00:07:851 - Reduce hitsound volume but not enough to silence it on this section.
00:08:148 (1,2) - Make a mirror of each other. Also could try a better arc if possible.
00:19:435 (5,6,7) - Make a Decrescendo instead of the sudden silence at (7) and possibly use whistle hitsounds on each as well. Also i think it would fit better if you rearrange them and the previous slider so that they go down instead of up, since the pitch goes lower on the instrument in this point.
00:31:218 (6) - Use a finish hitsound instead of a whistle?
00:31:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Change the finishes for whistles, then add finish on (4) and (7) and a whistle on (1).
00:55:574 (6) - Pac-Man slider, try to make a smooth curve instead?
01:00:425 (1,2) - Make a mirror of each other. Also could try a better arc if possible. (lolz copy/paste)
01:06:267 (10) - Add hitsound finish.
01:14:683 (1,2) - I guess you know what im going to say about theese. Refer to 00:08:148 (1,2)
01:17:059 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner, so that you dont hear the "vrooooom" from it.
01:19:435 (1,2) - Same as 00:08:148 (1,2)
01:21:812 (1) - Same as 01:17:059 (1) (inb4 copy pasted and flipped horizontally orz)

Fixed all except the pac-man slider + made several volume adjustments myself.

Thanks sakura!

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-09-27T04:53:59+00:00

Sakura Hana wrote:
SPOILER
[Bima's Color]
Your wave sliders like 00:18:247 (4) Can look a lot better if the waypoints fly off the slider like for example:
[spoilerbox]
00:50:623 (1,2,3) - This rythm feels awkward, idk what the combo is following the lyrics or the instruments X_X or maybe just (2) feels weird.
01:03:396 (6) - Barely visible note and appraoch circle. Unrankable.[/spoilerbox]

Wave Slider Fixed

00:50:623 (1,2,3) > I Just Follow The Vocal & If There Is No Vocal [ Just Beat, I Mean Little Improvisation LoL ] I'll Put The Blank . . But Only The Beat Seems Fine For Me . . An I Think It Just Fine

01:03:396 > Already Moved

Haha

BtW, Thanks Sakura Hana

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-09-27T05:06:25+00:00

Bima and KRZY's color are updated,

I'll update other diffs ASAP.

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-09-27T05:33:14+00:00

I Cant See Any Video On It O.o ?
Or
I M Just Have A Little Problem ~

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-09-28T05:02:16+00:00

Annyong

[General]
The music is feels quiet or let's just say, it's too low.
Download here
I already the maximize the volume. When I see via Audacity, it's very low sound. You have download from me

[Shalon's Color]
*) Offset : 1.020
*) Rename to "My Color" since this maps is yours

00:33:645 (4,1) - Spacing error

[Bima's Color]
Offset : 1.020

Nice song
STAR

KRZY

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KRZY 2010-09-28T05:58:26+00:00

Upload with new mp3 and timing

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

swish

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swish 2010-09-28T14:15:42+00:00

amagami <3

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-09-28T15:11:48+00:00

updated... I'm so tired. .

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-09-29T12:47:42+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
updated... I'm so tired. .

Wew . . Why Not Take A Break

?

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-09-29T13:09:28+00:00

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:
[Shalon] wrote:
updated... I'm so tired. .
Wew . . Why Not Take A Break ?

Haha, Thx

by the way, I think former - one is better than this... (include offset)

so, I didn't updated.

thx for your work

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-09-29T14:04:14+00:00

adasdadadasdasdasdadasdasd

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Dk's Color].osu

Mapper 31

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Mapper 31 2010-10-02T17:23:50+00:00

태고는 안넣을 생각?

