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Exote wrote:

halouw m4m thingy

hophop nice video :^o

Normal

00:44:616 (1) - remove nc
00:46:923 (4) - add nc
00:49:231 (1) - remove nc
00:51:539 (4) - nc plz
with applying the changes above, you basically get that part consistent with the same part before the 2nd kiai
ya i guess i did lose track of nc consistency
03:05:385 (1) - idk bout this nc, it really does emphasize this part unlike the rest 2 like for a final, u can leave it as well leaving it

Pain (?) - think you can get a sexier name xD heh

01:11:154 (5) - nc?
02:25:000 (5) - same?
03:04:231 (5) - saaame?
03:22:693 (5) - same? same
the NCs above, for emphasizing the vocals
00:50:962 (7,1,2) - this is a bit confusing imo, 1 lies exactly on top of 2, but there's a liiil gap between those in terms of gameplay and they are the same nc, while 7 and 1 are two different NCs and yet there isn't any gap between em, I hope u understood that, but overall it might not be a problem
same goes for 02:04:808 (7,1,2) yeah this is intended flow

That was it, moostly NC stuff (99%) that's one decent set tho, gogogo! 8-)
nice nc
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  • Normal



    I didn't really find anything wrong with the normal map. I even silver SS'd it with all mods but flashlight lmao
    However, here are a one thing that feels a little off, but it's just my opinion

    00:57:308 (1) - Try smoothing out this slider a little bit if you can :)
  • Heart Attack's Hard



    01:43:173 (3,4) - This isn't a perfect stack like previous sliders like this such as 01:28:173 (1,2) - Please consider fixing this.

    02:59:327 (2,3) - Same thing happens here, but now I'm assuming it's just a sudden change in the map you put in, so I guess it's ok..

    Other than this, nothing noticeable that needs to be mentioned as far as I can see. Nice map :D
  • Pain



    01:04:808 (5,6,7,8) - Again, streams like this are allowed, and I see them a lot, but consider decreasing the distance snap a bit, and moving them closer together. This goes for some of the other streams on the map as well.

    01:13:606 (4) - CTRL + G. Flip it, and rotate it a little. The position it's currently at is very harsh, and it's not giving any hint that there's a stream behind it whatsoever. 02:27:452 (4) - Same thing happens here and here 02:57:453 (4) but if it's happening this much, it might also be the nature of the map since it's called pain in the first place XD

    Overall, this is a great mapset! I hope it gets ranked ;)

posted
hi m4m we talked about in game

[easy]
00:36:539 (6) - make this a reverse slider, just like 00:35:385 (5) -
00:52:404 (3) - I think the flow would be better if you had it curved more outwards

01:34:808 - add clap
01:37:116 - ^
02:44:039 (4) - inc nazi mod - blanket off a bit
03:02:500 (7) - ^

[heart attack's hard]
00:26:443 (2) - fix stack?
01:31:202 (2,3) - All the sounds seem to be the same pitch so keep the DS the same aswell

Thats all I could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL!
posted

Exote wrote:

Heart Attack's Hard

00:27:308 (1,2) - consistent spacing,приятел соз плокс перфе е
02:00:770 (1,2) - fix blanket Бах го мамата как го видя :Д
03:18:077 (3,4) - тоя бланкет плз направи нещо 4ката същност е правилно сложена ама заради 1 на новото комбо стаква и отива по-нагоре >ш<
03:20:962 (4) - премести я нагоре, че да не се допира със слайдър3, ew xd гуд кол :Д
сега NC stuff - > http://puu.sh/lCRvo/ed2512bc30.jpg :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
00:39:423 (1) - remove Не
00:40:000 (2) - add по може
00:45:481 (1) - не мисля, че е нужно тука - всички 1/4 съм ги репрезентнал така лел
00:58:462 (5) - add к
01:00:193 (1) - remove не. що?
01:00:770 (2) - add нееее
01:01:635 (1) - remove Евентуално
01:09:712 (1,2) - знаеш, че на всяка голяма бяла или малка бяла се слага nc, но можеш да оставиш и nc-то нa мини слайдър1, visuals
01:21:539 (5) - add
01:22:116 (1) - remove
01:41:731 (1) - remove
01:53:270 (1) - remove
01:53:846 (2) - add
01:59:327 (1) - remove? - виждам, че и преди първия кияй е същия nc pattern, бих ти препоръчал да махнеш съответно nc-тата от мини слайдерите
02:12:308 (5) - add
02:14:039 (1) - remove
02:14:616 (2) - add
02:15:481 (1) - remove
02:50:385 (1) - remove
02:51:539 (4) - add
02:53:270 (1) - remove
02:53:846 (2) - add
02:54:712 (1) - remove
03:14:616 (5) - add
03:15:193 (1) - remove
ДРУГИТЕ СА ПРИЕТИ

