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Itou Kanako - Tataeshi Tatakai no Uta

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Lanttu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 4. lokakuuta 2010 at 23:30:02

Artist: Itou Kanako
Title: Tataeshi Tatakai no Uta
Source: Lamento
Tags: Beyond the void nitro+ nitroplus chiral latin
BPM: 120
Filesize: 11746kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,89 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Hard (4,96 stars, 410 notes)
  3. Normal (3,11 stars, 171 notes)
Download: Itou Kanako - Tataeshi Tatakai no Uta
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Nekomimi BL geemu with awesome music. Latin and japanese combined = <3

Second song of mai personal project, Itou Kanako's songs that end with "no Uta"---- jk. :<

October 4; Edit + Full Upload.
Garven
Mm, Itou Kanako.

[General]
01:19:150 - During this section, maybe use a silent slider slide for the soft set? It sticks out a little bit during the quieter part.

[Skin]
Those combobursts make me laugh, though they really shouldn't. Just not used to catguys, I guess. :P

[Normal]
00:31:525 (1,2) - This is kind of a tough rhythm to start off on considering there is nothing in the music to tell you otherwise up to that point. Consider starting with a slider or ending the spinner earlier and mapping a bit before.
00:33:150 (1,2) - The rhythm produced by these two feels off compared to the stressed syllables from the vocals.
Perhaps something like this?

00:41:150 (1,2) - Same here, but by this point you've been doing the same rhythm the entire time, so it doesn't sound AS off, but it's still kinda weird. I dunno since it'll mess with your layout.
00:45:150 (1,2) - Ah well.
00:49:150 (1,2) - These aligned that way on purpose?
I noticed a lot of your single notes after sliders are snapped closer than the normally snapped notes. Maybe comb through and manually add that one grid of space?
01:29:650 (5) - Raise the third control point up one.
02:22:150 (1,2) - The curves on these are kind of sharp for my taste.
03:06:150 (1) - Scoot this right a couple grids to reduce overlap. Also add a normal finish. Sounds better with that deep crash.

[Hard]
01:29:650 (5) - Lower the third point by half a grid.
02:59:525 - I was kind of expecting a note here.
03:06:150 (1) - Normal finish sounds better here.

Niice.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Garven wrote:

Mm, Itou Kanako. <3

[General]
01:19:150 - During this section, maybe use a silent slider slide for the soft set? It sticks out a little bit during the quieter part. Sure, changed~

[Skin]
Those combobursts make me laugh, though they really shouldn't. Just not used to catguys, I guess. :P lol, I love my catguy combobursts. XD

[Normal]
00:31:525 (1,2) - This is kind of a tough rhythm to start off on considering there is nothing in the music to tell you otherwise up to that point. Consider starting with a slider or ending the spinner earlier and mapping a bit before. Slider added, I hope understood right~;;;
00:33:150 (1,2) - The rhythm produced by these two feels off compared to the stressed syllables from the vocals.
Perhaps something like this? Nice, changed~
00:41:150 (1,2) - Same here, but by this point you've been doing the same rhythm the entire time, so it doesn't sound AS off, but it's still kinda weird. I dunno since it'll mess with your layout. Yeahhhh, I guess I'll keep it like that for now.
00:45:150 (1,2) - Ah well. Changed~
00:49:150 (1,2) - These aligned that way on purpose? Oops, fixed.
I noticed a lot of your single notes after sliders are snapped closer than the normally snapped notes. Maybe comb through and manually add that one grid of space? Tried to move most of them. Didn't do anything about couple of sliders in kiai time section because I'd had to move so much other notes after that.. orz
01:29:650 (5) - Raise the third control point up one. Raised by a half since one was too much in my opinion.
02:22:150 (1,2) - The curves on these are kind of sharp for my taste. Softer now~
03:06:150 (1) - Scoot this right a couple grids to reduce overlap. Also add a normal finish. Sounds better with that deep crash. OK~

[Hard]
01:29:650 (5) - Lower the third point by half a grid. OK~
02:59:525 - I was kind of expecting a note here. Added~
03:06:150 (1) - Normal finish sounds better here. Oooh, I agree~

Niice.
Thank you very much~ ・w・♥
wmfchris
good enough for me, star 0w0
JhnySmthApl
[Normal]
03:02:400 (x) - Add a note?
03:03:900 (x) - ^

[Hard]