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-10-05T11:08:12+00:00

Shalon
resnap
too many spinner o.o
00:56:843(3) - 1 grid left

Bima
resnap
Good Job Bima

00:42:289(5) - no clap
00:43:180(1,3,5,7) - no finish & add clap
00:43:774(2,4,6,8) - add finish & no clap
01:10:506(1) - no finish & add clap
01:11:101(2) - add finish & no clap
01:28724(1) - Extend to next line

dksslqj
00:01:200(break) - too fast to break...
other great

KRZY
Red Time Section>Green Time Section

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-10-05T11:45:26+00:00

Thanks Karen

I M Bit Weak About Hit Sound

^^

Shalon, I'll Update It After I Back From University ~

Joon

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Joon 2010-10-07T01:09:08+00:00

Event!!

Last edited by Joon 2010-10-07T01:15:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-10-07T01:15:24+00:00

Wow, Thanks For Your Kudosu Star !
There Is 4Red + 1White LoL ~

Updated, Thanks Karen :3

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

James

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James 2010-10-08T18:14:55+00:00

heh, christmas chimes sounds good in this song

KRZY's:
hey hey hey whats with the red lines?

Dk's:
its good.
i always thought anything you throw at 1/6 and 1/3 patterns are good.
this is one example that my thought is not correct..

Bima's:
00:35:871 (4) - move at 00:35:970?

Whats the last diff? anyways no problem in there~

Shiro

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Shiro 2010-10-09T13:34:56+00:00

General:
Audio lead-in is not the same in all diffs.
Correct offset is 1,020. Remember to resnap all the notes.

My Color:
00:34:269 (1) - I think that's too confusing - anti-jump and the note is partially hidden by the hitbursts.

Bima's Color:
00:35:871 (4) - This one's too close to (3), unless it was mistimed.
01:06:366 (5) - How about making this perfectly symmetrical ? move the point on the vertical axis that's down one grid up, then move the end point two grids left

Dk's Color:
Circle size +1 at least please, right it's just rage-inducing
00:34:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing issues: they are spaced evenly while they aren't spaced evenly timewise
00:48:526 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really think these jumps are too much, especially with such small circles

KRZY's Color:
What's with the red lines D: make your timing sections inherited please
besides that, diff seems fine

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-10-10T02:33:45+00:00

Odaril wrote:
General:
Audio lead-in is not the same in all diffs.
Correct offset is 1,020. Remember to resnap all the notes.

I have no idea with offset, cuz I heard so many opinion with offset.

I'll think about it, and I'll ask some more people,

thx for your sincerely mod, Odaril

Last edited by [Shalon] 2010-10-10T03:12:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Torran

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Torran 2010-10-10T02:53:32+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
1002 and 1020, what is correct?

osu! Timing Help!

I would go with 1020.

Also, KRZY's diff has WAY too many timing points!

KRZY

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KRZY 2010-10-10T16:23:18+00:00

soradg123 wrote:
[Shalon] wrote:
1002 and 1020, what is correct?
osu! Timing Help!
I would go with 1020.
Also, KRZY's diff has WAY too many timing points!

It means I care about hitsound volumes.

Thanks for the timing help though.

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-10-11T14:10:31+00:00

[quote="Odaril]Dk's Color:
Circle size +1 at least please, right it's just rage-inducing
00:34:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing issues: they are spaced evenly while they aren't spaced evenly timewise
00:48:526 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really think these jumps are too much, especially with such small circles
[/quote]

I won't fix all

아 그리고 제 난이도 리스냅좀

Sure

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Sure 2010-10-13T04:01:37+00:00

[My]
Resnap all notes!
00:37:257 (2) - spacing

[Bima's]
Start Kiai time at 00:53:297

[Dk's]
Star diff rating is wrong. Try to decrease HP Drain by 1 tick. It will be 5.00

Go Go

Amagami SS <3

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-10-13T09:08:00+00:00

ykcarrot wrote:
[My]
Resnap all notes!
00:37:257 (2) - spacing

[Bima's]
Start Kiai time at 00:53:297

[Dk's]
Star diff rating is wrong. Try to decrease HP Drain by 1 tick. It will be 5.00

Go Go
Amagami SS <3

All done

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-10-17T03:05:00+00:00

Yes Done :3 !

