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ZjKjKun - Tokyo Teddy Bear

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Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 19, 2017 at 9:48:13 PM

Artist: ZjKjKun
Title: Tokyo Teddy Bear
Tags: furry utau teddy bear tokyo Kemonone Rou vocaloids furloids Nviek5 Sky DubFoxx Neru Renia Xenophere Shiroi Hiroshi Sauziteoi HitCoder KittyAdventure Dab9 Dracrosinos
BPM: 204
Filesize: 23619kb
Play Time: 03:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dracro's Easy (1.84 stars, 174 notes)
  2. Everlasting Nightmare (5.7 stars, 777 notes)
  3. Hyper (3.92 stars, 532 notes)
  4. Kitty's Insane (4.41 stars, 612 notes)
  5. Normal (1.85 stars, 24 notes)
  6. ReXe's Lunacy (5.61 stars, 759 notes)
  7. Sauziteoi's Expert (5.21 stars, 689 notes)
Download: ZjKjKun - Tokyo Teddy Bear
Download: ZjKjKun - Tokyo Teddy Bear (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my second beatmap ever, have fun! ^^

Special Thanks To: ImpulseTheFox and Arzenvald for the helping and answering all my questions!

If you want to make guest difficulties, just PM me first.

All needs to be moded

Dracro's Easy By dracrosinos - Will be modding/making changes
Hyper By: Me - 100% needs - Needs moding
Insane By: Me - 100% - Needs moding
Kitty's Insane By: KittyAdventure -Done
HitCoder's Another By: HitCoder -Needs moding
Dab9's Lunatic By: Dab9 - Needs moding
Sauziteoi's Expert By: Sauziteoi - Done
Sh'sExtra By: Shiroi Hiroshi -Needs moding
Rx's Insanity By: Renia Xenophere - Needs moding
Video link
Last edited by Welkin Kamino , edited 73 times in total.
Renia Xenophere
68 posts
Joined April 2014
Renia Xenophere
Oh My!!! UTAU!!!! I love this one!!! Can I make a guest difficulty for you?
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino
Update: Fixed a few hit sounds added a new section by the end
Last edited by Welkin Kamino , edited 1 time in total.
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino

FurryFan wrote:

Oh My!!! UTAU!!!! I love this one!!! Can I make a guest difficulty for you?

Yes please. It world be hard for me to make any easier or harder difficulties. What difficulty are you thinking on doing?
Shiroi Hiroshi
190 posts
Joined March 2015
Shiroi Hiroshi
goodluck
can i make higher difficulties ?
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

goodluck
can i make higher difficulties ?

Go ahead I'll love to see more! ;)
Shiroi Hiroshi
190 posts
Joined March 2015
Shiroi Hiroshi
done
http://puu.sh/kBsYT/747d7c6af9.osu
have fun
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

done
http://puu.sh/kBsYT/747d7c6af9.osu
have fun
The map you gave me weird at first and didn't match the song and same with your first Tokyo teddy bear map. But for some reason I had to move over all the notes by 2 or 3 of the tallies or tick marks and still can't chose from 2 or 3 for your new one and old one to make them match the song. I also changed the difficulty like the Overall Difficulty to 7 and HP Drain to 6 (may have change the difficulty to much) but why was both Overall Difficulty and HP Drain at 9 before?!

Fixed some trails and sliders and made smaller jumps.
Shiroi Hiroshi
190 posts
Joined March 2015
Shiroi Hiroshi

Zomghax wrote:

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

done
http://puu.sh/kBsYT/747d7c6af9.osu
have fun
The map you gave me weird at first and didn't match the song and same with your first Tokyo teddy bear map. But for some reason I had to move over all the notes by 2 or 3 of the tallies or tick marks and still can't chose from 2 or 3 for your new one and old one to make them match the song. I also changed the difficulty like the Overall Difficulty to 7 and HP Drain to 6 (may have change the difficulty to much) but why was both Overall Difficulty and HP Drain at 9 before?!

Fixed some trails and sliders and made smaller jumps.
ups sorry for trouble
Sauziteoi
205 posts
Joined February 2013
Sauziteoi
Finished.
Kemonone Rou - Tokyo Teddy Bear (Zomghax) [Sauziteoi's Expert].osu
have fun!
Renia Xenophere
68 posts
Joined April 2014
Renia Xenophere
I don't know if this can help and it's really my first time to mod... But I'll try my best!!!

For the Insane

00:08:562 (7,8) - Extend the bent slider for it to look more comfortable, Make it Exactly around the circle of the slider 8

00:38:415 (8,9) - Fix the hitsound... But depends on you

00:54:151 (8,9) - Move the circle a bit around the slider or move the slider a bit to fit around it.

01:05:180 (1,2,3) - Lack of hitsound?

01:43:268 (5,6) - Contented with this? Or you want to move it a bit more space?

01:50:180 (5,6,7) - I don't know but It's just too weird to suddenly put a shuffle after the past placing notes... But Depends on you too.

01:51:945 (3) - Hitsound missing?

01:55:327 (2,3) - The overlap is a bit uncomfortable...

01:56:651 (6) - Excessive hitsound?

02:33:121 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overlap of the note 4 and 7 to the sliders seems strange... Move it down for a bit or if you want, Make the triangle to be equal.

02:49:151 (3,4) - If you only want... Insert a new combo

02:54:739 (5,6,7,8) - You might want to change this? The note 8

02:56:651 (5,6) - Move the note 6 away from slider 5

03:01:798 (6) - Missing hitsound?

03:06:504 (4) - It doesn't follow the song

For Sh's Extra

Not timed well

The whole placement of notes in timing and timing sections should be changed

00:02:986 (6,7,8,9,10) - Unequal star?

00:05:670 (7,8) - The overlap is uncomfortable

01:20:632 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Woah!!! It's very uncomfortable to have a rapid at slow parts

02:22:176 (2,3) - The sliders seems very fast for this part

For Sauziteoi's Expert

01:26:065 - 01:35:183 - I don't know if it lacks hitsounds... But are you gonna add some of it?

