1. Delis' Normalだけコンボカラーが初期状態です。他のdiffと合わせちゃいましょう。
2. guestの方の名前をtagに追加。　'Delis' 'Alyce' 'nasya' 'n_a_s_y_a' (nasyaさんの譜面見たらどちらも付いてたので二つとも)
3. tagにyuuheiなど色々追加をしておきましょう。そこらへんは詳しいと思うのでb

1. hitsoundが無いので付けましょう。
2. 02:26:100 (5) - 最低難易度でこれはちょっと危ないかなと個人的に思います。vocalをfollowという事なので、こちらの方がまだ無難な気がします。
   
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3. 02:27:100 (1,4) - switch NC.
4. 02:43:300 (1,2) - ^

1. nothing.

1. 00:50:300 (4,5) - same slider more seems good. (curve condition)
2. 01:19:900 (5) - umm, this flow. try move (x:0 y:96) more playable and fun imo.
3. 02:53:100 (3) - move center? i think end is (x:256 y:192) fit.

1. 01:46:300 (2) - (7)とちょっと被るのが気になったので3gridほど左に移動させたいです。
2. 02:42:900 (3) - ^ 同じく左か下に3gridほど移動させたいです。

1. 00:46:700 (5,6) - ここらへんの配置がプレイしてちょっとやりにくい違和感あったので提案を。 (5)を次の(1)と重なるように（x:200 y:187)に移動。 (6)を1/4sliderに変えて画像のように。試してみてください。
   
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1. Tagとかまだつけてないだけだよね。

1. 01:07:510 (1,2,3) - 今のままでも通ると思うけど01:08:110 (2,3) - の部分sliderにしませんか；
   CircleでとっちゃうとNormal+より難しくなっちゃうかなって思いました。
2. 01:12:910 (2,3) - ここも同じです。後半サビの部分も。
3. 02:26:110 (5) - 2回Reverseしてあるのあんまり好きじゃない
   02:26:110 (5) - Reverseなくして02:26:711 - にNCつけたCircle置いたほうがvocalのはじめの部分にNC付けれるし個人的にはこっちの方が好きです。
   

1. 00:45:510 (2,3) - pattern的にDS1.80xだと思うけどﾄﾞｳｶﾅ
2. 00:47:110 (2,3,4,5,6) - 連打の前後の部分DS1.80xで取ってもいいと思う。
   似たようなパートだと1.40xと1.80xで分けられてるけど00:45:310 - ~00:48:110 - がDS一定で少し一貫性に欠けるかなって思いました。
3. 01:09:510 (2) - もうちょいblanket意識して曲げたい
   01:09:510 (2) - ->01:09:910 (3) - の流れが急な感じするから曲げて曲げて曲げたい
4. 01:18:910 (1) - NCはずして01:19:510 (3) - ここにNC
   vocal的にも図形的にもここにNC付けた方が合うと思うし図形も見やすいと思う。
   2番とラストサビも同じ。
5. 02:24:310 (1,2,4) - どうせならここで二等辺三角形作らない？
   雑だけど
   
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1. volumeが最初以外60%固定なので他diffに合わせてみたりで調整した方がいいと思います。

1. 00:02:710 (1) - x:270 y:185 nazi nazi n
2. 00:46:710 (6,1,2) - ここのspacing一定にしない？
   特に理由は~~ないけど、0.1xしか違わないんなら合わせたほうがッて思う
   00:47:110 (1,8) - x:241 y:361
3. 01:25:110 (5) - vocalの音01:25:410 - で切れてると思うからbackの音拾った方が合いそう。
   

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1. nazi fixed!
2. 2個目のやつはちょっと検討してみます、実は前のパターンと合わせて配置している部分なので
   http://puu.sh/kGYnO/f46fce2c8e.jpg
   ここと、
   http://puu.sh/kGYp0/16621412e8.jpg
   ここで、２個の台形にしている感じです。
3. 最後のはボーカルフォローなので今のままでも問題ないと思いました！

P o M u T a wrote:

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[Alyce's Hard]

1. 00:50:300 (4,5) - same slider more seems good. (curve condition) umm sorry keep it. i think that there is not the need to change
2. 01:19:900 (5) - umm, this flow. try move (x:0 y:96) more playable and fun imo. keep it. i like the present form
3. 02:53:100 (3) - move center? i think end is (x:256 y:192) fit.

keep it 02:51:310 (4,1,3) - A triangle is made with these

litoluna wrote:

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.