I appologise but..
00:54:025 (3) - Want to align it better?
01:53:025 (10) - ^
01:59:025 (3) - ^
02:01:025 (3) - ^
02:34:150 (1) - I would keep the combo going
02:47:400 (8) - Again alignment?
02:55:025 (5) - ^

I know that's kind of a nazi mod but you did it for some of them and not all. I'm saying it to keep the consistency.
Other than that i agree with WMF on this one!
Topic Starter
Lanttu

johnsage92 wrote:

[Normal]
03:02:400 (x) - Add a note? I think this is fine without these.
03:03:900 (x) - ^

[Hard]
I appologise but..
00:54:025 (3) - Want to align it better? I know it looks pretty dumb but if I move this under the (2), it's going to be aligned at the bottom of (2) and it looks even moar stupid. >':
01:53:025 (10) - ^ OK~
01:59:025 (3) - ^ OK~
02:01:025 (3) - ^ OK~
02:34:150 (1) - I would keep the combo going OK~
02:47:400 (8) - Again alignment? OK~
02:55:025 (5) - ^ OK~

I know that's kind of a nazi mod but you did it for some of them and not all. I'm saying it to keep the consistency.
Other than that i agree with WMF on this one!
Thank you~ ^^ And no worries, I kind of like nazi stuff sometimes. |3
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BG is 868kb... well not a big deal.

[Normal]
slider tick rate: 0.5, since you used some 5/4 sliders, and the ticks sounds not good then.
00:42:400 (2) - should start 1/2 later i guess... now it fits the notes' pace fine but not the vocal.
00:46:400 (3,4,1) - emm... this is better than stack them together imo.

01:06:025 (4) - i know why you add whistle at the end but still suggest remove it simply since it sounds better= =
01:47:400 (3,4) - change the whistle to 3.
01:48:150 (1) - whistle at the end.
01:50:650 (2) - whistle at the start.
01:51:400 (3) - whistle
01:52:150 (1) - whistle at the end.
01:54:650 (2,4) - whistle at the start.
01:58:150 (1) - whistle at the reverse.
01:59:400 (2) - whistle at the start.
02:00:150 (1) - whistle at the end.
03:06:150 (1) - should be at somewhere in axis-Y... just a feeling.

[Hard]
01:04:025 (5) - whistle at the start?
01:05:150 (3) - whistle at the start.
01:08:025 (8) - whistle at the start.
01:08:900 (1) - whistle at the end.
01:40:900 (5,1) - switch new combo
01:45:650 (6) - clap (S-C1), maybe remove whistle?
01:51:775 (5) - remove whistle?
02:20:900 (5,6,7,8) - prefer this one..

02:33:775 (7) - whistle
02:50:150 (5) - maybe a very short kiai here to use the fountain effect.
02:56:150 (3) - whistle at the start.

very nice done. (also awesome job for Mosaik Role). don't need to mod4mod :P

Topic Starter
Lanttu

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
BG is 868kb... well not a big deal. Is that too big? I have no idea about these thing. XD;

[Normal]
slider tick rate: 0.5, since you used some 5/4 sliders, and the ticks sounds not good then. OK~
00:42:400 (2) - should start 1/2 later i guess... now it fits the notes' pace fine but not the vocal. Tried to fix it
00:46:400 (3,4,1) - emm... this is better than stack them together imo. OK~
01:06:025 (4) - i know why you add whistle at the end but still suggest remove it simply since it sounds better= = OK~
01:47:400 (3,4) - change the whistle to 3. OK~
01:48:150 (1) - whistle at the end. OK~
01:50:650 (2) - whistle at the start. OK~
01:51:400 (3) - whistle OK~
01:52:150 (1) - whistle at the end. OK~
01:54:650 (2,4) - whistle at the start. OK~
01:58:150 (1) - whistle at the reverse. OK~
01:59:400 (2) - whistle at the start. OK~
02:00:150 (1) - whistle at the end. OK~
03:06:150 (1) - should be at somewhere in axis-Y... just a feeling. Changed~

[Hard]
01:04:025 (5) - whistle at the start? OK~
01:05:150 (3) - whistle at the start. I think this one fits well without.
01:08:025 (8) - whistle at the start. OK~
01:08:900 (1) - whistle at the end. OK~
01:40:900 (5,1) - switch new combo I think new combo doesn't fit there. ;_; Did some other combo changes here.
01:45:650 (6) - clap (S-C1), maybe remove whistle? I think the clap doesn't fit here, because this is still being this quieter part.
01:51:775 (5) - remove whistle? OK~
02:20:900 (5,6,7,8) - prefer this one.. Oh, so do I, changed~
02:33:775 (7) - whistle OK~
02:50:150 (5) - maybe a very short kiai here to use the fountain effect. OK~
02:56:150 (3) - whistle at the start. OK~

very nice done. (also awesome job for Mosaik Role). don't need to mod4mod :P
Aww, thank you~ ^^ Well, I liked your map, when you get it to pending I'll sure mod it. :3