02:50:918 - 03:09:301 - Same ^

Here's my feedback for you!!! I can't see any errors in Sauziteoi's Expert because he's a pro mapper, It's comfortable for me.
Insane difficulty needs more improvement and other hitsounds are excessive
Sh's Extra is really strange... I think I already saw the original mapping style...

I don't know if This helps but I hope so it really helps ;)
Sauziteoi
205 posts
Joined February 2013
Sauziteoi

Renia Xenophere wrote:

For Sauziteoi's Expert
01:26:065 - 01:35:183 - I don't know if it lacks hitsounds... But are you gonna add some of it?
02:50:918 - 03:09:301 - Same ^
I already added them. :)

General

  1. Title=東京テディベア
    Romanised title=Tokyo Teddy Bear
    Source=(blank)
    Neru is the one wrote this song and Nviek5 made the video, so "Neru", "Nviek5" have to be involved in tags.
  2. offset=1507, offset in Sh's Extra is mistaken. (All objects in Sh's Extra should be fixed)

Insane

  • Many Newcombos cut sentences or stress off, fix them may be better.
  1. 00:02:974 (6) - it's difficult to react this short sliders repeating more than three times.
  2. 00:09:886 (6) - Newcombo here.
  3. 00:12:386 (5,6,7) - these objects are too close, thin them.
  4. 00:33:415 (1,2) - too curved and looks weird.
  5. 00:34:739 (5) - Newcombo here.
  6. 00:40:768 (5) - too curved and looks weird.
  7. 00:41:356 (7) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:42:092 (1)
  8. 00:43:709 (8) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:44:592 (1)
  9. 00:45:033 (4) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:45:768 (1)
  10. 00:46:062 (2) - Newcombo here.
  11. 00:45:768 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  12. 00:50:033 (5) - the same as ↑↑↑
  13. 00:49:445 (3,4) - why not make a blanket: http://puu.sh/mCNsm/1d5b45d03c.jpg
  14. 00:50:768 (8) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:51:356 (1)
  15. 00:53:121 (7) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:53:709 (1)
  16. 00:55:474 (1) - too curved and looks weird. This slider should end here 00:55:768
  17. 00:56:651 (4) - folding slider's head and end together is not approved if the map is for rank.
  18. 00:57:092 (1) - delete Newcombo here. and suggestion: change from http://puu.sh/mCNLO/e26ddd68ca.jpg to http://puu.sh/mCNN2/0264fb60ee.jpg
  19. 00:57:827 (5) - two points is okay: http://puu.sh/m67JB/e17c814196.jpg→http://puu.sh/m67MJ/675438ddf4.jpg
  20. 00:57:827 (5) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:58:562 (1)
  21. 01:00:180 (6) - Newcombo here.
  22. 01:01:798 (1) - delete Newcombo here.
  23. 01:02:239 (2,3) - ctrl + G to add a jump
  24. 01:02:533 (4) - Newcombo here.
  25. 01:04:886 (5) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 01:05:180 (1)
  26. 01:18:856 (1,2) - it's too curved and looks weird.
  27. 01:26:062 (6) 01:28:415 (6) 01:30:768 (5) 01:33:121 (5) - Newcombo here.
  28. 01:43:562 (6) - replaced by 2 circles to highlight the stress
  29. 01:41:209 (2,4) - uh, actually short slider with head close by the end and a curved body looks awkward.
  30. 01:44:151 - inherited point here should be deleted because didn't change any options.
  31. 01:45:621 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  32. 01:49:298 (3,4) - make the blanket better: http://puu.sh/m66am/1fe5cd943e.jpg
  33. 01:50:621 (8,9) - the same as ↑↑↑ : http://puu.sh/m66ea/7bc9e0f17a.jpg
  34. 01:51:945 (4) - too curved and looks weird.
  35. 01:53:121 (7) - folding slider's head and end together is not approved if the map is for rank.
  36. 01:53:415 - inherited point here should be deleted because didn't change any options.
  37. 01:57:092 (1,2,3) - blanket is better i think: http://puu.sh/m66mb/60b32b5672.jpg
  38. 02:18:562 (4,6) - make the blanket better.
  39. 02:26:062 - stress here but slider begins here (02:25:915 (5) - ), suggest: change form this http://puu.sh/m66BH/e577de7b85.jpg to this http://puu.sh/m66Ga/026f02649a.jpg
  40. 02:26:945 (7,8) - stack them better like 02:28:121 (10,11)
  41. 02:37:827 (6,7) - blanket is better i think.
  42. 02:39:004 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  43. 02:40:180 (4) - folding slider's head and end together is not approved if the map is for rank.
  44. 02:47:533 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  45. 02:59:592 (3,4,5) - stack them better.
  46. 03:01:356 (5,6,7) - these objects are too close, thin them.
  47. 03:08:856 (6,7,1,2,3) - change from http://puu.sh/m675I/c4437554be.jpg to http://puu.sh/m674s/6d21c14497.jpg