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu Iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

lovhin456

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lovhin456 2010-10-22T04:47:09+00:00

Hey ~ Requested mod and I'm here :3

General;
- Make the audio lead-in for all diffs the same ?? 2000 would be okk

Info of the Song;
- Title >> Should be "Koi wa Mizu-iro" By the way read this viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 before you change the title if you don't know how to change it ~
- Tags >> Remove yukana since that is already in artist

My Color;
- 00:20:029 (1,2) >> I don't like how (1) is so close to (2) end
- 00:33:099 (3,4) >> Make this 2 into a slider
- 00:34:287 > One grid down
- 00:43:792 >> Delete this note ??
- 00:53:297 >> Add a finish
- 01:09:336 >> Kiai time ends here

Bima's Color;
- 00:42:307 >> Delete note ??

KRZY's Color;
- Is okk ~

Dk's Color;
- I don't understand some new combos but other than that this diff is okk ~ also, is going to be a pain to SS this in CtB with all those jumps but they're fun too xD

* Star ~ :3

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-10-22T11:22:17+00:00

fixed

bearing019

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bearing019 2010-10-24T15:55:12+00:00

Can't mod, the download won't work. Full submit it and see if it works then.

Garven

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Garven 2010-11-01T17:03:58+00:00

As per your request:

[General]
Remove audio from video. If you don't know how to do this, please let me know and I can do it for you.

[Skin]
can you crop the edges on the comboburst.png? There's a little bit you can reduce on the left and right sides.

[My Color]
00:12:901 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'd be better off mapping through the spinner.
00:17:653 (1) - ^ Same thing with the next time you use this particular pattern
00:35:376 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please, not in an easy. Simplify these rhythms or use short one-repeat sliders.

[Bima's Color]
It's all technically fine... though it felt kind of bland. The rhythms were all stagnant and felt against the swing-like beat of the song.

[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason.
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well.
Really fun difficulty here.

[Dk's Color]
*One note* *break* wut
00:20:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Cool rhythm. Too bad most of it isn't even in the song.
The diff is neat, but all the made up rhythms kind of kill the mood a bit for me.

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-11-02T10:37:50+00:00

Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[My Color]
00:12:901 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'd be better off mapping through the spinner.
00:17:653 (1) - ^ Same thing with the next time you use this particular pattern
00:35:376 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please, not in an easy. Simplify these rhythms or use short one-repeat sliders.

All done the mod sentences for normal, thx for mod.

about the video, I'll fix it asap, but not in now.

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-11-03T03:59:41+00:00

Garven wrote:
As per your request:

[General]
Remove audio from video. If you don't know how to do this, please let me know and I can do it for you.

[Skin]
can you crop the edges on the comboburst.png? There's a little bit you can reduce on the left and right sides.

[My Color]
00:12:901 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. You'd be better off mapping through the spinner.
00:17:653 (1) - ^ Same thing with the next time you use this particular pattern
00:35:376 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please, not in an easy. Simplify these rhythms or use short one-repeat sliders.

[Bima's Color]
It's all technically fine... though it felt kind of bland. The rhythms were all stagnant and felt against the swing-like beat of the song.

[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason.
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well.
Really fun difficulty here.

[Dk's Color]
*One note* *break* wut
00:20:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Cool rhythm. Too bad most of it isn't even in the song.
The diff is neat, but all the made up rhythms kind of kill the mood a bit for me.

Wew . .
Bland . .

Anyway, I'll Try To Perfect It

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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KRZY 2010-11-09T16:56:12+00:00

Garven wrote:
[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason. I think I will keep these two as they are. Thanks for the suggestion though XD

Garven wrote:
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well. Fixed.

Garven wrote:
Really fun difficulty here.

