1. The Color of Summer - 5Key (4,47 stars, 4669 notes)

Frim4503 wrote:

all applied
dan buat yg terakhir, makanya baca creator wordnya

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi Frim~
M4M

sorry if my mod is a bit off, stopped modding for some time now xD

Greget

00:00:311 (311|4) - move to 4, to avoid the note before it keep. it's looks good for now
00:01:644 (1644|4) - move this somewhere else, ^ ^
00:02:978 (2978|4) - ^ ^
00:06:811 - http://puu.sh/l4rsI/22ce5dd9fe.jpg so that the notes seem scattered lol ( just an idea ) rearange with my own style
00:22:811 - http://puu.sh/l4rAC/67c1d59b57.jpg seem ok
00:46:978 (46978|2,47061|0) - bit uncomfortable imo. how about move 00:46:978 (46978|2) to 2 then 00:47:061 (47061|0) to 3? keep. to avoid overlap with prev pattern
02:50:394 (170394|2) - move to 1, keep. following the song. feels good like this
03:06:144 - http://puu.sh/l4qYY/2382bee5c5.jpg so that it'll be the same with 02:55:811 ( the opposite actually )
03:17:144 - http://puu.sh/l4r8j/15ed1d4308.jpg to diffentiate ^ with this. ( if you applied the above mod )
06:09:644 - http://puu.sh/l4ro2/edbd495465.jpg so that the left part doesn't look empty

The map looks really good. Some parts only feels a bit uncomfortable when seen ( happens when the outermost columns doesn't have notes for a long time xD )

hope these helps~
Good luck!

Chart Link -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/370492

Xenophilius wrote:

From Findus' Modding Queue

Layouts:

5k: |0|1|2|3|4|

Dangdutan Biar Greget

1. 00:09:144 (9144|0,9311|0) - I don't think this jack is good because these 2 notes haven't the same sound. 00:08:144 (8144|0,8311|0,8478|0,8644|0,8644|1,8811|0,8978|0,9144|0) - This jack is perfect bu the sound change from 00:09:144 - to 00:09:311 - So I suggest to move 00:09:311 (9311|0) - to |3| (watching at hitsounds you jacked a soft-hitclap2 with a soft-hitwristle2)
2. 00:22:144 - 00:22:811 - 00:23:478 - 00:24:144 - 00:24:811 - 00:25:478 - 00:26:811 (26811|2) - 00:26:811 - 00:27:478 - 00:28:144 - 00:28:811 - I think you knkow that you can add notes here, but, why you didn't? Just curious. i know about it but i'm always following drums so i didn't follow that sound
3. 00:43:478 - 00:44:811 - 00:47:478 - 00:48:811 - 00:50:144 - Add for drum? i think they not have sound for dru. they only have guitar
4. 00:50:978 - 00:51:478 - 00:51:978 - 00:52:311 - add, as loud as 00:50:811 - keep. cuz not very audible and i want to follow guitar so, only need one note
5. 01:25:978 - 01:26:311 - add, louder than other things you've layered with 2 notes. Check this part, also other chords need add, (for example 01:26:811 - and 01:26:978 - )
6. 01:50:978 - add, as loud as 01:50:811 (110811|4,110811|3) -
7. 01:53:644 - Same as above ^
8. 03:49:311 - Add, as loud as 03:49:144 (229144|2,229144|1) -
9. 04:16:144 - to 04:24:144 - same as 01:25:978 - 01:26:311 -
10. 05:06:644 (306644|4,306728|3) - No 1/4 sound here, make these LNs one 1/2 LN. that a clear 1/4 spund
11. 05:10:144 - Same as 00:43:478 -
12. 05:37:811 (337811|0,337811|3) - Forgot hitsounds?

This is my mod, I don't know if this will be useful or not, sorry if it's bad but I don't like too much mapping style based on drums.