FF's Insanity

  1. 00:07:680 (5,6,7,8) - place them in a regular shape.
  2. 00:09:592 (3,6) - too close and look bad.
  3. 00:17:974 (2,4) - too close.
  4. 00:20:033 (12,1) - unreasonable distance because time interval between them is shorter than 00:19:886 (11,12) but space interval is lager.
  5. 00:24:445 (7,1) - make the blanket looks better
  6. 00:51:209 (2,3) - too close
  7. 00:51:209 (2,3) - why not move it to x:259 y:113
  8. 00:56:209 (5,6,1) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  9. 00:57:827 (1,3) - too close
  10. 01:02:533 (1) - ctrl + G and move it far away from circle6 to make a clokewise flow from 01:01:798 (2) to this slider
  11. 01:07:276 (12) - this slider should start from 01:07:239 in 1/6 beat snap
  12. 01:47:092 (5) - covered by 01:46:504 (2) and hard to react
  13. 01:50:327 (3) - the same as ↑↑↑
  14. 01:50:621 (5) - the same as ↑↑↑ (I am not sure if they are on purpose
  15. 01:52:680 (5,6) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  16. 01:57:533 (4) - covered and hard to react
  17. 01:57:827 (1) - ...suggestion: http://puu.sh/mCQaZ/aed40c23cd.jpg
  18. 02:18:562 (1,3) - too close
  19. 02:20:915 (1,2) - make a blanket
  20. 02:22:459 (3) - should start here 02:22:533
  21. 02:39:004 (1,2,3) - too close
  22. 02:39:739 (4,5) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  23. 02:46:062 (1,2) - too close
  24. 02:50:842 (10) - start from 02:50:768 (9) in 1/6 beat snap
  25. 02:59:004 (5,7,8,9) - too close
  26. 03:00:180 (12,1) - unreasonable jump

Sh's Extra

  1. 00:02:978 (5,6,7,8,9) 00:05:331 (5,6,7,8,9) 00:10:037 (5,6,7,8,9) - unnecessary to set a jump here.
  2. 00:20:037 (5) - x:368 y:160
  3. 00:44:742 (8) - move the clap hitsound to 00:44:889
  4. 01:56:654 (1,2) - suggestion http://puu.sh/mVapU/732721a697.jpg
  5. 02:31:801 (3) - this should be here 02:31:727
Good luck!
Last edited by Sauziteoi , edited 1 time in total.
HitCoder
51 posts
Joined May 2015
HitCoder
oooohhh a furry song mapped by furries? :3

(Pssst.. can I make a guest diff?)
Renia Xenophere
68 posts
Joined April 2014
Renia Xenophere

Sauziteoi wrote:

Renia Xenophere wrote:

For Sauziteoi's Expert
01:26:065 - 01:35:183 - I don't know if it lacks hitsounds... But are you gonna add some of it?
02:50:918 - 03:09:301 - Same ^
I already added them. :)

General

  1. Title=東京テディベア
    Romanised title=Tokyo Teddy Bear
    Source=(blank)
    Neru is the one wrote this song and Nviek5 made the video, so "Neru", "Nviek5" have to be involved in tags.
  2. offset=1507, offset in Sh's Extra is mistaken. (All objects in Sh's Extra should be fixed)

Insane

  • Many Newcombos cut sentences or stress off, fix them may be better.
  1. 00:02:974 (6) - it's difficult to react this short sliders repeating more than three times.
  2. 00:09:886 (6) - Newcombo here.
  3. 00:12:386 (5,6,7) - these objects are too close, thin them.
  4. 00:33:415 (1,2) - too curved and looks weird.
  5. 00:34:739 (5) - Newcombo here.
  6. 00:40:768 (5) - too curved and looks weird.
  7. 00:41:356 (7) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:42:092 (1)
  8. 00:43:709 (8) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:44:592 (1)
  9. 00:45:033 (4) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:45:768 (1)
  10. 00:46:062 (2) - Newcombo here.
  11. 00:45:768 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  12. 00:50:033 (5) - the same as ↑↑↑
  13. 00:49:445 (3,4) - why not make a blanket: http://puu.sh/mCNsm/1d5b45d03c.jpg
  14. 00:50:768 (8) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:51:356 (1)
  15. 00:53:121 (7) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:53:709 (1)
  16. 00:55:474 (1) - too curved and looks weird. This slider should end here 00:55:768
  17. 00:56:651 (4) - folding slider's head and end together is not approved if the map is for rank.
  18. 00:57:092 (1) - delete Newcombo here. and suggestion: change from http://puu.sh/mCNLO/e26ddd68ca.jpg to http://puu.sh/mCNN2/0264fb60ee.jpg
  19. 00:57:827 (5) - two points is okay: http://puu.sh/m67JB/e17c814196.jpg→http://puu.sh/m67MJ/675438ddf4.jpg
  20. 00:57:827 (5) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 00:58:562 (1)
  21. 01:00:180 (6) - Newcombo here.
  22. 01:01:798 (1) - delete Newcombo here.
  23. 01:02:239 (2,3) - ctrl + G to add a jump
  24. 01:02:533 (4) - Newcombo here.
  25. 01:04:886 (5) - Newcombo here and delete Newcombo here 01:05:180 (1)
  26. 01:18:856 (1,2) - it's too curved and looks weird.
  27. 01:26:062 (6) 01:28:415 (6) 01:30:768 (5) 01:33:121 (5) - Newcombo here.
  28. 01:43:562 (6) - replaced by 2 circles to highlight the stress
  29. 01:41:209 (2,4) - uh, actually short slider with head close by the end and a curved body looks awkward.
  30. 01:44:151 - inherited point here should be deleted because didn't change any options.
  31. 01:45:621 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  32. 01:49:298 (3,4) - make the blanket better: http://puu.sh/m66am/1fe5cd943e.jpg
  33. 01:50:621 (8,9) - the same as ↑↑↑ : http://puu.sh/m66ea/7bc9e0f17a.jpg
  34. 01:51:945 (4) - too curved and looks weird.
  35. 01:53:121 (7) - folding slider's head and end together is not approved if the map is for rank.
  36. 01:53:415 - inherited point here should be deleted because didn't change any options.
  37. 01:57:092 (1,2,3) - blanket is better i think: http://puu.sh/m66mb/60b32b5672.jpg
  38. 02:18:562 (4,6) - make the blanket better.
  39. 02:26:062 - stress here but slider begins here (02:25:915 (5) - ), suggest: change form this http://puu.sh/m66BH/e577de7b85.jpg to this http://puu.sh/m66Ga/026f02649a.jpg
  40. 02:26:945 (7,8) - stack them better like 02:28:121 (10,11)
  41. 02:37:827 (6,7) - blanket is better i think.
  42. 02:39:004 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  43. 02:40:180 (4) - folding slider's head and end together is not approved if the map is for rank.
  44. 02:47:533 (1) - too curved and looks weird.
  45. 02:59:592 (3,4,5) - stack them better.
  46. 03:01:356 (5,6,7) - these objects are too close, thin them.
  47. 03:08:856 (6,7,1,2,3) - change from http://puu.sh/m675I/c4437554be.jpg to http://puu.sh/m674s/6d21c14497.jpg

