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ROCKY CHACK - Ringo Biyori ~The Wolf Whistling ...

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Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Normal:

03:01:770 (1) - there is a cymbal sound in this part of the song, so my suggestion is you remove this spinner and add some notes.

04:40:437 (1) - you should silence the end of this spinner.

i made a very light strobe at the beginning of the kiai times to add a little more epicness but not overdue the strobe.

So yeah it is a rather light one.

Download: ROCKY CHACK - Ringo Biyori ~The Wolf Whistling Song (Darcsol).osb
akrolsmir
606 posts
Joined November 2010
akrolsmir
My thoughts:

1:25:437 (1)- Having music followed by "I met" while still on the same slider is somewhat confusing; I was anticipating a new slider for that and jumped ahead.

1:47:104 (1)- Similar to above, I expected [word that sounds like "would"- I can't actually tell] to be its own note instead of the end of the same slider.

Other than that, I thought it was quite intuitively and well mapped! Take a well-deserved star. And make sure to create a TV version someday to utilize that nice ending theme from the anime.
Darcsol
277 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Darcsol

akrolsmir wrote:

My thoughts:

1:25:437 (1)- Having music followed by "I met" while still on the same slider is somewhat confusing; I was anticipating a new slider for that and jumped ahead. I think it's fine.

1:47:104 (1)- Similar to above, I expected [word that sounds like "would"- I can't actually tell] to be its own note instead of the end of the same slider. Fixed.

Other than that, I thought it was quite intuitively and well mapped! Take a well-deserved star. And make sure to create a TV version someday to utilize that nice ending theme from the anime.
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
star for horo!
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
osu! Alumni
333 posts
Joined December 2010
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
nice map. nice song. STAR'D
Deformal
5 posts
Joined March 2010
Deformal
very good! star
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
Timing Check

Adjust nearby sections to these

Move offset 00:15:110 -
Change
00:16:438 - BPM 91.5
00:19:074 - BPM 90.5
00:20:404 - BPM 90
00:21:767 - BPM 90.6 I'm pretty sure this is correct.
ggggg
Really unsure about the section after that. 90 BPM and the set offset for the majority of the song seems right.


Okay we got the end timing's down pact


BPM 90.9 Offset 187092
BPM 90.0 Offset 189732
BPM 88.1 Offset 192398
BPM 90.0 Offset 193760
BPM 90.0 Offset 195093
BPM 90.0 Offset 200409
BPM 89.0 Offset 201742
BPM 90.0 Offset 203090
BPM 90.0 Offset 208423
BPM 90.0 Offset 211103
BPM 90.0 Offset 224417





187092,660.06600660066,4,2,0,80,1,0
189732,666.666666666667,4,2,0,80,1,0
192398,681.044267877412,4,2,0,80,1,0
193760,666.666666666667,4,2,0,80,1,0
195093,666.666666666667,4,2,0,80,1,0
200409,666.666666666667,4,2,0,80,1,0
201742,674.157303370787,4,2,0,55,1,0
203090,666.666666666667,4,2,0,55,1,0
208423,666.666666666667,4,2,0,55,1,0
211103,666.666666666667,4,2,0,55,1,0
224417,666.666666666667,4,2,0,55,1,0
Last edited by TheVileOne , edited 1 time in total.
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp
hi there again

timing check by me and TVO:

00:00:480 - bpm 91,250
00:08:379 - bpm 89,200
00:16:440 - bpm 91
00:19:081 - bpm 90
00:24:414 - bpm 89
00:27:090 - bpm 90
03:07:075 - bpm 90
03:28:421 - bpm 90

well there is still parts that would look a bit off, i just ignorated some "human mistakes"

i'll check the timing again ASAP

and you should ask for other good timers opinion

small mod:

Inconsistency in PreviewTime

Normal

00:16:114 (1) - unsnapped slider end
02:18:090 (8) - move the 2nd curve point to x312 y248 ?
03:01:756 (9) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.
04:21:087 (3,4,5) - a bit confusing for the easiest diff maybe ?
04:27:087 (5) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.
04:39:087 (9) - move the 2nd curve point to x296 y224 ?
04:40:420 (10) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.