LigerZero wrote:

KAOWKAOWKA nama diffnya ngakak...... "dangdutan biar greget"

Good Luck dech eat beatmapnya......

btw (maaf ngetimenya di map std)

di 00:42:819 (1) - dan 05:09:486 (1) - ada bagian dari lagu ini..... di 16 detiknya

SPOILER

Davin Fortune wrote:

Modding Request from my queue

5K column : 1-2-3-4-5

Greget :
00:35:311 (35311|4) - hapus, biar sama kayak pattern tangga yang diikutiny yang tidak ambil coliumn 5 dan disitu juga suaranya lebih kecil dari suara setelahnya, jad jadikan 1 not keep. buat konsitensi pattern
00:40:644 (40644|4) - hapus suaranya lebih kecil tidak sesuai dengan pattern yang kamu buat ^ i don't think so
01:01:644 - sampai 01:01:978 - tambah LN di column terserah karena ada suara noise gitu(kalau mau aja) emng suara apaan ?
01:02:144 - sampai 01:02:478 - ^ ^
01:02:478 - sampai 01:02:811 - ^ ^
01:21:978 (81978|2,82311|2) - jadikan 1 LN karena suaranya yang nyambung beda kalau suara, masalah yang sama boleh diterapkan di 04:42:811 (282811|1,283144|1 , 04:32:144 (272144|0,272478|0) - ) - itu mengikuti suara yg di buat dari note 01:22:311 (82311|1,82311|4,82394|3,82394|0,82478|1,82478|4) - dan itu terdengar ada 2 suara
01:22:311 (82311|2) - ganti column 4 biar gak dempet dempet ama LN sebelumnya, 01:22:394 (82394|3) - pindah ke column 3 (saran~) keep. karna suaranya sama. (sebenernya lo ngomong apaan ? mod diatas lo bilang suruh digabung, mod yg ini suruh buat dipindah
.-_-
02:09:978 (129978|2) - pindah ke column 2 biar gak tabrakan ama LN sebelumnya, kalaiu ada circle pindah ke column LN ini sebelumnya fix. pndah ke kolom 4
02:11:144 (131144|1) - pindah ke column 4 biar gak tabrakan ama LN sebelumnya, kalau ada circle pindah ke colum LN ini sebelumnya keep. karna suara LN ini sama kaya suara LN sebelumnya
02:12:978 (132978|3) - pindah ke column 2 alasan:^ ^sama
tetap cuman yang kayak 04:16:644 - 04:16:978 - ini dijadikan 1 circle karena suaranya yang kalah ama suara sebelum dan setelahnya(ada 2 circle)(saran saja :#) keep. buat konsistensi dan volume suaranya sama IMO
04:17:811 - sampai 04:18:811 - sama^ ^sama
04:20:478 - sama^ ^sama
04:21:478 - sama^ ^sama
04:23:144 - sama^ ^sama
Prob^ : kalau masalah consitency ya bagus tetep ajalah, abis review yang awal juga sama, kalau mau capek ganti ke 1 circle ^ yg pasti tetep

Modding Done~
Star udh dikasi tuh

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Mod Via PM
Col:1,2,3,4,5
Sorry i cant find my problem in this map...to me it's already good

Dangdutan Biar Greget

00:52:894 (52894|2) - move to 2? why ? i can't move it cuz it will destroy the pattern 00:52:811 (52811|0,52894|2,52978|0,52978|4,53061|2,53144|4,53144|0,53228|2,53311|4) -
00:53:061 (53061|2) - to 4? balance the column ^ same cuz 00:52:644 (52644|3,52644|1) - already in col. 2 and 4
01:09:061 (69061|4,69061|2) - ghost note? i dint hear any drum at there...if hit hat why double?
01:19:728 (79728|4,79728|1) - ^
01:21:978 (81978|2,82311|2) - why u seperate the LN? the LN sound doest stop when i hear i think cuz the LN follow with the notes 01:22:311 (82311|1,82311|4,82394|0,82394|3,82478|1,82478|4) -

also this song almost same with dangdut song XD i know it. that's why i mapped this song
Good Luck XD
+1 Star

ExUsagi wrote:

what a quick progress @_@
i still unable to get myself online for modding, so expect some more delays! good luck w/

Kruzon wrote:

aaa 1-5 let's go

mod

02:55:811 (175811|1) - move to 5
02:55:978 (175978|2,175978|4,176144|4,176144|2) - shift them 1 time to the left
02:56:311 (176311|1) - move to 3
02:56:978 (176978|0) - move to 3
02:57:144 (177144|2) - move to 1