FF's Insanity

  1. 00:07:680 (5,6,7,8) - place them in a regular shape.
  2. 00:09:592 (3,6) - too close and look bad.
  3. 00:17:974 (2,4) - too close.
  4. 00:20:033 (12,1) - unreasonable distance because time interval between them is shorter than 00:19:886 (11,12) but space interval is lager.
  5. 00:24:445 (7,1) - make the blanket looks better
  6. 00:51:209 (2,3) - too close
  7. 00:51:209 (2,3) - why not move it to x:259 y:113
  8. 00:56:209 (5,6,1) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  9. 00:57:827 (1,3) - too close
  10. 01:02:533 (1) - ctrl + G and move it far away from circle6 to make a clokewise flow from 01:01:798 (2) to this slider
  11. 01:07:276 (12) - this slider should start from 01:07:239 in 1/6 beat snap
  12. 01:47:092 (5) - covered by 01:46:504 (2) and hard to react
  13. 01:50:327 (3) - the same as ↑↑↑
  14. 01:50:621 (5) - the same as ↑↑↑ (I am not sure if they are on purpose
  15. 01:52:680 (5,6) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  16. 01:57:533 (4) - covered and hard to react
  17. 01:57:827 (1) - ...suggestion: http://puu.sh/mCQaZ/aed40c23cd.jpg
  18. 02:18:562 (1,3) - too close
  19. 02:20:915 (1,2) - make a blanket
  20. 02:22:459 (3) - should start here 02:22:533
  21. 02:39:004 (1,2,3) - too close
  22. 02:39:739 (4,5) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  23. 02:46:062 (1,2) - too close
  24. 02:50:842 (10) - start from 02:50:768 (9) in 1/6 beat snap
  25. 02:59:004 (5,7,8,9) - too close
  26. 03:00:180 (12,1) - unreasonable jump

Sh's Extra

  1. 00:02:978 (5,6,7,8,9) 00:05:331 (5,6,7,8,9) 00:10:037 (5,6,7,8,9) - unnecessary to set a jump here.
  2. 00:20:037 (5) - x:368 y:160
  3. 00:44:742 (8) - move the clap hitsound to 00:44:889
  4. 01:56:654 (1,2) - suggestion http://puu.sh/mVapU/732721a697.jpg
  5. 02:31:801 (3) - this should be here 02:31:727
Good luck!


So, About it....

Someone Modified.... But I'll also fix it too and I remodified... Sorry :o

FF's Insanity

  1. 00:07:680 (5,6,7,8) - place them in a regular shape. - Done
  2. 00:09:592 (3,6) - too close and look bad. - Done
  3. 00:17:974 (2,4) - too close. - Done
  4. 00:20:033 (12,1) - unreasonable distance because time interval between them is shorter than 00:19:886 (11,12) but space interval is lager. - Do you mean "Larger" but... - Done
  5. 00:24:445 (7,1) - make the blanket looks better - Done
  6. 00:51:209 (2,3) - too close - Done
  7. 00:51:209 (2,3) - why not move it to x:259 y:113
  8. 00:56:209 (5,6,1) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  9. 00:57:827 (1,3) - too close
  10. 01:02:533 (1) - ctrl + G and move it far away from circle6 to make a clokewise flow from 01:01:798 (2) to this slider
  11. 01:07:276 (12) - this slider should start from 01:07:239 in 1/6 beat snap
  12. 01:47:092 (5) - covered by 01:46:504 (2) and hard to react - Though It's following the pattern of the slider at first but... anyways, It's changed by someone and, I remodified a bit too
  13. 01:50:327 (3) - the same as ↑↑↑ - Though It's following the pattern of the slider at first but... anyways, It's changed by someone and, I remodified a bit too
  14. 01:50:621 (5) - the same as ↑↑↑ (I am not sure if they are on purpose - Though It's following the pattern of the slider at first but... anyways, It's changed by someone and, I remodified a bit too
  15. 01:52:680 (5,6) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  16. 01:57:533 (4) - covered and hard to react
  17. 01:57:827 (1) - ...suggestion: http://puu.sh/mCQaZ/aed40c23cd.jpg
  18. 02:18:562 (1,3) - too close
  19. 02:20:915 (1,2) - make a blanket
  20. 02:22:459 (3) - should start here 02:22:533
  21. 02:39:004 (1,2,3) - too close
  22. 02:39:739 (4,5) - slider velocities are changed so each of them have to be added a newcombo
  23. 02:46:062 (1,2) - too close
  24. 02:50:842 (10) - start from 02:50:768 (9) in 1/6 beat snap
  25. 02:59:004 (5,7,8,9) - too close
  26. 03:00:180 (12,1) - unreasonable jump
(Wait... I'll still go on)
HitCoder
51 posts
Joined May 2015
HitCoder

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

done
http://puu.sh/kBsYT/747d7c6af9.osu
have fun
For some reason your diff reminds me of https://osu.ppy.sh/b/127138&m=0 [Rin] difficulty.
Just decided to mention it cause it just has similarities. Lol.
HitCoder
51 posts
Joined May 2015
HitCoder
Updated my difficulty, https://www.dropbox.com/s/um2eqk7uifdpseg/ZjKjKun%20-%20Tokyo%20Teddy%20Bear%20%28WelkinTheWolf%29%20%5BHitCoder%27s%20Another%5D.osu?dl=1
Hopefully it fixes some errors. Any things you dislike about the map I'll change.
This link will always be latest :D
Thankies~
Shiroi Hiroshi
190 posts
Joined March 2015
Shiroi Hiroshi

Renia Xenophere wrote:

I don't know if this can help and it's really my first time to mod... But I'll try my best!!!