Thanks for the compliment

Download: Yukana - Koi Wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

[Shalon]

686 posts

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Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2010-11-10T00:40:19+00:00

KRZY wrote:
Garven wrote:
[KRZY's Color]
00:02:109 (4) - Think you can smooth out this curve?
01:03:396 (2,3) - This rhythm felt kind of strange to me for some reason. I think I will keep these two as they are. Thanks for the suggestion though XD
Garven wrote:
01:11:118 (3,4,5) - These felt better to play with a whistle on the end of the slider. Maybe one on the end of 6 as well. Fixed.
Garven wrote:
Really fun difficulty here.
Thanks for the compliment

updated in school

학교에서 업뎃

Mikkuri

823 posts

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Mikkuri 2010-11-12T07:37:27+00:00

Star ~

minyeob

osu! Alumni

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Joined May 2008

minyeob 2010-11-26T19:44:35+00:00

아직 자세히는 안 봤는데 일단
[My color]
나머지 난도가 다 겟난인 걸 고려하면
Shalon's color가 더 적절해 보입니다만

모딩보증용으로 쿠도별 남겨요~

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2010-12-23T14:07:49+00:00

star!

minyeob

osu! Alumni

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Joined May 2008

minyeob 2010-12-28T18:32:05+00:00

[My color]
00:36:960 (1) - 노트가 너무 위로 치우쳐져 있지 않은가 싶습니다. 예전에는 이런노트를 "offscreen"이라 칭하면서 트집이 심했는데 지금은 뭐라고 안하나 보네요. 그냥 참고

[dk]
00:01:020 (1) - 00:05:772 (1) 개인적으로 이 부분, 맘에 들지 않네요 수정을 강력히 권장합니다.
00:34:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - 여기서 올300이 뜰 수 있나 D:

Nakagawa-Kanon

Featured Artist

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-12-29T06:16:27+00:00

asdasfafff

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Dk's Color].osu

[Shalon]

686 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2010-12-29T11:06:35+00:00

updated

minyeob

osu! Alumni

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minyeob 2010-12-29T18:42:34+00:00

OK, Bubbled for now~

Zekira

9,233 posts

Joined September 2008

Zekira 2011-01-01T09:30:44+00:00

Fuck I totally mistook the title for Mizuiro Blood's ending

Fuck

Lol

arien666

6,312 posts

Joined May 2009

arien666 2011-01-01T09:31:47+00:00

Zekira wrote:
Fuck I totally mistook the title for Mizuiro Blood's ending

Fuck

Lol

Hey! that comment was mine!!! ;_;

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2011-01-02T20:06:56+00:00

[Overall]

Audio Lead-In is different on every difficulty. Open every difficulty as .osu in Notepad and put AudioLeadIn: 2000.

Also, I'm not sure about the timing... do you mind to ask someone expert for it please? I have to pop for now.

[Shalon]

686 posts

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Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-01-02T22:51:08+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]

Audio Lead-In is different on every difficulty. Open every difficulty as .osu in Notepad and put AudioLeadIn: 2000.

Also, I'm not sure about the timing... do you mind to ask someone expert for it please? I have to pop for now.

Thx for check my map

I fixed the audio lead-in at all diffs to same. and, I'll ask the timing asap, when I got to home.(in now, I should go to school :d )

Vendemmia

Former osu! Champion: 2013

126 posts

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Vendemmia 2011-01-04T06:39:34+00:00

Mucha_old

109 posts

Joined October 2009

Mucha_old 2011-01-04T14:50:51+00:00

I love 七咲(´・ω・｀)

Shana

748 posts

Joined June 2010

Shana 2011-01-06T07:06:52+00:00

별이 다아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아아

i like this song

AMAGAMI SS! XD

Zekira

9,233 posts

Joined September 2008

Zekira 2011-01-15T11:24:43+00:00

Offset-BPM
1030-101.00
10528 - 101.000
31914 - 102.000
34300 - 101.000
36676 - 101.33
43805 - 101.000
53300 - 101.000

Go fix. Don't forget to check sliders, snapped notes, location of green points, etc.