03:00:811 (180811|4,180811|2,180894|1,180894|3,180978|2,180978|0) - not a suitable pattern mirror for 03:00:311 (180311|2,180311|0,180394|3,180394|1,180478|2,180478|4) - since both relied on different rhythm, suggest:
03:00:811 (180811|2,180894|1) - shift them 1 time to the left
03:00:978 (180978|0) - move to 2 and
03:00:978 (180978|2) - move to 5
at this point, you should noticed that 03:00:811 (180811|4,180811|1,180894|0,180894|3,180978|4,180978|1) - and 03:01:144 (181144|4,181144|1,181228|3,181228|0,181311|1,181311|4) - follow same rhythm, therefore i suggest you mirror this 03:01:144 (181144|4,181144|1,181228|3,181228|0,181311|1,181311|4) - by Ctrl+H them

03:01:478 (181478|3,181478|2,181478|4) - these belong to the left side, pitch wise, Ctrl + H them
03:01:644 (181644|0) - you may move this to 5 for flow

03:06:478 (186478|4,186478|3) - not fitting for a dual note, i suggest 03:06:478 (186478|4) - move to 1 so it can act as counterpart of 03:06:144 (186144|1,186144|4) -
03:06:644 (186644|2,186644|0,186811|0,186811|2) - rearrange them

03:16:811 (196811|2,196811|0) - vocal chorus of 03:16:478 (196478|1,196478|3) - , implement repetition by having them align on the same column, suggest:
03:16:811 (196811|0,196811|2) - shift 1 time to the right
03:16:978 (196978|1) - move to 3

03:17:311 (197311|2,197311|3,197478|2,197478|3) - not exactly a jack notes, mind you, both have slightly different pitch, suggest:
03:17:311 (197311|3) - move to 2

03:21:644 (201644|2,201644|4,201728|3,201728|1,201811|2,201811|0,201978|3,201978|1,202144|2,202144|0,202228|1,202228|3,202311|2,202311|4) - i think i've already mention the same thought about this pattern, it's up to you to change or not since it's your map after all

03:27:978 (207978|3,207978|4,208144|2,208144|3,208144|4) - not consistent for this part 03:29:311 (209311|0,209311|1,209478|4,209478|2,209478|3) -
might as well, Ctrl + H this 03:28:144 (208144|4,208144|2,208144|3) -
03:28:311 (208311|1,208311|0) - Ctrl + H as well for better flow arrangement
for upcoming pattern variation, suggest:
03:28:978 (208978|2,208978|1) - shift 1 time to the left
03:29:144 (209144|3,209144|4) - shift 2 times to the left, you'll get this 03:28:311 (208311|4,208311|3,208478|2,208478|3,208978|0,208978|1,209144|1,209144|2) - will consider for now

04:13:894 (253894|1) - there should be a note here as part of the drum roll, but adding this will also changes pattern surrounding it so here's a suggestion:
04:13:811 (253811|1) - move to 1
04:13:644 (253644|0) - move to 3
04:13:728 (253728|1) - add a note on column 2
04:13:894 (253894|1) - you may delete this, not relevant
idk what are you talking about 04:13:894 (253894|1) - in here i already make a double note for drum.
04:13:811 (253811|2,253811|1,253978|0,253978|2,254144|4,254144|1) - this for drum i use double
ok i'll stop here. Good luck!

Takane6 wrote:

hai o/
ene here as m4m req with persephone

[General]
Offset : 145 should be 152

collumn 1 2 3 4 5

DANGDUT = Gendang yang berbunyi Duut

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00:00:145 (145|4,311|4) - 00:01:478 (1478|4,1644|4) - 00:02:811 (2811|4,2978|4) - the placement is consistent in here until u make it different at here 00:04:144 (4144|4,4311|2) -
^ which is inconsistent in pattern placing... consider to make it the same... it's becoz some strange ides from other people. so, fix this
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this >>>
00:10:144 (10144|0,10144|4) -
and this 00:10:644 (10644|1,10644|0) -
and this 03:11:644 (191644|3,191644|2,191728|1,191728|0,191894|4,191894|3,191978|1,191978|2) - are clap sound, right? then this > 00:10:394 (10394|2,10561|2) - should be 2 note the same... okay. all clap will have double
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then this > 00:10:394 (10394|2,10561|2) - should be 2 note the same...
and this too:
01:57:061 (117061|3,117228|1) -
00:52:811 (52811|0,53061|2,53311|4) -
02:07:644 (127644|0,127728|2,127894|2,127978|4) -
02:18:311 (138311|3,138394|2,138561|2,138644|1) -
02:27:728 (147728|2,147894|2) -
02:39:730 (159730|1,159896|3,159980|2) -
03:32:978 (212978|0,213061|2,213228|2,213311|4) -
04:05:061 (245061|3,245228|3) -
04:14:394 (254394|3,254561|3) -
04:36:978 (276978|3,277061|2,277228|2,277311|1) -
04:46:394 (286394|2,286561|2) -
but if u said because there is a kick so there is a difference with clap... you hve to do the exact opposite as ive said in above
means this >>> 00:20:311 (20311|3,20311|1,20394|4,20394|0,20478|1,20478|3) - should 1 note stream too for comparison with this kick 00:20:644 (20644|2,20644|4,20811|3,20811|1) -
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00:42:311 (42311|1,42394|3,42561|1,42644|3) - 1 note only for clap because for a difference with the kick,
then you hve to make only 1 note stream at here >> 00:41:644 (41644|2,41644|0,41728|1,41728|3,41811|2,41811|4) - because there is a different with the kick at here >>> 00:41:478 (41478|1,41478|4,41978|1,41978|3) -
and it means make the same as here too >>> 01:02:978 (62978|0,62978|2,63061|1,63061|3,63144|4,63144|2) - make i t to only 1 note stream
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01:06:728 (66728|2) - uh... delete this.. there is no sound at all it's for guitar sound foloowing dat LN. i replace it with note cuz i don't want use 1/4 LN
01:09:061 (69061|3) - uh... delete this note too.. there is no sound at all
01:12:061 (72061|4,72061|2) - wew 2 note @,@ there is no kick nor clap in here too... no sound... delete both of this note (you dont even add any hitsound in there too) fix. idk why this become double -_-
01:22:394 (82394|0,82394|3) - wew 2 note again... there is no kick nor clap in here too... no sound... delete both of this note (you dont even add any hitsound in there too)
02:47:728 (167728|4,167728|1) - wew 2 note again... there is no kick nor clap in here too... no sound... delete both of this note (you dont even add any hitsound in there too)
04:31:728 (271728|2,271728|4) - wew 2 note again... there is no kick nor clap in here too... no sound... delete both of this note (you dont even add any hitsound in there too)
05:03:728 (303728|3,303728|0) - wew 2 note again... there is no kick nor clap in here too... no sound... delete both of this note (you dont even add any hitsound in there too)
05:06:394 (306394|0,306394|3) - wew 2 note again... there is no kick nor clap in here too... no sound... delete both of this note (you dont even add any hitsound in there too)

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01:25:811 (85811|3,85811|1,86144|1,86144|3,86478|1,86478|3) - no sound clap sound that worth for 2 note in here seriously... dont make additional sound from hitsound as guide for make the note that much of notes if there is no sound from the music itself please... except you doing a KEYSOUND MAP
01:27:144 (87144|2,87144|4,87811|4,87811|2) -
01:28:478 (88478|3,88478|1,89144|1,89144|3) -
01:29:811 (89811|1,89811|3,90478|1,90478|3) -
01:31:144 (91144|2,91144|0,91811|0,91811|2) -
01:32:478 (92478|2,92478|4,92811|0,92811|2,93144|4,93144|2) -
01:33:811 (93811|0,93811|3,94144|1,94144|3,94478|1,94478|3) -
04:16:478 (256478|2,256478|4,256811|0,256811|2,257144|2,257144|4) -
04:17:811 (257811|2,257811|4,258144|2,258144|0,258478|2,258478|4) -
04:19:144 (259144|4,259144|2,259478|2,259478|0,259811|4,259811|2) -
04:20:478 (260478|2,260478|4,260811|2,260811|0,261144|2,261144|4) -
04:21:811 (261811|4,261811|2,262144|2,262144|0,262478|2,262478|4) -
04:23:144 (263144|2,263144|4,263478|2,263478|0,263811|4,263811|2) -
again... yes... there is a clap sound... but its not worth for two note as the heavy drum sound (you can hear if the clap sound is a fade sound right?)... delete 1 or even 2 note of it
dont make hitsound as a pinpoint for executing the numbers of note, EXCEPT its a KEYSOUND MAP well, i will wait other people for this change cuz i need more opinions from other people
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05:06:478 (306478|1,306644|1,306811|1,306978|1) - uhh this can affect gameplay because it is a 4 jacks in a row
move this 05:06:644 (306644|1) - to collumn 1 to prevent that
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started from here : 05:52:144 - 06:13:478 -
the pattern in here is still the same with from this 05:30:811 - until 05:52:144 -
while you know both timing hve a different atmosphere... consider to make this (from 05:52:144 - 06:13:478 - ) to be easier than this (from 05:30:811 - until 05:52:144 - )

hmm i hope the mod is good :'D
anyway thats all from me
good luck >w</
ene out o/

