1. Magik (4,91 stars, 1219 notes)

1. 00:03:674 (1,2) - when you make two sliders like these, try to make them completely parallel, or tilt them a bit more, never in the middle of both
2. 00:09:144 (6,1) - you can put (1) a bit more up to avoid the overlap with 00:08:792 (4,5) -
3. 00:13:203 (3,4) - you should have a triple here imo, the music still plays here
4. 00:17:086 (9) - rotate about 7º to the left, and move 00:17:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - accordingly
5. 00:47:086 (3) - replace by kick slider flowing into 00:47:262 (4) - ? would play really neat
6. 00:56:439 (4,5) - ctrl+g?
7. 01:16:556 (7) - start NC here instead of 01:16:733 (1) -
8. 02:09:850 (1,2) - replace by reverse slider making a triple? that wobble sound kind of ask for a triple or something of the sort
9. 02:18:409 (2) - the last reverse is not mapping anything
10. 02:26:439 (2,3) - give a bit more spacing, too close
11. 03:02:439 (1,2) - try to blanket a bit better, at least the slider tail of (1)
12. 03:50:615 (5) - I think ctrl+g would flow better
13. 04:40:909 (7,8) - both sliders have a main beat on the slidertail, that doesn't feel really good to play, since we should always be clicking the main beat when we have the chance, you just use notes, and pull one of the slider back by 1 red tick
14. 04:47:792 (4) - NC
15. 04:56:262 (7,8) - timing wise the sliders should start here, you're not waiting the full beat between 04:54:674 (4) - and 04:55:909 (5) - so the timing feels wrong when entering them, 04:55:909 (5,6) - should be replaced by a normal stream, or moved to after 04:56:262 (7,8) -
16. 04:59:792 (3,4) - might be personal but I hate stacks like this one xd
17. 05:10:380 (1) - slider tail is a main beat, suggestion is finish this slider at 05:10:644 - and silence the end, and add a note on 05:10:733 -
18. 05:11:262 - finish slider here, add note on 05:11:439 - , main beats are important to click
19. 05:12:321 (8,9) - also main beat on sliderends
20. 05:26:968 (4,1) - this spacing is really small, maybe you can ctrl+g with 05:27:497 (2) - ?
21. Nice map for a nice song :v

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hey, M4M from your queue

[Magik]

1. 00:03:674 (1,2) - when you make two sliders like these, try to make them completely parallel, or tilt them a bit more, never in the middle of both - Tilted them just a bit more
2. 00:09:144 (6,1) - you can put (1) a bit more up to avoid the overlap with 00:08:792 (4,5) - Oh shit yea it's too damn close
3. 00:13:203 (3,4) - you should have a triple here imo, the music still plays here - Added just cuz triples are the shit and yea the music has a triple or a burst five or something i think
4. 00:17:086 (9) - rotate about 7º to the left, and move 00:17:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - accordingly - yea why not
5. 00:47:086 (3) - replace by kick slider flowing into 00:47:262 (4) - ? would play really neat - I felt that it was somewhat random
6. 00:56:439 (4,5) - ctrl+g? - Yea
7. 01:16:556 (7) - start NC here instead of 01:16:733 (1) - Done
8. 02:09:850 (1,2) - replace by reverse slider making a triple? that wobble sound kind of ask for a triple or something of the sort - Umm okay
9. 02:18:409 (2) - the last reverse is not mapping anything - That's why it's muted
10. 02:26:439 (2,3) - give a bit more spacing, too close - k
11. 03:02:439 (1,2) - try to blanket a bit better, at least the slider tail of (1) - Trying to figure out something
12. 03:50:615 (5) - I think ctrl+g would flow better - Done, also moved it a bit more up
13. 04:40:909 (7,8) - both sliders have a main beat on the slidertail, that doesn't feel really good to play, since we should always be clicking the main beat when we have the chance, you just use notes, and pull one of the slider back by 1 red tick - I actually followed the vocals here so I might end up changing it idk
14. 04:47:792 (4) - NC - Forgot that fixed
15. 04:56:262 (7,8) - timing wise the sliders should start here, you're not waiting the full beat between 04:54:674 (4) - and 04:55:909 (5) - so the timing feels wrong when entering them, 04:55:909 (5,6) - should be replaced by a normal stream, or moved to after 04:56:262 (7,8) - 04:55:909 (5,6) are now streams and 04:56:262 (1,2,3,4) - are the new kicksliders
16. 04:59:792 (3,4) - might be personal but I hate stacks like this one xd - I like this stack
17. 05:10:380 (1) - slider tail is a main beat, suggestion is finish this slider at 05:10:644 - and silence the end, and add a note on 05:10:733 - umm idk since i'm following the vocals but will change if other modders tell me this
18. 05:11:262 - finish slider here, add note on 05:11:439 - , main beats are important to click - ^
19. 05:12:321 (8,9) - also main beat on sliderends - ^
20. 05:26:968 (4,1) - this spacing is really small, maybe you can ctrl+g with 05:27:497 (2) ? - Blanket. Good example of this is monstrata.
21. Nice map for a nice song :v - Thank you very much!

That's all I've got, good luck

Maakkeli wrote:

I can't agree to your terms here. Linada is the 2nd best of all magical girls :3

Show me the proof, i can't trust you that i'm not the best

Linada wrote:

Hey ! from my queue ~
Since i'm new to modding, feel free to don't apply my mod

Maakkeli wrote:

I can't agree to your terms here. Linada is the 2nd best of all magical girls :3

Show me the proof, i can't trust you that i'm not the best - I obviously couldn't give you my place as the #1 magical girl.


