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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 9월 21일 목요일 at 오후 11:33:56

Artist: Narae
Title: Horangpungnyuga
Source: 나와 호랑이님
Tags: 상록수 SQUARE MUSIQ MVZ Production My Tiger's O2Jam Light Novel Underflow Genocide PatZar
BPM: 160
Filesize: 27979kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.87 stars, 239 notes)
  2. Gen's Oni (3.58 stars, 542 notes)
  3. Inner Oni (3.91 stars, 659 notes)
  4. Kantan (1.54 stars, 146 notes)
  5. Muzukashii (2.52 stars, 377 notes)
  6. Oni (3.32 stars, 473 notes)


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Gen's Oni by PatZar
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From Queue : t/372575

[Futsuu]

Seems fine.

[Inner Oni]

00:00:264 - dd kd k
00:01:014 - ^
00:01:764 - ddkddkkdk
00:06:639 - kdk
00:14:514 - ddddk
00:15:264 - dd dk
00:16:014 - ddddk
00:18:264 - dd kd
00:19:014 - ddddk
00:19:764 - kdddk
00:21:264 - dd dk
00:22:014 - ddddk
00:24:357 - Delete
00:24:826 - d
00:25:014 - kdddk
00:26:326 - d
00:27:264 - dd kd

00:27:826-00:38:514 - seems unnatural, not matched song

00:39:264-00:50:514 - like this, make more to match song

00:51:264-01:01:576 - recommend to match vocal
posted

Taiko Mapper wrote:

From Queue : t/372575

[Futsuu]

Seems fine.

[Inner Oni]

00:00:264 - dd kd k Now is better to hear imo.
00:01:014 - ^ Same as above.
00:01:764 - ddkddkkdk I'll consider about this.
00:06:639 - kdk It is lower pitch than around imo.
00:14:514 - ddddk I followed some drum sound on here. but i'll consider about this.
00:15:264 - dd dk No. although i didn't follow vocal but it is fit the music now.
00:16:014 - ddddk Same as above.
00:18:264 - dd kd ^
00:19:014 - ddddk ^
00:19:764 - kdddk ^
00:21:264 - dd dk ^
00:22:014 - ddddk ^
00:24:357 - Delete Not bad but i'll consider more about this.
00:24:826 - d Same reason as 00:15:264. No change.
00:25:014 - kdddk Same as above.
00:26:326 - d ^
00:27:264 - dd kd ^

00:27:826-00:38:514 - seems unnatural, not matched song There is sound surely.

00:39:264-00:50:514 - like this, make more to match song

00:51:264-01:01:576 - recommend to match vocal No change for now. i will try to other pattern.
Thanks for modding.
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이너오니만 모딩해달라고 하셔서 이너오니만 할게요

Inner Oni
초반에 나오는 패턴들이 박자가 다 똑같아서 솔직히 좀 별로네요.. 00:05:514 (35,36,37,38,39) - 이부분이나 00:07:014 (45,46,47,48,49) - 이부분을 ㅇ ㅇㅇㅇ ㅇ 이런식으로 약간 박자를 다르게 해주는게 좋을것 같아요

00:11:514 (75,76,77,78,79) - ^

00:12:264 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - 노트 밀집도가 높다가 갑자기 줄어드는건 좀 어색하다 생각해요 저기에 노트를 더 넣기보다는 초반이기도 하고 밀집도를 줄여보는것도?

00:57:264 (380,381,382) ~ 01:01:389 (413,414,415) - 음... 뒤부분 소리에 맞춘거 같은데 이렇게 길게 같은패턴이 나오는건 좀... 이부분엔 노트를 빼기는 좀 그렇고 몇개 추가해서 5연타라던지를 넣어보는건 어떨까요

01:38:514 (654,655,656,657,658) - 처음과 동일

01:40:014 (664,665,666,667,668) - ^

01:44:514 (694,695,696,697,698) - ^

3초부터 조용해지기 전까지(51초) 밀집이 너무 심해보여요 난이도를 좀 낮추는게 좋을듯
패턴에는 딱히 지적할게 없네요


GL
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혹시나 해서 모딩 요청해봤는데 역시 문제가 꽤 있네요. 모딩 수정 내역은 마우스 오는대로 올릴게요.
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Blonde Hair wrote:

이너오니만 모딩해달라고 하셔서 이너오니만 할게요

Inner Oni
초반에 나오는 패턴들이 박자가 다 똑같아서 솔직히 좀 별로네요.. 00:05:514 (35,36,37,38,39) - 이부분이나 00:07:014 (45,46,47,48,49) - 이부분을 ㅇ ㅇㅇㅇ ㅇ 이런식으로 약간 박자를 다르게 해주는게 좋을것 같아요

00:11:514 (75,76,77,78,79) - ^

00:12:264 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - 노트 밀집도가 높다가 갑자기 줄어드는건 좀 어색하다 생각해요 저기에 노트를 더 넣기보다는 초반이기도 하고 밀집도를 줄여보는것도? 위의 내용 포함해서 일단 보류, 갈아엎는거라 시간이 좀 걸릴것 같아요.

00:57:264 (380,381,382) ~ 01:01:389 (413,414,415) - 음... 뒤부분 소리에 맞춘거 같은데 이렇게 길게 같은패턴이 나오는건 좀... 이부분엔 노트를 빼기는 좀 그렇고 몇개 추가해서 5연타라던지를 넣어보는건 어떨까요 Changed

01:38:514 (654,655,656,657,658) - 처음과 동일

01:40:014 (664,665,666,667,668) - ^

01:44:514 (694,695,696,697,698) - ^ 마찬가지로 시간이 좀 걸림

3초부터 조용해지기 전까지(51초) 밀집이 너무 심해보여요 난이도를 좀 낮추는게 좋을듯
패턴에는 딱히 지적할게 없네요


GL
Thanks for modding.
posted
hi from my queu

>General
  1. OD HP on Kantan and Futsuu.. is wrong, why thats swapped ww? Kantan is OD 4, Futsuu is 3?, fix this XD


>Inner Oni
  1. 00:26:326 - over? change to don.. bcus is low then 00:26:514 - this high drum.. and this well fit with vocal too
  2. 00:38:326 - same above, but if want variety is fine. but i guess u like consistentcy stuff
  3. 01:35:889 (636) - change don? for consistent with other diff? yep
  4. wuw nice mapped


>Oni
  1. 00:26:326 - nah u did it, so maybe u fix this for consistent hitsounding on Inner
  2. 00:38:326 - same above like Inner, and 00:37:764 - kkddk 1/2 is well nice for flow Vocal
  3. ww well emphasize mapping on vocal, and music too


>Muzukashii
  1. 00:11:889 - inconsistent patterns.. change to don and 00:11:982 - delete this
  2. 00:13:201 (52,53) - and then, Ctrl G this, 00:13:482 - add kat, 00:07:014 (25,26,27,28,29) - consistent with this yeah?
  3. 01:44:889 (384,385) - same above, want consistent this patterns?
  4. oh come on.. why Taiko have nice diff if mapped.. that is.. Muzukashii!1!! lo/ *I Like Play Muzukashii*


>Futsuu
  1. well many 1/1 n less 1/2 mapped. but looks good. nice get rest,
  2. okay.. 01:04:389 (113,114,115) - dkd 1/2 looks harsh for futsuu players, so u want make ddd 1/2? and 01:10:389 (129,130,131) - kkk 1/2? this nice variety and easir to play.. just it Futsuu.. well u did it~


>Kantan
  1. well, maybe I cant say somethink? thats Righd!1!


GLuck! :lol:
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Surono wrote:

hi from my queu

>General
  1. OD HP on Kantan and Futsuu.. is wrong, why thats swapped ww? Kantan is OD 4, Futsuu is 3?, fix this XD lol cuz i am stupid. thanks.