For Sh's Extra

Not timed well the bpm is right and the sv too

The whole placement of notes in timing and timing sections should be changed its already follow the rythm

00:02:986 (6,7,8,9,10) - Unequal star? what ?

00:05:670 (7,8) - The overlap is uncomfortable its insane so im sure fine

01:20:632 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Woah!!! It's very uncomfortable to have a rapid at slow parts uh.. really ?

02:22:176 (2,3) - The sliders seems very fast for this .its fine i guess
Sh's Extra is really strange... I think I already saw the original mapping style...

I don't know if This helps but I hope so it really helps ;)
i will fix it if my pc better...
Spaghetti
1,118 posts
Joined August 2014
Spaghetti
so many fuzzies.

ill take a look at this set later.

btw sauziteoi your maps are awesome <3
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

Renia Xenophere wrote:

I don't know if this can help and it's really my first time to mod... But I'll try my best!!!

For Sh's Extra

Not timed well the bpm is right and the sv too

The whole placement of notes in timing and timing sections should be changed its already follow the rythm

00:02:986 (6,7,8,9,10) - Unequal star? what ?

00:05:670 (7,8) - The overlap is uncomfortable its insane so im sure fine

01:20:632 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Woah!!! It's very uncomfortable to have a rapid at slow parts uh.. really ?

02:22:176 (2,3) - The sliders seems very fast for this .its fine i guess
Sh's Extra is really strange... I think I already saw the original mapping style...

I don't know if This helps but I hope so it really helps ;)
i will fix it if my pc better...

Oh sorry I didn't know how modding worked, so I tried fixing it to my best ability same with Renia Xenophere's diff. XD
ImpulseTheFox
30 posts
Joined February 2014
ImpulseTheFox
Wowie, great map ^w^
Shiroi Hiroshi
190 posts
Joined March 2015
Shiroi Hiroshi
everything fixed and remapped , i'm sorry http://puu.sh/nMVzi/7035611e73.osu
HitCoder
51 posts
Joined May 2015
HitCoder

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

everything fixed and remapped , i'm sorry http://puu.sh/nMVzi/7035611e73.osu
My goodness shiro, it's like a completely different map!!!
It's awesome, I love it. I can't find any flaws so no mod, sorry. X3
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino
Mod for KittyAdventure's Insane



General
01:26:065 (1) - Should start Kiai Mode
Lower Hp drain to 5 or 6 because 7 Hp drain doesn't fit diff.
Some parts really hard to read, up to you to change it or not.
Examples of hard reading
02:48:712 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
00:27:389 (1,2,3) -
02:01:212 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
00:04:301 (2,3,4,1) -
00:58:271 (2,4,1) - This one is hard because People might try clicking one the slider "1" first and might not see the 4

Blanketing

SPOILER
00:15:624 (1,2) - Not blanket around perfectly
00:34:889 (2,3) - Not blanket around perfectly (at the end of the slider it's off by a bit http://puu.sh/oPECi/02663a1d9f.jpg&#41&#41
00:44:889 (1,2) - Same as ^^
00:50:624 (4,1) - Same as ^^
00:59:007 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:05:183 (2,3) - Same as ^^
01:19:154 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:23:859 (1,2,3) - Same as ^^
01:26:507 (2,3) - Same as ^^
01:29:595 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:28:271 (4,1) - Same as ^^
01:31:507 (3,1) - Same as ^^
01:32:683 (3,1) - Same as ^^
01:36:654 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:41:065 (3,1) - Same as ^^ (at the end of the slider it's off by a bit http://puu.sh/oPHZM/f76b0491d6.jpg
01:43:712 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:46:212 (5,1) - Same as ^^ (The beginning shows blue first http://puu.sh/oPFHB/c0039e15d3.jpg&#41
01:46:507 (2,3) - Same as ^^
01:47:683 (2,3) - Same as ^^
I think you see the picture so I'm going to stop with the blanketing modding.
Also One reason why it's sliders aren't blanketing right is because the way how you make them. Assuming you were making them while using 1/2 snap divisor the editor would let you place a mid point that would be in the 1/4 Snap because you're in 1/2 Snap. Also because the end point is not really at the end. (the end means the middle of the end hit circle)
For example at 02:39:007 (1,2) - Wrong http://puu.sh/oPGQ1/76aafa1d3f.jpg
Now this is fixed http://puu.sh/oPGYI/3171dd32cd.jpg
Other than that Nice GD

- Note if you want me to fixed all the blanketing I will.
P.S This is a thing on all your maps. Hope this helps
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren

WelkinTheWolf wrote:

Mod for KittyAdventure's Insane



General
01:26:065 (1) - Should start Kiai Mode. Lol, i don't feel if that need kiai time, so no
Lower Hp drain to 5 or 6 because 7 Hp drain doesn't fit diff. Change to 6.5
Some parts really hard to read, up to you to change it or not. I trying to make that is hard, so it's no problem
Examples of hard reading
02:48:712 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't think if that hard to reading but QAT really not problem that! because some QAT used that too!
00:27:389 (1,2,3) - It's overlap
02:01:212 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I don't think if that hard to reading but QAT really not problem that! because some QAT used that too!
00:04:301 (2,3,4,1) - It's overlap
00:58:271 (2,4,1) - This one is hard because People might try clicking one the slider "1" first and might not see the 4. It's overlap