And thank you so much for the kudosu star<3 ;u;
Sakura
Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions, not directions, feel free to take or leave any and edit as you see fit.
[osz File Scan!]
Unnecessary transparencies on: mist1.png, mist2.png, weird light stuff.png. Consider cropping them more.

[General]
Inconsistent tags
[Hard]: Beyond the void nitro+ nitroplus chiral latin
[Normal]: Beyond the void nitro+chira

[Storyboard]
01:38:775 Storyboard Overloads, reduce unnecessary transparencies to reduce this:
Refer to This topic for more info

[Hard]
Even if you can make pretty hit circle/slider patterns, it's useless if it doesnt match up with the song's musical patterns.
00:32:900 (5) - Mapping to silence? doesnt seem to be following anything.
00:34:900 (6) - Sounds awkward, doesnt seem to be following anything.
00:36:900 (5) - Sounds off, maybe move 1/4 later?
00:38:650 (4,5) - Theese sound really awkward.
00:40:900 (6) - 1/4 Later?
00:42:900 (5) - uhh is in the mid of 2 sounds? i cant tell which of the 2 im supposed to be hearing to click it.
00:44:900 (7) - 1/4 later?
00:57:900 (4,5) - Mapping to silence?
00:59:400 (4) - I think this section should be following the vocal instead, if you change this make sure that (3) is a NC.
01:01:900 (4) - Sounds off
01:21:150 (4,5,6) - Avoid swapping musical patterns in middle of the same combo and more importantly in stacks/streams like this.
01:21:900 (8) - Mapping to silence?
01:24:400 (4,5,6) - I cant tell which pattern are you mapping to here?
01:30:900 (6,7,8) - Sounds awkward.
01:31:400 (9) - Mapping to silence?
01:32:150 (1) - ^
01:32:650 (3) - New combo. (You switch to the vocal pattern)
01:35:400 (4) - Sounds awkward, the vocal sounds like it starts 1/2 a beat later
01:38:650 (2) - The vocal doesnt last long enough for the length of the slider.
01:41:650 (6) - Expected it to end 1/4 earlier.
01:47:275 (4) - Sounds 1/4 later to me.
01:47:525 (5) - Mapping to silence?
01:48:650 (2,3) - Maybe you should remove (3) and make (2) end where (3) was at.
01:49:275 (4) - New combo
(...) I could go on, but this seriously needs a remap at this point, im sorry orz

[Normal]
01:32:150 (8) - Mapping to silence?
01:48:650 (2,3,4) - Sounds Awkward, maybe end (2) half a beat earlier, then start another slider from (3) to (4)
02:25:150 (6,7) - maybe theese 2 should be in a separate combo.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions, not directions, feel free to take or leave any and edit as you see fit.
[osz File Scan!]
Unnecessary transparencies on: mist1.png, mist2.png, weird light stuff.png. Consider cropping them more. I'll do that later, no time for photoshopping now.

[General]
Inconsistent tags
[Hard]: Beyond the void nitro+ nitroplus chiral latin
[Normal]: Beyond the void nitro+chira Oops, fixing,



