1. Beam's Flowie (4,66 stars, 230 notes)
2. Easy (1,34 stars, 127 notes)
3. Hard (4,48 stars, 263 notes)
4. Normal (3,05 stars, 190 notes)

LesTrucsRose wrote:

!Change color 2 to something lighter. It's hard too see it! Changed it abit.

[Normal]

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I like how some sliderticks are claps. Yay!

01:12:135 (7) - Make the volume here louder.
01:23:605 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These beats are too hard for a normal.[/color] Done.

[Hard]

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There's a lot of overlapping in this diff that I do not like, but it's not like it's unrankable because of them. Future modders will probobly ask you to remove them.

Excellent map.

Good luck.Thank you

James2250 wrote:

-You need a difficulty below 3 stars to be ranked, I would suggest you make an easy Normal has 3 stars, does it have to be BELOW 3 stars? D:
-Resize blacklol (odd name) to 640x480 for sb Done.
-There are 2 identical osb files in your folder, delete one Done.
-I agree change combo color 2 so it doesn't blend in so much Done.

Normal:
00:11:741 (4) - add note Done.
01:12:135 (7) - sounds odd so quiet, and new combo Done.

Hard:
OD +1/+2 Done.
01:23:619 (3) - new combo Done.
02:24:371 (3,4,5) - this caught me off guard as it is the only triplet like this in the entire map, but anyway Changed it to a slider.

No other problems I see
*star* Thanks

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Garven wrote:

As per your request: <3

[Skin]
Make the section-pass and section-fails transparent. I saw a tiny white pixel on the kid's face and was wondering what was up, haha. Yeah, thanks for noticing it! I had low resolution screen for a while and I didn't noticed it xD

[Storybaord]
The Up in through your sleeves image fades out a lot faster than the other ones. True. Fixed.
There's a fair-chunk of unnecessary transparency in your white1-4.pngs. I will leave it for now.
01:41:002 - The fade to black is kind of weird since you have a spinner cover up the transition on all difficulties. I liked how it looks like, I will leave it (for now at least)

[General]
If you wish to use kiai, 02:08:063 - to 02:48:206 would be an excellent place for it - especially combined with your storyboard. I though the same thing. Added Kiai.

[Easy]
00:10:500 (1) - I tend to dislike soft whistles on sliderslides. They just sound bad and are usually unintentionally used. Removed.
00:13:726 (5) - Scoot this up a little bit - with such low distance snap, it's really hard to intuit that this note is a little later than the others (minus approach circles) Moved.
00:14:801 (2) - Soft whistle on slider slide Removed.

[Normal]
00:21:791 (1) - Although it's technically snapped, it's still deceitful because of the low distance snap. It would play better if you placed it a bit further away from the 6. Done.
00:44:192 (4,1) - Was this spacing intended? Nope. D: Moved..
01:11:432 (6) - Eh, .5 section with this slow of velocity setting is kinda, well, eeh. Changed this part.

[Hard]
Hrm, try this:

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for this:

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Yes, and thanks! <3.

Nice set~ Kinda wish easy and normal weren't so smooshed together, but they play fine enough.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Flowie;

02:48:385 (2) - Deleteeeee It was pasted from 01:03:547 (1,2).Is there any reason to delete it?

James2250 wrote:

SK's Flowie:
00:27:705 (1) - really don't like how this slider looks, try and redo it somehow Yeah,ok.
I would add a note at 00:54:945 and move spinner back to 00:55:303 What's for? The previous rhytm was ended.I've tested your suggestion,but I don't like how it sounds.
01:03:726 (2) - is this note needed? Of course,it sounds completely crap w/o it.I've found it very gentle.
01:35:447 (3,4) - align these Ok.
02:22:400 (1) - same comment as other spinner Same reply =p
02:39:604 (1) - ^ ^
02:48:385 (2) - is note needed? (if you get rid of this put finish on 1) Same reply.