Blanketing

SPOILER
00:15:624 (1,2) - Not blanket around perfectly
00:34:889 (2,3) - Not blanket around perfectly (at the end of the slider it's off by a bit http://puu.sh/oPECi/02663a1d9f.jpg&#41&#41
00:44:889 (1,2) - Same as ^^
00:50:624 (4,1) - Same as ^^
00:59:007 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:05:183 (2,3) - Same as ^^
01:19:154 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:23:859 (1,2,3) - Same as ^^
01:26:507 (2,3) - Same as ^^
01:29:595 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:28:271 (4,1) - Same as ^^
01:31:507 (3,1) - Same as ^^
01:32:683 (3,1) - Same as ^^
01:36:654 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:41:065 (3,1) - Same as ^^ (at the end of the slider it's off by a bit http://puu.sh/oPHZM/f76b0491d6.jpg
01:43:712 (1,2) - Same as ^^
01:46:212 (5,1) - Same as ^^ (The beginning shows blue first http://puu.sh/oPFHB/c0039e15d3.jpg&#41
01:46:507 (2,3) - Same as ^^
01:47:683 (2,3) - Same as ^^
I think you see the picture so I'm going to stop with the blanketing modding.
Also One reason why it's sliders aren't blanketing right is because the way how you make them. Assuming you were making them while using 1/2 snap divisor the editor would let you place a mid point that would be in the 1/4 Snap because you're in 1/2 Snap. Also because the end point is not really at the end. (the end means the middle of the end hit circle)
For example at 02:39:007 (1,2) - Wrong http://puu.sh/oPGQ1/76aafa1d3f.jpg
Now this is fixed http://puu.sh/oPGYI/3171dd32cd.jpg
Other than that Nice GD

- Note if you want me to fixed all the blanketing I will.
P.S This is a thing on all your maps. Hope this helps
Blanket is fine for me, so that is fine, no change

If you change something anything without my permission, i will kill you!!!
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472,64,173271,6,0,B|400:52|400:52|320:60,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
252,20,173712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,104,173859,2,0,P|224:152|208:192,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
132,132,174301,6,0,P|76:152|0:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,0,174742,2,0,P|76:36|64:92,2,70,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,123,175183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,175330,2,0,L|56:280,1,70,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,340,175624,6,0,B|136:324|168:336|168:336|208:352|240:332,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
204,247,176065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,180,176212,2,0,P|200:204|208:256,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
284,128,176654,6,0,P|244:96|140:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,68,177095,1,2,0:2:0:0:
24,144,177242,2,0,L|16:224,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,276,177536,2,0,L|109:206,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
187,335,177830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,352,177977,6,0,P|116:368|204:312,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,288,178418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,340,178565,2,0,P|384:360|424:352,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
376,144,179007,6,0,P|412:204|384:288,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,179448,1,2,0:2:0:0:
320,216,179521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,179595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,179742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,179889,1,2,0:2:0:0:
84,164,180036,1,2,0:2:0:0:
44,244,180183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,308,180330,6,0,P|64:332|-24:308,2,140,4|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
176,248,181065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,296,181212,1,2,0:2:0:0:
328,244,181359,6,0,P|404:216|480:256,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,181801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,320,181948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,234,182095,2,0,L|461:150,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,84,182389,2,0,P|376:96|332:88,1,70,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,44,182683,6,0,P|256:88|300:168,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,183124,2,0,P|180:228|96:256,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,304,183565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,245,183712,6,0,P|133:189|97:101,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,36,184154,1,2,0:2:0:0:
109,114,184301,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,120,184448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,184595,1,2,0:2:0:0:
168,196,184742,2,0,P|208:204|248:192,1,70,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,114,185036,6,0,P|80:148|88:256,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,328,185477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,328,185624,2,0,P|108:324|148:288,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,276,185918,1,2,0:2:0:0:
212,276,186065,6,0,P|288:320|352:296,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,100,186507,2,0,P|263:164|287:228,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
428,160,186948,2,0,P|380:156|340:176,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
492,228,187389,6,0,P|516:180|484:88,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,24,187830,2,0,P|396:40|360:40,1,70,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,12,188124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,100,188271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,163,188418,6,0,L|242:239,1,70,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,299,188712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,299,188786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,299,188859,1,0,0:3:0:0:
85,261,189007,1,0,0:3:0:0:
242,233,189154,1,0,0:3:0:0:
208,384,189301,5,0,0:0:0:0:
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino
Modding for Shiroi Hiroshi


General
A lot is not snapped on the beat (Use Ctrl + Shift+ A too help) You should get something like this pop up ---> http://puu.sh/oThRB/a47bbb601f.png
Not saying fix all of them but the "Object' end is not snapped!" Is something that need fixing. Also try and stay on 1/4 Beat snap you hardly ever need more then that.

SPOILER
00:16:359 (2) - Sounds like a random hit sound for no reason
00:57:021 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Use distance snapping like .7x and make the stream more smooth like this -->http://puu.sh/oThG0/96c9d77248.jpg
00:58:565 (3) - Too hard to see
01:21:212 (4,1) - Jump too far and it's unexpected should be close like the distance at 01:18:859 (4,1) -
02:14:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - too random try and make a pattern
02:42:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like the idea of big jump but it seem like it's too much
02:44:448 (3,4,5,1) - same as ^^
02:48:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too far?
Kiai Musistar
26 posts
Joined December 2014
Kiai Musistar
I LOVE THIS SONG *-*

Can I make a difficulty for you?
Normal/Easy

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
HitCoder
51 posts
Joined May 2015
HitCoder
Mods
Draco's Easy
Needs hitsounds, slider velocity is too high for "easy", and some notes occur on blue notes where they are not supposed to (eg 00:03:859 (3) -)

Dab9's Lunatic
00:05:330 (6,7,8,9) - Patterns like this are only seen in older mapping styles, while there's nothing wrong with this really it does throw the player off a little. Maybe try changing the pattern and stopping stacks like this with this kind of layout?

sparkling56 wrote:

Can I make a difficulty for you?
May I suggest privately messaging him? I know him well enough to know it's not a no so I also suggest starting mapping your diff, make it good tho ;p
dracrosinos
19 posts
Joined March 2013
dracrosinos

HitCoder wrote:

Mods
Draco's Easy
Needs hitsounds, slider velocity is too high for "easy", and some notes occur on blue notes where they are not supposed to (eg 00:03:859 (3) -)

I added hitsounds, although I'm not good at hitsounding so they probably will need to be done again.
I think the SV is fine, think of it as a "more normal easy"
I have no idea what you're talking about the blue notes.
Anyways, I ended up remapping the first minute or so as well.