[Hard]
Even if you can make pretty hit circle/slider patterns, it's useless if it doesnt match up with the song's musical patterns.I think it fits just fine?
00:32:900 (5) - Mapping to silence? doesnt seem to be following anything. Why does it need to follow only lyrics? it sounds stupid if I leave it blank.
00:34:900 (6) - Sounds awkward, doesnt seem to be following anything. Sounds just fine to me, ^
00:36:900 (5) - Sounds off, maybe move 1/4 later? Sounds just fine to me.
00:38:650 (4,5) - Theese sound really awkward. Sounds just fine to me.
00:40:900 (6) - 1/4 Later? Can't understand why should I do that.
00:42:900 (5) - uhh is in the mid of 2 sounds? i cant tell which of the 2 im supposed to be hearing to click it. Don't undestand what you mean by that. ._.
00:44:900 (7) - 1/4 later? Sounds just fine to me.
00:57:900 (4,5) - Mapping to silence? Don't see anything wrong with that.
00:59:400 (4) - I think this section should be following the vocal instead, if you change this make sure that (3) is a NC. New combo added.
01:01:900 (4) - Sounds off Sounds just fine to me.
01:21:150 (4,5,6) - Avoid swapping musical patterns in middle of the same combo and more importantly in stacks/streams like this. I'm not sure if I undestood what you meant.. But yeah deleted (5) then.
01:21:900 (8) - Mapping to silence? Don't see anything wrong with that.
01:24:400 (4,5,6) - I cant tell which pattern are you mapping to here? Sounded and looked just fine for me but nah, changed something.
01:30:900 (6,7,8) - Sounds awkward. Sounds just fine to me.
01:31:400 (9) - Mapping to silence? Why not?
01:32:150 (1) - ^ ^
01:32:650 (3) - New combo. (You switch to the vocal pattern) Ok
01:35:400 (4) - Sounds awkward, the vocal sounds like it starts 1/2 a beat later Sounds just fine to me.
01:38:650 (2) - The vocal doesnt last long enough for the length of the slider. What does that matter?
01:41:650 (6) - Expected it to end 1/4 earlier. Don't undestand why you think so..
01:47:275 (4) - Sounds 1/4 later to me. WHY?
01:47:525 (5) - Mapping to silence? Well this is deffinetly not silence, try to hear the pattern on the background? orz
01:48:650 (2,3) - Maybe you should remove (3) and make (2) end where (3) was at. Don't see any reason for that.
01:49:275 (4) - New combo
(...) I could go on, but this seriously needs a remap at this point, im sorry orz Please, I seriously can't see your point at all. I'd really like you to explain your point to me, please? T_T;

[Normal]
01:32:150 (8) - Mapping to silence? *sigh* Since this is normal I can delete that.
01:48:650 (2,3,4) - Sounds Awkward, maybe end (2) half a beat earlier, then start another slider from (3) to (4) There's a long vocal, why does it sound awkward? OTL
02:25:150 (6,7) - maybe theese 2 should be in a separate combo. OK.
It's a hard diff, is "mapping to silence" really that bad thing? I think every note fits there just fine. Following just vocals in harder diffs is just boring.
Sakura
Just because it is a Hard diff doesnt mean that you can put up notes outta nowhere, this is a rythm game you should be following the song's musical pattern when mapping it, It just plays badly specially if the player doesn't know what they should be listening to (or if to anything at all) when hitting the circles. You can't just create a rythm with notes, put it in a beatmap with a different musical pattern and say your mapping the song, for that you may just play any beatmap with the sound muted and listenting to your ipod, i hope i explained it better this time?.
Edit: Extra note, i never said that you had to map just to vocals, but switching instruments every note just doesnt play very well, to the point the player doesnt know what to follow on a note, the sound awkward ones are theese, mapping to silence ones just arent following anything at all.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Sakura Hana wrote:

Just because it is a Hard diff doesnt mean that you can put up notes outta nowhere, this is a rythm game you should be following the song's musical pattern when mapping it, It just plays badly specially if the player doesn't know what they should be listening to (or if to anything at all) when hitting the circles. You can't just create a rythm with notes, put it in a beatmap with a different musical pattern and say your mapping the song, for that you may just play any beatmap with the sound muted and listenting to your ipod, i hope i explained it better this time?.
Edit: Extra note, i never said that you had to map just to vocals, but switching instruments every note just doesnt play very well, to the point the player doesnt know what to follow on a note, the sound awkward ones are theese, mapping to silence ones just arent following anything at all.
Well, I still think it is following the pattern, and it should not be that hard to notice. There are hundreds other maps with much, much more complex patterns and stuff. "switching instruments every note just doesnt play very well", when the map is mainly following the vocals and here and there using very simple pattern on the background (that goes the same way through the whole song), I can't undestand how is that confusing, or doesn't play well.

And Like you said, this is a rhythm game, and if person has a even little sense of rhythm, they should be able to play that hard without too many problems. I mean, if you don't have that much of sense of rhythm then why would you even be playing a rhythm game? And if the pattern/rhythm/melody in question is not familiar to the player before, then just play it couple of times more. Isn't that just normal?