karenying wrote:

Easy
00:14:433(1) - spacing? Fix'd
01:45:303(break) - 20 sec break unrankble？ all diff have this problem Never heard about this. O,o

Normal
00:10:142(x) - add a circle? k

1. I think the BPM might be a bit too fast, and the offset is a little early. I got BPM: 167.39, Offset: 4,776

1. Resize The file: "forbiddenfriendshipbyFluro_Knife.png" to 800x600.
2. Suggestion: Resize the wallpaper to 1024x768.

1. Probably too hard for Easy but I personally like it.

1. 01:41:540 (4,5) -Suggestion: One or Two grids down or place them in the same line of (1) & (2)

1. 00:33:439 (3) - Curve this slider a bit more so it won't overlap with the last slider.

1. I Like it.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General:

1. Resize The file: "forbiddenfriendshipbyFluro_Knife.png" to 800x600. Fixed.
2. Suggestion: Resize the wallpaper to 1024x768. Ooh, I forgot I didn't resized it after I removed some white corners. Instantfix

Easy:

1. Probably too hard for Easy but I personally like it.

Normal:

1. 01:41:540 (4,5) -Suggestion: One or Two grids down or place them in the same line of (1) & (2) Done

Hard:

1. 00:33:439 (3) - Curve this slider a bit more so it won't overlap with the last slider. Done

Beam's Flowie:

1. I Like it.

No Major Mistakes.

Wish conceded, Good Luck & Star (I will shoot a k-star soon). Thanks for modding and for ster :3

Doomsday wrote:

Yo ohai

1. I think the BPM might be a bit too fast, and the offset is a little early. I got BPM: 167.39, Offset: 4,776 Thanks! It sounds better now.

[EASY]

Looks good to me.

[NORMAL]

I wouldn't put in fast 1/4 triplets/doubles in a Normal (Like at 00:11:576 (3,4,5), 00:06:378 (4,5) etc. They are only in the intro part. You'll see them), but apart from that, Nothing bothered me. Removed few of them.

[HARD]

Lower Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty by 1 notch? It feels a little bit too high how it is now. ohhkay

01:26:307 (1,2,3) - Put these in a straighter line maybe, instead of putting them in a bunch? Bunching them up here while the rest of the little stream is in a straight line looks rather ugly imo. Changed this part abit

[BEAM'S FLOWIE]

This one is pretty fun actually. Good stuff.

It's a nice, solid map. One thing you could work on though is your layouts for your maps. The actual beat placement is pretty good, but the patterns and such you used were pretty boring. That, and a lot of the map had beats stuck on straight lines, or bunched up so it was hard to read. In your next map, try experimenting with patterns and different layouts. You'll find that it would make the map more interesting, and make making a map more fun. I will try!

Starred Thanks :p

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

General:
claps are waaay too loud I like how it is now.
all sound-changing timing sections must be at least 1/4 beat before the note to be affected All timing sections are made like that. Some of them got moved +/- 10ms because of timing and offset changes.

[hard]
01:00:693 (2) - seems like a weird place to end this section and put a break... Why D: It follows the lyrics.
01:09:295 (1,2,3) - move (1) and (2) closer to (3) Done.
02:39:982 (1) - make it look better? Changed it abit.

[normal]
fine

[easy]
fine

star Thankyou.

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[beam's flowie]
00:36:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - even out the pentagon pattern I don't want to make it straight,it's rotated.
00:39:545 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:59:259 (1,2,3,4) - antijumping seems unnecessary. Hah,this a jump? Not really.
01:35:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - even the pentagon
02:18:117 (1) - make this slider symmetrical and aligned to the Y axis Yeah,seems you're right.
02:43:925 (1,2,3,4) - antijumping seems unnecessary

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Hard]
02:56:470 - remove this slider oh fawck sorry, forgot to delete it xD
[All diffs]
01:45:140 - 20 seconds break - unrankable There is no rule about that, so...

