-Hakurei- wrote:

Buatkan diffny jadi 8 star biar lebih greget :v

IVo one wrote:

this map is too easy

Breezy wrote:

Cool, you mapped the song!

hent2222 wrote:

Fort, this is fucking amazing :3

Kalibe wrote:

This song is awesome

I'll mod later when mapset will finished~~


EDIT : Oh full set, ok mod later :3

IVo one wrote:

Super enjoyable, wish more people made use of hit sounds this way. Hope you do more of these types. <3

Kalibe wrote:

Hey, Fort ! Mod as I promised I love your collab in cillia's FIRST <3

[General]

Countdown, Support Screen and Letterboxing bla bla bla ...

[Beginner]

00:37:861 (2) - maybe less curve?
01:40:083 (3) - add some shape

[Standart]

00:48:417 (2,3) - maybe less curve and make blanket?
00:55:639 (1,2) - yep. Make far blanket maybe later, im still like this style
01:50:083 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3708994 ? looks rigid, i want to make that slider because it can be helping for reading

[Advanced]

00:35:083 (3,4) - blanket? no need i guess
01:03:417 (3,4) - correct ^
01:19:528 (3) - add curve? the jump quite straight forward so i will not doing this one i think
01:27:583 (3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3709016 ? 01:28:139 (5,6,1) - epic jump lel
01:34:528 (1) - it might just go out?

[Hyper]

00:12:167 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3709027 ? hmmm idk
00:46:056 (2) - fix blanket
01:27:861 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3709042 ? but it looks more elegant for me >:D

[Another]

00:41:195 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3709053 ? looks too straight lel
01:38:556 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3709058 then 01:39:528 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3709068 ? fix a bit, that one looks boring lol
01:48:417 (7,1) - maybe create here a bow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3709073 yeah i will stop making this because blanketing my priority for this i think, it just little overlap

Ok, sorry but i'm bad at modding ^ Insane i think you're good :3

That hitsounds doe

I love your mapping style thanks

GL and have a Star :3 !! thanks for star too

Mazzerin wrote:

good map, just a few minor suggestions
00:42:861 (5) - hmm i think this would be better off somewhere up as a last note of that pattern, x156 y107 ~~ (and reshaped slider ofc) :^)
01:00:778 (8,9,10,11) - lol you can place this a bit up if you want but it looks fine like this change patterning + moved
01:31:056 (8) - better position x35 y117 imo since this slider is straight slider 01:31:195 (1) - i think it can be good curve for vertical jump, so i keep this one i think
01:33:417 (1) - this would be better a bit to the right and up, x164 y63 or something + reshape slider 01:33:139 (7,8,1) - this thing probably hard to hit so i will not put this slider to up or more i guess

1. Consider adding some Tags
2. Consider change the audio volume

1. HP+1 ?

1. sejak w dgr ada suara "Are you Ready?", lebih baik buatkan aja kek ada kebanyakan jump dsb jika ada yg dengar suara itu
2. yahh, suara wibu pula w dgr tu yg ga ada hubungan dgn lagu ini, tpi gpp lah akwkawkawawkkawkwa

1. 00:45:639 - edit lagi sana akwkawkawk. w aja dengar sampe "5", malah ini hitsound ny ke "4"
2. 01:12:306 - nz. edit lagi, karena kan seharusnya "911", ini malah jadi "91..." itu pula
3. 01:52:306 - ini lagi. w dgr sampe "5", malah ini jadi "4"

1. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
2. 00:23:972 - jgn skip ini dong
3. 00:33:417 (5) - coba kek gini
4. 01:46:195 - add note
5. 01:48:972 (3) - coba kek gini
6. 01:52:306 (5) - remove NC

1. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
2. 00:48:417 (2,3) - nz. blanket ny tolong
3. 01:50:083 (3) - kek gini lah yg benar Fort
4. 01:52:306 (4) - remove NC

1. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
2. 00:22:861 (2,1) - blanket, tolong
3. 00:23:972 (3,1) - ^ cuma sdikit perbaikan aja
4. 01:03:417 (3,4) - tipis kali loh blanket ny akwkwakaw. perbaiki ini
5. 01:28:139 (5,6) - aduh, dikit lagi. fix lah blanket satu ini
6. 01:48:417 (3,1) - blanket, tolong