BilliumMoto wrote:

Hallooo

There is only one diff? cool

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Mod is divided into topics in the order which they appear in the map

[The K pattern]
00:08:151 (8151|4,8151|0) - is this K neccessary? I can't tell if it stands for anything and causes some awkward anchors in column 1 yes, it neccessary for some random stuff xD
03:20:151 (200151|4,200151|0,200318|4,200318|1) - On second thought, these anchors are actually kinda fun. I don't care anymore haha like i said, it just some random stuff

[Empty parts]
00:20:818 (20818|3) - Why not make the burst like 00:21:151 (21151|4,21193|3) start here instead? This empty beat feels out of place in playing.
06:12:818 (372818|3) - ^ adding cuz i think it make sense

04:24:151 (264151|1) - An entire empty measure, consider putting an LN here weel, i will keep this part empty cuz people need rest, right ?

[Layering consistency]
00:42:318 (42318|2,42318|1,42651|2,42651|1) - not sure why these are doubles, make them singles because lack of sound relative to the snare at 00:42:401 (42401|3,42401|4)
01:46:318 (106318|2,106318|4) - While we're on the topic, ^ i already make this single before, but then someone tell me to make this double since it will look consistent

01:25:818 (85818|1,85818|3) - Dont think this should be a double, especially compared to 01:25:985 (85985|0,85985|2) and others it already double :/
01:26:485 (86485|3,86485|1) - Same as above ^. You may argue there is a clap here, but there is also a clap 01:26:151 (86151|1,86151|3) , so keeping this a double means the other must be a triple. Your call.
The above two points apply for the next 7 measures as well
04:16:485 (256485|2,256485|4) - Same issue with this section as discussed above

06:01:651 (361651|0,361651|4,361735|3,361735|1) - Shouldn't be doubles sorry but clap=double

[Ghost Notes]
00:52:901 (52901|3,52901|2) - ghost note? delete, i don't hear anything here. change to single cuz this actually a sound for guitar
01:04:068 (64068|0) - also ghost note, i dont hear anything here remove
05:51:651 (351651|0,351651|1) - ^ this is for clap sound

[Random thought]
00:31:651 (31651|3,31651|1) - This pattern should be fine, but consider players who play with left thumb. This bracket is kinda harsh. but it should be fine otherwise. keep. i don't care about player that play using left thumb cuz i never use thumb to play this game xD

[LNs]
01:17:318 (77318|2,77401|1,85818|1,85818|3) - This is the first time and only time these shorter LNs make an appearance around here, but the sound to which they are mapped to has been occuring for the last 16 measures; it feels inconsistent. change to notes to make other parts consistent
04:58:651 (298651|0,298735|1) - The only other time these short LNs occur ^
04:58:651 (298651|0,298735|1,306651|4,306735|3) - Shouldn't this be a single LN? For some reason you do this one differently when it should be just the same as all the other LNs you've made so far this map. ^ fix with same above method but please hear it carefully if i use LN it should 1/4 LN

[Playability]
02:39:651 (159651|3,159651|2,159735|2,159735|1,159901|3,159901|2,159985|2,159985|1) - Extreme difficulty spike. Don't tell me i'm supposed to alternate thumbs, because no normal player will be able to switch gears that quickly and realize they're supposed to alternate thumbs here unless they really take a closer look at the pattern in the editor like we can. (Besides, actually pulling off the alternating thumb jack like this is quite difficult in itself. You try combo-ing this part of the map.) i don't care it's your problem anywat xD. cuz i'm didn't use thumb, and i single tapping this using my index finger

Just want to point out that every time you have a pattern like this, 03:47:651 (227651|4,227651|3,227818|4) , where you're forcing a finger to press, lift, and press again in a short amount of time while the adjacent finger is held down, is quite difficult. Skilled players will be able to handle it, but this just might be one of those awkward patterns you should put some effort into ironing out. i'm just letting some normal player a challeng xD

Good luck in da rank
M4M me pls you want M4M ? just give me your map and i will try to mod it. (sent it via pm)