TVO's Hard

00:05:822 (1,2) - fix the 1/8
00:12:078 (2) - add one repeat?
00:18:440 (4) - unsnapped slider end
00:23:747 (1) - i think it should e like that:
........
00:33:340 (3) - move to red tick
01:14:090 (1) - like this:


1st curve point x304 y160
2nd curve point x336 y104
3rd curve point x296 y64
4th curve point x256 y48
5th curve point x216 y64
6th curve point x176 y104
7th curve point x208 y160
........
01:16:090 (5) - slider end in red tick and circle in blue and white tick?

thats all

i hope you like it and good luck :)
Darcsol
277 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Darcsol

pimpG wrote:

small mod:

Inconsistency in PreviewTime Fixed.

Normal

00:16:114 (1) - unsnapped slider end Fixed.
02:18:090 (8) - move the 2nd curve point to x312 y248 ? I have made other adjustments.
03:01:756 (9) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner. What is a "NC"?
04:21:087 (3,4,5) - a bit confusing for the easiest diff maybe ?
04:27:087 (5) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner. I have rearranged the beats.
04:39:087 (9) - move the 2nd curve point to x296 y224 ? Same as above.
04:40:420 (10) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp

Darcsol wrote:

What is a "NC"?
NC is new combo :)
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
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TheVileOne
http://puu.sh/PTKA

I mapped until the end. Still rough around the edges in areas, but if you want to go for mods, it's safe to ask.




I will try to fix things when I find the chance.
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
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TheVileOne
Okay. I got my difficulty in a more finalized state.

http://puu.sh/Y8SS

While I was doing that I updated an offset.

03:15:093 - Changed offset of this to 03:15:099 -
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami
yo #modreq

[General]

*Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Normal] : 58423
- [TVO's Hard] : 58437


Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
03:09:732, BPM of 90.900
03:28:423, BPM of 90.000 (not exist this red line in tvo's hard)

- [TVO's Hard]
Red timing sections at:
03:09:732, BPM of 90.000

[Normal]
00:16:114 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:01:756 (9) - add NC for prevent NC bug.
04:27:083 (5) - ^
04:40:416 (10) - ^

00:26:773 (6,1) - ah... inconsistency distance snap
00:42:756 (8) - x232 y280 is better (about distance snap)
01:17:756 - drag break time to 01:17:089 -
01:33:756 (1) - add NC?
01:59:756 (6,8) - not completed stack each other :p
02:19:756 - why drag this break time....same above
02:32:423 (6,7) - nono, don't placed note behind slider in normal diff
02:37:756 (1) - um.... add NC?
03:07:752 - same above. don't need this
03:54:750 (4) - (nazi) different snap
04:16:083 (5,8) - not stack each other
04:34:083 (6,2) - um..... not recommend this (like placing note behind slider in normal diff)

[TVO's hard]
unsnapped green time line
i know it's okay, but this diff looks like missing your green line's effect
like this :
SPOILER
04:03:087 -
04:17:754 -
04:19:087 -
04:27:087 -
04:29:754 -

00:14:432 (6,1) - decrease distance snap(?)
00:22:747 (2) - this shape can become more good :p
00:26:099 (4,5) - change one slider? i think it's better... :)
00:26:605 (6,7) - too
00:37:423 (5,1) - decrease distance snap
02:33:423 (1,2) - change one 1/4 repeat slider, becosz, 1/4slider + note is so complex partten
04:32:417 (1) - consider add NC
Darcsol
277 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Darcsol

intoon wrote:

[General]

*Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Normal] : 58423
- [TVO's Hard] : 58437
Fixed.

Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
03:09:732, BPM of 90.900
03:28:423, BPM of 90.000 (not exist this red line in tvo's hard)

- [TVO's Hard]
Red timing sections at:
03:09:732, BPM of 90.000
All fixed.

