1. ADVANCED - 4Key (2.82 stars, 978 notes)
2. BASIC - 4Key (1.75 stars, 529 notes)
3. HAPPY - 4Key (4.05 stars, 1409 notes)

Hestia- wrote:

Hihi Weegle~

[BASIC]
00:21:457 - Add 34 okee thanks!
00:21:790 - Add 34 okee thanks!
00:45:643 - Add 12 okee thanks!
00:45:810 - Add 3 okee thanks!
00:45:977 - Add 12 no thank you

01:07:662 - 01:18:337 - kind of feels strange? yeah i get what you mean i'll fix it up
01:08:663 (68663|3) - Move to 01:08:579 - okee thanks!
01:09:163 - Add 2 okee thanks!
01:09:330 (69330|2) - Move to 01:09:413 - okee thanks!
01:09:997 (69997|2) - Move to 01:09:914 - okee thanks!
01:10:497 - Add 1 okee thanks!
01:10:664 (70664|1) - Move to 01:10:748 - okee thanks!
01:11:331 (71331|3) - Move to 01:11:248 - okee thanks!
01:11:832 - Add 1 okee thanks!
01:12:666 (72666|2) - Move to 01:12:583 - okee thanks!
01:14:000 (74000|3) - Move to 01:13:917 - okee thanks!
01:15:335 (75335|0) - Move to 01:15:251 - okee thanks!
01:16:669 (76669|1) - Move to 01:16:586 - okee thanks!
01:17:170 - Add 4 okee thanks!
01:17:336 (77336|2) - Move to 01:17:420 - okee thanks!
01:18:004 (78004|3) - Move to 01:17:920 -okee thanks!

01:28:095 - Add 2 no thank you
01:28:846 - Add 3 okee thanks!

(extremely helpful mod for my mapping in general)

[ADVANCED]
00:21:957 - Add 3 okee thanks!
01:28:179 - Add 4 no thank you
01:50:447 (110447|2) - Remove okee thanks!
01:50:864 - Add 4 no thank you
it feels like the timing might be wrong, like the notes are a little early at the end? idk maybe not i dont see it

[HAPPY]
00:42:641 (42641|3) - Remove okee thanks!
00:42:724 - Add 2 i did something like that
00:42:849 - Add 4 i did something like that
00:42:891 - Add 3 i did something like that
00:42:933 - Add 4 i did something like that
01:28:012 (88012|2) - Remove okee thanks!
01:28:095 - Add 3 no thank you
01:28:179 (88179|0) - Remove okee thanks!
01:28:221 - Add 1 i did something like that
01:28:262 - Add 2 i did something like that
01:28:304 - Add 3 i did something like that
01:50:698 (110698|0) - Remove okee thanks!
01:50:781 - Add 1i did something like that
01:50:864 (110864|3) - Remove okee thanks!
01:50:906 - Add 4i did something like that
01:50:948 - Add 3i did something like that
01:50:990 - Add 1i did something like that

nice map sorry for trash mod

MrSergio wrote:

Oh sh*t, I'm late, sorry
M4M from my queue

[General]

• Hm... vocaloid BG for a SDVX song? .-. Tbh I would have used something more... I don't know... "rhythmic"? xD
  Something like this maybe, or on that genre, dunno... - was gonna say i was looking for a "happy/colorful" theme and vocaloids are well known, but I like your bg suggestion more anyway
  
  BPM 179,85? .-. Anyway, you don't need the first timing point since it's the same BPM for both - 179 is too slow and 180 is too fast, unfortunately 179.85 is a really odd number bpm to have but it's the only one that matched tempo. also removed first timing point
  
  Dude, what the heck did you do with your tags lol. You have a ton of useless ones. Remove: "III SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS 180bpm happy sensation IckPo video game soundtrack no lyrics exaust basic advanced". Basically, everything besides the first one since it can be useful. All the others are too general to be there. Title, Artist, Source, diff names and all the other stuff which already has a dedicated field doesn't need to be put again in tags. - got a little too excited xD | removed all unnecessary tags

[HAPPY]

• OD9? .-. This is really too much imo. You could decrease HP too I guess - guess you're right. lowered od and hp
  
  00:02:024 (2024|3) - I can't really hear this note tbh... - removed the note
  
  00:02:107 (2107|2,2107|1) - Shouldn't these notes be the same as 00:01:857 (1857|3,1857|1) - or 00:01:357 (1357|1,1357|3) - ? I mean the same sound.
  Try moving 00:02:107 (2107|2) - on the 4th column - adjusted notes accordingly
  