[Magik]
00:02:262 (1,2) - swap nc ? - k why not
00:03:674 (1,2) - ^ - i
00:05:086 (1,2) - ^ - like
00:07:909 (1,2) - ^ (you get it :*) - popsicles
00:51:497 (5,1) - triple ? - yea triples are the shit
01:00:850 (6) - moving this a bit to the left for a better look - moved it a bit left
01:13:909 (4) - something like this sound better imo - yea i guess
01:27:497 (4,5) - ctrl g ? - I feel like this flows better as it is now
02:10:733 (5) - make this 2 circle instead is better imo - Theres not really anything to map at the red tick so I'm gonna keep the slider since the sliderend is "passive"
02:17:968 (1,2) - i think something like this fits more the song imo - You're right
02:38:792 (8,1) - triple ? - Triples are the shit
02:43:027 (7,1) - ^ - ^
02:59:086 (5) - overlap doesnt looks good - lol didn't even notice that myself fixed
04:07:909 (1) - remove nc - kay
04:08:262 (3) - add nc - done
04:21:321 (1) - stack sliderend - why do I miss these thing lol fixed
04:42:674 (4,6) - bad looking overlap - b-b-but they are not overlapping
04:43:027 (6,7) - triple ? - yyyyeeeeeaaaa
04:46:556 (9,1) - ^ - gotta think something funny to say
04:48:321 (1,2) - ^ - probably the first time a triple didn't sound nice to me lol
04:51:497 (5,6) - ^ - rarest
05:03:850 (8,9) - ^ - rare pepes
05:06:674 (8,9) - ^ - pepes are good memes
05:10:909 (2,3) - ^ - no memes 2nd time a triple didn't sound nice oh gawd am I sick
05:11:086 (3) - make it straight to next circle, so it avoid bad looking overlap - moved 5 a bit further so no overlaps
05:15:144 (7,8) - triple ? :3 - uguu~
05:32:615 (6) - remove ? - well there's nothing to map so yea
05:42:674 (7,8,1) - remove 7,8 and put the slider instead, you mapped 2 extra stream note - stuff done

The map is really well made ! Good luck with ranking - Thank you very much
i hope i'm helpful >//< - Your mod was helpful nice cool ok.

Maakkeli wrote:

as for the cute lil' girls I haven't found any yet.

mai waifu

Linada wrote:

Maakkeli wrote:

as for the cute lil' girls I haven't found any yet.

I found one, but she's mine, I DON'T SHARE ;w;

mai waifu

Linada wrote:

Maakkeli wrote:

as for the cute lil' girls I haven't found any yet.

I found one, but she's mine, I DON'T SHARE ;w;

mai waifu

Lethargy wrote:

Your waifu sucks dude

Lethargy wrote:

Your waifu sucks dude

Lethargy wrote:

Yo, from IRC m4m,

mod

17:43 Lethargy: yo
17:43 Lethargy: want do an irc mod?
17:44 Lethargy: or in case m4m
17:44 Maakkeli: yea sure
17:44 Lethargy: id like you to mod this
17:44 *Lethargy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/770940 yanaginagi - Koibumi]
17:46 Lethargy: is that ok?
17:46 Maakkeli: hrrr idk if i can mod this low diff but i'll try
17:46 Lethargy: sure
17:46 Lethargy: we just need mods so BN will notice
17:46 Lethargy: thats it
17:46 Lethargy: so lets do now irc of your 
17:46 *Lethargy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/782188 DJ Shimamura feat. Yukacco - Magik Night [Magik]]
17:46 Maakkeli: kk
17:47 Lethargy: so
17:47 Lethargy: get mp3 file
17:47 Lethargy: with 192kbps
17:47 Lethargy: as the current one is imo 320
17:47 Maakkeli: oh shit yea i forgot that
17:47 Maakkeli: gonna edit it after this
17:47 Lethargy: ok
17:47 Lethargy: then
17:47 Lethargy: i would probably get better colours
17:48 Lethargy: cuz these to beh onest dont erally work with the BG
17:48 Maakkeli: well suggest me something im bad with colours lol
17:48 Lethargy: werll
17:49 Maakkeli: i just read that they should not blend with the background
17:49 Lethargy: RGB 175 129 201
17:49 Lethargy: smth like this
17:49 Lethargy: they shouldnt
17:49 Lethargy: but they cant play with it
17:49 Lethargy: then
17:49 Lethargy: you can use gray
17:50 Lethargy: dark violetblue
17:50 Lethargy: or light blue
17:50 Maakkeli: oh ok
17:50 Lethargy: but not agressive colours
17:50 Lethargy: since those which you chose right now
17:50 Maakkeli: like shades and stuff
17:50 Lethargy: are kind of agressive
17:50 Lethargy: yeah
17:50 *Lethargy is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/782188 DJ Shimamura feat. Yukacco - Magik Night [Magik]]
17:50 Lethargy: ill testplay it
17:51 Maakkeli: k i'll mess with the colours in the meantime
17:51 Lethargy: hmm
17:52 Lethargy: i think what is lacking in this beatmap
17:52 Lethargy: is quality of kicksliders
17:52 Lethargy: otherwise its quite good
17:52 Maakkeli: umm...
17:52 Maakkeli: care to expalin?
17:52 Maakkeli: explain
17:52 Lethargy: sure
17:52 Lethargy: here in the beginning 00:01:733 (4,5) - 
17:52 Lethargy: or basicalyl anywehere else
17:53 Lethargy: kickslider should be further away
17:53 Lethargy: as this way they become fairly hard to read
17:53 Lethargy: ill show you an example
17:54 Lethargy: 00:03:144 (3,4,5) - 
17:54 Lethargy: here
17:54 Lethargy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3698823
17:55 Lethargy: nice hitsounds by the way
17:55 Maakkeli: yea that would actually look better too imo
17:55 Maakkeli: thanks
17:55 Lethargy: you can do that in other places as well
17:55 Lethargy: as it imo flwos better
17:55 Lethargy: because kicksliders are used to compensate for streams
17:55 Lethargy: and while streams are just clicking
17:55 Lethargy: kicksliders also implement different distance snap
17:56 Lethargy: as they basically for you to go faster
17:56 Lethargy: or yo ucan simply take them as 1/2 circles
17:56 Lethargy: because a lot of people play them that way cuz of slider leniency
17:57 Lethargy: here 00:40:733 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
17:57 Maakkeli: yea that's how i learned them
17:57 Lethargy: i would do a regualr stream
17:57 Lethargy: cuz streams usually start with circles
17:57 Lethargy: and end up with kick sliders
17:57 Lethargy: and it also imo looks better
17:57 Maakkeli: i actually tried that and i just didn't like it for some reason
17:58 Lethargy: oh
17:58 Lethargy: hmm
17:58 Lethargy: fine then
17:58 Lethargy: but try playing with it a bit more
17:58 Lethargy: cuz now it looks kind of dull
17:58 Maakkeli: i feel like it kind of builds up better this way
17:58 Maakkeli: well i pretty much just copied that kicksliderpattern from monstratas map
17:59 Lethargy: you can do this
17:59 Lethargy: http://puu.sh/kgNbG/15c3a17ca3.jpg
18:00 Lethargy: do you know what i mean byt hat?
18:01 Maakkeli: yea
18:01 Maakkeli: trying it right now
18:01 Lethargy: i think it flows better
18:02 Maakkeli: ok did that
18:02 Maakkeli: i like it
18:02 Lethargy: mosntok
18:03 Maakkeli: wait a second getting a phone call lol
18:03 Lethargy: ok
18:03 Lethargy: you can do the same here 01:03:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
18:04 Lethargy: either start NC here  01:05:350 (2) - 
18:04 Lethargy: or put same spacing on this 01:05:262 (1) - like you did on the rest
18:06 Lethargy: 01:27:850 (6) - i dont think this flows very well 01:27:850 (6) - 
18:06 Lethargy: hmm
18:06 Lethargy: just ctrl+g 01:27:850 (6) - 
18:07 Lethargy: and sliderarts
18:07 Lethargy: you can increase SV just abit for this slider 01:42:497 (2) - 
18:07 Lethargy: to emphasize the increasing voice
18:08 Maakkeli: ok now i've caught up lol
18:08 Lethargy: ok
18:08 Maakkeli: is 1.10sv ok?
18:08 Lethargy:  i dont know
18:08 Lethargy: any SV works as long as its not crazy
18:09 Maakkeli: well i'll just go with that
18:09 Lethargy: ok
18:10 Lethargy: 02:23:086 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 
18:10 Lethargy: here
18:10 Lethargy: put more spacing
18:10 Lethargy: here
18:10 Lethargy: definitely
18:10 Lethargy: the music is already loud
18:10 Lethargy: so its needed
18:10 Maakkeli: kk
18:11 Lethargy: you can just c trlg this shit 02:46:380 (1,2,3,4) - 
18:14 Lethargy: the rest is fine
18:14 Maakkeli: kk done that
18:14 Lethargy: its just those kicksliders
18:14 Lethargy: try put more spacing between them
18:14 Maakkeli: right
18:15 Lethargy: ill just check NCs
18:16 Lethargy: ok so
18:16 Lethargy: in streams
18:16 Lethargy: there dotn have be so many NCs
18:16 Lethargy: well fine
18:16 Lethargy: thats it

Nice map

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

why 2 different mp3 in your folder? one mp3 is unnecessary i think, that's why your folder is 23mb, it's too large - yea I forgot to remove the other one

combo color 3 is unnecessary i think, contrast is too large with other 3 combo colors - kay removed

what about change combo color 1 to pink? your BG's night sky have dark blue pink and some perple but you use light blue, light blue not very suitable i think - Yea looks nice

[Magik]

i think AR9 and OD8 is enough... - yea i came to this conclusion too yesterday but forgot to change also HP6 now

soft-hitfinish is too long, 7 seconds - Is there some guide or general something to these hitsound lenghts?