Here ya go fam: http://puu.sh/pwwnY/117877c141.osu
Dab
180 posts
Joined December 2014
Dab

HitCoder wrote:

Dab9's Lunatic
00:05:330 (6,7,8,9) - Patterns like this are only seen in older mapping styles, while there's nothing wrong with this really it does throw the player off a little. Maybe try changing the pattern and stopping stacks like this with this kind of layout?
Changed, thank you. :) Submitted the .osu over to Welkin.

edit: buuut in case that's not okay and I need to put it here, fine: http://puu.sh/pwy4f/c1acf43938.osu
Yeen
16 posts
Joined February 2016
Yeen
[mod notes]

I'm going to give you guys a deal, furry-to-furry because I think this project is great. If you fix your bpm and offset on this song, I'll mod the entire setlist. Pretty sweet, right? Finding the appropriate bpm can be really hard, but I've got a program that gives me a generalisation and then I tweak the bpm to be very precise after.

Offset is actually just right, but damn, are we raving here??? 205 bpm is WAY to fast, and it'll cause a lot of subtle problems to occur when the player is playing the song and trying to hit notes.

The appropriate bpm is 102!

Get that fixed, and you've got this yeen's word!

~Zxoe
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino

zxoe wrote:

[mod notes]

I'm going to give you guys a deal, furry-to-furry because I think this project is great. If you fix your bpm and offset on this song, I'll mod the entire setlist. Pretty sweet, right? Finding the appropriate bpm can be really hard, but I've got a program that gives me a generalisation and then I tweak the bpm to be very precise after.

Offset is actually just right, but damn, are we raving here??? 205 bpm is WAY to fast, and it'll cause a lot of subtle problems to occur when the player is playing the song and trying to hit notes.

The appropriate bpm is 102!

Get that fixed, and you've got this yeen's word!

~Zxoe

Really confused right now because the ranked Tokyo teddy bear BPM is 204 and 102 is just that 204 in half so... so the timing is the same.
Yeen
16 posts
Joined February 2016
Yeen
Really confused right now because the ranked Tokyo teddy bear BPM is 204 and 102 is just that 204 in half so... so the timing is the same.
To begin with, sorry this took me so long to get back to. Osu! Didn't alert me of this response.

Well, the approach rate is always going to be faster on higher bpm songs, and that could be what was throwing me off. I was referring to your 1.8 star version when I initially wrote this, and I interpreted the oddity of that beat-map as out of bpm. I realise now that it was because of where the beats had been placed (in terms of points in the song, that threw me off). When there are minor oddities I can't quite place, I usually defer to BPM problems, since that's what the Beat-map community is rife with.

In light of all this, I'll start working on some mod notes ^,..,^
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
It's 204, since i don't hear if that song is slower!
Renia Xenophere
68 posts
Joined April 2014
Renia Xenophere
I'll Remake My diff...
Welkin Kamino
81 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Welkin Kamino
Only my suggestion hopefully you can understand some of it

