as requested :3

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^describes me irl

00:39:859 (4) - Probably best to move this a bit to the right of the previous object, will look better imo. (Move the next object farther to retain the hyper)
00:42:602 (4) - Move this to the left. If hyper is removed, then move the next object farther.
00:45:345 (4) - To the right, making sure to retain the hyper.
00:46:716 (4) - ^
00:48:088 (4) - ^
01:10:202 (5,6) - Make this a single repeating slider instead, then move farther if hyper was removed.
01:28:716 (3) - Move a bit farther (but not too far) from the previous object, since currently the spacing from the previous object to here is actually reduced, which doesn't look good to me.
01:31:459 (3) - Same as above, for consistency with the spacing of 01:31:116 (1,2) - .
02:00:430 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part can be made more intense by increasing the spacing.
02:04:716 (1,2,3,4) - This stream looks weird to me (a bit), the way it curves might need some rework.
02:29:660 (5) - Ctrl+G, then move it farther by a bit from the previous object.
02:33:516 (4) - Move a bit farther from the previous object (about 1 medium grid).
02:34:030 (6) - Ctrl+G.
02:34:202 (1) - ^If done, move this a bit farther.
02:49:116 (4) - Try moving this a bit farther from previous object.

(From 03:11:230 onwards)
I feel like the note placement is weird. For example, at 03:12:602 (1) - there is a 5-note stream that can be heard in the music, but the actual stream in the map is at 03:12:945 (2,3,4,5,6) - instead. I suggest doing some rework/remapping at these parts to make it rhythmically correct (the patterning is good tho).
This is also observed at:
03:15:345 (1) -
03:20:830 (1) -

03:32:488 (1,1) - I understand that you wanted to make the inclination of the sliders constant, but I think it would be much better if these were more horizontal.
04:19:459 (5) - Maybe make this farther from the previous object (either make it a hyper or a simple dash).
04:23:230 (4) - Move farther from the previous object.
04:42:602 (5) - Move a bit farther from 04:42:259 (3) -
05:21:516 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This last part is somewhat underwhelming, make it a bit harder :>

=w= good map

00:39:859 (4) ~ 00:48:088 (4) - It has certain order of HDash usages. The odd numbered set uses 3 HDashes, and the even numbered set uses 2. 00:48:088 (4) - This one is an exception of the even numbered part, since this one is the last part of the 'set', so it needs something special.
01:28:716 (3) and 01:31:459 (3) - Purposed to avoid to add HDashes in this whole kiai time (ofc there're exceptions in 01:31:973 (5,7) - those parts have transitions.), and this one either.
02:04:716 (1,2,3,4) - Eh? It looks good, nothing is bad for me. Also it fits very well with hitsounds.
02:33:516 (4) - Further pattern usages will be broken like a domino effect, it's almost impossible to adjust the regular 1/2 jump distances as always same. The distance between (4) and (5) will have certain 7 spaces, and this is an inconsistency which I don't like it. Cuz I used 6 spaces in every jumps in this map.
02:34:030 (6) - Intended placement, players need to tap right arrow key twice with 1/2 rhythm to catch it. It's easy! 02:34:202 (1) - :/
03:11:230 - Yes I know, but I think it doesn't needed to plow up, this is my own additional and unique usage of rhythms which doesn't really effect to be overmapped. Using definite rhythm isn't fun for me so. If there will be some more criticizes on this part, I'm gonna fix.
03:32:488 (1,1) - Design is also important for me Mapping is an artistic work imo.
04:19:459 (5) - Domino effect again, and I cannot found any other better usages.
04:23:230 (4) - Same as above.
04:42:602 (5) - Intentional stack here, cuz this part has low-atmosphere. I'd like to express the calm part as the object distances.



Spotlight SB changes needed :
02:00:430 (4,1,2,3,4) -
02:29:660 (5,6,1) -
02:48:602 (1,2,3,4) -
04:36:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
05:21:516 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

Thanks for modding!

Done!

Good map <3
should be RANKED

very nice!

Você também poderia criar mais dois modos nessa música: hard e insane. Isso faria com que mais pessoas conseguissem joga-la.

time to revive this!

a fast mod, i should study but kljfdlkjflk at least some suggestions


imo this is your best map :b take some stars lmao true i cant PLEASE REVIVE THIS

00:59:573 (1) - Current hitsound which I'm using makes good feel to use HDash, so I would like to keep as well.
04:14:488 (2) - I wanna keep as symmetric shape with 04:15:002 (1,2,3,4) - :/
04:53:402 (3,4,5) - Intentional 'no HDash part' for here, I think the whole intensity deserves.
05:25:288 (5,1) - Intentional stack like original std map by asphyxia >_>

Spotlight change needed :
01:17:745 (5) -
01:20:488 (3) -
01:21:002 (2) -
01:24:430 (2) -
01:24:945 (4,5) -
01:28:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:39:687 (5,6) -
01:40:372 (5,6) -
01:40:888 (2,3,4) -
01:41:574 (2,3,4) -
02:15:002 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:16:373 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:26:316 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
02:27:345 (1) -
02:47:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
03:37:116 (1,2,3,4) -
03:42:945 (2) -
03:51:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
03:59:402 (2) -
04:19:288 (4,5,6) -
04:25:287 (1) -
04:30:773 (1) -
04:31:802 (5,6,1) -
04:49:631 (6,7) -
05:22:545 (3) -

Thank you very much, others have been fixed!

will fix all note changes in sb when this map is ready for qualify
/ It's stupid to change the sb again and again XD

Well this is a bit incredibly late but oh well - as requested

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Difficulty-Specific Comments:


I would personally have preferred following the drums for jump patterns throughout, but I can understand why you chose vocals in some places. Otherwise great map and SB - If you have any questions or want to discuss things further, please don't hesitate to get back to me and I'll see what I can do to help.

Good luck! (:

Lower ar to 9 ;w;

02:00:945 (3,4,1) - Looks like unnecessary to fix, I would like to make it with my own freestyle. All of the stream parts are having different options.
03:12:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 03:15:345 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:20:830 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overall flow will be ruined and it was actually a reference from my genryuu kaiko style random snap, which is pretty accurate for the song. You can see the main concept of this part is totally different as 03:22:202 (1) - , this part has proper rhythm with my regular style and 03:11:230 (1) - this one is for different. Also it's really painful to change its spotlight though I can move the spotlight effects but I can't 'add'.
03:33:173 - 03:50:145 - It doesn't feel boring for me, just like perthed again nervous breakdown diff, I would like to make people keep holding dash and play with extreme speeding.

The hidden text looks pretty fine for me, it'll give another different experience.

The others have been fixed, thank you!

Let's do this again

I'll try to fix SB til I can

btw, what about 3 3/4 sliders in 00:58:202 (1,2,1) - instead of those streams? the pattern is nice but i feel like this should be a little more harder, something like this would be an interesting pattern maybe with more sv in the second slider(?

not much to say about this map tbh, you can call me after fix sb

It looks like not my favorite

whatever fixing SB now

05:00:945 - nyan (x48)

CLSW wrote:

2h and 40m for patterns, and 30m for hs. Total 3h 10m to complete this map.

woah mapping machine

Before it's bubbled, change the diff name, please. I don't want to have to pop it because it's completely irrelevant

all done ayy lmao

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