00:01:253 (1,1) - these 2 group notes looks a little mess, try to make some change? - 'kay came up with something new

00:04:606 (3) - i think this stream's spacing can be different with 00:06:018 (3) - and 00:06:547 (1) - . it may let your stream looks more changeable and i think different tone between 00:04:606 (3) - and 00:06:018 (3) - 00:06:547 (1) - , so i think spacing can be different - I just gave 00:04:606 (3) - this stream a bit move spacing

00:12:547 (1,2) - not a perfect blanket - should be fine now

00:46:077 (6) - NC here? keep the same with 01:42:194 (1) - this part - forgot to change this last night

01:05:312 (7) - NC, 01:05:400 (1) - remove NC, 01:05:842 (6) - NC, keep the same with 00:43:959 (1) - this part - the nc is at 01:05:400 (1) - because spacing changes there but i'm just gonna change this if someone else mentions this and then i will change the streams spacing too a bit

01:06:547 - 03:13:606 - add a break here? - hmmmm... I'll just add it for the sake of adding it

01:14:312 (5) - add whistle here? - i forget so many thing i'm embarrassed

02:02:842 (1,2,3) - this spacing too ugly - i tried to do something but it just looked more awful

02:28:077 (9) - 03:13:253 (9) - 04:10:959 (9) - 04:35:136 (9) - 04:57:724 (13) - 05:20:312 (13) - NC here because of a obviously finish hitsound - Done

02:49:253 (7) - change to 2 notes,and NC, 02:49:430 (1) - remove NC, 02:49:959 (7) - NC, 02:50:136 (1) - remove NC, 02:50:665 (7) - NC, this part should be a 17-note-stream, or your rhythm will become bad - done

04:34:253 (7,8) - i think this 8-note-stream should be a coherent shape - stream somewhat remade looks the same doe

04:57:018 (5) - NC plz, i beg you - i forgot this yesterday too

05:25:253 (1,2,3,4,1) - this pentagon lack of standardization well it's not meant to be a pentagon

sry for poot english, GL - No biggie I understood fine thanks!

riktoi wrote:

modi täältä hassusta jonosta

[MagiK]
01:25:606 - taukoja vois tunkea tänne
01:31:253 - ^
01:36:900 - ^
03:14:312 - ^
Taukoja tungettu

00:06:547 (1,2,3) - vois varmaan seurata tota samaa patternia mikä menee täällä 00:11:665 (4,5) -
00:17:842 (4,5,6) - tässä vois tehä saman - Mä en nyt oo ihan varma että mitä sä ajoot täs takaa joten ei muutoksia

01:33:194 (5) - vois pistää ton 01:32:312 (2) - sliderin alun alle ihan vaan näön vuoks - 01:33:194 (5,7) - blanketti, ei muutoksia

en nyt tiedä toimisko tähän kappaleeseen paremmin semmonen dnb tapainen mappaus, tuli vaan mieleen sellainen kun katsoin läpi
anteeksi nyt tästä huonosta modista mutta kappale on hiukan liian hankala modata mulle - Itte ajattelin sen niin, kun biisin tyylilajihan on rave että suurimmat hypyt tapahtuis justiin näitten bassojen kohdalla. Esim. hyppy 02:30:371 (4,5) - koska 4 on hyvin passiivinen ja 5 on sitten taas "äänekäs" basso.

Insane
00:15:018 (7) - replacing it with a flip of 00:15:724 (2) - should smoothen the flow.
01:21:371 (3) - 1/2 slider should sound better, or reduce the slider end volume.
02:56:136 (2) - my opinion, put it a little bit to the right and put 02:56:665 (5) on the same position as 02:54:989 (3).
03:22:783 (2) - I suggest a 1/2 slider would be better.
04:04:077 (1) - my opinion, place the slider end at (310,67) and flip the end should make the flow smoother.
04:12:547 (1) - my opinion, end the slider at 04:13:606 would be better for me.
04:16:077 (7) - the slider end here is a little bit too strong for an overmapping, reduce the volume of the hit or reduce the slider to 1/2
04:19:606 (4) - same as above.
04:57:812(1) - the spinner end at 04:58:783 should be better and will match the vocal sound, also more recovery time as the beat after is quite far from the center.

Paloch VeGa wrote:

Hi, I'm applying for your M4M queue

Insane
00:15:018 (7) - replacing it with a flip of 00:15:724 (2) - should smoothen the flow. - This just looks awkward now lol no change
01:21:371 (3) - 1/2 slider should sound better, or reduce the slider end volume. - Volume reduced
02:56:136 (2) - my opinion, put it a little bit to the right and put 02:56:665 (5) on the same position as 02:54:989 (3). - Hmm I like that
03:22:783 (2) - I suggest a 1/2 slider would be better. - Don't like it. No change
04:04:077 (1) - my opinion, place the slider end at (310,67) and flip the end should make the flow smoother. - I didn't like the flow it created
04:12:547 (1) - my opinion, end the slider at 04:13:606 would be better for me. - Umm... okay
04:16:077 (7) - the slider end here is a little bit too strong for an overmapping, reduce the volume of the hit or reduce the slider to 1/2 - Yea I was supposed to silence these but I guess I forgot
04:19:606 (4) - same as above. - SILENCIO
04:57:812(1) - the spinner end at 04:58:783 should be better and will match the vocal sound, also more recovery time as the beat after is quite far from the center. - I'll just do this if someone else points this out. I'll do the same to the kiai before this

I'm not very experienced in mapping and modding, it might be a bit strange, so just ignore them if it doesn't go well. - No biggie you did fine. Just keep modding and you'll get better. I'm not and amazing modder myself but hey, at least I try
Here's my map for M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/355669

NlHIL wrote:

[Magik]
00:13:165 - 00:14:577 - 00:15:989 - 00:17:400 - add a circle? - No since the song goes into a somewhat different phase but I'll do it if other modders tell me to do this
00:42:194 (1,2,3,4) - change to 2 sliders? - again I'll do this if other modders tell me to
00:47:842 (7) - end at 00:48:018 - and add a circle at 00:48:106 - ? - Ok
03:25:783 (1) - end at 03:27:371 - ? - well i'm not necessarily just mapping the vocals there so no
00:58:077 (2) - end at 00:58:342 - ? - why??
05:18:900 (5,6) - change to 4 circles? - why??
05:41:224 (10,12) - overmaped - well one could say that this whole map is full of overmapping but will meddle with this stream if other modders tell me to do stuff to it

BacunAMR wrote:

05:09:547 (7,8) - Try a reverse arrow. - Silenced the sliderend.