добър диф като цяло, хареса ми.
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Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi m4m we talked about in game


[heart attack's hard]
00:26:443 (2) - fix stack? к
01:31:202 (2,3) - All the sounds seem to be the same pitch so keep the DS the same aswell I don't think this is that fatal

Thats all I could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL!
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: marionette.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10000,148462,155385,207885
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

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Title:Marionette
TitleUnicode:마리오네트
Artist:STELLAR
ArtistUnicode:스텔라
Creator:Nekomata
Version:Heart Attack's Hard
Source:
Tags:kpop heart_attack
BeatmapID:825811
BeatmapSetID:362654

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OverallDifficulty:5.6
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SliderMultiplier:1.4
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updated
posted
General

  1. I really missed this hitsound on this beatmap.



Normal

  1. I advise you to put NCs only the highlight of the timing, it helps to prevent the combos stay in 5 or 6.
  2. 01:07:693 (4,1) - This overlap is somewhat bad, have skins that leave traces of the last notes and this can confuse beginners, I advise you to change this slider place.
  3. 01:33:077 (1) - Do not you think this slider a bit intense? beginners spond lose control playing with DT.
  4. 02:25:289 (3,4,5) - You could climb up it a little, some players have a small screen.
  5. 02:35:385 (1) - That might be a little prettier.

Hard

  1. 00:41:731 (4,1) - I find it a bit ugly / disastrous try something like this
  2. 01:09:712 (1) - put on x:118 y:268 please
  3. 01:10:866 (4) - x:239 y:147
  4. 01:20:096 (2) - x:77 y:230
  5. 01:22:693 - Why you are ignoring a hit so important?
  6. 01:41:731 (1) - Remove NC.
  7. 01:43:173 (3) - x:428 y:98
  8. 02:20:096 (2) - x:139 y:81
  9. 02:37:116 (5,6,7,8,1) - This blanket reminds me of those old sliders try to leave it a little softer
  10. 02:41:731 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 02:50:385 (1,4) - Snap NC
  12. 02:59:327 (2) - x:283 y:95
  13. 03:11:731 (4,1) - try adjusting this blanket without compromising this 03:12:308 (1,3) -
  14. 03:15:770 - Do not ignore this please
  15. 03:26:154 (1) - Remove this finish please

Pain

  1. 01:35:385 (1) - It goes down a little the first point to make the most beautiful slider
  2. 03:27:885 (9) - Try to make a jump here :3


Well its this ♥
posted
adjusted a few aesthetics and positions in my diffs
posted
Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

  1. Heart Attack's Hard had "Widescreen Support" checked while other diffs hadn't.


[Normal]

  1. 00:13:462 (6,1) - DS suddenly jumped to 1.4 here.
  2. 01:43:462 (3,5) - This overlap doesn't look neat imo.
  3. 01:46:635 (7,1) - Blanket is a bit off here.
  4. 02:20:385 (3) - I'll mention this just in case, but this slider is pretty close to the life bar. > http://puu.sh/lRINU/ea55c5948d.jpg


[Hard]

  1. 01:09:712 (1,2) - 01:10:866 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/lRJoY/dc85295982.jpg < Not sure if it's just me but the stacks aren't looking neat as 00:15:481 (2,3) - 00:20:096 (3,4) .> http://puu.sh/lRJqH/4b4ce4eadf.jpg


[Pain]

  1. Nothing found in particular


Sry, I felt like I couldn't help much, it's fine if no kd for me though.
Good luck~
posted

Electoz wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 00:13:462 (6,1) - DS suddenly jumped to 1.4 here.
  2. 01:43:462 (3,5) - This overlap doesn't look neat imo.
  3. 01:46:635 (7,1) - Blanket is a bit off here.
  4. 02:20:385 (3) - I'll mention this just in case, but this slider is pretty close to the life bar. > http://puu.sh/lRINU/ea55c5948d.jpg not even close babyyyyyyyy
posted
I didnt download the video; Are the combocolours representing something in the video? Because monotone black/grey and then suddenly strong purple/red looks kind of weird.

