spoilerbox the code box lol ;_;
Reiki wrote:
Long time I don't mod anything; I feel a bit rusty.
Remember everything is a suggestion, unless I mention unrankeable or something like that.
[Overview]
- That 193 kbps mp3 though. Remember it has to be 192 'cause RC. :v i heard VBR V2 is allowed :< - reencoded
- Maybe add "Heart Attack" (without the low dash) on tags? Who knows, someone might search it like that on some future. added
- Let's see how far can this map reach with that video (it may be shot down, Idk). :^) it will probably be allowed :3
[Normal]
- 00:37:116 (7,2) - and 00:37:693 (1,3) - I honestly dislike doing this with such low AR because the hitburst (300s, 100s, etc.) is still there when next slider appears, making the pattern a bit hard to read. Try to find a better way to make this a bit more readable. keeping this one
- 01:03:943 (4,5,6) - Moving the circles just a bit down would sightly enhance the flow here. i guess i touched it a bit
- 01:06:539 (2) - Same for this slider.
- 01:28:462 (1) - Make the same shape here than what you did with 01:27:308 (6) - (or viceversa) by using Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J. Just a sightly adjustment, but any little thing can help. And any symmetry lover would mention it anyway so... ok
- 01:40:000 (4,5) - Two choices here: changed flow
- Either correct sightly the blanket, or
- Try to enhance a bit the flow like this: Screenshot 1, Screenshot 2. IMO it also looks a bit better.
- 02:00:770 (1,2,3) - I think making a symmetric pattern here wouldn't hurt, but it's your choice (I just think it looks and flows a little better but don't blame me, I just like symmetry ;w;) unchanged
- Sounds good, plays good. Nice.
[Pain]
- 00:26:731 (3) - Extend slider until 00:27:164 - since there's the loud beat. The beat on 00:27:020 - would be emphasized anyway, since slider tick. Same for 00:35:962 (3) - as a triplet here is a bad idea since the way you've been mapping makes it look as if you're following the vocal; and believe me, extended slider follows vocal quite well. (otherwise it's a bit hard to play) Apply this suggestion on similar cases. well, pointing this one out actually made me make a triple for that for consistency with the other similar ones
- 01:50:673 (6,7,8,1) - The irregular distance here just makes those things weird to play. Honestly, distance would make more sense if (1) was somewhere like this. i like my anti jumps
- 02:46:635 - I'm pretty sure you don't need this green timing section here, now. I mean, the one on 02:46:923 - does exactly the same thing, anyway. used it to lower the hitsound of the slider end
- Pretty much a great diff; I liked it.
That is it, I guess.
This set is cool, and it's going through a nice path. Hopefully it'll continue to improve.
Welp, see ya! Good luck!
nice ncExote wrote:
halouw m4m thingy
hophop nice video :^o
Normal
00:44:616 (1) - remove nc
00:46:923 (4) - add nc
00:49:231 (1) - remove nc
00:51:539 (4) - nc plz
with applying the changes above, you basically get that part consistent with the same part before the 2nd kiai
ya i guess i did lose track of nc consistency
03:05:385 (1) - idk bout this nc, it really does emphasize this part unlike the rest 2 like for a final, u can leave it as well leaving it
Pain (?) - think you can get a sexier name xD heh
01:11:154 (5) - nc?
02:25:000 (5) - same?
03:04:231 (5) - saaame?
03:22:693 (5) - same? same
the NCs above, for emphasizing the vocals
00:50:962 (7,1,2) - this is a bit confusing imo, 1 lies exactly on top of 2, but there's a liiil gap between those in terms of gameplay and they are the same nc, while 7 and 1 are two different NCs and yet there isn't any gap between em, I hope u understood that, but overall it might not be a problem
same goes for 02:04:808 (7,1,2) yeah this is intended flow
That was it, moostly NC stuff (99%) that's one decent set tho, gogogo!
Exote wrote:
Heart Attack's Hard
00:27:308 (1,2) - consistent spacing,приятел соз плокс перфе е
02:00:770 (1,2) - fix blanket Бах го мамата как го видя :Д
03:18:077 (3,4) - тоя бланкет плз направи нещо 4ката същност е правилно сложена ама заради 1 на новото комбо стаква и отива по-нагоре >ш<
03:20:962 (4) - премести я нагоре, че да не се допира със слайдър3, ew xd гуд кол :Д
сега NC stuff - > http://puu.sh/lCRvo/ed2512bc30.jpg DDDDDDDDDDDDDD
00:39:423 (1) - remove Не
00:40:000 (2) - add по може
00:45:481 (1) - не мисля, че е нужно тука - всички 1/4 съм ги репрезентнал така лел
00:58:462 (5) - add к
01:00:193 (1) - remove не. що?
01:00:770 (2) - add нееее
01:01:635 (1) - remove Евентуално
01:09:712 (1,2) - знаеш, че на всяка голяма бяла или малка бяла се слага nc, но можеш да оставиш и nc-то нa мини слайдър1, visuals
01:21:539 (5) - add
01:22:116 (1) - remove
01:41:731 (1) - remove
01:53:270 (1) - remove
01:53:846 (2) - add
01:59:327 (1) - remove? - виждам, че и преди първия кияй е същия nc pattern, бих ти препоръчал да махнеш съответно nc-тата от мини слайдерите
02:12:308 (5) - add
02:14:039 (1) - remove
02:14:616 (2) - add
02:15:481 (1) - remove
02:50:385 (1) - remove
02:51:539 (4) - add
02:53:270 (1) - remove
02:53:846 (2) - add
02:54:712 (1) - remove
03:14:616 (5) - add
03:15:193 (1) - remove
ДРУГИТЕ СА ПРИЕТИ
добър диф като цяло, хареса ми.