>Inner Oni
  1. 00:26:326 - over? change to don.. bcus is low then 00:26:514 - this high drum.. and this well fit with vocal too Fixed!
  2. 00:38:326 - same above, but if want variety is fine. but i guess u like consistentcy stuff Fixed.
  3. 01:35:889 (636) - change don? for consistent with other diff? yep Changed.
  4. wuw nice mapped >w<


>Oni
  1. 00:26:326 - nah u did it, so maybe u fix this for consistent hitsounding on Inner Yeap!
  2. 00:38:326 - same above like Inner, and 00:37:764 - kkddk 1/2 is well nice for flow Vocal Fixed.
  3. ww well emphasize mapping on vocal, and music too


>Muzukashii
  1. 00:11:889 - inconsistent patterns.. change to don and 00:11:982 - delete this Fixed.
  2. 00:13:201 (52,53) - and then, Ctrl G this, 00:13:482 - add kat, 00:07:014 (25,26,27,28,29) - consistent with this yeah? Yeah! changed!
  3. 01:44:889 (384,385) - same above, want consistent this patterns? Fixed.
  4. oh come on.. why Taiko have nice diff if mapped.. that is.. Muzukashii!1!! lo/ *I Like Play Muzukashii*


>Futsuu
  1. well many 1/1 n less 1/2 mapped. but looks good. nice get rest,
  2. okay.. 01:04:389 (113,114,115) - dkd 1/2 looks harsh for futsuu players, so u want make ddd 1/2? and 01:10:389 (129,130,131) - kkk 1/2? this nice variety and easir to play.. just it Futsuu.. well u did it~ Changed to other way.


>Kantan
  1. well, maybe I cant say somethink? thats Righd!1!


GLuck! :lol:
Thanks for modding XD
posted
마더뻐킹 불도저

[내면의 악마]

00:17:326 - 이부분을 지금처럼하면 뭔가 뛰어가다가 돌뿌리에 걸려 넘어져 발목삐는 느낌이라 hoxy./ dk k dk 이런식으로 바꿔뽀씨는꼐어떤까요
00:20:326 - 등등 ok
00:27:264 - 요르케 노트 많아지는건 비선호지만 그건 제 개취니 느머가고
00:29:326 - 이 부분을 dkkddkd 으로하면 더 치기도 편하고 (언더)플로우도 좋아질거라고 썡깎하ㅃ니따
00:32:326 - 내가 무슨말을 할지 알겠지 bro
00:43:764 - 이것도 느무 길어서 다른부분이랑 안어울리기도하고 치기힘드렁서 블케. 00:49:576 - 이부분 도입부라 생각하고 바꾸ㅃ씨따

00:57:264 - 여기도 좀만 주려줍시다.
01:07:951 (453,454,455,456,457) - 이것도 kkddk으로
01:19:951 (538,539,540,541,542,543,544) - 요것도 위에거랑 맞춰서 kkddkdk 하면 좋겠지만 별로면 놔두셔도되고. 아 근데 위에건 진짜 바꾸셔야함

개귀찮다
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Dark Fang wrote:

마더뻐킹 불도저

[내면의 악마]

00:17:326 - 이부분을 지금처럼하면 뭔가 뛰어가다가 돌뿌리에 걸려 넘어져 발목삐는 느낌이라 hoxy./ dk k dk 이런식으로 바꿔뽀씨는꼐어떤까요 확실이 그 편이 좀더 하기 편할지도 모르겠는데, 일단은 보류할게요. 왜냐하면 백그라운드쪽 음악이 저런식으로 들려요.
00:20:326 - 등등 ok 비슷한 이유로 보류
00:27:264 - 요르케 노트 많아지는건 비선호지만 그건 제 개취니 느머가고 일단 이전하곤 좀 다르게 하려고 노트를 늘리긴 했습니다만, 다음에도 모딩 오면 고려를 해봐야겠네요.
00:29:326 - 이 부분을 dkkddkd 으로하면 더 치기도 편하고 (언더)플로우도 좋아질거라고 썡깎하ㅃ니따 백그라운드 음악이 저런느낌이기에 마찬가지로 보류
00:32:326 - 내가 무슨말을 할지 알겠지 bro 위와 동일
00:43:764 - 이것도 느무 길어서 다른부분이랑 안어울리기도하고 치기힘드렁서 블케. 00:49:576 - 이부분 도입부라 생각하고 바꾸ㅃ씨따 다른 패턴으로 변경

