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Yoshioka Aika - Hanabira no Toki

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gdeath
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月26日 星期日 at 17:38:26

Artist: Yoshioka Aika
Title: Hanabira no Toki
Source: Hakuouki
Tags: Video Game Visual Novel
BPM: 100
Filesize: 4884kb
Play Time: 04:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Challenging (4.66 stars, 513 notes)
  2. Relaxing (1.95 stars, 94 notes)
Download: Yoshioka Aika - Hanabira no Toki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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20th Beatmap

Thanks to _____X for providing the background ^.^
gowww
8-)
AngelHoney
o_o
DeadAlready
:O
Deye
< <
wmfchris
[Challenging]
0:45:110 (3,4) spacing too small?
1:50:660 (4,5) right 1 grid?

Others seems really fine for spacing,. star~
Kotone
see at tomorrow o.o I will EDIT this post

General
remove countdown

Challenging
建議AR+1...
我玩着acc會高點...

no KD thanks >_>
kodomonoyume
>.<
brikel
Hi~ Hi~

[Relaxing]
00:06:110 (1) - the end use whistle?

[Challenging]
00:33:110 (1) - remove finish the middle?

Wow... very nice song and nice pattern..
Star! :)
xierbaliti
羞涩
Starrodkirby86
Revived gdeath! Good to know you have time to continue your mapmaking. ;) Best of luck.
Topic Starter
gdeath
Thanks so much, Kirby x3
orioncomet
hey, i miss you! *runs*
Topic Starter
gdeath
Hi Ploy, i miss you all #thai ^^
And thanks for all who take care of this map.
Cyril Scarlet
薄桜鬼's song is GODDD ~

Fight ~ gdeath ~~
blissfulyoshi
T_T sorry for not modding sooner. As for of reply, I guess it is not my nature to message people if I can't mod their song, so I am sorry I disappointed you. I will try to change my habits in the near future, but here is my mod for now.

You might want to remove game from the tags since it won't really help people to find this specific song. (I am still debating if people actually search game to find music related to video games and what type os songs they are looking for if they are looking for game music)

Relaxing:

Normal mod:
00:49:910 (1) - the previous 300s are sort of large and almost cover up the whole slider, so it is a little hard to see that this is a repeat slider (you only see the bottom edge of the reverse arrow right now and nothing of the top reverse arrow)
01:09:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - With the current stack leniency, this stack gets separated and looks terrible. If you can, I would raise the stack leniency or rearrange this pattern

Combo mod:
00:47:510 (5) - Add a new combo here since 2 whole notes have passed and since this is a new line of lyrics?

Timing section mod: (an unnecessary section by now, but I just felt like modding it)
01:10:760 - remove unneeded timing section (the timing section right before it is exactly the same)
01:13:160 - ^

Challenging:
Normal mod: (I don't really like the partial overlaps in the map such as 00:03:110 (5,1) and 00:43:910 (4,2), but I'll leave it up to you to change it)
00:49:310 (8) - it is aesthetically unpleasing to have the hp bar overlap the circle like this, could you change this please
01:30:410 (10) - ^ (I won't comment on any more of these since this is also more a personal thing than an actual flaw, so change them if you wish)

Timing section mod: (same note as previous one)
00:03:560 - remove unneeded timing section (the timing section right before it is exactly the same)
00:17:960 - ^
00:57:860 - ^ (looking at the rest of your timing sections, it looks like this timing section was supposed to drop the volume by 10%. If you make that change ignore this suggestion and the folloing suggestion)
00:58:760 - ^
03:41:660 - since this does not affect any note, I would advise removing this timing section and 03:41:960

Nice map overall. My only real complaints are the things under the normal mod in Normal, so here is a star.
Also, sorry again for making you annoyed by not keeping you notified about my status. I'll try to fix these things soon.
Last of all, MERRY CHRISTMAS!
Topic Starter
gdeath

blissfulyoshi wrote:

T_T sorry for not modding sooner. As for of reply, I guess it is not my nature to message people if I can't mod their song, so I am sorry I disappointed you. I will try to change my habits in the near future, but here is my mod for now.

You might want to remove game from the tags since it won't really help people to find this specific song. (I am still debating if people actually search game to find music related to video games and what type os songs they are looking for if they are looking for game music)
A bit more info was added.

Relaxing:
Normal mod:
00:49:910 (1) - the previous 300s are sort of large and almost cover up the whole slider, so it is a little hard to see that this is a repeat slider (you only see the bottom edge of the reverse arrow right now and nothing of the top reverse arrow)
I know it might be a tiny problem.Coz the slider is covered for 3/4 part.
However i personally like this pattern and it still could be made out easily.Sorry, not changed.

01:09:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - With the current stack leniency, this stack gets separated and looks terrible. If you can, I would raise the stack leniency or rearrange this pattern
Yep.I've changed another parttern to avoid stacking problem.

Combo mod:
00:47:510 (5) - Add a new combo here since 2 whole notes have passed and since this is a new line of lyrics?
OK.done

Timing section mod: (an unnecessary section by now, but I just felt like modding it)
01:10:760 - remove unneeded timing section (the timing section right before it is exactly the same)
01:13:160 - ^

Challenging:
Normal mod: (I don't really like the partial overlaps in the map such as 00:03:110 (5,1) and 00:43:910 (4,2), but I'll leave it up to you to change it)
Sorry, not changed.
00:49:310 (8) - it is aesthetically unpleasing to have the hp bar overlap the circle like this, could you change this please
Fortunately, the note is not off screen at least.
Well,if i change this according to your suggestion,the result is that the parttern is borken.Hope you can understand this.And sorry, not changed.

01:30:410 (10) - ^ (I won't comment on any more of these since this is also more a personal thing than an actual flaw, so change them if you wish)
The same decision as above mention.

Timing section mod: (same note as previous one)
00:03:560 - remove unneeded timing section (the timing section right before it is exactly the same)
00:17:960 - ^
00:57:860 - ^ (looking at the rest of your timing sections, it looks like this timing section was supposed to drop the volume by 10%. If you make that change ignore this suggestion and the folloing suggestion)
00:58:760 - ^
03:41:660 - since this does not affect any note, I would advise removing this timing section and 03:41:960

Remove the unnecessary timing sections

Nice map overall. My only real complaints are the things under the normal mod in Normal, so here is a star.
Also, sorry again for making you annoyed by not keeping you notified about my status. I'll try to fix these things soon.
Last of all, MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Thanks, wish you have a great Christmas Day =)
subarasikibuta
gdstyle!!!
blissfulyoshi
After a few small changes, bubble!
Topic Starter
gdeath

blissfulyoshi wrote:

After a few small changes, bubble!
Very thanks for your kindly re-checking & bubble =)
Axey
;)
Andrea
Relaxing <3

Ranked~
Topic Starter
gdeath
I 'm very delighted at your sudden attack to get it ranked when i got up this moring xD Thank you, Andrea :) :)
Andrea
No problem~

Heart fixed.
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