1. 00:08:695 - coba add note
2. 00:18:972 (1,2,3,4) - whistle
3. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
4. 00:31:195 (1,2) - sedikit lagi mau blanket tu. perbaiki tu
5. 00:40:083 (1) - finish
6. 00:41:750 (3) - whistle
7. 00:55:639 (1) - whistle (tail + head)
8. 00:57:861 (1) - ^
9. 01:00:083 (1) - ^
10. 01:02:306 (1) - ^
11. 01:03:417 (1) - ^
12. 01:06:750 (1) - whistle tail
13. 01:18:972 (1,2) - blanket, tolong

1. 00:18:972 (1) - iya, whistle untuk smua, jgn lupa
2. 00:40:083 (1) - finish
3. 00:41:195 (1,2) - tail dan (2) perlu whistle
4. 00:41:750 (1) - ini ntah mau apa. finish atau clap untuk tiga tiganya
5. 00:53:417 (5) - finish?
6. 00:55:639 (1,2) - whistle, kecuali (2) tail
7. 00:57:861 (1,2) - ^
8. 01:00:083 (1,2) - ^
9. 01:01:472 (2,3) - blanket ny tolong
10. 01:02:306 (1,2) - whistle, kecuali (2) tail
11. 01:03:417 (1,2) - whistle semua
12. 01:09:250 (5,7) - blanket ny tolong
13. 01:37:028 (5) - coba ini ke 196|136
14. 01:44:528 (1) - loh, head ny finish lah, bukan di tail
15. 01:46:750 (1,3) - blanket, tolong
16. 01:47:306 (3,5) - ^
17. 01:48:417 (7,1) - ^
18. 01:50:361 (6) - ampir kena HP Bar di 800x600 w. turunkan sdikit

1. 00:06:750 (1) - coba aja main stack sama (3) tail
2. 00:18:972 (8,9) - ini perlu whistle aja, jgn pake slider whistle
3. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
4. 00:22:028 (6) - ini ampir kena ke HP Bar di view 800x600 w. turunkan sdikit dong
5. 00:23:278 (5) - 242|291 untuk perbaiki blanket
6. 00:23:278 (5) - perbaiki blanket ini
7. 00:33:972 (7,1) - perbaiki blanket satu ini
8. 00:48:000 (2,4) - perbaiki lah blanket ini
9. 00:55:639 (1,2,3) - whistle
10. 00:57:861 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 01:00:083 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 01:02:306 (1,2,3) - ^
13. 01:03:417 (1,2,3,4) - ^
14. 01:06:750 (1) - ini whistle di tail nak
15. 01:07:028 - aduh, di skip lagi ini
16. 01:33:695 (2,3) - perbaiki blanket ini
17. 01:45:083 (3,5) - ^

1. 00:18:972 (1,3,5,7) - whistle
2. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
3. 00:24:389 (10) - 328|48 untuk membuat blanket sama 00:23:695 (7) -
4. 00:28:972 (1) - finish
5. 00:41:750 (6) - whistle (semuanya, kecuali slider whistle)
6. 00:55:639 (1,3,5) - whistle ((5) awal)
7. 00:57:861 (1,3,5) - ^
8. 01:00:083 (1,3,5) - ^
9. 01:02:306 (1,2,3) - ^
10. 01:03:417 (1,3,5) - ^ ((5) di red tick aja)
11. 01:06:889 (2) - Auto, whistle
12. 01:31:056 (7) - 244|312 untuk blanket sama 01:30:361 (3) - =w=
13. 01:50:361 (2) - waduh. ampir kena ni ke HP Bar ny. turunkan sdikit dong (800x600)

1. 00:14:528 (1) - nz. ini kena HP Bar di view 800x600 w. turunkan dikit atau buat lagi stream ny bisa?
2. 00:17:167 (7,8,9,10) - sama apa w yg bilang tentang kena HP bar di view 800x600
3. 00:18:972 (1,3,5,7) - whistle
4. 00:20:083 (1) - finish ny disini
5. 00:25:500 (7,2) - perbaiki lah blanket ini
6. 00:55:639 (1,3,5) - whistle
7. 00:57:861 (1,3,5) - ^
8. 01:00:083 (1,3,5) - whistle juga ((5) head)
9. 01:02:306 (1,3,5) - ^
10. 01:03:417 (1,3,5,7) - ^
11. 01:07:028 - kok di skip?
12. 01:28:695 (7,1) - perbaiki sdikit blanket ny

-Hakurei- wrote:

behh...