00:57:264 - 여기도 좀만 주려줍시다. 여긴 점점 노트가 늘어난다는걸 3연타로 이전에 표현을 해놨으니 괜찮을것 같아요.
01:07:951 (453,454,455,456,457) - 이것도 kkddk으로 자세히 들어보면 dkkdk 맞긴 한데, kkddk이 현 상황에선 더 잘맞을것 같으니 변경
01:19:951 (538,539,540,541,542,543,544) - 요것도 위에거랑 맞춰서 kkddkdk 하면 좋겠지만 별로면 놔두셔도되고. 아 근데 위에건 진짜 바꾸셔야함 Fixed

개귀찮다 시간내주셔서 감사합니다.
Thanks for modding :3
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[General]
00:51:264 - SV x0.9 because the song is slow down a bit here.
01:03:264 - If applied ^ , SV x1.0 or x1.1 here.

[Muzu]
00:15:076 - delete?
00:44:889 - ^
01:31:107 - add k
01:25:107 - ^

[Oni]
01:47:326 - add d
01:46:951 - add d

Sorry for bad mod because your map is quite good enough
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Prophecy wrote:

[General]
00:51:264 - SV x0.9 because the song is slow down a bit here.
01:03:264 - If applied ^ , SV x1.0 or x1.1 here. I don't want to change velocity.

[Muzu]
00:15:076 - delete? I'll consider about this.
00:44:889 - ^ Same as above.
01:31:107 - add k ^
01:25:107 - ^ ^

[Oni]
01:47:326 - add d Now is better imo.
01:46:951 - add d Same as above.

Sorry for bad mod because your map is quite good enough Thanks XD
Thanks for modding :3
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Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.

[ Futsuu]

01:20:701 (155,156) - Change to k to follow the consistency with 01:08:514 (124,125,126,127) -
01:46:764 (210,211,212) - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.

[ Muzukashii]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.

[ Oni]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.

[ Inner Oni]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song.

Excelent Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
posted

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. No change for consistency with 00:13:764

[ Futsuu]

01:20:701 (155,156) - Change to k to follow the consistency with 01:08:514 (124,125,126,127) - Changed both to kkd.
01:46:764 (210,211,212) - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan

[ Muzukashii]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan

[ Oni]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan

[ Inner Oni]

01:47:514 - Change to K to follow the finish of the song. Same as Kantan

Excelent Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~ Thanks
Thanks for modding XD
posted
you remind me of ploenar. wait. you ARE ploenar!!

from my queue~

[Kantan]
it's good.

00:35:514 (36) - change to d to make stronger feels at 00:36:264 (37) - ?

00:40:576 () - note in red tick is rarely used in kantan. change to other pattern? like move it to 00:40:764 - and add k at 00:41:139 -
00:46:576 () - same with above, move to 00:46:764 - and add k at 00:47:139 -

00:54:264 () - k is better to emphashize the low pitch at 00:55:764 ()
00:57:264 () - change to d for consistency with 00:51:264 -
01:00:264 () - d, the instument's pitch seems going down

actually you can add more notes in the kiai like below:
01:17:889 () - move to 01:17:139 -
01:17:514 - add k
01:23:889 () - move to 01:23:139 -
01:23:514 - add k

[Futsuu]
00:02:514 (5) - D sounds better here

00:04:014 ~ 00:13:764 - the triple 1/1 notes sequence might be very long and boring.
00:05:889 () - delete
00:08:889 () - ^
00:11:889 () - ^

00:41:889 () - move to 00:41:139 - ?
00:47:889 () - move to 00:47:139 -

00:57:264 () - d? refer to 00:51:264 -
00:58:389 () - move to 00:59:139 -
00:59:889 () - delete

01:35:514 (184,185) - maybe delete for longer break?
01:38:889 () - delete
01:41:889 () - ^
01:44:889 () - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:02:514 (10) - D
00:46:951 (168,169,170,171) - kdkk fits vocal better
00:40:951 (145,146,147,148) - kdkd
00:52:764 (188,189) - swap

00:02:326 () - can be deleted
00:53:889 () - ^ for little break in calm part
00:56:889 () - ^

00:56:514 () - change to d
01:08:514 () - change to d
01:20:514 () - ^

very good. but maybe you need to remove some notes (like 20 or so) for better spread with futsuu and Oni.

