Please remember, some of theese errors, are suggestions, not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.
[osz File Scan!]
BG is 1152x768, max rankable is 1024x768 please crop/resize
320 bit rate mp3, re-encode at a lower bitrate (between 128 and 256, recommended 192)
[General]
Both diffs have different preview times
Since both diffs start at the same spot, use the same lead-in time?
Might as well disable countdown on both diffs since it doesnt even fit.
[Timing]
Offset -14 ms
[Hard]00:21:138 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern plays rather awkward i recommend you use some kind of reversing here, instead of the unintuitive jump from (2) to (3), instead you could for example put (1) at the top, (2) at the right, (3) at the bottom, and swap the locations of (4) and (5) and rotate as you wish, in something like this (note that (4) is stacked below the previous combo (5))
SPOILER
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I merely just swapped locations that you already have even on this i recommend moving (3), more to the right.
00:25:696 (1) - Could be better, make more curvy? something like this for example:
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00:27:215 (3) - ^
00:34:813 (1,3) - Could you try to make theese sliders co exactly around the outside of the hitcircle by drawing a circle outside of it?
SPOILER
232,256,34813,6,0,B|265:313|344:316|378:251,1,150,4|0
304,224,35383,1,0
373,193,35573,2,0,B|339:137|276:136|239:179,1,150,2|0
01:14:319 (1) - Needs to be moved a few grids up if it forms part of a star with the previous combo's notes. in that case move 3 grids up, and (1,3) 2 grids left (the ones from the previous combo)
01:47:747 (1,3) - Same suggestion than 00:34:813 (1,3)
02:02:942 (1,3) - Same suggestion than 00:25:696 (1)
02:05:981 (1) - Draw it a bit more curvy, curvying in the same direction the next slider goes for example?
02:12:059 (1) - Slider repeat covered by hit burst, and (3)'s hitburst is almost covering the slider together with (2)'s
02:24:215 (1) - Same suggestion than: 02:05:981 (1)
02:36:370 (1) - Dont really see the need for there to be an spinner here
[Armin's Normal]00:11:641 (7,8) - What are theese notes following? i suggest you remove them, they feel out of place, visually and musically.
01:03:872 (6) - Sounds awkward, maybe add a note at 01:03:683?
This diff isn't easy enough to be the easiest diff of this mapset, if this is supposed to be the easiest diff, read below, otherwise ignore:
SPOILER00:31:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - This migth be too hard for newbies.
00:43:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:49:058 (3,4,5,6) - Newbies might get confused by the tick switch here.
00:52:667 (2,3,4) - Not sure about this for newbies.
01:13:559 (5,6,7,8) - Not sure if a newbie can pull this off
01:51:546 (3,4,5) - This tick switch might throw off a newbie
Note: Nice sliders <3
[Overall]
Nice map, just a few sliders here and there and a couple technicalities, i recommend you see the stuff i pointed out on Armin's Normal if it's supposed to be the easiest diff of the mapset, otherwise you'll need an Easy.