[General]

1. sejak w dgr ada suara "Are you Ready?", lebih baik buatkan aja kek ada kebanyakan jump dsb jika ada yg dengar suara itu
2. yahh, suara wibu pula w dgr tu yg ga ada hubungan dgn lagu ini, tpi gpp lah akwkawkawawkkawkwa

[Some random Custom Hitsound error]

1. 00:45:639 - edit lagi sana akwkawkawk. w aja dengar sampe "5", malah ini hitsound ny ke "4"
2. 01:12:306 - nz. edit lagi, karena kan seharusnya "911", ini malah jadi "91..." itu pula
3. 01:52:306 - ini lagi. w dgr sampe "5", malah ini jadi "4"

[Beginner]

1. 00:20:083 (1) - finish ngapain di finish, di semua diff ane sengaja gk difinish
2. 00:23:972 - jgn skip ini dong gk terlalu ngaruh sih sama gameplay soalnya kebanyakan pemain itu sight reading, bukan pattern reading
3. 00:33:417 (5) - coba kek gini slider terakhir itu pendek sekali
4. 01:46:195 - add note ^ sama kaya diatas, ane sengaja bikin kaya gini biar gk terlalu susah
5. 01:48:972 (3) - coba kek gini
6. 01:52:306 (5) - remove NC

[Standard]

1. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
2. 00:48:417 (2,3) - nz. blanket ny tolong
3. 01:50:083 (3) - kek gini lah yg benar Fort ane pikirin ini nanti
4. 01:52:306 (4) - remove NC kan udah di remove dah

[Advanced]

1. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
2. 00:22:861 (2,1) - blanket, tolong
3. 00:23:972 (3,1) - ^ cuma sdikit perbaikan aja
4. 01:03:417 (3,4) - tipis kali loh blanket ny akwkwakaw. perbaiki ini
5. 01:28:139 (5,6) - aduh, dikit lagi. fix lah blanket satu ini
6. 01:48:417 (3,1) - blanket, tolong buat ini enggak deh

[Hyper]

1. 00:08:695 - coba add note
2. 00:18:972 (1,2,3,4) - whistle ditambahin sebagian
3. 00:20:083 (1) - finish susah dan ribet ini lel
4. 00:31:195 (1,2) - sedikit lagi mau blanket tu. perbaiki tu
5. 00:40:083 (1) - finish
6. 00:41:750 (3) - whistle
7. 00:55:639 (1) - whistle (tail + head)
8. 00:57:861 (1) - ^
9. 01:00:083 (1) - ^
10. 01:02:306 (1) - ^
11. 01:03:417 (1) - ^
12. 01:06:750 (1) - whistle tail sebenarnya tambahan whistle disini keras bgt jadi ane sengaja gk masukin whistle
13. 01:18:972 (1,2) - blanket, tolong

[Another]

1. 00:18:972 (1) - iya, whistle untuk smua, jgn lupa sebagian mungkin
2. 00:40:083 (1) - finish
3. 00:41:195 (1,2) - tail dan (2) perlu whistle
4. 00:41:750 (1) - ini ntah mau apa. finish atau clap untuk tiga tiganya
5. 00:53:417 (5) - finish?
6. 00:55:639 (1,2) - whistle, kecuali (2) tail
7. 00:57:861 (1,2) - ^
8. 01:00:083 (1,2) - ^
9. 01:01:472 (2,3) - blanket ny tolong
10. 01:02:306 (1,2) - whistle, kecuali (2) tail
11. 01:03:417 (1,2) - whistle semua
12. 01:09:250 (5,7) - blanket ny tolong
13. 01:37:028 (5) - coba ini ke 196|136
14. 01:44:528 (1) - loh, head ny finish lah, bukan di tail lol liat samplesetnya
15. 01:46:750 (1,3) - blanket, tolong ini bukan blanket toh
16. 01:47:306 (3,5) - ^
17. 01:48:417 (7,1) - ^ kalau yang ini udah lah
18. 01:50:361 (6) - ampir kena HP Bar di 800x600 w. turunkan sdikit

[Expert]