(From my modding queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/372718)

1. Uninherited timing points should go on 00:01:253 - this place, right now the beat measures are messed up.
2. You should increase the AR to 9.2 or something, considering this is a fast-paced song, and to increase readability of notes.

1. 00:09:371 (1,2,3) - This pattern in particular doesn't require much movement for the players compared to 00:02:665 (2,3,4) - and similar others, it doesn't really fit with the slightly more harder patterns that were used previously.
2. 00:24:900 (4,2) - I can see that you are trying to make a overlap between 00:24:547 (3,2) - these 2 notes, but it is unnecessarily close to (4), you could make them further apart to make the pattern look more neater.
3. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The rhythm consistency on the stream is kinda broken, it will certainly mislead players. If 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these were 1/4 sliders, 00:42:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - these should be all circles to mirror the 1/4 sliders, but right now 00:43:253 (1,2) - these 2 aren't circles which certainly does mislead players. Not only that, the NCs here aren't really the on the right spot, it should be on 00:42:900 (3) - this note instead of 00:42:724 (1) - this note. Well that is, if you are changing 00:43:253 (1,2) - these 2 as circles. After applying this, 00:43:959 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these should all be 1/4 sliders to again mirror the rhythm. This applies to other streams, check over them.
4. 00:54:547 (7,2) - Not really a fan of this overlap; the tail of the slider should be completely overlapped by 00:54:547 (7) - this note to increase readability.
5. 01:39:900 - You would want to have a circle here, as it will give emphasize on the lyrics that is present on this point.
6. 01:42:194 (1,1) - Not sure why can't you have the tail of these sliders not silenced when there is no vocals or instrument present on the first slider's tail or the second slider's tail, and when 01:09:018 (1,1,1) - these could. (Actually 01:09:018 (1,1,1) - these doesn't really even need to be silenced on the tail ;-;)
7. 01:49:783 (4,6) - Avoid circles getting to close to the hitcircles of objects when making overlaps, or if that is impossible, you rather do this to keep the momentum :
   
   
8. 02:03:371 (2,3) - Ok these circles plays out really weird. It really catches players off-guard when they were not expecting this part to be undermapped than others ;-; It is kind of hard to explain, but... Well you can instead follow the music and use this rhythm to not mislead players :
   
   
9. 02:18:459 (3) - It is unnecessary to have a repeat on this slider, or silence the tail of the slider, there is literally no sound on 02:18:989 - .
10. 02:21:547 (4) - Similar like above, this should only be a circle, there is no sound at 02:21:724 - .
11. 02:23:136 (1,2,3,4) - Well the 1/4 slider stream doesn't fit with the song in anyway IMO, I don't hear any beats nor sounds which justifies the use of 1/4 sliders. Yes I know what you are mapping to, but the part where a stream should be mapped starts at 02:23:842 - , so these 1/4 sliders should be replaced with two 1/2 sliders to fit with the instrument that you are following.
12. 02:25:253 (5,1) - Swap NCs, to follow the NC pattern.
13. 02:25:959 (5,1) - ^^ And a NC should be added at 02:26:665 (5) - here for the consistency.
14. 02:50:753 (1,1) - Although it is fine to have 1/4 spacing from the note after a spinner in Insanes, it is still not recommendable, and it doesn't justify anything on the song as 02:51:989 - this point doesn't have any sounds or beat in it. I suggest you to end the spinner at 02:51:724 - , which will make more sense as it gives a pause before the stanza begins.
15. 03:02:489 (1,2) - When making slider bows, don't make the hitcircles touch each other, it doesn't look neat when it is supposed to look neat if it is arranged this way.
16. 03:13:253 (1,1) - It is more sensible if there was a break between these 2 notes, as the instrument you are following isn't present in that point.
17. 03:25:783 (1) - Well it is weird if you suddenly changed from following the kick to following the vocal hold, there are still kicks in the duration of this spinner. Try to map the kicks out, this may mislead some players.
18. 04:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't know... The tornado pattern here seems really disoriented, especially because 04:32:312 (9,1) - these 2 notes suddenly requires the players to slow down their movement when all other notes required increasing movement. I don't really make tornado patterns... Try to figure it out on your own.
19. 05:36:194 (4) - Aw come on, you could have copied the shapes of 05:35:136 (1,2,3) - these notes and make like a pinwheel, this kinda breaks off the purpose of those 3 notes ;-;
20. Improve those rhythm usage and the map will be better

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ NM as requested in my queue~

1. Unrankable issues
2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
3. Small suggestions/nazi

[General]