[Pain]
■ 00:26:731 (3,4,5) - Since all of the triplets before this were curved, why not curve this one too?
■ 01:29:039 (3,4,5) - compared to the last ones, this triplet looks kind of ugly/flat
■ 01:38:558 (2,3) - ctrl+g, rotate by -10° selection center and place on 160/112? Would work better imo
■ 02:04:808 (7,1,2) - I cant bring myself to like this combo. The short Slider kind of doesnt work there imo. Kickslider usually indicate some fast movement, but this one just works as a stack and blue ticks are weird and ... bleh :c Triplet maybe? >< Or you could also add a repeat to it and place 2 somewhere to the upper left of it

The only thing Ive noticed in Heart Attacks' are the NCs, as theyre inconsistent here and there. Might want to take a look at them again. (for example 02:49:231 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ). Might as well also want to silence 03:26:154 (1) - 's hitsound.

Normal looks really good, but you also might want to silence the last Spinner.

I feel like this set is basically done, unless you want to improve Pain aesthetically. Other than that, sorry for the short mod and good luck ranking this!
posted

Marianna wrote:

[centre]General

  1. I really missed this hitsound on this beatmap.



Hard

  1. 00:41:731 (4,1) - I find it a bit ugly / disastrous try something like this
  2. 01:09:712 (1) - put on x:118 y:268 please Fine
  3. 01:10:866 (4) - x:239 y:147 Fine
  4. 01:20:096 (2) - x:77 y:230 Fine
  5. 01:22:693 - Why you are ignoring a hit so important? For the sake of rhythm and consistency, besides you can barely hear it among the other beats
  6. 01:41:731 (1) - Remove NC. Good call
  7. 01:43:173 (3) - x:428 y:98 Yea I fixed all of these
  8. 02:20:096 (2) - x:139 y:81
  9. 02:37:116 (5,6,7,8,1) - This blanket reminds me of those old sliders try to leave it a little softer I'm keeping this one like this.
  10. 02:41:731 (1) - Remove NC Fine
  11. 02:50:385 (1,4) - Snap NC mkay
  12. 02:59:327 (2) - x:283 y:95
  13. 03:11:731 (4,1) - try adjusting this blanket without compromising this 03:12:308 (1,3) - I will definetely fix this one however I'mnot quite sure how should I make it.
  14. 03:15:770 - Do not ignore this please I already mentioned this above.
  15. 03:26:154 (1) - Remove this finish please

Electoz wrote:

Hard

01:09:712 (1,2) - 01:10:866 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/lRJoY/dc85295982.jpg < Not sure if it's just me but the stacks aren't looking neat as 00:15:481 (2,3) - 00:20:096 (3,4) .> http://puu.sh/lRJqH/4b4ce4eadf.jpg I made them neat
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10000,74616,83846,148462,155385,207885
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 0.6999999

[Metadata]
Title:Marionette
TitleUnicode:마리오네트
Artist:STELLAR
ArtistUnicode:스텔라
Creator:Nekomata
Version:Hard
Source:
Tags:kpop
BeatmapID:819193
BeatmapSetID:362654

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Combo2 : 87,87,87
Combo3 : 218,218,218
Combo4 : 166,0,166

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posted

Yauxo wrote:

I didnt download the video; Are the combocolours representing something in the video? Because monotone black/grey and then suddenly strong purple/red looks kind of weird. yep, video :p