1. 00:06:750 (1) - coba aja main stack sama (3) tail anti jump lebih keliatan bagus
2. 00:18:972 (8,9) - ini perlu whistle aja, jgn pake slider whistle okelah
3. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
4. 00:22:028 (6) - ini ampir kena ke HP Bar di view 800x600 w. turunkan sdikit dong
5. 00:23:278 (5) - 242|291 untuk perbaiki blanket
6. 00:23:278 (5) - perbaiki blanket ini
7. 00:33:972 (7,1) - perbaiki blanket satu ini
8. 00:48:000 (2,4) - perbaiki lah blanket ini
9. 00:55:639 (1,2,3) - whistle
10. 00:57:861 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 01:00:083 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 01:02:306 (1,2,3) - ^
13. 01:03:417 (1,2,3,4) - ^ mungkin nanti saja ane tambahin
14. 01:06:750 (1) - ini whistle di tail nak kan udah ada clap dah
15. 01:07:028 - aduh, di skip lagi ini 01:07:167 (2,3,4) - ane sengaja di skip biar kebaca pattern ini
16. 01:33:695 (2,3) - perbaiki blanket ini distance nya harus dideketin lagi, jadi keliatan jelek
17. 01:45:083 (3,5) - ^ direnggangin dikit gk napa kan toh

[Extreme]

1. 00:18:972 (1,3,5,7) - whistle
2. 00:20:083 (1) - finish
3. 00:24:389 (10) - 328|48 untuk membuat blanket sama 00:23:695 (7) - ane ingin slidernya keliatan panjang dah, bi blanket terlalu kecil sudut jumpnya
4. 00:28:972 (1) - finish
5. 00:41:750 (6) - whistle (semuanya, kecuali slider whistle)
6. 00:55:639 (1,3,5) - whistle ((5) awal)
7. 00:57:861 (1,3,5) - ^
8. 01:00:083 (1,3,5) - ^
9. 01:02:306 (1,2,3) - ^
10. 01:03:417 (1,3,5) - ^ ((5) di red tick aja)
11. 01:06:889 (2) - Auto, whistle udah enak kaya gini dah
12. 01:31:056 (7) - 244|312 untuk blanket sama 01:30:361 (3) - =w=
13. 01:50:361 (2) - waduh. ampir kena ni ke HP Bar ny. turunkan sdikit dong (800x600)

[Game Over lagi...]

1. 00:14:528 (1) - nz. ini kena HP Bar di view 800x600 w. turunkan dikit atau buat lagi stream ny bisa?
2. 00:17:167 (7,8,9,10) - sama apa w yg bilang tentang kena HP bar di view 800x600
3. 00:18:972 (1,3,5,7) - whistle
4. 00:20:083 (1) - finish ny disini
5. 00:25:500 (7,2) - perbaiki lah blanket ini
6. 00:55:639 (1,3,5) - whistle
7. 00:57:861 (1,3,5) - ^
8. 01:00:083 (1,3,5) - whistle juga ((5) head)
9. 01:02:306 (1,3,5) - ^
10. 01:03:417 (1,3,5,7) - ^
11. 01:07:028 - kok di skip? kasih tau gak ya? >.<
12. 01:28:695 (7,1) - perbaiki sdikit blanket ny

ini keknya ada beberapa hitsound aja yg kamu lewat. cek lagi lahh hue emang sengaja ane lewat, ini demi kebaikan wkwkwk. GL!

Smoothie World wrote:

[General]

00:28:972 - The hitsounds you have here don't really do anything except make the song sound extremely muddy, which doesn't sound very good. I'd change it for sure or at least use it far less often. looks i need to do this later

[Game Over]

01:48:417 - What does this greenline here do? I need some knowledge of greenlines so correct me if I'm wrong please. Same with:
01:42:306 -
00:11:195 - fixed

00:03:278 (4,1) - I feel that 00:04:528 (1) should be a mirror of 00:03:278 (4) instead of a random angle. It would look better visually.

00:41:750 (1,2,3) - Awkward to play going into the really large spacing of 00:42:306 (1,2,3,4) and onward. Either reduce the spacing of the following 4 or increase the spacing of those 3.

01:11:889 (2) - Try x:41, y:134 or somewhere similar so that 01:11:472 (1) leads into it better.

01:13:799 (1) - I like the slider velocity here, but I feel the shape of the slider should be changed to give a more distinct look to it to represent that it's unique. Consider something even as simple as http://i.imgur.com/ckFb9uf.png or something. Likewise:
01:50:917 (1) - SV makes it unique :3

01:19:806 (4,5,1) - I feel spacing should be larger between 5 and 1 compared to 4 and 5 for better emphasis. looks im gonna keep this thing because this jump quite far

01:33:139 (7,8,1) - Similar to above except even moreso here.