-BANGKE- wrote:

pocotan - Summer Wing 2013

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Greget boz

- 00:52:318 (52318|0,52401|1,52485|2) - ctrl + j?
- 00:53:485 (53485|2,53485|0,53485|1) - pindahin 1 col ke kanan, 00:52:985 (52985|0,53151|0,53318|0,53485|0) - kebanyakan :^
- 00:53:651 (53651|3) - pindahin ke |5|, 00:53:735 (53735|2,53818|3) - ctrl j, 00:53:985 (53985|2) - pindah ke |4|
- 01:04:151 (64151|3) - pindah ke |1|
- 01:08:651 (68651|0) - menurut gw nih end di sini deh 01:09:151 - keep. karna suara itu udh disambung ama 01:08:985 (68985|4,69068|3,69151|2) - jdi, ga perlu ditambahin LN
- 01:09:068 (69068|3) - ghost? ga ada suara apa" nih coba dengerin lagi baik"
- 02:40:318 (160318|1) - pindahin ke |1|, 02:39:985 (159985|1,160151|1,160318|1,160485|1) - kebanyakan :^
- 06:02:651 (362651|0) - mending pindahin ke |2|

Asherz007 wrote:

My ordering for actually doing stuff now is kinda not there lol so apologies for the small delay.

Welcome back to the mapping scene xD

[General]
5k wew

Almost feel like bg isn't the best one that fits...

AIMod is dumb Hope your metadata is ok

totally need to learn wcf hitsounding lol

default hitfinish sounds a little too quiet I think?

There's one note in the .osb file. Not quite sure what you'd want to do with that anyway, so like, move the hitsound back into the playfield.

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But it's October

wew old-style mapping with your traditional odhp9 lul

Kinda wondering why quite a fair amount of 1/4 sounds aren't mapped. Maybe a personal choice idk just wanted to know, since you're really lowering your options in pattern varieties by ignoring them. Which is a little bit of a shame, to be honest.

Stuff in the list probably reoccurs throughout the diff, but I'm doing this at 4 am in the morning so I might not spot absolutely everything.

1. 00:20:818 - Concept related, I guess. Firstly, not too big of a fan of the pattern going from a fairly comfy 1/2 to a 1/8 burst. Feel like the spike is a little too large for that. Otherwise, the pattern itself isn't really that comfortable, so just gonna drop the suggestion of changing it to something that is. Aside from that, it's the only time you actually use 1/8 in the entire diff apart from the end, which is really weird, to be honest. change it to ln thing since idk what to do
2. 00:31:401 - I feel like this shouldn't be left unmapped, given how you've just mapped the previous 7/4 or so since there's the same 1/4 sound present here.
3. 00:46:068 - missing note(s) for the tune thing(?) added note with same sound
4. 00:51:401 - ^ (you get the idea I guess. Might be a reason I've it's constantly not done so I'll stop mentioning these.)
5. 02:08:151 (128151|2,128485|3,129651|2,129985|3,130318|4) - Can I just ask why these are 3/4 instead of 1/2 or 1/1? I mean it feels a little counterintuitive, made a little worse by the excruciatingly high OD. (if it's for the echo which occupies the last 1/4 I'd strongly recommend against mapping that and shortening the LNs instead.) i choose to make it 1/1 instead of shorten it
6. 02:27:901 (147901|4) - This looks a little bit too awkward for the right hand perhaps? Maybe move into col 2.
7. 02:39:985 (159985|4,160068|1) - I feel like these are being mapped to the same thing, so it just comes off a little odd to me. Mind explaining them? (and like every other time this kinda thing happens lol) i will change it to 1/4 ln to follow the current sound. i believe someone in the past told me that this is the correct pattern lmao
8. 02:40:151 - Missing one soft-hitwhistle2?
9. 02:50:235 - I feel like if 02:49:985 (169985|2) has a note then there should be one here too.
10. 02:50:818 (170818|4,170818|2) - How come 20% rather than 30? It's the first time I've noticed, but you've consistently used it like this throughout the entire map, so I'm wondering as to why. cuz its triple (?) i mean like the other pattern its different, double is 30%, meanwhile triple is 20%. so all note get a 60% in total
11. 03:32:235 (212235|0,212401|4,212568|1) - Why are these here? If you think about saying snare, the follow-up question to that is why aren't they 1/8 bursts, since that would be more accurate... will fix this
12. 03:33:401 - no note here?
13. 03:42:818 (222818|0) - This LN appears to be covering more than one thing, and I'd rather like it not to since it doesn't really make sense layering-wise. removed
14. 03:44:151 (224151|1,224151|2,224151|4,224151|3) - wait wait wait why is there suddenly a 4-note chord?
15. 04:05:068 (245068|3,245151|4,245235|2) - How come these are only singles compared to doubles on several other occasions? (Personally, I would prioritise making these doubles rather than putting the LNs in, but that's just me.)
16. 04:22:818 (262818|4) - Not too fond of this measure being left blank when there's still so much in the audio going on...
17. 04:26:818 (266818|0,266818|2,266818|4,266818|1) - I'm not properly understanding the usage of these quads, I swear.
18. 06:01:568 (361568|2,361568|1) - Missing hitsounds
19. 06:12:818 - again, feel like the sudden 1/8 usage is really bizarre, more so that the jump happens at the very end of the map and generates an inconsistency in terms of following stuff for layering.