1. Uninherited timing points should go on 00:01:253 - this place, right now the beat measures are messed up. - Thanks
2. You should increase the AR to 9.2 or something, considering this is a fast-paced song, and to increase readability of notes. - Well I was already told that ar 9 would be fine but I'm gonna rise it up to 9.2 again because I prefer it too

[Magik]

1. 00:09:371 (1,2,3) - This pattern in particular doesn't require much movement for the players compared to 00:02:665 (2,3,4) - and similar others, it doesn't really fit with the slightly more harder patterns that were used previously. - Gave a bit more space to them
2. 00:24:900 (4,2) - I can see that you are trying to make a overlap between 00:24:547 (3,2) - these 2 notes, but it is unnecessarily close to (4), you could make them further apart to make the pattern look more neater. - Lol I wasn't necessarily trying that but thanks for pointing this out
3. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The rhythm consistency on the stream is kinda broken, it will certainly mislead players. If 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these were 1/4 sliders, 00:42:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - these should be all circles to mirror the 1/4 sliders, but right now 00:43:253 (1,2) - these 2 aren't circles which certainly does mislead players. Not only that, the NCs here aren't really the on the right spot, it should be on 00:42:900 (3) - this note instead of 00:42:724 (1) - this note. Well that is, if you are changing 00:43:253 (1,2) - these 2 as circles. After applying this, 00:43:959 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these should all be 1/4 sliders to again mirror the rhythm. This applies to other streams, check over them. -I hate streams
4. 00:54:547 (7,2) - Not really a fan of this overlap; the tail of the slider should be completely overlapped by 00:54:547 (7) - this note to increase readability. - Did stuff
5. 01:39:900 - You would want to have a circle here, as it will give emphasize on the lyrics that is present on this point. - done
6. 01:42:194 (1,1) - Not sure why can't you have the tail of these sliders not silenced when there is no vocals or instrument present on the first slider's tail or the second slider's tail, and when 01:09:018 (1,1,1) - these could. - Forgot to silence it (Actually 01:09:018 (1,1,1) - these doesn't really even need to be silenced on the tail ;-;)
7. 01:49:783 (4,6) - Avoid circles getting to close to the hitcircles of objects when making overlaps, or if that is impossible, you rather do this to keep the momentum :
   
   
8. 02:03:371 (2,3) - Ok these circles plays out really weird. It really catches players off-guard when they were not expecting this part to be undermapped than others ;-; It is kind of hard to explain, but... Well you can instead follow the music and use this rhythm to not mislead players :
   
   I pretty much ran out of ideas with this thanks!
   
9. 02:18:459 (3) - It is unnecessary to have a repeat on this slider, or silence the tail of the slider, there is literally no sound on 02:18:989 - . - I'll just take it away then
10. 02:21:547 (4) - Similar like above, this should only be a circle, there is no sound at 02:21:724 - . - This is the pinnacle of my mapping and I shall not take this away. Unless someone else tells me to
11. 02:23:136 (1,2,3,4) - Well the 1/4 slider stream doesn't fit with the song in anyway IMO, I don't hear any beats nor sounds which justifies the use of 1/4 sliders. Yes I know what you are mapping to, but the part where a stream should be mapped starts at 02:23:842 - , so these 1/4 sliders should be replaced with two 1/2 sliders to fit with the instrument that you are following. Here's the deal: Overmapping is the "theme" of todays mapping and here I'm bringing my toys to the basket. Every stream and pretty much every kickslider in this map is overmapped. And I'm not gonna take away any of those streams or kicksliders just cause they are overmapped.
12. 02:25:253 (5,1) - Swap NCs, to follow the NC pattern. - Yea I fucked these up sometime somewhere sometime
13. 02:25:959 (5,1) - ^^ And a NC should be added at 02:26:665 (5) - here for the consistency. -y
14. 02:50:753 (1,1) - Although it is fine to have 1/4 spacing from the note after a spinner in Insanes, it is still not recommendable, and it doesn't justify anything on the song as 02:51:989 - this point doesn't have any sounds or beat in it. I suggest you to end the spinner at 02:51:724 - , which will make more sense as it gives a pause before the stanza begins. - Ok fixed the other one too
15. 03:02:489 (1,2) - When making slider bows, don't make the hitcircles touch each other, it doesn't look neat when it is supposed to look neat if it is arranged this way. - All the cool kids blanket
16. 03:13:253 (1,1) - It is more sensible if there was a break between these 2 notes, as the instrument you are following isn't present in that point. - Breaks
17. 03:25:783 (1) - Well it is weird if you suddenly changed from following the kick to following the vocal hold, there are still kicks in the duration of this spinner. Try to map the kicks out, this may mislead some players. - Well idk if spinners are misleading but changed this eitherway
18. 04:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't know... The tornado pattern here seems really disoriented, especially because 04:32:312 (9,1) - these 2 notes suddenly requires the players to slow down their movement when all other notes required increasing movement. I don't really make tornado patterns... Try to figure it out on your own. - What in the name of my mom is a tornado pattern?
19. 05:36:194 (4) - Aw come on, you could have copied the shapes of 05:35:136 (1,2,3) - these notes and make like a pinwheel, this kinda breaks off the purpose of those 3 notes ;-; - Well it's supposed to
20. Improve those rhythm usage and the map will be better

That is all from me. GL!