[Alyce's Hard]

1. 00:45:510 (2,3) - pattern的にDS1.80xだと思うけどﾄﾞｳｶﾅ ボーカルの音が弱くなっていくところなので1.4xのままで
2. 00:47:110 (2,3,4,5,6) - 連打の前後の部分DS1.80xで取ってもいいと思う。fix
   似たようなパートだと1.40xと1.80xで分けられてるけど00:45:310 - ~00:48:110 - がDS一定で少し一貫性に欠けるかなって思いました。
3. 01:09:510 (2) - もうちょいblanket意識して曲げたい　曲げすぎると蕁麻疹でそうになるのでkeep
   01:09:510 (2) - ->01:09:910 (3) - の流れが急な感じするから曲げて曲げて曲げたい 曲げたくない...
4. 01:18:910 (1) - NCはずして01:19:510 (3) - ここにNC
   vocal的にも図形的にもここにNC付けた方が合うと思うし図形も見やすいと思う。
   2番とラストサビも同じ。 iine! fix
5. 02:24:310 (1,2,4) - どうせならここで二等辺三角形作らない？
   雑だけど
   
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fix

mod arigato!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/0ardrr18jmqk0 ... D.osu?dl=0

gl~~~~~~~~~~~

Asahina Momoko wrote:

BG超きれい・・・・

Alyce's Hard

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  Bonjour w

1. 02:10:710 (3) - 02:09:910 (1) - と同じ形にしてみませんか？ k
2. 02:14:710 - 1番みたいにkiai フラッシュいかがですか ok
3. 02:28:510 (4,5) - 入れ替え？

入れ替えない！

がんばってください！good luck

Satellite wrote:

"" Yuii's Pro kds shooter ""

Yuii- wrote:

Satellite wrote:

"" Yuii's Pro kds shooter ""

Sorry, I was just stalking this map hahaha

Satellite wrote:

mod please

Yuii- wrote:

Satellite wrote:

mod please

aye, mom!

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  Normalでもこのmapsetでは最低難易度なので、サビなどで多用されている1/2の音取りでdqされる可能性があります。これらを減らすことを推奨します。

1. 01:07:510 (1,2,3) - 01:08:710 (4,5) - 01:12:310 (1,2,3) - 02:14:710 (1,2) - 02:15:910 (3,4) - 02:19:510 (1,2,3) - 02:24:310 (1,2,3) - 02:27:910 (7,8) - 02:33:910 (1,2,3) - 02:35:110 (4,5,6) - 02:37:110 (8,9) - 02:38:710 (1,2,3) - 02:42:310 (8,1,2) - 02:48:310 (1,2,3) -

1. Very, very, very nice mapset!
2. You want to remove "no" from tags since it's already in the title.
3. soft-hitclap.wav has a 2ms delay. It's easy fix, but you can ask me if you don't know how.

1. Hello!
2. Can I recommend you to add a Kiai?
3. 01:41:510 (2) - Full Clap intentional? aaand, 01:42:310 (3) - you forgot to hitsound the tail?
4. 02:43:310 (1) - Sure this beat is important and I wouldn't ignore it either, but using only one object in the middle of two sliders only once in the map is quite unexpected.

1. If you compare the amount of objects used in Normal+ and on the Hard, there's almost no similarity, this may cause a tremendous gap respectively with Delis' diff. Although I wouldn't call it as "unrankable", I will strongly recommend you to re-name the difficulty to "Hard" due to the patterns and density this map has overall.
   Also, you want to take a look at your SV in case you want to keep the name. You're using the same as in Hard, but at least in the other difficulty there are some SV changes, that's the only thing that I can find as a difference.
2. 01:07:510 - 02:14:710 - I really disagree with this Kiais. First of all, they are inconsistent. Of course, you can keep them, but trigger some random Kiais because of one important beat is quite unnecessary. If you want, you could Kiai the whole section, since the one that is full-y Kiai'd 02:33:910 - it's literally THE SAME that the others.
3. 00:17:910 (7) - NC should be here, ay. And I'll add another combo on 00:19:510 (5) - for stanza.