Nakagawa-Kanon

Featured Artist

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Joined March 2009

Nakagawa-Kanon 2011-01-15T15:12:22+00:00

와츄고나두

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Dk's Color].osu

banvi

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banvi 2011-01-15T17:53:54+00:00

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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KRZY 2011-01-17T00:12:27+00:00

제키라덕분에 이 난이도에서 가장 많이 까이던 00:52:418 (9,10,11,1) 부분을 고치는데 성공

슬슬 랭크시키잣

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

Meiri

233 posts

Joined June 2010

Meiri 2011-01-17T04:26:39+00:00

기다려 주셔서 감사합니다 !

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

686 posts

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Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-01-17T14:53:13+00:00

unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now

Meiri

233 posts

Joined June 2010

Meiri 2011-01-18T00:26:53+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now

sorry, how that's happen D: ?!

[Shalon]

686 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-01-18T08:11:46+00:00

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:
[Shalon] wrote:
unfortunately, my computer's mainboard is burned today.

So, I can't update now

sorry, how that's happen D: ?!

That mean I can't boot my computer.

but today, I buy new main board... my money

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2011-01-20T10:20:41+00:00

You still didn't fixed Audio Lead-In on Dk's Color. Please fix it >_<

Timing seems fine now, though.

[Shalon]

686 posts

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Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-01-20T10:56:43+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
You still didn't fixed Audio Lead-In on Dk's Color. Please fix it >_<

Timing seems fine now, though.

oops, that's my mistake

thx to re-check, and sorry to bother you

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2011-01-20T11:10:03+00:00

That's fine, let me know when you update so I can check it.

I still see "Latest version but not approved" >_<

EDIT: Seems good now.

Re-Bubbled~

James2250

osu! Alumni

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James2250 2011-01-28T03:39:34+00:00

I would double check your timing points on all the difficulties. For example why does 'Bima's Color" have a timing section with 101.33 BPM at 00:03:703 when none of the other difficulties do

Also that is some really odd timing..

[Shalon]

686 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-01-28T04:38:06+00:00

James2250 wrote:
I would double check your timing points on all the difficulties. For example why does 'Bima's Color" have a timing section with 101.33 BPM at 00:03:703 when none of the other difficulties do

Also that is some really odd timing..

Fix bima's timing, and I'll ask about timing for other timing experts, thx a lot to check my map

Doomsday

Featured Artist

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Doomsday 2011-01-29T15:55:07+00:00

Alrighty. For the timing, most looks alright, even though a few offsets are off, and those 101.33 BPM parts are too fast I think.

For the timing, I got:

BPM: 102.00 Offset: 1,040
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 31,924
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 34,299
BPM: 101.27 Offset: 36,686
BPM: 101.27 Offset: 43,823
BPM: 101.00 Offset: 53,324

Damn offset changing constantly

Doomsday

Featured Artist

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Doomsday 2011-01-31T19:19:25+00:00

Oh wait. I missed something. When I posted my timing, I missed one of the points I made. Silly me.

Add this in too:
BPM: 102.00 Offset: 8,191

(Yeah, don't Kudosu this)

James2250

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2008

James2250 2011-01-31T19:48:01+00:00

Was double checking everything and 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4,1) sounded really off on "My Color" (took me a while to see why).
BPM on that section (43,823) is 102.27 BPM on that difficulty but 101.27 on the rest. Make sure to fix that

Add that timing section doomsday gave to every difficulty then go through and make sure every offset and bpm matches up and call me back~

[Shalon]

686 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-02-01T09:45:07+00:00

James2250 wrote:
Was double checking everything and 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4,1) sounded really off on "My Color" (took me a while to see why).
BPM on that section (43,823) is 102.27 BPM on that difficulty but 101.27 on the rest. Make sure to fix that