01:37:167 (4,5) - Difficult to hear and overall screws with the playability of the stream. I know that you have the vocal hitsound Skrillex things on them but consider adding a hat sound to them similar to the rest of the stream. Likewise:
01:39:667 (5,6) -

[Extreme]

01:06:889 (2,1) - Keep spacing here similar to other overlaps like 01:06:472 (2,1) it can be different

01:13:417 (1) - Similar to the slow slider in the Game Over difficulty. Consider changing it to be more unique. maybe i will do it later, because it just like flat sliders, nothing support for slider art thing

Also similar to the Game Over difficulty, check up on the hitsounds in the stream section and perhaps make them more audible.

01:52:861 (1,2,3) - I'd keep spacing totally even here instead of reducing it between 2 and 3, Minor change but yea.

[Expert]

00:28:695 (2,1) - Increase spacing here for better emphasis.

00:41:195 - In this difficulty it would be better to map the triples here.

01:13:417 (1) - You know what I'm gonna say xD (Though I think it's actually borderline alright here).

01:52:861 (1,2,3) - Try a rhythm like this instead: http://i.imgur.com/UqMKCBe.png 1/1 slider is love, 1/1 slider is long

[Another]

01:03:972 (1,2) - This feels clumped up and is difficult to read. Try not to overlap these two like this if possible. AR9 is okay for anti jump

01:33:278 (4,1) - Make the spacing here larger for better emphasis. Moving 1 left would do the job.

[Hyper]

01:37:861 (4,1) - I would NC on the 4 instead of the 1.

[Advanced]

00:12:861 (4,1) - This is the only large jump in the intro. I'd reduce this to keep similar spacing consistent to the other similar parts in the intro.

00:22:306 (1,2,1) - This is awfully difficult to read. Try not to have such a random drastic change in spacing like this.

01:39:528 (6) - I don't think ending the slider on a powerful point in the song is a good idea.

[Standard]

00:48:417 (2,3,4) - Spacing needs to be much more even here.

[Beginner]

01:25:083 (6,1) - Spacing should be closer to 1.00x idk with this, maybe i will keep this 1.00 spacing

[ Arika ] wrote:

General

Sure want to keep the audio on 70% ? doing some settings
Where the is the tag?
Is soft-hitclap4 take from IOSYS song?

note:

1. Consider adding some Tags
2. Consider change the audio volume

Beginner

01:25:083 (6,1) - Blanket looks not good
00:17:861 (4) - -5 degree looks better
01:01:750 (4,5) - Player will confuse on this , Distance Spacing is changing

note:

1. HP+1 ? too high

Standard
00:48:417 (2,3) - Blanket looks not good
01:34:250 - Consider to add not over here. Same like 01:24:528 (4,5,6) - it just like ending kiai
01:43:695 (6) - Move this to 01:43:972 - sound's better and add not on 01:43:695 - but i prefer piano thing there
01:48:972 (1) - Make this Slider same like 01:50:083 (3) -

Advanced

00:08:972 (1) - Longer this spinner to 00:10:083 - ow
00:48:139 (2) - -10 degree looks better maybe i will fix this one later
01:06:750 (1) - Move to X:211 Y:288 ? stack with 01:03:972 (4) - why stacked? xD
01:25:639 (8) - New Combo? NC at 01:24:528 (1) -
01:26:750 (1,3) - Blanket looks not good probably not blanketing that
01:48:972 (1,2) - Blanket looks not good

Hyper

00:15:083 (5) - Make this Slider same like 00:15:639 (1) - not sure this will be working
00:18:972 (1,2,3,4) - I think this too hard.. 216 BPM Single tapping and the Distance very hard to play
01:03:972 (2) - +15 degree looks better

Another

00:16:195 (3) - Move to X:464 Y:144
00:52:167 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:06:889 (1,2,3,4) - This looks not good , Better make same like 01:04:667 (1,2,3,4) - same lel
01:18:972 (1,2,3) - Poor jump that can be hard, this one is easy i think
01:43:972 (1) - Move to X:104 Y:76 ? Same like 01:35:361 (3,1) - change a bit

Expert

00:07:722 (1) - Remove New Combo why??
00:31:472 (2) - Ctrl+G? too far please
01:02:583 (3) - Move to X:0 Y:208 ?
01:08:313 (4) - Move to X:400 Y:44 ?

