Look, another Sakura Map~
[General]
The two red combo colors look really close to each other - and when they show up right after one another, it can get a little confusing, like that first part in your easy. May I suggest either a more varying shade or a fourth color to go between them?
The video looks out of sync. Dunno what to suggest though. :/
[Easy]
00:03:884 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The way you presented this rhythm is rather confusing. It's really clustered together with a stack thrown in the middle of it, plus the quasi-triplet rhythm doesn't help much. Perhaps string them out more to show that there definitely is some rhythm change visually, along with getting rid of a bit of the clustering. If you disagree, then at least please get rid of the stack.
00:27:026 (2,3) - I don't really like stacks on the ends of sliders like this. It's kind of hard to discern what the rhythm is going to be for newer players without the distance visual cue. Applies to later applications too, if you choose to move things around.
00:31:955 (3) - Since you're going rather heavy center symmetry, line up the end points on this.
00:33:884 (2) - ^
00:36:884 (4) - New combo
00:38:598 (6) - If you were going for straight up/down symmetry, line 'em up. If not, maybe make it more obvious that you're not going for that. Just looks a little tacky otherwise.
00:49:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The emphasis feels better like this:
If you do this, maybe use sliders to keep the rhythm easier to read.
00:55:741 (1,2,3,4) - Same comment as before with your slider ends.
00:59:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol star. Um, maybe rotate it a bit anti-clockwise to reduce overlap with the 4 slider?
Try this:
74,231,69241,6,0,B|140:160|256:125|380:156|440:229,1,400
392,276,71169,2,0,B|336:216|256:208|174:219|112:288,1,300
for this:
01:16:312 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy.
[Normal+]
Wait, I thought you didn't like + in difficulty names? Ah well.
All the slight overlap on all the eighth notes is kinda ugly to me. >>
00:04:312 (3) - End this slider at 00:04:634 - ?
00:21:134 (2) - Move this down one grid. :P
00:27:026 (1,2,3) - Whoa, sudden snap change. At least use a slider at first to let the player be ready for the rhythm if they don't know the song.
00:30:669 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Uh, this is going waaay beyond the Normal (even with a +) difficulty range. Tone it down. A LOT.
00:32:812 (12,1) - Anti jump after all that? No thanks.
00:37:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is also pushing the hard difficulty range...
01:05:384 (1) - Uh, what rhythm is this following? It starts with the vocal and then just kind of does its own thing.
01:09:241 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - With how clustered these are, they're rather difficult to read. I'd sugest trying a different pattern, or try something without the short sliders. If you disagree, at least make the short sliders sticking off the edges the same angle. All three on each are off on different angles and looks kinda random.
01:14:598 (5) - Take a look at this slider closely. Especially if you were trying to align the 1 slider after it to be in the center. If not, the bottom portion is a little off compared to the top.
01:25:848 (1,2,3) - What are these following? If you move them all back one tick then add a note at 01:26:598 it sounds a lot better.
[Hard]
00:00:776 (4,1,1) - Why spaced so close together?
00:02:491 (4,1) - ^
00:04:098 (4,5) - Not sure what you're going with in the music here. All you have is the vocal and the bass hit, and this isn't going with either of 'em.
00:07:098 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These are much better. Is this what you were going for? If so, start those previous two on the white tick forward.
00:11:598 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why eighth notes? Go with the big hits in the music please. A louder hit sound on these notes would be nice too. The formation is lopsided too, if you refuse. Try to line 'em up (look at where the red combo's 2 is compared to the purple's 3)
00:18:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A soft normal would work wonders for hearing what I'm doing with the stream. :/
00:19:633 (4,1) - Please make these closer. The new combo doesn't really do much.
00:27:026 (2) - New combo if you're keeping that mini jump to stay consistent with previous one.
00:28:098 (1) - I keep wanting to hit this later. If you want a beat there, I wouldn't use a long slider that goes halfway through the next measure - it's just a bad rhythm then. Use circles here instead.
00:28:741 (1,2,3) - These don't read very well.
00:35:598 (1,2,3) - ^
00:40:312 (1) - Line up the end points please~
00:45:455 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try a different configuration or reform the 1 slider afterward to reduce overlap.
00:55:634 (4) - ... I'm not gonna nazi these sliders. :P
00:59:169 (4) - Line up the end points
01:02:491 (4,1,1) - Same thing as the beginning...
01:04:205 (4,1) - ^
01:15:026 (2) - Raise one grid
01:15:455 (3) - Right one grid
01:15:884 (4) - Right one grid
01:20:598 (2) - Move left 1.5 grids
01:27:562 (1,2,3,4) - I was kind of expecting jumps. Oh well.
Phew, that took awhile.