1. 00:04:077 (1) - try ctrl+H,ctrl+J,put in the same place,00:04:430 (2) put it somewhere on x:444,y:288,00:04:606 (3,4,5,6,7) make blanket with 00:05:488 (1)
2. 00:05:842 (2) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
3. 00:06:018 (3,4,5,6,7) try ctrl+G
4. 00:16:077 (3,4,5) - try ctrl+G
5. 00:17:842 (4,5,6) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
6. 00:18:194 (1) - try ctrl+G
7. 00:28:783 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
8. 00:30:018 (4) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
9. 00:35:842 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
10. 00:45:723 (5) - speed slider try to do 1.0
11. 00:46:076 (1) - speed slider try to do 1.3
12. 00:51:547 (5,6,1) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
13. 00:53:312 (2) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
14. 00:57:724 (1) - speed slider try to do 1.0
15. 01:09:018 (1,1,1,1) - try to put the start of the sliders on the other end,for example the beginning of the second slider to put on x:369 y:146
16. 01:13:783 (3,4) - I would like more distance from the previous slider
17. 01:15:724 (4,5) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
18. 01:16:783 (2) - try ctrl+G
19. 01:44:136 (4) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
20. 01:50:312 (5) - move that do not overlap with scale HP
21. 02:00:547 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
22. 02:01:606 (6) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
23. 02:02:842 (1) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:03:370 (2) returning 1.0
24. 02:06:900 (1) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:07:253 (2) returning 1.0
25. 02:07:783 (4) - try ctrl+G
26. 02:08:312 (6) - try ctrl+G
27. 02:08:842 (2) - try ctrl+G
28. 02:09:547 (5) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:09:900 (1) returning 1.0
29. 02:11:136 (1) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:11:136 (1) returning 1.0
30. 02:14:489 (3) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:14:842 (4)
    back 1.0
31. 02:15:724 (2) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:16:253 (3) back 1.0
32. 02:18:900 - try to put the circle
33. 02:20:311 - try to put the circle
34. 02:40:783 (8) - speed slider try to do 1.0 and then 1.2 back
35. 03:03:371 (1) - speed slider try to do 1.0 and then 1.2 back
36. 04:30:194 (1) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
37. 04:44:136 (10) - NC?
38. 05:37:959 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy

All than I can help,GL

Chamue wrote:

[Magik]

1. 00:04:077 (1) - try ctrl+H,ctrl+J,put in the same place,00:04:430 (2) put it somewhere on x:444,y:288,00:04:606 (3,4,5,6,7) make blanket with 00:05:488 (1) - didn't like this for some reason
2. 00:05:842 (2) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - whatchu talkin' bout
3. 00:06:018 (3,4,5,6,7) try ctrl+G - ctrl+g'd this and ctrl+h'd too and changed spacing a bit, don't know if i still like this
4. 00:16:077 (3,4,5) - try ctrl+G - no
5. 00:17:842 (4,5,6) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - what do you mean
6. 00:18:194 (1) - try ctrl+G - no
7. 00:28:783 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
8. 00:30:018 (4) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
9. 00:35:842 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - sorry I have no idea what you mean by this "scale accuracy"
10. 00:45:723 (5) - speed slider try to do 1.0 - doens't fit imo
11. 00:46:076 (1) - speed slider try to do 1.3 - changed
12. 00:51:547 (5,6,1) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
13. 00:53:312 (2) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - i don't comprehendoooo
14. 00:57:724 (1) - speed slider try to do 1.0 - changed
15. 01:09:018 (1,1,1,1) - try to put the start of the sliders on the other end,for example the beginning of the second slider to put on x:369 y:146 - didn't like that
16. 01:13:783 (3,4) - I would like more distance from the previous slider - it's ds'd to 1 so no change it's just as far from the previous as was it too
17. 01:15:724 (4,5) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - wat
18. 01:16:783 (2) - try ctrl+G - that's too big of a jump to this kind of a slow section
19. 01:44:136 (4) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
20. 01:50:312 (5) - move that do not overlap with scale HP
21. 02:00:547 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy
22. 02:01:606 (6) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - waat
23. 02:02:842 (1) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:03:370 (2) returning 1.0
24. 02:06:900 (1) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:07:253 (2) returning 1.0 - i don't think sv changes are necessary in these parts
25. 02:07:783 (4) - try ctrl+G - didn't like that
26. 02:08:312 (6) - try ctrl+G - ^
27. 02:08:842 (2) - try ctrl+G - ^
28. 02:09:547 (5) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:09:900 (1) returning 1.0
29. 02:11:136 (1) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:11:136 (1) returning 1.0
30. 02:14:489 (3) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:14:842 (4) back 1.0
31. 02:15:724 (2) - speed slider try to make 0.80, 02:16:253 (3) back 1.0 - i don't think sv changes are necessary
32. 02:18:900 - try to put the circle - there's nothing to map there
33. 02:20:311 - try to put the circle - ^
34. 02:40:783 (8) - speed slider try to do 1.0 and then 1.2 back - done
35. 03:03:371 (1) - speed slider try to do 1.0 and then 1.2 back - done
36. 04:30:194 (1) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - wot
37. 04:44:136 (10) - NC? - no
38. 05:37:959 (3) - move that do not overlap with scale accuracy - woot
    

All than I can help,GL

FCL wrote:

• [General]