  00:04:192 (4192|3) - Another note I can't hear... - removed the note
  
  00:04:776 - Missing a LN, as you did for 00:03:275 (3275|3) - . Either convert 00:04:776 (4776|0) - into a LN or move it on the 4th column, to resemble the same high pitch sound - added note to 4th column
  
  00:05:443 - Maybe add a note on 4th column? 00:05:360 (5360|2) - is meant to follow the previous pattern, right? In that case you're missing emphasis on 00:05:443 - completely missed the note for emphasis >.<
  
  00:05:777 (5777|0) - Imo this LN isn't necessary: LNs are the high pitch sound, while the other notes are the grave ones, right? Even so, there is no long note in the high pitch sound there replaced LN with note
  
  00:08:446 (8446|3) - Another note I can't really hear... it's the piano note
  
  If you use the same pattern for 00:08:529 (8529|1,8529|2) - and for 00:08:779 (8779|1,8779|3) - then changing pattern for 00:08:946 (8946|1) - will make it more noticeable hmmm
  
  00:06:778 (6778|0) - Isn't this LN too long? I guess it should be at least half of its current length indeed, fixed and adjusted following notes so column one isn't lonely
  
  I have a better option for the pattern you already have at 00:24:626 - : 00:24:626 (24626|2) - Move to 1st column, and 00:24:793 (24793|1) - move to 3rd column - good idea!
  
  00:46:477 (46477|2,46477|1) - Shouldn't this go on 00:46:311 - ? There is no instrument there for such emphasis vvv what i said below vvv
  
  Ok.. the stream is a bit a mess now that I notice... You started following the piano using double notes, but there are parts where you don't do that, why?
  Example: 00:48:980 - the same pattern you use for that piano note is used later, but not here
  Example2: 00:51:648 - You skipped totally the note here instead
  Example3: 00:54:317 - ok, I'll stop, I guess you get it - i understand your confusion, i removed the doubles from non-piano note sections, i want the emphasis on the piano at that part
  
  01:10:664 (70664|2,70664|1,70748|1,70748|0,70914|1,70914|2,70998|3,70998|2) - I'm not really a fan of this kind of pattern since it's really heavy, but well... - agreed and fixed
  
  01:12:499 (72499|3,72499|0,72583|2,72583|1) - Trust your hitsounding and remove a note from each of those doubles yuppers
  
  01:13:834 (73834|1,73917|1) - Once again...
  
  01:18:921 - Maybe add a note on 3rd column? yessir
  
  01:29:180 (89180|2) - The stream starts from 01:29:347 - tho... i made a lot of mistakes, huh..
  
  01:30:014 (90014|3,90097|2,90181|1,90264|0) - Make them doubles? Your hitsounding is the same as for 01:12:666 (72666|3,72666|0,72749|2,72749|1,72833|3,72833|0,72916|1,72916|2,73000|3,73000|0) - true
  
  01:40:022 (100022|0,100105|1,100189|2,100272|0,100272|1) - Tell me how you were able to miss the beat at 01:40:189 - and at 01:40:356 - ... <.<"
  Ok, actually, the beats are at 01:40:189 - and at 01:40:397 - by not checking my maps before asking for mods ;w;

[ADVANCED]

• 00:01:106 (1106|1) - Maybe move this to 3rd column? Having 2 notes on the same column after a stream isn't so pleasant fixed
  
  00:02:274 - Note on 2nd column? good idea
  
  00:04:776 (4776|3) - Move to 3rd column for the same reasons I gave you on the HAPPY diff yup
  
  00:05:276 (5276|1) - This should be a normal note imo - agreed
  
  00:05:610 (5610|2,5610|1) - If you follow the high pitch sound you can't put so much emphasis on the grave ones out of the blue
  
  00:06:277 - Missing a note - not anymore
  
  00:16:619 - LN? - yes
  
  From here on I was going to point out a lot of emphasis issues but while testplaying I noticed you just focus on the bass, so... Still, it's a waste with such an entertaining high pitch sound which plays different patterns - vvv read below vvv
  
  00:57:320 - From here on it's hell with those couples of 1/4 one after another. It's really stressing to play that part, above all because you use such patterns only there - did major reconstruction on this difficulty including fixing the mess that was 57 seconds to the end
  
  Again, the OD is a bit too high imo - lowered

[BASIC]

• 00:56:986 - 01:02:324 - This section looks like 1/2, not 3/4 edited it and fixed
  
  01:28:179 - The LN shouldn't go here? - it's for the fast snare
  
  Another high OD map... lowered again...