1. The random Kiais.
2. 01:13:510 (1) - Probably this NC is too random, but I don't know if you want to keep it and swap it with 01:13:910 (1) - because if you compare it with 01:19:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - you'll notice this is the same. The same goes to 02:20:710 (1) - and 02:39:910 (1) - .
3. 01:41:510 (2) - Yeah, I know. Wait Alyce, what are you doing? AAAAAH, don't punch me. Seriously, I swear I know 01:41:110 (1,2,3) - that spacing isn't that bad, but it's quite ruining the pace of the section. Take a look at the ds you're using on this pattern with the others, and especially with 01:46:710 (3,4,5) - . You are using that 2,4x ds only for new combos, as seen 01:47:910 (6,1) - 01:50:310 (6,1) - , so don't do that ;w;
4. 01:51:510 (3) - Same, to be honest, try ctrl+g'ing it or something.

1. The random Kiais.
2. 00:38:310 (6) - Normal-hitwhistle intentional? I'd rather prefer a Soft-hitwshitle.

1. Teach me mapping... seriously.
2. HP8 is too much, lower it, please
3. The random Kiais.
4. 00:02:710 (1,2) - 00:07:510 (1,2) - Any reason behind these being mapped so differently?
5. 01:19:010 - For the sake of consistency, you should add a circle here to make this a triplet instead. Just see what you've mapped so far in this part and you'll notice why.

Yuii- wrote:

Hiii, mom! Yo o/

1. Very, very, very nice mapset!
2. You want to remove "no" from tags since it's already in the title.
3. soft-hitclap.wav has a 2ms delay. It's easy fix, but you can ask me if you don't know how.

i will fix it when normal and hard . lunatic diff fix your mod

and add "kawashiro nitori" to tag


[Normal-]

1. If you compare the amount of objects used in Normal+ and on the Hard, there's almost no similarity, this may cause a tremendous gap respectively with Delis' diff. Although I wouldn't call it as "unrankable", I will strongly recommend you to re-name the difficulty to "Hard" due to the patterns and density this map has overall.
   Also, you want to take a look at your SV in case you want to keep the name. You're using the same as in Hard, but at least in the other difficulty there are some SV changes, that's the only thing that I can find as a difference.
   
   No changed diff name. Yes. you are right. setting are same as Hard diff. but all distance snap is unified with uniformity So I think not "Hard" difficult. Normal+ more better diff name ! What's do you think =w=?
   
   
2. 01:07:510 - 02:14:710 - I really disagree with this Kiais. First of all, they are inconsistent. Of course, you can keep them, but trigger some random Kiais because of one important beat is quite unnecessary. If you want, you could Kiai the whole section, since the one that is full-y Kiai'd 02:33:910 - it's literally THE SAME that the others.
   
   Ehh. It's fine imo >_<
   
   
3. 00:17:910 (7) - NC should be here, ay. And I'll add another combo on 00:19:510 (5) - for stanza.
   
   Yeah. you are right. But no changed. Because some distance opens, I want to let you display Follow points.

[I will name this difficulty as ukagib, try to find out why]

1. Teach me mapping... seriously. hahaha :3
2. HP8 is too much, lower it, please I want to keep HP8 ;w; please! please please please.........
3. The random Kiais.
4. 00:02:710 (1,2) - 00:07:510 (1,2) - Any reason behind these being mapped so differently? Yeah. I change a pattern intentionally here =w=b
5. 01:19:010 - For the sake of consistency, you should add a circle here to make this a triplet instead. Just see what you've mapped so far in this part and you'll notice why. Fixed changed pattern! nice catch <3

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appleeaterx wrote:

Hey Satellite! Hi appleeaterx chan ~ :3
from PM request :3/

no kds needed

:idea: General

* Please make the samplesets consistent with each other in N a s y a's Lunatic and Aesthetics. http://puu.sh/kQdmy/08134730b0.png
* Delis' Normal could use higher HP drain. The difficulty is already easy enough by itself and 2 is a bit low for a Normal diff... tho it's completely up to you guys.

i will fix it when lunatic diff fix your mod
and Delis' Normal HP drain2 are fine to me. is it must be fixed =w= ?


Cool stuff, call me back \o/

appleeaterx wrote:

N a s y a's Lunatic

* 01:55:110 (7,8,1) - While I like the idea of this pattern, the jump at (8,1) is spaced really low compared to the overall mood of this difficulty. This is really weird, because the strongest note - the cymbal - is placed on (1). On many patterns you did put the largest jump at the downbeat, such as 01:45:510 (8,9,1) - 00:47:910 (6,7,1) - etc. which makes it even more confusing.

Changed circle to slider.