1. Oni (4.82 stars, 2297 notes)

L1m3s wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod

General
I'm unsure about this one in terms of ranking criteria ._. but maybe its worth checking out?


Oni
I think that HP7 is a bit high when the most difficult streams are literally 30 sec away from the end.
I liked the way the kiai times were mapped ^_^ but they might have been a bit excessive (as in the amount of kiai time used). Again I'm not too sure about this one so it's best to get it checked by someone more experienced. Changed into 6.5, I only reduced to that because this map meant to be challenging
00:12:906 (59,60) - Ctrl + G? I think the beat is stronger on 60 and you mapped k to most of the stronger beats. You mapped it the other way at 00:40:147 (226,227) Changed
00:23:595 (121,122) - Same as above. Not gonna change it
00:24:457 (127) - Change to d? Changed
00:35:321 (196,197,198) - Consider dkk, it sounds weird as dkd as the k on its own sounds a little mistimed. Changed
01:36:009 (605) - Change to d? Not much emphasis here. I think I'm not gonna change it because it fits better imo
02:08:596 (836,837) - Ctrl + G? As per the above reasons. Not gonna change it
02:47:389 (1120,1121,1122,1123,1124) - Maybe try a kkdkd or kkdkk? I think those fit a bit better with the d on the third beat. Changed into kkdkk
03:26:871 - If you end up needing to get rid of kiai time imo this would be the first to go. I need second opinion about this.
03:54:458 (1405) - Doesn't sound like much of a drumroll, maybe use a spinner. Not too sure about this one. I think it's better to put drumroll imo.
05:19:975 (1913,1914,1915,1916,1917) - This sounds better as ddddk as the note stays the same but only the last beat is emphasised. Not gonna change it.
05:45:837 - Either the streams from here on are a bit brutal for HP7 or I suck lol. I need second opinion about this, I think it's meant for a challenge.]
06:09:630 - Maybe end the spinner here? Maybe not. lol

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Carnivore, from my queue

Oni

1. 00:05:320 (16) - Delete nah
2. 00:16:354 (80) - ^ same as above
3. 00:09:802 (41) - k I think d fits better here
4. 00:28:079 (142) - ^ same as above
5. 00:31:009 (168,172) - ^ (168) changed (172) keep
6. 00:33:940 (186) - ^ as it is
7. 00:41:009 (232) - ^ changed
8. 00:44:802 (257) - ^ changed
9. 01:43:596 (659) - ^ changed
10. 01:49:802 (705) - ^ as it is
11. 02:03:078 (795) - ^ changed
12. 02:31:871 (992) - ^ seems d is better imo
13. 02:34:113 (1009) - ^ same as above
14. 02:49:113 (1134) - ^ as it is
15. 04:10:923 (1492) - ^ d fits better imo
16. 04:41:182 (1709) - ^ as it is
17. 00:12:561 (57,58) - d (and 00:12:906 (59) - k) changed
18. 00:57:044 (344) - ^ keep
19. 01:29:458 (559,560) - ^ nah
20. 01:35:320 (601,602) - ^ nah
21. 01:46:699 (683) - ^ I think k follows the beat better
22. 02:08:423 (835) - ^ nah
23. 04:15:665 (1526) - ^ I think k follows the beat better
24. 00:13:768 (65) - Finisher (and 00:13:940 (66) - k) changed only the first one.
25. 00:29:975 (159,160) - Swap (and 00:30:320 (163,164) also) I think it's better to keep, it fits better imo
26. 01:00:665 (370,372) - ^ nah
27. 01:04:285 (396,397) - ^ nah
28. 01:11:700 (446,448) - ^ nah
29. 01:19:631 (496,497) - ^ (and 01:19:889 (499,500) also) same as the previous, it maybe ruin the pattern on the rest.
30. 04:05:234 (1458,1459) - ^ I tested it about few times and I think it's better to keep it.
31. 04:33:940 (1655,1658) - ^nah

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue

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General:

ALL Suggestions are based in notorious sounds (other reason is with comments)

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Oni:

Can change diff name for "The Oni" XD Maybe I'll think something else better.
Hitsound volume in 80% Okay
HP/OD = 5.5 I will not change the OD,although there's a possibility that HP drain will go lower but not right now.

