Overall: The map is really good, with some snaping issuees. I think thee map could be a lot better having more emphasys on the guitar, specially in the solo section but well, your way is perfectly fine.
00:15:504 (15504|1,15643|0) - Ctrl+G to avoid the 1st column white row?
- done00:16:480 (16480|0,16620|2) - Ctrl+G to avoid 4 whites in a row?. I would probably ctrl+g 00:15:783 (15783|3,15922|2) - this as well to avoid the 3rd note density. (wtf I just did, I dont know. My ctrl key is working really bad and everytime I ctrl+x something things go wild, so well, as overall, try to avoid 4 notees in a row in same column imo, if you can avoid 3, better) -
done00:27:504 (27504|1) - 00:31:969 (31969|2) - Delete? Idk, I just got confuseed again ;w; -
keeping them for the hi-hat00:49:271 (49271|2,49411|3) - Ctrl+G change W hitsound position. -
done01:04:062 (64062|2,64201|3) - Ctrl+G works bettere imo. Because you have 3 1-4 notes in a row in withe (and also with different sounds). For 01:04:760 (64760|0,64760|3) - this one I think its better because it also plays for the "tril" pattern that is played next (14-23 into 12-34 with differnt drum sounds). You can also use 13-24 instead, I dont know, a lot of posibilitiees -
I really like how this pattern plays, that's the main reason I kept it in there. It might not be perfectly balanced but it feels well to MY taste, if more people criticize it ill change it! 01:07:550 (67550|1) - Move to right
01:07:690 (67690|3) - Move to left 2 slots -
i forgot whether or not i changed that, so i will just say yes ;w;01:07:969 (67969|2,68108|1) - Ctrl+G? To avoid a lot amount of notees in 3rd slot?
01:08:667 (68667|2,68806|0) - Ctrl+G? -
both changed ;w;01:09:643 (69643|1) - Delte W? (idk, I feel the S-W strange most of the times) -
the W sound represents the open hi-hat the drummer uses at those parts x)01:44:387 (104387|2,104946|0) - Imo, this sections needs the beep sound mapped as you do previously and after this. -
i never mapped the beep sound DURING the LNs, only before and after them, mostly because it doesn't play calm and relaxing, but that's how the song sounds there.01:50:667 (110667|0) - Theree is a drum here, you can use W sound and double it? maybe
01:54:573 (114573|2) - ^
02:04:480 (124480|0) - Move to 3 and move 02:04:620 (124620|2) - to 1 slot and move 02:04:760 (124760|0,124899|1) - to right. I think I already told why I think this kind of things should be changed -
see above02:34:132 - There is a guitar sound here or I am crazy af? -
there is, but that part only maps the ride-cymbal (drums, duh)02:46:062 - Add note heere for that sound and heree is as well 02:46:341 - so well, think about it
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mhhh, no change for now qq02:55:690 (175690|1) - Maybee delete? -
nonono, that one maps the hi-hat again! cant remove notes that map the drums, nyaI think this plays a lot better, I dont feel (when I play) the 23 doubles confortablee to do in that stream. So I believe moving 02:58:341 (178341|2) - to right and rearrange the stream.
02:59:178 (179178|1) - I think this should be in slot 1 becuase theere is the pitch change of guitar and white tick as weell, best place to make those changes
02:59:597 (179597|2) - Heeree stairs should change their way, pitch again. (hopefully I am not deaf) -
both changed!03:01:690 (181690|2,181969|2) - Movee to left maybe? To emulate the pitch of guitar. If, 03:02:108 (182108|1,182178|2,182248|3) - ctrl+g and change hs -
changed it a bit, thanks!03:14:946 (194946|0) - I understand this LN but, I think making them to follow only 1 sound of the guitar should be better. (end the ln at 03:15:085 - ) Same goes for the others -
hmmm, that guitar part is played with a distortion pedal as far as I know, which I tried to emphasize there. Maybe I'll change it in the future03:16:620 (196620|0) - For this one meh, I think it can be changeed to 2 differeent LN onee that eends in the first doublee and one that starts in the red W. Its fine this way, but well, you can seee how it places for you.
I understand the emphasys of the drums overall, but I think you can add notees 03:18:294 - 03:18:713 - for th guitar. 03:19:201 - Here as well -
true, but as you said, if I break the pattern here, I would have to add a lot more notes, since I dont follow the drums 100% then xD (also i like the cut-off-feeling those parts give, theyre a bit relaxing)03:25:411 (205411|2) - I dont reeally like this LN, maybe something like this?:
http://puu.sh/kSHKM/e3b3a48c3c.jpgI think if you follow that, you should add 03:27:225 - 03:27:643 - notes heere. -
i think those LNs should be changed aswell, but I havent found a way i actually like, so ill keep it as it is for now ;w; 03:33:085 (213085|0) - I belive this LN should be shorter, same for the following ones (only 1/2) -
im not sure about that one, i actually like how it plays and since the guitarist strokes the same note 2 times i dont think its worth using two seperated LNs for the same sound, which I'd have to do if I split them at 1/2 (since I cant just map one sound but not the other :c)03:38:318 (218318|3) - Delete no sound? -
removed03:39:434 (219434|1) - ^ -
hi-hat there~03:45:643 (225643|0,225643|3) - No sound? Deaf me? xD -
theres a kick drum there 03:50:387 - 1/6 snap? this section. Maybe try something like this? (to avoid making a diff gap heree if you want to keep the difficulty):
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3847021 -
hmmm, that wouldnt really fit the song i think.. also i think 1/8 really emphasizes the guitar there, 1/6 would play to slowly (actually, the guitarist plays palm-muted 1/16 notes, so i think going 1/8 might be fine if you consider what he plays rather than what of it we end up hearing)03:57:294 (237294|0,237434|2) - No guitar? -
i think there is some guitar D:04:36:294 - Do something as previously said here?
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see above :304:47:039 (287039|3,287039|0) - Makee this a 23 as the following onee and move 04:46:899 (286899|2) - to 4? I dont know, I just really dislike the fact that there is 2 different sounds the samee way in same thing xD -
hrm, i always used chord-trills for the snare-parts, so ill stick with that here05:27:085 (327085|2) - Why not double?, 05:24:853 (324853|2,324853|3) - Make this one single or the other ones double imo -
single cause there is no snare or kick-drum, while there is a kick-drum on the second note you copied ^-^