Feno wrote:

[Normal]
00:55:316 (1) - Unmute the sliderticks maybe? Yeah, it changed when I added silent sliderticks to custom hitsounds 2

[Hard]
00:09:794 (7) - Maybe turn the sound of the slider end up a little bit? I think it sounds better when you can barely hear it instead of not hearing it at all. Done
02:39:982 (1) - I have something against circle sliders with the start and end points looking like that xD Perhaps make it overlap with a directional arrow telling the player which direction it goes? Those are awesome. Well... I tried it, but it looked a bit confusing D: I will leave it like it is now

I like this map alot

#star and Kudosu star! Thankyou <3

Feno wrote:

[Easy]
00:19:113 (1) - Add an extra repeat to the slider maybe? Okie dokie.
02:08:080 - There's quite a few gaps in the section, I personally think that since it's the final energetic part of the song and you got the kiai lights flashing, there shouldn't be any pauses. And I feel it kinda ruins the flow of the section. I would love to see the gaps filled with something so there's constantly some playing going on during the section. It's the final, it's awesome, MAKE IT INTENSE YO! /rant True. O: But I wanted to do some breaks, because map would be a bit too hard for 'easy'. D: Anyway, added hitcircles.
02:39:982 (1) - Got those muted sliderticks here aswell. k

[Hard]
00:17:679 - Add a note?Naah. D: I made this part to somekinda follow the lyrics.

0_o wrote:

Great movie, nice song selection. Cool storyboard too. Thanks :3

General
Really wasn't a fan of the slidertick claps, you really don't need them. The claps don't add that much to the song that you need to have them even when you don't click on something. Okayyy... I tried to remove at least half of such claps. BUT I left last part of the song with them. IMO it just fits in there.

Easy
Stacked notes are really tough for newbies to pick up since the hitbursts obscure the hitcircles underneath them. I see it when watching my siblings play all the time - they skip the note underneath then wonder where the X came from This is especially tricky when you have stacked notes in the middle of 1/2 streams. Also, I would not recommend tiny sliders with more than one repeat since the extra repeats are difficult to see until it's too late. I won't point out all instances of these, but go through the diff and see what you can do. Thanks for these tips. Really, I am terrible at doing easy difficultys. Moved all the notes so no notes are stacked in each other. And remade these small sliders.

Fairly solid overall, call me back when after you checked this stuff and we'll see about a bubble. Thankyouverymuch

EDIT: Forgot star ^_^ trololo

Feno wrote:

IMO easy doesn't mean there can't be a bit of challenge in the diff. I think diffs should, if possible, train the player so they become better. By adding a nonstop section without those breaks, you teach the player to deal with sections that don't give them time to prepare, they gotta be on their game. It doesn't mean the diff isn't an "easy" it just means it has some degree of actual difficulty to it, and really, what's the point of playing something if there's no obstacles to overcome.
I probably should stop ranting in your beatmap thread... I know. But it's anyway "Easy" difficulty, so it should be passable by more newbie players and etc. You know what I mean :p

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fartownik wrote:

Sorry for being late. Here's my mod. Noproblemo

SB:
01:46:579 - I don't know if the falling text was meant? The rest of the texts are going straight to the right/left. This is minor thing, but it's blatant. Na początku wszystkie napisy leciały na zmianę z góry na dół, ale miałem problemy - i musiałem zmienić. Najwyraźniej to przeoczyłem D:

Also, you'll need to resize stayclosebysharpie91.png to 800x600/640x480. It's the part of the SB which lasts until the end of the map, so it may lag with the huge size. It's also the ranking rule :3 k

[Hard]

00:24:495 (2) - This is not straight D:

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Zmienione'd

01:11:989 - I don't get why the hitsounds are more quiet here. Make them louder? (do same on the rest of the diffs) Mi się podoba tak jak jest D:


Pretty nice map and great song.
a star Dziękować :p