[Oni]
00:02:514 (13) - D
perfect, but maybe can make a little harder?

[Inner Oni]
00:17:701 - add note? the duplets here not sounds nice to me
00:20:701 - ^
00:23:701 - ^
other than that is good.


thats all from me. Good luck!
posted

Flying Pan wrote:

you remind me of ploenar. wait. you ARE ploenar!! Σ(゚Д゚)

from my queue~

[Kantan]
it's good.

00:35:514 (36) - change to d to make stronger feels at 00:36:264 (37) - ? I'll consider about this.

00:40:576 () - note in red tick is rarely used in kantan. change to other pattern? like move it to 00:40:764 - and add k at 00:41:139 - I'll consider about this.
00:46:576 () - same with above, move to 00:46:764 - and add k at 00:47:139 - Same as above.

00:54:264 () - k is better to emphashize the low pitch at 00:55:764 () Changed
00:57:264 () - change to d for consistency with 00:51:264 - Fixed
01:00:264 () - d, the instument's pitch seems going down I'll consider about this.

actually you can add more notes in the kiai like below: I'll try to add notes later.
01:17:889 () - move to 01:17:139 -
01:17:514 - add k
01:23:889 () - move to 01:23:139 -
01:23:514 - add k

[Futsuu]
00:02:514 (5) - D sounds better here Changed

00:04:014 ~ 00:13:764 - the triple 1/1 notes sequence might be very long and boring.
00:05:889 () - delete Removed
00:08:889 () - ^ ^
00:11:889 () - ^ ^

00:41:889 () - move to 00:41:139 - ? Sounds better. Moved!
00:47:889 () - move to 00:47:139 -

00:57:264 () - d? refer to 00:51:264 - Okay
00:58:389 () - move to 00:59:139 - Moved
00:59:889 () - delete Removed

01:35:514 (184,185) - maybe delete for longer break? Okay
01:38:889 () - delete Removed
01:41:889 () - ^ ^
01:44:889 () - ^ ^

[Muzukashii]
00:02:514 (10) - D Changed
00:46:951 (168,169,170,171) - kdkk fits vocal better No change for consistency with Oni difficulty.
00:40:951 (145,146,147,148) - kdkd Now is better for me.
00:52:764 (188,189) - swap

00:02:326 () - can be deleted Removed for emphasizing melody.
00:53:889 () - ^ for little break in calm part I'll consider about this.
00:56:889 () - ^ Same as above.

00:56:514 () - change to d I think it is fit the music.
01:08:514 () - change to d I'll consider about this.
01:20:514 () - ^ Same as above.

very good. but maybe you need to remove some notes (like 20 or so) for better spread with futsuu and Oni. Nerf'd.

[Oni]
00:02:514 (13) - D Changed
perfect, but maybe can make a little harder?

[Inner Oni]
00:17:701 - add note? the duplets here not sounds nice to me I'll consider about this.
00:20:701 - ^ Same as above.
00:23:701 - ^ Same as above.
other than that is good.


thats all from me. Good luck!
Thanks for modding XD

+ Additional:
  1. Kantan: Removed note on 01:35:514 for consistency with Futsuu.
  2. Muzukashii: Changed some hitsounds on 00:15:264 part.
  3. Oni: Changed 00:08:889 to k triplet for breaking same pattern.
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Star for you >3

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Prophecy wrote:

Star for you >3

Thanks XD
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you can add to tag the romanized of the source? i don't understand it lol
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Flying Pan wrote:

you can add to tag the romanized of the source? i don't understand it lol
Sorry, i can't because i don't know how to express. i will ask other koreans.
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