Extreme

00:14:320 (8,9,10,11) - Not looks good when try on Hard Rock mod what?, not sure about this
00:53:417 - Add not over here?
00:57:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:00:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:03:417 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this should 1/3 Beat Snap it's 1/2 1/4 lel
01:07:028 - Add a not over here? doing same thing with 01:04:667 (2,1) -
01:26:472 (2) - Should 2 repeated same like 00:28:695 (2) -
01:28:833 (7) - Move to X:396 Y:172 ? okay

Game Over

00:23:972 (3) - +15 degree better, the Slider too sudden down. slider offscreen
00:37:861 (1) - Whoaa.. it's sliderzzz
00:42:583 (3,4) - This hard.. Really, can't catch this not , lol . on 00:42:306 (1,2) - The jump looks normal , but when 00:42:583 (3,4) - It's hard to hit even with pen tablet inb4 axarious FC lel
00:52:722 (4,5) - Poor jump
01:07:028 - Add a not over here? i feel like vocal is right there
01:09:945 (8) - Move to X:436 Y:76 ? but it symetrical D:
01:11:889 (2) - Move to X:116 Y:76 ? fix some


Sorry my mod bad, I hope this helping a bit
I'm really grateful if you want to check my mapset too alright just tell me in-game pm if you need it :3
Good Luck!

1. Please remove this file on Storyboard file.
   
   1. Blue.png
   2. Mask All Glow.png
   3. Mask Snowy.png
   4. pulse.png

N1k0 wrote:

Fort, thank you for making such an amazing beatmap with such an amazing use of custom hitsounds. I can't understand how you always succeed to make these great beatmaps over and over. So for the best I hope this gets ranked.

mcwc2307 wrote:

]Im impressed with the huge amount of diffs, but ill focus on each diff for each post

BEGINNER
00:33:417 (5) - add new combo looks yeah but maybe next time
00:36:750 (1) - remove combo vocal says 1 please
00:37:861 (2) - add new combo so i didnt newcombo because it can be spam
from 01:26:750 to 01:35:083 there could be more notes becuase of the drastic drop of the number of notes from the previous combo i prefer to keep objects really smal in this map

Okay now for standard diff
STANDARD
00:08:972 (4) - too far from no. 3 and also near the edge of the screen too fixed something
00:26:750 (4) - add combo
01:52:306 (4) - seems too near the edge of the screen
and thats all for standard
will continue modding the other diffs

N1k0 wrote:

Fort, thank you for making such an amazing beatmap with such an amazing use of custom hitsounds. I can't understand how you always succeed to make these great beatmaps over and over. So for the best I hope this gets ranked.

Kotori-Chan wrote:

that mapping style..

that hitsounds..

that storyboard..

Fort,i think i love you ;w;

You made me all wet while playing >///>

cant wait to see this ranked >w</

shooted a star btw ;3 ♥

FCL wrote:

in gratitude for your help

• [Beginner]

1. 01:23:417 (5) - I think that this slider should be more curves, much like a 01:21:195 (3) -
2. 01:23:417 (5,6) - make this sliders same shape will be more beautiful
3. 01:52:306 (4) - how in 01:23:417 (5)

• [Advanced]

1. 00:17:028 (5) - I do not like the location of slider here. Suggest move on 128;264 blanket doesnt matter for me i think
2. 01:03:972 (4) - why not blanket?
3. 01:37:861 (3) - I would like to make this circle more consistent flow (move on 88;236)

• [Hyper]

1. 00:51:195 (1,2) - imo, in parallel, they would have looked better
2. 01:03:417 (1,2) - uneven blanket, i think

• [Game Over]

1. 01:18:417 (1,1) - like a 00:51:195 (1,2) in Hyper i dont get this :<

Standar, Another, Expert and Extreme fine for me! Good luck, Fort

Yuii- wrote:

Hiii, Forty! How've you been?

Some general things that need to be addressed:

CoreO.png is an unused SB file.You want to remove it!
I'm not sure if highlight.png is a special effect or something, but it's not used either. Remove it after a confirmation. Same goes to x.png I couldn't find it in the .osb file!

Apparently, soft-hitwhistle9.wav is not being used in the hitsounds. normal-hitfinish74.wav neither. Please, check them!

