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# DJ Siesta - Another Day

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#### Mei wrote:

for Yuii-

there is no specific reason, maybe the note 1 is on down beat the stack should works fine and I dont think there is a big issue on this
Please, check. The other (1) of the 1/4 jumps are, indeed, down beats as well.
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#### Yuii- wrote:

Re-check no Kudos.

[Insane]

1. 00:53:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:55:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:58:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I... I can't read these. What did you do? Why would you create such a bad overlap with the previous stream? And finally, why are all the streams mapped so differently?
2. 01:20:750 (1,1) - Remove NC on these, you made an 8-notes combo on the previous patterns.

1. I don't think these patterns are overlap and irregular, though they really a bit hard to read. Take the 00:52:720 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for example, we can simplify 00:52:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - into a bunch of numbers:

1->2-> 3->4->5

Then next pattern 00:53:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could be simplify to this:

6->4->5->3->4->2->3->1

This is the flow I draw (ahh looks really weird XD):
And 00:55:296 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 00:58:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - have similar pattern just like 00:52:720 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

It's actually a simulation of arpeggio, which is a proper noun in piano performance. I know this is a new try as nobody has used this kind of pattern before, but I still wanna try it. I want to let players think they are playing the piano when they play my map, not just click the circles and sliders.

Oh and most of my thoughts come from this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/170608, some patterns are similar :3

2. And I also think NC in 01:20:750 (1,1) - is okay because I also used NC in this part: 01:01:356 (1,1) - , and in my opinion, this NC can also help players to understand the pattern I used.
Yuii asked me to take a look at the patterns, just a small comment.

Personally, I think the patterns mentioned play fine. They are good structurally, and you have a consistent point of emphasis going. Every strong tick (white/red, following strong notes in the piano) is mapped to a small but sharp (~180 degree) turn. It's very difficult to sightread no doubt, but not all maps are made to be sight-read . The movement is very predictable once you get how the pattern plays.

My one issue was: 00:59:690 (2,3) -

This doesn't fit the movement pattern you set up with 00:53:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:58:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - etc... Because from 2>3 there is a large jump when players will be expecting a short jump. not a big one. It will feel jerky to play even tho it makes sense to make a jump from 2>3 to emphasize the jump if you take the pattern out of context. But given the pattern you set up, i would recommend rethinking this jump .

Anyways, you don't have to kudosu this post if you decide to keep the pattern xD. Good luck
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This is the replay that played by one of my friends: http://puu.sh/kAfdK/792198739a.osr
And also, this is his first try~:D
So I don't think this pattern will confuse players, because they are actually really regular imo.

And also, 00:59:538 (1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is similar to the precious ones but yes it's a little bit different. And you mentioned that there's a big jump between 00:59:690 (2,3) - .But imo, 00:59:538 (1,2,3,4,1) - is a whole pattern that can't be disassemble. When players play, they will read this as a 'whole part', not just pay attention to just one or two notes. So I think this is also not a big problem for players.

Nothing change to this part but still thanks to Yuii- and monstrata~:D

And after a short irc with Yuii-, I decide to fix the NC issue he mentioned.
@Yuii-

Only fix NC

Hyper is a diff looks like hard, but have Insane in it. So I can't understand what did you mean in your mod.
00:37:114 (2) - I think it's not a problem, and why you choose here, not choose other pattern like these one 00:35:902 (5,6) - ??
00:42:872 (6) - I don't want to fix this one coz it's a centre point on these sliders
01:05:296 (8) - this is what I mean. I take Insane in Hyper, so I think this jump is fine

01:17:114 (5) - S醬幫我下NC
@Yuii-: Unstacked the circle and slider, and changed the rhythm that you mentioned last to the one before to get the consistency. Thank you!
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Okay all the gders have fixed their diffs, so updated now~:D
And Squirrel seems to be very busy these days, so I've helped him fixed the mod already
And finally I just fixed the NC issues in my diff. About the overlap, I still think that's not a big problem.
ah, sorry for not replying. /.o.\ I'm really busy with work the past days.
Thanks for fixing the stuff for me, Streliteela! (I don't agree with everything mentioned, but I guess it's fine. it's not my set, afterall. xD)
1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Squirrel's Easy
1. 00:16:508 (2) - change to a 1/2 slider?
2. 00:19:235 - add a note?
3. 01:02:872 - ^
4. 01:22:265 - ^
5. From 00:52:872 - to 01:02:872 - , about erery pattern like 00:55:599 (2,1) - , I recommend to start the pattern at 00:55:296 - , it's more clear for me to catch the rhythm, and it can solve the problem of too many blanks in the Easy diff.
6. If you dont agree with the mod above, how about 00:53:175 - add a note?

apple's Normal
1. 01:34:690 (1) - I found it better to remove the whistle on the end and entend to 3/4.

117's Hyper
1. 01:04:993 (7,8,1) - 这个距离我觉得的确偏远了一点，把8的距离也差不多拉到前后在2.5x比较好

Mei's Insane
1. 00:50:447 (3,4,1) - 我觉得这个有点卡手
2. 01:36:962 - add a note?

Another
1. 01:02:568 (4) - nc?

This is my first play on this map, Another diff:
rep: http://puu.sh/kDNBm/599f17ccd7.osr

About this pattern in Another diff, 00:52:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - , sorry but I can totally read it clearly. Although single taping 198bpm is so tired for me so get 4*100 and a miss at the following slider . Sad.
This pattern is wonderful.

I have nothing to complain on the Another diff.

Call me if you are ready for the rebubble/qualify?
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#### Minakami Yuki wrote:

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• Squirrel's Easy
1. 00:16:508 (2) - change to a 1/2 slider?
2. 00:19:235 - add a note?
3. 01:02:872 - ^
4. 01:22:265 - ^ Not fix this part, as i think 01:22:569 (1) - is the beginning of a calm ending part, so it may not be necessary to add a note so as to increase the density of the rhythm here.
5. From 00:52:872 - to 01:02:872 - , about every pattern like 00:55:599 (2,1) - , I recommend to start the pattern at 00:55:296 - , it's more clear for me to catch the rhythm, and it can solve the problem of too many blanks in the Easy diff.
6. If you dont agree with the mod above, how about 00:53:175 - add a note?
Okay I choose to add a note here~:3/me lazy_(:з」∠)_

117's Hyper
1. 01:04:993 (7,8,1) - 这个距离我觉得的确偏远了一点，把8的距离也差不多拉到前后在2.5x比较好 Okay拉近了一些

Mei's Insane
1. 00:50:447 (3,4,1) - 我觉得这个有点卡手 改了一个新姿势_(:з」∠)_
2. 01:36:962 - add a note? 这个地方我暂时没有改，因为我觉得mei酱是让01:35:902 (1,2,1,2) - 这里做成了一个整体pattern，加一个note出来可能会破坏这里的统一性。我等他上线的时候再去问一下他吧

Another
1. 01:02:568 (4) - nc? Fixed~

Call me when you everything is fixed. \o
Extended to 3/4 and removed the whistle, thanks for checking Yuki <3
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Okay all updated~
Yoo \o

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1. Change the Beat Snap Divisor from 1/16 to 1/2.

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#### HappyRocket88 wrote:

Yoo \o

[
's Easy
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1. Change the Beat Snap Divisor from 1/16 to 1/2.

Go go!
Okay and fixed this....again
(ノ･ω･)ノ
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