Hi Im Nathan wrote:
hi m4m we talked about in game
[heart attack's hard]
00:26:443 (2) - fix stack? к
01:31:202 (2,3) - All the sounds seem to be the same pitch so keep the DS the same aswell I don't think this is that fatal
Thats all I could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL!
osu file format v14
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Electoz wrote:
[Normal]
- 00:13:462 (6,1) - DS suddenly jumped to 1.4 here.
- 01:43:462 (3,5) - This overlap doesn't look neat imo.
- 01:46:635 (7,1) - Blanket is a bit off here.
- 02:20:385 (3) - I'll mention this just in case, but this slider is pretty close to the life bar. > http://puu.sh/lRINU/ea55c5948d.jpg not even close babyyyyyyyy
Marianna wrote:
[centre]General
- I really missed this hitsound on this beatmap.
Hard
- 00:41:731 (4,1) - I find it a bit ugly / disastrous try something like this
- 01:09:712 (1) - put on x:118 y:268 please Fine
- 01:10:866 (4) - x:239 y:147 Fine
- 01:20:096 (2) - x:77 y:230 Fine
- 01:22:693 - Why you are ignoring a hit so important? For the sake of rhythm and consistency, besides you can barely hear it among the other beats
- 01:41:731 (1) - Remove NC. Good call
- 01:43:173 (3) - x:428 y:98 Yea I fixed all of these
- 02:20:096 (2) - x:139 y:81
- 02:37:116 (5,6,7,8,1) - This blanket reminds me of those old sliders try to leave it a little softer I'm keeping this one like this.
- 02:41:731 (1) - Remove NC Fine
- 02:50:385 (1,4) - Snap NC mkay
- 02:59:327 (2) - x:283 y:95
- 03:11:731 (4,1) - try adjusting this blanket without compromising this 03:12:308 (1,3) - I will definetely fix this one however I'mnot quite sure how should I make it.
- 03:15:770 - Do not ignore this please I already mentioned this above.
- 03:26:154 (1) - Remove this finish please
Electoz wrote:
Hard
01:09:712 (1,2) - 01:10:866 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/lRJoY/dc85295982.jpg < Not sure if it's just me but the stacks aren't looking neat as 00:15:481 (2,3) - 00:20:096 (3,4) .> http://puu.sh/lRJqH/4b4ce4eadf.jpg I made them neat
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TitleUnicode:마리오네트
Artist:STELLAR
ArtistUnicode:스텔라
Creator:Nekomata
Version:Hard
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Yauxo wrote:
I didnt download the video; Are the combocolours representing something in the video? Because monotone black/grey and then suddenly strong purple/red looks kind of weird. yep, video :p[Pain]
■ 00:26:731 (3,4,5) - Since all of the triplets before this were curved, why not curve this one too? idk
■ 01:29:039 (3,4,5) - compared to the last ones, this triplet looks kind of ugly/flat adjusted
■ 01:38:558 (2,3) - ctrl+g, rotate by -10° selection center and place on 160/112? Would work better imo i like it as-is
■ 02:04:808 (7,1,2) - I cant bring myself to like this combo. The short Slider kind of doesnt work there imo. Kickslider usually indicate some fast movement, but this one just works as a stack and blue ticks are weird and ... bleh :c Triplet maybe? >< Or you could also add a repeat to it and place 2 somewhere to the upper left of it this is my intended flow for this particular section :p
Normal looks really good, but you also might want to silence the last Spinner. also changed volume for Pain
Reditum wrote:
what's up with all of these random Girl Group maps just coming up and like they're all the same style too which is kinda scary like lmao is this the new world
it's the Brave New World
Insane?:
00:18:654 (5) - Have some sort of claps here or SOMETHING to emphazise that this beat is stronger than the previous ones. good point
00:23:270 (5) - pls make this a pattern instead of just 2 unrelated sliders. they are related though, the whole combo is vocal mapped
00:50:385 (5,6) - So your biggest thing here is that you have the total setup to make a gradual turning pattern, but you just kinda randomly switch directions instead of making it gradual by adjusting (3) to be at an angle. That might be a little more effective. adjusted it
00:51:827 (2) - This sort of feel really disjointed because everything else has been relatively regular spacing. this is intended, since the music felt like it had a "stop" at that point
01:33:943 (4) - You have so much space in the grid to make better patterns, dont' resort to unneccesary overlap this is also intended, it exists in the beginning as well actually :p
01:48:943 (6) - ^. Especially since there's not a reason to have the back-and-forth motion changed position
02:03:943 (4,5,6,7) - ^Apply to all similar patterns just like how the previous pre-kiai was like a repetitive up-down sort of thing i did another repetitive pattern here, so no change
Normal:
fine, but it's a little note heavy. It might be a good idea to have an easier diff with less note density.
overall it's like okay like 5/7