In case you want to add the normal-hitfinish74, it has a 2 ms delay. Isn't unrankable, but always having everything perfect works better! Here's the "fixed"(non-delayed) one: http://puu.sh/kus7W/f624016c29.wav

soft-hitnormal is inaudible in the right ear compared to the left side. Try to fix that as it's unrankable (unless it's intentional).

01:02:027 (4) - (On Expert) This is unsnapped.

The colours you chose aren't bad, but they are a lot, so some of them might be irrelevant such as Combos (6) and (8) since they don't have that same impact as the other colours, and they somehow look similar to another one.

That's it. Good luck with the mapset!

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hy Fort

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[Beginner]01:01:750 (4) - Terlalu ke bawah, naikin dikit

[Standard]00:21:195 (3) - Diputar 80 derjat, like this

SPOILER

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[-obee58-] wrote:

Amazing map as usual
OMFGHITSOUNDS
Can't stream this fast/long, RIP ;w;

01:36:750 (1) - 01:40:083 (1) - I don't feel like this really needs a stream between these points, but w/e you want lol
It's gotta stay over 7* somehow ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ idk with this but i think this one looks good, but maybe i will fix when people got complain on this one

starred, so now you have to give kds lololol [jk but i would like it]

1. 00:15:639 (3) - The current comboing is also fine, but adding NC will emphasize the symmetric round pattern of 00:11:195 (1,2) better imo. Up to you.
2. 00:26:750 (3,1) - These curve rate being different bothered me a little. Mind trying to make them the same?
3. 01:02:861 (5,1) - After seeing your slider usage, I can feel you know how to make a round flow between sliders. In that point, this flow could be smoother as you've done at 01:04:528 (1,2).
4. 01:25:083 (6,1) - I would've expect a better ctrl+shift+S blanket pattern here in your mapping skills, but fine if this is your best.

1. 00:11:195 (1,3) - Again, this different curve rate bothered consistency.
2. 01:37:306 - This rhythm being empty really didn't felt suiting the music. There is a clear instrument sound along 01:37:028 (2,3), and leaving this a blank also reduced the pause effect of 01:35:639 (1,2). Add a note or something please.

1. 00:03:000 (3) - I highly doubt if this rhythm is valuable enough to be mapped in this difficulty.
2. 00:20:917 (3,1) - 00:25:361 (3,1) - 00:33:139 (3,1) - Low intuititive pattern. I understand your intention not to make an overlap along the 1/2 slider and the object after that, while keeping the distance 1.00x between the slider head and other objects. However anyways this pattern is technically a jump, and is something should be done highly intuitive especially for relatively low difficulties. The problem here is that the distance between the tail of 1/2 slider and the next object being too far. This placement is rather inconsistent among objects like 00:22:861 (2,1) or 00:27:861 (5,1,1), which can result in a potential confusion to players. Also the music parts you've decided to use your current pattern wasn't noticable enough to justify your usage. http://puu.sh/ky8LI/8e99334c32.jpg Just a random suggestion here, but I definitely believe this needs a change.
3. 00:42:306 (1,2,3) - You've used this inconsistent spacing to emphasize (3) I guess? Not bad. But if you used the same distance value also for 00:43:417 (1,2,3,1) - not just the idea of inconsistent spacing only, then this pattern could be more organized.
4. 00:48:139 (2) - Since the pattern changes here, consider NC.
5. 01:04:250 - Reduce volume since there is no clear sound in the song.
6. 01:25:639 (3,4) - Having a long spacing here didn't felt well along the music. (4) is something before the strong beat of (1), so making (3,4) closer while maintaining the large distance of (4,1) will have a better effect.
7. 01:37:861 (3,4) - Obviously wrong distance snap.
   Some large spacing objects felt a little exaggerated with the expected pace of the map for me.

1. 00:18:695 (3,1) - Using the same pattern before (1,2) reduced the effectiveness of (1,2).
2. 00:46:056 (2,3) - Rather (3,4) could be a nice jump spot, but (2,3) definitely didn't suit a jump.
3. 01:04:250 - Volume suggestion.

1. 01:04:667 (1) - Using a dark combo color with the dark background damages readability. Better use something else.

1. 00:47:306 (1,1,3) - All these being parallel seems more organized.