00:52:302 - Delete nah
00:52:389 - Change to D (if delete this ^ ) nah

01:03:337 - Delete nah
01:03:423 - Change to D (same as 00:52:389- ) nah

01:14:371 - Delete I think this suggestion fits better, fixed.
01:14:458 - Change to K (same as 00:52:389- ) changed

01:41:958 - Delete nah
01:42:044 - Change to D (same) nah

01:52:992 - Delete nah
01:53:078 - Change to K (same) nah

02:03:337 - Delete I did not saw that earlier, fixed.

02:04:027 - Delete nah
02:04:113 - Change to D (same) nah

02:15:061 - Delete Okay
02:15:047 - Change to K (same) Chnaged

02:26:096 - Delete nah
02:26:182 - Change to K (same) nah

02:42:906 - Change to k changed

03:51:871 - d (have sound) added

04:10:923 - Delete Okay
04:11:009 - Change to D (same as 00:52:389- and emphasis for starts kiai) Okay

04:21:958 - Delete nah
04:22:044 - Change to D (bla bla bla) nah

04:32:992 - Delete nah
04:33:078 - Change to D (same) nah

04:44:027 - Delete nah
04:44:113 - Change to D (same) nah


Note: Basically is pure delete and finish, is repetitive but is good .-.

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1. 00:23:595 (121,122) - ctrl+g? and 00:23:940 (123) - change to d?
2. 00:27:734 (140) - change to k? Does a high-pitched guitar sound to here
3. 01:17:389 (476) - same as above.
4. 00:28:596 (145) - change to k?
5. 01:34:974 (598) - change to d? k is long.
6. 03:31:354 (1277) - change to d?

SKSalt wrote:

Hi, mod request from my queue.

[Oni]

1. 00:23:595 (121,122) - ctrl+g? and 00:23:940 (123) - change to d? Only applied the second one.
2. 00:27:734 (140) - change to k? Does a high-pitched guitar sound to here Keep, I think it's not there.
3. 01:17:389 (476) - same as above.^
4. 00:28:596 (145) - change to k? nah
5. 01:34:974 (598) - change to d? k is long. changed
6. 03:31:354 (1277) - change to d?changed

for example, 00:31:354 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - is kdddkdddkdddkddd............ When I turn on a break and increase the kinds of the pattern, how about? I'll try to find one but it's seems to keep them better.

that's all. good luck.

LCM01 wrote:

Yo M4M request in game chat + queue
Overall OK

Oni

HP=4? 6 is a bit harsh for long song like this There's a map that is harsher than this (longer and little bit higher HP) so I don't think I'll change that. (Reffering to this map >>> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/392976 )
02:51:354 d Changed
02:52:389 (1156,1158) k I made a variance there.
05:00:147 k Changed
05:10:837 add a note here? Added
05:15:923 - 05:17:216 I would rather change the speed on each notes Okay

The song is too loud and i can't hear the song clearly
But I hope my mod can help u a bit

1. Offset is incorrect imo. it would be better changing to 2740 (+6).

1. too long 1/2 patterns. try to add more stream and make little break.
2. 00:25:320 (131) - k? the sound feels like 00:25:665.
3. 01:34:027 (592,593) - Change to k. it is higher pitch than around.
4. 01:43:165 (654,655) - it is a bit awkward feeling. how about swapping these?
5. 02:26:699 (955) - Same as 00:25:320.
6. 02:59:113 (1185) - Remove this for consistency.
7. 03:05:751 (1207,1208) - i think this finisher is not necessary.
8. 03:07:906 (1212) - Same as above. there is nothing to emphasize.
9. 03:16:785 (1229) - This is 1/2 rhythm. move to 03:16:756.
10. 03:54:458 (1403) - Slider is too long. how about mapping using notes on this part? it can be mapped imo.