[Normal]
00:16:114 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:01:756 (9) - add NC for prevent NC bug.
04:27:083 (5) - ^
04:40:416 (10) - ^
All should be fixed.

00:26:773 (6,1) - ah... inconsistency distance snap I was readjusting the beats but I haven't updated this map. It's fixed.
00:42:756 (8) - x232 y280 is better (about distance snap) Fixed.
01:17:756 - drag break time to 01:17:089 - This is intended as a personal preference. There is no harm to it anyway.
01:33:756 (1) - add NC? I think it's fine.
01:59:756 (6,8) - not completed stack each other :p I'm confused but either way it's fine.
02:19:756 - why drag this break time....same above Same response as before.
02:32:423 (6,7) - nono, don't placed note behind slider in normal diff I do not see the problem in that.
02:37:756 (1) - um.... add NC? Again I think it's fine at the moment.
03:07:752 - same above. don't need this Fixed.
03:54:750 (4) - (nazi) different snap Fixed; though I don't consider it as a "nazi" move.
04:16:083 (5,8) - not stack each other I think it's fine.
04:34:083 (6,2) - um..... not recommend this (like placing note behind slider in normal diff) Same as above.
Currently I'm revamping major parts of the map. Some of your suggestions might be reconsidered.
TheVileOne
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TheVileOne
Timing Fixes

03:20:391 - Move red line here
03:21:757 - Move red line here. change BPM to 90
03:31:103 - red line
03:44:422 - red line
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne

intoon wrote:

[TVO's hard]
unsnapped green time line
i know it's okay, but this diff looks like missing your green line's effect
like this :
SPOILER
04:03:087 -
04:17:754 -
04:19:087 -
04:27:087 -
04:29:754 -
Fixed

00:14:432 (6,1) - decrease distance snap(?) It plays nicely at that snap.
00:22:747 (2) - this shape can become more good :p Changed a bit
00:26:099 (4,5) - change one slider? i think it's better... :) I don't want to.
00:26:605 (6,7) - too ^
00:37:423 (5,1) - decrease distance snap If enough people bring it up I will reluctantly change it.
02:33:423 (1,2) - change one 1/4 repeat slider, becosz, 1/4slider + note is so complex partten It's not complex at 90 BPM.
04:32:417 (1) - consider add NC Done

Map: http://puu.sh/130sg
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami

intoon wrote:

02:32:423 (6,7) - nono, don't placed note behind slider in normal diff I do not see the problem in that.
you can find rule about this, there => http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
like this :

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
nowadays, i sometime see that this rule broken in hard diff, and i think that's okay in hard diff, too.
but normal diff is not.....

/me run
Darcsol
277 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Darcsol

intoon wrote:

you can find rule about this, there => http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
like this :

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
nowadays, i sometime see that this rule broken in hard diff, and i think that's okay in hard diff, too.
but normal diff is not.....

/me run
This only applies when hitcircles are under the tracks of sliders. It should be fine when hitcircles are under hitcircles that create the slider; numerous Easy and Normal difficulties do that. Nonetheless my map is still undergoing changes and this may not apply to it anymore.
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
I made some changes. However more dramatic changes will require modder opinion.

http://puu.sh/1rno6
DragonArchangel
76 posts
Joined January 2012
DragonArchangel
very good! I like this music
Jugment
38 posts
Joined December 2013
Jugment
Very enjoyable map
A small mod: hard
00:26:099 (8) - move to x:344 y:280
00:26:267 (9) - move to x:384 y:248
00:26:436 (10) - move to x:408 y:208
00:26:942 (13) - move to x:408 y:72
00:27:090 (14) - move to x392 y:32, also dont make this as the start of the combo, use the next beat instead for that
This should give it a somewhat smoother feeling, I felt like the original curve and the next combo togeather just felt a bit akward with the opposite curves
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