1. no no no AR 9.2, it's very fast. Only AR9 - I WANT MORE OPINIONS OMG I'M CHANGING THIS EVERY MOD
2. BG change in jpg for save space - okkeeeeeee
3. delete normal-hitwhistle2, u dont use it - kay
4. delete this green line, it is not necessary - it is necessary
5. AiMod - wtf these unsnapped kiais

• [diff]

1. 00:04:606 (3,4,5,6,7) - better to use the form that you used before, it better suited song - well you can definitely hear a burst five and I want some diversity into these so no change
2. 00:10:077 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ - ^
3. 00:16:077 (3,4,5) - stack with 00:14:665 (4) - or 00:14:753 (5) - or 00:14:842 (6) - - i think i stacked it with 00:14:753 (5) -
4. 00:18:900 (3,4) - move on 296;164 maybe better? - i don't see the point in this
5. 00:18:900 (3,6) - stack (?) - ty
6. 00:21:017 (4) - NC, new bit - removed nc from 00:19:959 (1) - and did that
7. 00:25:606 (3,3) etc - I do not think that these are good jump, because the song is uniformly - Here's how I see it. There is a clear kick at 00:25:252 (1) - and 00:25:606 (3) - so I think that there should be a bit bigger jump between 00:25:430 (2) - and 00:25:606 (3) -
8. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like this mapping, idk why - I personally love that pattern
9. 00:45:723 (5) - straight slider more logical - kay
10. 01:01:783 (2) - again, i don't like this stacks - but i like it
11. 01:05:841 (5) - NC - yea i quess this should be nc'd
12. 01:10:253 (1) - move to center? - that fucks up the spacing but I changed a bit
13. 01:23:312 (1) - it is very unexpected - i know i'm trying to figure out something
14. 02:09:547 (5) - very controversial. You end slider on white tick, because of what the right bit is ignored. - there is a clear sound at the red tick and so the slider ends at a white tick
15. 02:09:988 - overmap, i think - 1/2 slider is overmapping?
16. 02:35:312 (7,3) - stack end - ty for pointing out
17. 03:07:783 (6,8) - make blanket - it's already a blanket
18. 03:17:488 - you miss many important bit in this part. I do not think it is a good idea - well there is pretty much nothing to map except the main beat or I could map the vocals but that would just feel dumb
19. 04:04:077 (1,2) - make better blanket - what's wrong with it?
20. 04:10:959 (1) - why NC? - because hitfinish and for shits and giggles
21. 05:18:900 (1,2,3,4) - swastika? - but it flows swastikas flow
22. 05:20:311 (9) - new bit, NC? - ty forgot to nc this
23. 05:23:136 (1,2,3,4) - again unwanted jumps - i definitely want these
24. 05:42:723 (1) - I think it's not neat - made something new

Good luck with this! - Ty very much!

SrSkyPlayer wrote:

General

1. There are just 3 combo colours, I would recommend add one more with something next to black. Believe me, it would be better and more readable for beginners. - k
2. Add to the tags: edm, eletronic dance music, dubstep, j core. - right
3. There is an unused file, consider removing it to avoid any DQ (unless you are making one). - not for me wat

Magik

1. There's an useful inherited point here, you need to avoid it always because as you can see you could put everything you did on the timing point. - kappa
2. 00:08:665 (2,3,4,5) - What you did here was really weird because as you can see it's making a "star" movement but it's not smooth, you should put more space between them to avoid these overlaps and keep the aesthetics good. Consider making something like it, imo it will make it more polished. -did something along those lines
3. 00:09:724 (2,3) - Make these blanket properly. - i guess it's a bit better now
4. 00:11:842 (5,1,2,3) - This thing you did here is really awkward, I mean why is it making an overlap? - i have absolutely no idea
5. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh I can't hear anything that's justifying these stream, There isn't anything really strong making it appears from nothing and it's a little bit overdone. I know that you were trying to follow the "little sound" that you were hearing but.. it doesn't really exist, you can do it yourself and hear with 25%. - yea i know this is pretty much me just forcing some overmapping here and there just for a buildup
6. 00:47:842 (7,2) - Could you stack them? (Obviously keep the blanket between 00:48:194 (1,2,3) - it was a good idea). - yes
7. 01:03:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - As above, again you did a stream and there's no sound justifying it, consider just keeping the flow that you were making and please, try to avoid these overlaps they are not that good and it feels weird when playing. - fixed the overlap thing it shouldn't be that weird anymore but as for the overmapping i use it again for the same reason
8. 01:19:077 (3,5) - The slider (5) feels awkward when playing also you didn't even make a blanket between (3) and (5) it should be good if it was one and I prefer to don't believe that you consider it as a blanket. - so it's fine if i make it ablanket
9. 02:46:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Again. - i know, if it's these streams that make it unrankable the it shall be that. I want to be stubborn at least once in my life
10. 03:09:018 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ Please, always try to listen 25% before making these streams, believe me you would avoid all these observations. - helo this is fish
11. 04:53:489 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ - perkele
12. 05:16:077 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ - i like overmapping

About aesthetics, you should REALLY try to avoid these overlaps and ctrl+c / ctrl+v some sliders when making blankets, there are a lot of sliders randomly placed making it feels weird to play, imo you can try to look for some pattern before trying to make one believe me it would be better and your maps would start being more polished. - well i'm starting to feel that this map just isn't my style anymore and feel like it's so much more inferior to the maps I make now.
Good luck! (I liked it) - glad i could please someone