Underflow wrote:

Hi, carnivore101.

[General]

1. Offset is incorrect imo. it would be better changing to 2740 (+6). fixed

[Oni]

1. too long 1/2 patterns. try to add more stream and make little break. I think it doesn't much need a break and I think the 1/2 patterns were fine.
2. 00:25:320 (131) - k? the sound feels like 00:25:665. for variance
3. 01:34:027 (592,593) - Change to k. it is higher pitch than around. keep, it fits better imo
4. 01:43:165 (654,655) - it is a bit awkward feeling. how about swapping these? Changed
5. 02:26:699 (955) - Same as 00:25:320. keep for variance
6. 02:59:113 (1185) - Remove this for consistency. It has sound.
7. 03:05:751 (1207,1208) - i think this finisher is not necessary. I think there is
8. 03:07:906 (1212) - Same as above. there is nothing to emphasize. same as above
9. 03:16:785 (1229) - This is 1/2 rhythm. move to 03:16:756. Changed
10. 03:54:458 (1403) - Slider is too long. how about mapping using notes on this part? it can be mapped imo. it emphasized the long sound there (I don't think I'll change this.)

Flying Pan wrote:

hello, from my queue.

[Oni]
i think this map needs more work. some pattern doesn't accompany the music well. hitsound arrangement can be better. the long 1/2 chains is somehow boring, can add intentional breaks and some 1/4. some part is overmapped (ex: 03:57:567 - ). and the slow down part... Some minor changes about the 1/2 chain. About overmapping, I think it's fine imo. (Let's see if others will say that too.)

04:55:153 - this SV is unrankable. the notes is overlapping and can make player confused. check ranking criteria again. you have to divide the SV to notes so it's gradually slow down Fixed, I think it's okay now

05:06:188 (1839) - finisher in the end of 1/4.. and the SV... please no. delete 05:06:102 - Okay

another thing:
00:27:567 ~ 01:14:464 - basically no breaks for 1 minutes. please add some 1/1 breaks. I'll try to find one but I can't find a good spot for that right now.
01:17:222 ~ 02:26:188 - and another 1 minutes-no-breaks... ^
05:14:464 ~ 06:01:360 - this part too.. ^

sorry i didn't help much. gl

ptar124 wrote:

Hello, From - N a n a k a -'s Thai Modding Queue

Oni
00:02:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - consider adding something between d-d-k-d-d-d-k-d-d-d-k..., it is too repetitive, change some notes to create some 1/4 patterns Well, I don't think I'll add 1/4's nor changing patterns here.
00:12:222 (55) - change to don doesn't fit imo
00:22:222 (113) - change to kat changed
00:22:911 (117) - change to kat changed
00:28:084 (142) - change to kat It doesnt fit imo
00:28:257 (143) - change to don ^
00:28:429 (144) - change to kat ^
00:39:808 (224,225) - change either one to don changed
00:49:808 (292) - change to kat changed
01:08:688 (427,428) - change either one to kat or change both to kat changed one of them
01:17:740 (478) - change to kat nah
01:17:913 (479) - change to don ^
01:18:258 (481) - change to kat ^
01:29:808 (560) - change to don changed
01:34:119 (593) - change to kat changed
01:35:498 (601) - change to don nah
01:39:463 (625) - change to kat changed
01:41:015 (635) - change to kat
01:42:395 (648) - change to kat changed
01:58:946 (770,771) - change either one to kat changed
02:15:498 (881) - change to kat changed
02:29:464 (966) - change to kat nah [/color]
02:29:636 (967) - change to don ^
02:29:981 (969) - change to kat ^
02:32:740 (995) - ^ changed
02:34:119 (1006) - ^ changed
02:35:498 (1017) - ^ changed
02:39:981 (1055,1056,1057,1058,1059) - consider revising, it does not fit with the song okay
02:43:774 (1088) - change to kat changed
02:45:154 (1099) - change to kat changed
02:46:533 (1110) - change to kat changed
03:36:533 (1307,1308,1309,1310,1311,1312,1313,1314,1315,1316,1317) - too repetitive, consider revising okay
03:42:394 (1341) - change to don changed
03:47:826 (1374,1375) - Ctrl + G keep, I think it fits better imo
03:57:567 (1404,1405,1406,1407,1408,1409,1410,1411,1412,1413,1414,1415,1416,1417,1418,1419,1420,1421,1422,1423,1424,1425,1426,1427,1428,1429,1430,1431,1432) - (HIGH PRIORITY, DO NOT IGNORE) does not match song at all remapped
04:00:671 (1434) - delete okay
04:06:015 (1462) - change to don changed
04:06:360 (1463,1464) - Ctrl + G okay
04:07:050 (1466,1467) - change to kat changed
04:09:636 (1475,1476,1477,1478,1479,1480,1481,1482,1483,1484,1485,1486,1487,1488,1489) - (LOW PRIORITY, MERE RECCOMENDATION) add a little bit of 1/6 for some melody emphasis and diff boost? okay
04:22:395 (1570) - change to kat chnaged
04:33:429 (1648) - ^ chnaged
04:34:119 (1653) - ^ chnaged
04:34:808 (1659) - ^ chnaged
04:44:464 (1729) - ^ chnaged
05:01:705 (1821) - ^ chnaged
05:03:946 (1829) - ^ chnaged
05:18:257 (1897,1908,1919) - ^
05:26:533 (1970,1971,1972,1973,1974,1975,1976,1977,1978,1979,1980,1981,1982,1983,1984,1985,1986,1987,1988,1989,1990) - a little bit of spikes here and there, consider revising okay
05:29:291 (1998) - change to kat chnaged
05:59:119 (2253) - change to don chnaged
06:06:791 (2299) - change to kat chnaged

Dear carnivore101,

This beatmap have countless of elements to work on. Usually, I am very flexible with the snare sounds being mapped as dons but as for this beatmap, the snare is too strong to be ignored and thus, have to be mapped as kats. Most of your streams don't match the song very well. I would consider revising ALL OF THEM including the ones that I have not mentioned. Lastly, I have a suggestion that would be useful for the rest of you mapping career. You can't just emphasize the vocal and ignore all other elements that have effect on hitsounds. In fact, many would even choose to emphasize other elements before vocals.

Wrapping things up, this map still needs a lot of work before it could become ranked.

Don't give up fast ,
ptar124

Nyan wrote:

[General]

Correct all green timing points. They need to delay +6ms. Fixed

[Oni]

00:08:429 - can add a kat with guitar sounds.Let that thing empty.
00:35:843 (200) - add Finish Added
00:46:877 (274) - add Finish Added
01:25:498 (535) - add Finish Added

02:27:567 (958,959,960) - can be K d d k nope

02:52:395 (1156,1157,1158,1159,1160,1161,1162,1163) - you can put a slider or spinner here. Better keep it.

02:56:533 (1174) - remove Finish Removed
02:59:291 (1186) - remove Finish Removed
03:02:050 (1196) - remove Finish Removed

03:32:394 (1283) - add Finish Added
03:43:429 (1347) - add Finish Added

05:06:877 (1829,1830) - can be d d d
05:07:912 (1832,1833,1834) - can be k k d d k
05:09:291 (1836,1837) - can be k k d
05:12:395 (1848,1849) - can be d d d
05:13:429 (1851,1852,1853) - can be k k d d k I ignore at these part since the recent one is better.

I actually liked the Kiai part. 1/2 k d d k d d rhythm was awesome. Thanks!