Add that timing section doomsday gave to every difficulty then go through and make sure every offset and bpm matches up and call me back~

fixed

James2250

osu! Alumni

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James2250 2011-02-01T21:25:50+00:00

I have talked to a few more people and the timing still doesn't seem 100% (hard to believe as it is)......only thing I can suggest now is to call Lybydose for a final check. For the most part the timing seems fine but there are still a few places it seems off

Will do my mod here anyway, mostly just suggestions~

-Capitalize the title so it is (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (Follow this thread if you need help submitting with title change)
-The current slider slide sounds out of place for this song...try and make a custom one and make it quieter?
-Lead-in time seems slightly long atm, no big deal but I would leave it at 1.5 seconds on every difficulty
-If possible remove the audio from the video to save filespace

My Color:
You don't need to have those spinners completely silenced for the entire time
00:08:098 (1) - snapped incorrectly - sounds odd placed on offset too.....(listen on 25%)
00:20:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - odd pattern but I guess its ok
00:23:003 (5,1,2) - would all look neater if not touching
00:29:537 (1,3) - separate slightly more?
00:31:924 (1,3) - ^
00:39:352 (3,4) - could look neater
00:50:537 (1,2) - incorrectly snapped and move further away from the previous combo
01:02:828 (6) - new combo and remove new combo on 01:02:828 (6,1) to follow pattern
01:07:581 (6) - new combo?

Bima's Color:
Keep HP higher than the easiest difficulty? Maybe OD + 1 too
00:02:804 (5,1,2,3,4) - keep spacing between all these equal
00:49:747 - break looks odd here while playing

KRZY's Color:
Slightly more overlaps with sliders than I like but it doesn't look too bad
00:20:032 (7) - don't have completely silent notes, players don't like them

Dk's Color:
Whistle usage here is nicely done
00:20:924 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add hitsounds to all the notes around here?
00:34:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - snapped error..? Spacing is off anyway
00:48:661 (2) - meant to be on blue tick?
00:51:031 (3) - ^
00:51:623 (5,1) - spacing
00:58:769 (4) - meant to be on blue tick?
Some snapping I am not sure of on this difficulty, I guess wait for timing check and then look at them all

Sorry for all the work, just want to make sure everything checks out nicely before this gets ranked~

Lybydose

osu! Alumni

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Lybydose 2011-02-20T15:26:11+00:00

ok wow, the timing on this song is all over the place. I made a few small changes and I think it's a bit better; it sounds good to me anyway. If someone could double check though, that would be great.

SPOILER

Offset | BPM

1040 | 101.20
8191 | 102.00
10532 | 101.00
11740 | 101.00
14690 | 101.00
15284 | 101.00
31917 | 102.00
34299 | 101.00
36686 | 101.27
38445 | 101.27
41425 | 101.27
43809 | 101.27
46196 | 101.27
53318 | 101.10
66386 | 101.10
67571 | 101.15
79448 | 101.15

heh, I say a few small changes and there are like 3x as many timing sections as before. Well, a few of them are just there to reset the metronome though.

also, Dk's Color has some snapping issues in some spots (and is ridiculously overmapped imo, especially during the quiet part), and the other diffs might have some notes go off when you resnap, so watch out

eveless

2,080 posts

Joined April 2009

eveless 2011-02-21T02:53:27+00:00

[Dk's color]
00:07:510 (4) - Dissymmetrical with 2
00:58:967 (4) - I think it's a sudden jump , and too sudden x_x Also a slider begin in here to 00:58:967 is better than now

[KRZY]
00:56:789 (8) - a litter off :<
01:26:591 (x) - add a note here

that's all
sorry for my late , have a star here

Kuzino

Former osu!catch Champion: 2014

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Joined August 2009

Kuzino 2011-02-22T01:48:29+00:00

[Shalon]

686 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-02-23T14:02:02+00:00

Fixed all timing, and checked all mods on my own diff.

Waiting for other mapper's response.

and,,, If possible, I won't talk about the timing anymore.