That's all from me, good luck~


Little side note: seeing mods like "add this" "remove that" are really horrible to see and to receive.
Check https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding please

NlHIL wrote:

[BASIC]
00:11:615 (11615|0,11615|3) - remove one done
01:07:662 - add - done
01:28:179 - add as 01:28:846 (88846|2) - decided to remove 01:28:846 (88846|2) instead
01:30:014 (90014|1,90014|2,90014|0,90014|3) - no - okee ;w;
[ADVANCED]
00:05:443 (5443|3) - 00:16:119 (16119|3) - change to a LN done
00:05:944 (5944|3) - ... - okay?
01:42:691 (102691|1,102858|3,103025|2,103191|1,103358|0,103525|1,103608|3) - eh repaired
[HAPPY]
00:27:628 (27628|0,27628|2,27628|3,27628|1) - eh - fixed
00:42:307 - 01:06:744 (66744|2) - 01:41:023 - add? - done
00:44:309 (44309|1) - move to 00:44:392 - ? - whoops.. fixed
01:29:180 (89180|2,89263|1,89347|0) - move 1 col left? (kill 01:29:347 (89347|0) -) okee

Yirsi wrote:

I'll try my best to give you my opinion about this map.
(The audiobitrate is too high by the way) - Just saw that in AiMod a few minutes ago and fixed it, thanks! ^.^

[BASIC]
- Seems pretty finished
- I think it's kind of odd, that the kiai part is easier in comparison to the other parts of the track (especially the build with the 1/8 kick sound), but considering the song with it's rhythm and that the main part starts here, still good - true, but i find it the peak of the song so whether it's more difficult or not i chose to use the kiai time here ^.^
- Good map all in all - Thanks!
[ADVANCED]
- I like the expanding (from 2,3,2,3 to 1,2,3,4,3,2,1) build right before the kiai starts a lot
- Fun map to play

I'm actually having a hard time finding stuff that you could improve, sorry ^^'
Pretty new to modding and I try my best
I hope your map gets ranked. It's pretty enjoyable! - oh thank you !

- Yirsi

Weegle wrote:

I find myself having trouble with modding levels cause they look good, maybe if you're low on things to mod about it, try asking for suggestions like "i think you should rearrange the notes at '"""(enter time in map here)"""' because it would flow better"

or check for missing hitsounds or volume of hitsounds, you'd be surprised how many hitsounds may go overlooked on a map that looks virtually flawless ^^

I also checked out https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding for help with improving my modding ^^ it's a lot of stuff to read but it is very helpful for modding in your future. thanks again!

Yirsi wrote:

Alright, thanks for the help mate.
( Wasn't that actually my job to help you? )

hikikuman wrote:

Your mod is on my queue.
Whoaa it's take a long time sorry:)

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

ADVANCED

00:02:274 (2274|1) - delete
00:10:447 (10447|2,10698|2,10948|1) - delete. make it single note
00:16:286 (16286|1,16286|2) - delete 2 or 3
00:21:123 - add note at 4
00:36:135 (36135|0) - move to 2
00:44:643 - add note at 3
01:35:018 (95018|0) - move to 2
01:44:192 (104192|0) - ^

BASIC

00:11:615 - add note at 3 (loud sound)
00:16:953 - ^1
00:18:287 - ^4
00:18:454 (18454|2) - move to 2
00:18:621 (18621|0) - move to 4
00:27:628 - add note at 1 (loud sound)
00:30:297 - ^1 or 4
00:30:965 - ^2
00:31:298 - ^2
00:31:465 (31465|1) - move to 1
00:32:966 - add note at 4 (loud sound)
00:38:304 - ^4
00:39:638 - ^4
00:40:973 - ^1 or 4
00:41:640 - ^3
00:41:974 - ^1
00:42:307 - ^2
01:35:685 - ^4
01:38:354 - ^1 or 2
01:39:021 (99021|0) - delete
01:39:355 (99355|3) - ^
01:41:023 - loud sound add 4
01:46:361 - ^4

Good Luck and Have a Nice Day~