I mean, it looks nice aesthetically, but in terms of being varied per se, it suffers a little due to neglecting quite a lot of the 1/4 things, which kinda makes the map a little underwhelming. Wait, I've said this already. Must be tired...

Alright I'm not asleep yet, that's good...

Anyhow, I'll try not to lose this map somewhere (database frequently corrupts these days for no reason), but let me know whenever you've responded n stuff.

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part 2

remove that .osb if you haven't already... (because I still see it) deleted


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It's November now, even less like summer lol

Just wanting to check those LN lengths again I suppose. (Since I asked for a change, they look a little inconsistent in places perhaps.) You ok with the LN lengths/placements etc being different in each kiai? Looks intentional but wanted to confirm.

(Eg 02:09:651 (129651|2,129985|3,130318|4) - and 03:34:985 (214985|1,215318|2,215651|4) - ) i fix all the inconsistent LN and leave the rest same entire the map

There's a couple of inherited timing points that appear to be unsnapped; pretty sure those aren't intentional?

1. 01:28:151 (88151|0,88151|4) - are these meant to be at 30%? I mean, 01:26:818 (86818|4,86818|0) has them at 20% each and 01:27:318 (87318|2) has 30% for a single one. 60% might be a little too much. i change it to 45% and leave the double has 60%. tell me if it still not fit (im not sure about my ear :/ )
2. 02:27:985 (147985|3,147985|0,147985|1) - I... don't remember these minijacks being here lol. Kinda feels a little unsuited for the map? (iirc you use this minijack thing only 2 or 3 times throughout the map) Might wanna continue the rolly thing you've got going on? The LN should be enough to indicate the end of the roll. re-arange
3. 02:50:818 (170818|4,170818|2,170818|3) - I guess I'll reiterate myself on this point with a little more explanation. One of the notes here contains the hitfinish rather than a sample import, which has its volume independently controlled by the timing point. Only the other two have the imports which are at 20%, so you end up with a 40% volume kick rather than 60%. change all to 30% each note
4. 03:30:818 - missing hitfinish? added
5. 03:42:985 (222985|2,223151|4,223151|3,223151|2,223235|1,223318|4,223318|2,223401|3,223485|1,223485|4,223485|2) - col 1 looks a little neglected lol (especially as there's also a fairly long anchor in col 3 that doesn't look too pleasant.) lol i dont remember changing this
6. 04:17:485 (257485|0,257485|4) - as earlier point at 01:28:151.
7. 04:46:568 (286568|4,286568|3,286651|3,286651|4) - as with 02:27:985.
8. 04:56:818 (296818|4) - hitsound disappeared I think maybe :/
9. 04:58:651 (298651|1,298651|0,298735|1) - This doesn't look too comfortable, especially as it's just in one hand... i dont remember making this....
10. 05:19:985 (319985|4) - I'd rather this be in col 2 than 5 since 05:19:651 (319651|2,319735|3,319818|2,319818|4,319901|3,319985|2,319985|4) looks extremely uncomfortable and doesn't really need to be. change it to something simple
11. 06:01:985 (361985|4) - Might be better in col 1?

Hope to god I haven't missed anything...

I mean, if you're stuck for patterns, it might be a good idea to ask about and see what other people think. (The mirrored patterns work fine as a gimmick to be honest. Trying to remember who else specialises in 5K though...)

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