Mod
00:30:771 (4) - Move slightly like --> http://puu.sh/qtsjc/3bf1d0cadd.jpg
00:33:124 (4,5,6) - would say move slightly like this --> http://puu.sh/qtso7/dd876e7813.jpg http://puu.sh/qtso7/dd876e7813.jpg
00:37:977 (8) - What happen to the slider's end? suggestion ---> http://puu.sh/qtswS/47390c93a9.jpg
00:39:007 (2,3) - Pull the one point that makes the slider go around it a bit far there like ---> http://puu.sh/qtsGi/35eb86d085.jpg
00:46:212 (2,4) - I see that your're trying to make it go along the side of the first slider but I whould say give it some room, suggestion ---> http://puu.sh/qtsPc/6be32bbfad.jpg http://puu.sh/qtsPE/0ab387e8e9.jpg
00:48:859 (2) - Move a bit more down distance change by a little is fine like ---> http://puu.sh/qtsYi/085771df30.jpg
00:54:007 (5,6,7) - Sounds better like this http://puu.sh/qtt5f/47e57fc6ac.jpg http://puu.sh/qtt60/d7be0a1ecf.jpg
00:54:301 (7) - suggestion ---> http://puu.sh/qttb7/bafcd6c34d.jpg
00:55:477 (1) - suggestion ---> http://puu.sh/qtteN/382d3d4112.jpg then you can do something like this ----> http://puu.sh/qttiL/2b46e9c8c2.jpg
00:58:418 (2) - suggestion maybe put in the middle like - http://puu.sh/qttn0/aa6a40eccf.jpg
00:58:565 (3,4) - suggestion - http://puu.sh/qttqS/0943d99b5c.jpg
01:02:977 (5) - suggestion - http://puu.sh/qttzI/443467e3a0.jpg
01:03:418 (6,8) - suggestion - http://puu.sh/qttCh/ac8017f1b2.jpg
01:09:301 (7) - Feels better if - http://puu.sh/qttEo/18d6f5c258.jpg
01:11:213 (3,4) - Could blanket better - http://puu.sh/qttGM/9187568005.jpg
01:12:095 (1) - too curved and could blanket the next hit circle - http://puu.sh/qttKE/1364820005.jpg
01:17:830 (2) - Could blanket better and give it some more space - http://puu.sh/qttN9/29056c0304.jpg
01:18:271 (3) - suggestion both sliders blanket the hi circles that were there - http://puu.sh/qttQs/0c5dbbbf93.jpg
01:19:595 (5) - Move up by one tiny grid size to fit blanket perfectly
01:20:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion something like this - http://puu.sh/qttWz/0a30435fb1.jpg
01:22:977 (7) - In head it seems like a good idea but if too long looks weird, suggestion - http://puu.sh/qtu1L/08105f412a.jpg
01:25:624 (4) - Missing one more note after this one
01:30:330 (4) - could be used to blanket the next hit circle suggestion - http://puu.sh/qtudK/8879f2fa87.jpg
01:31:065 (1,2,3,4) - blanket around better maybe like this - http://puu.sh/qtui2/669e638f57.jpg
01:32:683 (4) - could blanket better suggestion - http://puu.sh/qtumX/41a0c62d7b.jpg
01:37:830 (3) - too curved just normal "S" like slider - http://puu.sh/qtuAm/37ab118c53.jpg
01:39:006 (5) - think it would be better up like this http://puu.sh/qtuD9/157f2eb840.jpg
01:42:977 (6) - can be used to blanket the next hit circle like - http://puu.sh/qtuHV/658268a036.jpg
01:43:418 (7,8,9) - a triangle pattern seems best like - http://puu.sh/qtuJ2/b870e3235c.jpg
01:49:448 (10) - space out a bit farther I would say
01:49:595 (1) - Seems kinda odd maybe something like this? - http://puu.sh/qtuXH/b770f91a4c.jpg
01:50:771 (4) - the first slider was better from early
01:55:181 (4) - can be used for blanking like - http://puu.sh/qtv1N/763bfff380.jpg
01:56:211 (1,2) - Same as ^^^^
01:56:946 (3,4) - Same as ^^^^
01:59:446 (5) - Still can be used for blanketing the note before it also beginning is not equal - http://puu.sh/qtv6A/3110255158.jpg
02:00:328 (2,3) - can be used for blanking like - http://puu.sh/qtvaS/d71280406b.jpg
02:04:887 (4) - beginning is not equal/too curved - http://puu.sh/qtvdc/b1168d1da3.jpg
02:06:505 (8) - too curved - http://puu.sh/qtvg3/8001250bee.jpg
02:08:417 (1,2,3,4) - Could put it like this - http://puu.sh/qtvpd/589553b002.jpg - http://puu.sh/qtvpD/21750b39e8.jpg
02:10:475 (1,2,3,4) - not perfect stream curve(I know being picky)
02:10:770 (3,4) - doing too much for a little slider, suggestion --> http://puu.sh/qtvwm/9fdc1c971f.jpg
02:12:389 (2) - going to skip placing a note here?
02:13:123 (4) - weird curve, suggestion - http://puu.sh/qtvCc/01b46fd273.jpg
02:24:740 (2) - should be an Ctrl + H + J from slider 5 at 02:24:299 (5) - You should get something like this - http://puu.sh/qtvJ9/8e081eb47c.jpg
02:25:475 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe Space this out more
02:26:064 (9,1) - weird curve, suggestion - http://puu.sh/qtvQ4/9b6f68df25.jpg
02:27:240 (4) - Could be more equal like - http://puu.sh/qtvSJ/855f0fa88f.jpg
02:34:740 (3) - Could be more equal like - http://puu.sh/qtvWf/f669a82722.jpg
02:36:652 (4,5,6,7) - Pretty hard pattern maybe something like this - http://puu.sh/qtw0a/faa17a4e81.jpg
02:37:534 (8,10) - could blanket the 8 better like this - http://puu.sh/qtw1L/034c3db45b.jpg
02:41:358 (4) - Could be more equal like (hopefully you figured it out what I mean)
02:42:534 (4) - Same As ^^^^^
02:44:887 (7) - Like one grid off from perfect blanket
02:49:152 (1) - end part could be more equal
02:49:740 (1) - can put this at the red mark like this - http://puu.sh/qtwef/3459af04d3.jpg
02:49:740 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion http://puu.sh/qtwpZ/30bd9f495d.jpg http://puu.sh/qtwqD/cc1e67047d.jpg Video --> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Z27bRv ... e=youtu.be
02:51:211 (2,3) - Ctrl + H + J + G I looks better Maybe like http://puu.sh/qtwyY/ce9418b51a.jpg
02:52:388 (4) - Move this a bit to the right for perfect blanket like - http://puu.sh/qtwAd/a420f98fd8.jpg
02:54:006 (3) - suggestion - http://puu.sh/qtwKe/c8ca3fe3fc.jpg
02:54:741 (4) - the ending part can be more equal
02:55:182 (5) - Slider too curved
02:55:623 (1) - Slider too small for it to look good suggest just a line like - http://puu.sh/qtwLN/d056dc88fa.jpg
02:56:358 (3) - Could blanket like - http://puu.sh/qtwP2/03712b3383.jpg
02:59:301 (11) - Sound like there should be a note here
03:02:093 (7) - could Ctrl + H + J for slider 03:02:387 (8) -
03:06:064 (7,9) - Would suggest moving these down by a bit like - http://puu.sh/qtwWF/911c13aeb2.jpg
03:07:387 (3) - suggestion - http://puu.sh/qtx0E/104d40f8b0.jpg
03:07:828 (4) - could blanket the start of the silder 03:07:387 (3) -
03:08:490 (1) - End spinner here 03:09:301 (1) -
HitCoder
51 posts
Joined May 2015
HitCoder
updated the diff based on Welkin's mod. Thanks.
I was writing responses to each thing until I accidentally closed the tab so half of 2 hours work was lost XD
https://puu.sh/qu5oE/b002232cec.osu

Main reasons for not sorting out a few of the suggestions are usually decided by how the changes affect the flow. some things Welkin suggested made the flow less smooth IMO.
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