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

4,850 posts

Joined May 2009

KRZY 2011-02-24T00:35:06+00:00

This map really deserves a rank now, if only for all the effort the modders and the mappers put into it.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu

Sure

4,220 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2011-02-24T02:43:56+00:00

This beatmap /var/backup/beatmaps/20674 Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size)-novid.osz has not been uploaded correctly!

Full submit again please.

Nakagawa-Kanon

Featured Artist

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2011-02-24T08:39:24+00:00

.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [Dk's Color].osu

April_old

119 posts

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April_old 2011-02-26T07:13:34+00:00

star

LuPiiTa

371 posts

Joined June 2010

LuPiiTa 2011-02-28T04:25:54+00:00

☆

Meiri

233 posts

Joined June 2010

Meiri 2011-02-28T12:16:48+00:00

₧ 35.000

It's Complete

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

686 posts

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Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-02-28T13:48:21+00:00

all diffs are updated, waiting for BAT or MAT 's response.

As you can see my signature, I don't have enough time to manage this map.

Semester is starts 3/2, and then, maybe I can't log Osu! regurarly.

I want to make this map perfectly, That can ranked itself without many processes.

taNa_Coppola

169 posts

Joined August 2009

taNa_Coppola 2011-02-28T13:55:28+00:00

nice song~★

arien666

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Joined May 2009

arien666 2011-03-11T13:44:02+00:00

[My Color]
00:23:897 (1,2) - Swap new combo?

[Bima's Color]
01:19:137 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing as sight ;_; I know it's due to BPM but... orz

[KRZY's Color]
:3

[Dk's Color]
00:49:010 (3) - [Nazi] how about move 1 grid right and down?

Nice set but...
I can't confirm for bubble yet ;_;
sorry orz

Meiri

233 posts

Joined June 2010

Meiri 2011-03-13T05:02:30+00:00

arien666 wrote:
[My Color]
00:23:897 (1,2) - Swap new combo?

[Bima's Color]
01:19:137 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing as sight ;_; I know it's due to BPM but... orz

[KRZY's Color]
:3

[Dk's Color]
00:49:010 (3) - [Nazi] how about move 1 grid right and down?

Nice set but...
I can't confirm for bubble yet ;_;
sorry orz

Okay Fixed

Thank's Arien !

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [Bima's Color].osu

[Shalon]

686 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-04-01T12:58:05+00:00

Maybe I should talk with MAT or BAT one more time. I already talk with some of them..

but seems they forgot about this.

anyway, I really want to get ranked this map. this map have so many people's effort.

not only me and mappers,but all of modders, especially who checked this map's timing..

Edit: I tried to req some BAT or MAT, but I couldn't get mod. I'll try to talk with some other of them,

but.. I can't sure I can got mod.

I feel so sorry for guest-diff mappers to say like this, but I can't sure I can get ranked this.

this map seemed cursed. always lost chances.

DJPop

osu! Alumni

3,549 posts

Here since the beginning

DJPop 2011-04-03T14:45:27+00:00

Too fast to lose your hope

Volume should be 60% maximum imo.

~My Color~
00:35:338 (2) - sounds better with 1/4 snaps

~Bima's Color~
01:28:790 (6) - 1/6 snap

~KRZY's Color~
00:48:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds better with 1/4 snaps

~Dk's Color~
00:34:744 (2,3,4,5) - not fit to the song D:

+Star

[Shalon]

686 posts

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Topic Starter

[Shalon] 2011-04-03T15:55:06+00:00

fixed my map only, I'll try to fixed all diffs to talk with mappers. thx a lot, DJPopd

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

4,850 posts

Joined May 2009

KRZY 2011-04-03T18:37:03+00:00

Fixed DJPop's mod, and what a fix that was. Thanks.

Download: Yukana - Koi wa Mizu-iro (TV Size) ([Shalon]) [KRZY's Color].osu