[Pain]
■ 00:26:731 (3,4,5) - Since all of the triplets before this were curved, why not curve this one too? idk
■ 01:29:039 (3,4,5) - compared to the last ones, this triplet looks kind of ugly/flat adjusted
■ 01:38:558 (2,3) - ctrl+g, rotate by -10° selection center and place on 160/112? Would work better imo i like it as-is
■ 02:04:808 (7,1,2) - I cant bring myself to like this combo. The short Slider kind of doesnt work there imo. Kickslider usually indicate some fast movement, but this one just works as a stack and blue ticks are weird and ... bleh :c Triplet maybe? >< Or you could also add a repeat to it and place 2 somewhere to the upper left of it this is my intended flow for this particular section :p

Normal looks really good, but you also might want to silence the last Spinner. also changed volume for Pain
posted
:( sry I do not that like K-pop

Anyway, good map in general

:) here's my star and GL~~
posted
hi nekomata
i can modding this map?
posted
00:17:789 (6) - knock less fit
00:56:731 - object added one, if you can
02:35:385 (1) - less good slide form, please altered
02:49:808 - object added one
00:16:923 (1,2,3,4) - clap
01:12:308 (1,2,3,4) - finish
02:56:154 (1,2,3,4) - clap
03:05:385 (1,2,3,4) - finish
03:23:847 (1,2,3,4) - finish
when it comes to distance ok, good
OK FINE


if you want to comment anything about the video?
posted

arnoldusj wrote:

00:17:789 (6) - knock less fit not sure what you mean here
02:35:385 (1) - less good slide form, please altered adjusted
for the added objects, they would be too early after a spinner for a normal
posted
what's up with all of these random Girl Group maps just coming up and like they're all the same style too which is kinda scary like lmao is this the new world

Insane?:
00:18:654 (5) - Have some sort of claps here or SOMETHING to emphazise that this beat is stronger than the previous ones.
00:23:270 (5) - pls make this a pattern instead of just 2 unrelated sliders.
00:50:385 (5,6) - So your biggest thing here is that you have the total setup to make a gradual turning pattern, but you just kinda randomly switch directions instead of making it gradual by adjusting (3) to be at an angle. That might be a little more effective.
00:51:827 (2) - This sort of feel really disjointed because everything else has been relatively regular spacing.
01:33:943 (4) - You have so much space in the grid to make better patterns, dont' resort to unneccesary overlap
01:48:943 (6) - ^. Especially since there's not a reason to have the back-and-forth motion
02:03:943 (4,5,6,7) - ^Apply to all similar patterns

Hard:
00:15:481 (2,3) - this is literally the same style as insane is this really a guest diff lol
00:53:846 (1) - So technically you need 1 full beat of space between the end of a spinner and the next note in a hard diff, but uhhhh you might be able to get away with this. Idunno.

Normal:
fine, but it's a little note heavy. It might be a good idea to have an easier diff with less note density.

overall it's like okay like 5/7
posted

Reditum wrote:

what's up with all of these random Girl Group maps just coming up and like they're all the same style too which is kinda scary like lmao is this the new world

it's the Brave New World

Insane?:
00:18:654 (5) - Have some sort of claps here or SOMETHING to emphazise that this beat is stronger than the previous ones. good point
00:23:270 (5) - pls make this a pattern instead of just 2 unrelated sliders. they are related though, the whole combo is vocal mapped
00:50:385 (5,6) - So your biggest thing here is that you have the total setup to make a gradual turning pattern, but you just kinda randomly switch directions instead of making it gradual by adjusting (3) to be at an angle. That might be a little more effective. adjusted it
00:51:827 (2) - This sort of feel really disjointed because everything else has been relatively regular spacing. this is intended, since the music felt like it had a "stop" at that point
01:33:943 (4) - You have so much space in the grid to make better patterns, dont' resort to unneccesary overlap this is also intended, it exists in the beginning as well actually :p
01:48:943 (6) - ^. Especially since there's not a reason to have the back-and-forth motion changed position
02:03:943 (4,5,6,7) - ^Apply to all similar patterns just like how the previous pre-kiai was like a repetitive up-down sort of thing i did another repetitive pattern here, so no change

Normal:
fine, but it's a little note heavy. It might be a good idea to have an easier diff with less note density.

overall it's like okay like 5/7
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