1. 01:26:472 (3,4,5,6) - Not sure really a stream suits here.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Beginner]

1. 00:15:639 (3) - The current comboing is also fine, but adding NC will emphasize the symmetric round pattern of 00:11:195 (1,2) better imo. Up to you.
2. 00:26:750 (3,1) - These curve rate being different bothered me a little. Mind trying to make them the same?
3. 01:02:861 (5,1) - After seeing your slider usage, I can feel you know how to make a round flow between sliders. In that point, this flow could be smoother as you've done at 01:04:528 (1,2).
4. 01:25:083 (6,1) - I would've expect a better ctrl+shift+S blanket pattern here in your mapping skills, but fine if this is your best.

[Standard]

1. 00:11:195 (1,3) - Again, this different curve rate bothered consistency.
2. 01:37:306 - This rhythm being empty really didn't felt suiting the music. There is a clear instrument sound along 01:37:028 (2,3), and leaving this a blank also reduced the pause effect of 01:35:639 (1,2). Add a note or something please.

[Advanced]

1. 00:03:000 (3) - I highly doubt if this rhythm is valuable enough to be mapped in this difficulty.
2. 00:20:917 (3,1) - 00:25:361 (3,1) - 00:33:139 (3,1) - Low intuititive pattern. I understand your intention not to make an overlap along the 1/2 slider and the object after that, while keeping the distance 1.00x between the slider head and other objects. However anyways this pattern is technically a jump, and is something should be done highly intuitive especially for relatively low difficulties. The problem here is that the distance between the tail of 1/2 slider and the next object being too far. This placement is rather inconsistent among objects like 00:22:861 (2,1) or 00:27:861 (5,1,1), which can result in a potential confusion to players. Also the music parts you've decided to use your current pattern wasn't noticable enough to justify your usage. http://puu.sh/ky8LI/8e99334c32.jpg Just a random suggestion here, but I definitely believe this needs a change.
3. 00:42:306 (1,2,3) - You've used this inconsistent spacing to emphasize (3) I guess? Not bad. But if you used the same distance value also for 00:43:417 (1,2,3,1) - not just the idea of inconsistent spacing only, then this pattern could be more organized. i think that jump is okay on advanced diff
4. 00:48:139 (2) - Since the pattern changes here, consider NC. it looks like NC spam i think
5. 01:04:250 - Reduce volume since there is no clear sound in the song. fixed patterning
6. 01:25:639 (3,4) - Having a long spacing here didn't felt well along the music. (4) is something before the strong beat of (1), so making (3,4) closer while maintaining the large distance of (4,1) will have a better effect.
7. 01:37:861 (3,4) - Obviously wrong distance snap.
   Some large spacing objects felt a little exaggerated with the expected pace of the map for me.

[Hyper]

1. 00:18:695 (3,1) - Using the same pattern before (1,2) reduced the effectiveness of (1,2).
2. 00:46:056 (2,3) - Rather (3,4) could be a nice jump spot, but (2,3) definitely didn't suit a jump.
3. 01:04:250 - Volume suggestion.

[Another]

1. 01:04:667 (1) - Using a dark combo color with the dark background damages readability. Better use something else.

[Extreme]

1. 00:47:306 (1,1,3) - All these being parallel seems more organized. yeah im gonna keep this thing for flow

[Game Over]

1. 01:26:472 (3,4,5,6) - Not sure really a stream suits here.

CptSqBany wrote:

I'm helping :3

[Game Over]

[General]

Much love for you for using same hitsounds as at Highscore, they are awesome <3 oh thank you so much <3

[Mapping and NCs]
00:08:972 - 1/6 or 1/8 reversing slider? i think just 1 circle is enough
00:15:083 (1) - lengthen it to the red tick maybe i will do this thing later
00:43:417 (1,2,1,2) - omg isnt that too big? now it's not big :^)
00:52:306 - He says "One, Two, Three, Four" so at (5) NC it's a hitsound lol
01:04:528 - Three notes, not two (MUST BE)
01:06:750 - ^ it can be right too if im put two notes for prevent missread on 01:04:945 (1,2) -
01:08:417 - If there is a repeating wow wow wow, so make every note from (1) to (5) at NCs dat spam doe, but i fix something here
01:11:160 - that is so shitty (no offence) change it immediately i dont get this :/
01:18:174 - Like that! 01:17:861 (1,1) - whoos whoosh 01:18:139 (2,2) - bang bang lol
01:37:861 - 01:40:083 - i cant hear any stream there, so change it to something else yeah but i think it can be better with stream pattern

If you get the point of my mod, then apply same things for the rest of the diffs Good Luck :3