I would have lot's of more to say, but my english skills just aren't enough to express myself more clearly about this. But no way I'm remapping something that is just fine the way it is already, it's 5 against one at the moment. ._.
Sakura
Not all musical patterns are good for streams or triplets, and all that stuff, and just because it's done before doesn't mean that people should keep doing it, I just mentioned it because i felt that you focused more on making your note placement pretty rather than making them follow the musical pattern since doing so would probably have ended in some spacing errors and probably screw up your patterns a bit, but like i said at the start of my mod post, feel free to take or leave anything ^^ i just wanted to answer your question, i wont be mad at you if you decide to not follow my mod post.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Sakura Hana wrote:

Not all musical patterns are good for streams or triplets, and all that stuff, and just because it's done before doesn't mean that people should keep doing it, I just mentioned it because i felt that you focused more on making your note placement pretty rather than making them follow the musical pattern since doing so would probably have ended in some spacing errors and probably screw up your patterns a bit, but like i said at the start of my mod post, feel free to take or leave anything ^^ i just wanted to answer your question, i wont be mad at you if you decide to not follow my mod post.
Well yeah, I admit I'm kinda obsessed with pretty looking patterns and all, but of course I try to do that with the rhythm in my main point. ;_;

Maybe I should have made my last post more polite, sorry if it sounded rude or something. OTL
ztrot
I'd like you to do a full submit this map I crash everytime I try to change the offset but it's about +15ms
Topic Starter
Lanttu

ztrot wrote:

I'd like you to do a full submit this map I crash everytime I try to change the offset but it's about +15ms
OK, +15ms added. :3
IceBeam
It's perfect,that's the only I can suggest:

[Hard]
02:27:290 (4,5) - 1 grid left and down.
02:28:165 (1) - 1 grid right and down.

That would be more simmetrical.

Good luck with it!
thepianist
Mmm lyrics storyboarding~

SB~
Consider using black in the introduction up to the spinner at 31165 ms?
ie:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.JPG",320,240
F,0,-2835,-835,0,1
F,0,-835,17290,1
F,0,17290,31165,1,0.5
If you add a "black.JPG" in your folder that is.
Make sure this is the first thing in your "Foreground" layers.

Normal~
Consider mapping from 2.42.165 of the third break.

Hard~
Is excellent.

Well done.

Star! :3
Topic Starter
Lanttu

thepianist wrote:

SB~
Consider using black in the introduction up to the spinner at 31165 ms?
ie:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.JPG",320,240
F,0,-2835,-835,0,1
F,0,-835,17290,1
F,0,17290,31165,1,0.5
If you add a "black.JPG" in your folder that is.
Make sure this is the first thing in your "Foreground" layers. Oooh, I like this~<3

Normal~
Consider mapping from 2.42.165 of the third break. OK~
Thank you very much~ ^^ Also did the changes to Hard that SadKangaroo mentioned~
jericho2442
make a diff under 3stars please, this is a MUST for rank

combo mod again.......

[Normal]
00:53:165 (3) - newcombo, your breaking your pattern
01:05:165 (3) - new combo, your breaking your pattern
01:28:665 (4) - ^ >_>


[Hard]
00:45:165 (8) - newcombo, your breaking your pattern
00:48:915 (4) - newcombo ^
02:00:165 (1) - remove newcombo, your breaking your pattern

-------------------------

star
Topic Starter
Lanttu

jericho2442 wrote:

make a diff under 3stars please, this is a MUST for rank It's now so close to 3 that if it's unrankable I'm going to rage. ;_;

combo mod again.......

[Normal]
00:53:165 (3) - newcombo, your breaking your pattern OK~
01:05:165 (3) - new combo, your breaking your pattern OK~
01:28:665 (4) - ^ >_> OK~


[Hard]
00:45:165 (8) - newcombo, your breaking your pattern OK~
00:48:915 (4) - newcombo ^ OK~
02:00:165 (1) - remove newcombo, your breaking your pattern There's a jump and the combo becomes so long if I remove it here. ;_;
Thanks~
jericho2442
2 maps is small for rank anyway, why not just spend a lil time and make a easy. its allways worth it ;)
Topic Starter
Lanttu

jericho2442 wrote:

2 maps is small for rank anyway, why not just spend a lil time and make a easy. its allways worth it ;)
I actually really tried to map an easy, but I couldn't do it fine so I gave up. ;_;
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Looks like you need an [Easy] diff.
2. Is the offset too late? I'm not sure.
3. You better end this (02:50:165) kiai on 03:06:165.

[Storyboard]
The "weird light stuff.png" appears too short. Consider lengthen its appearance?

[Normal]
-- Nice normal diff. But looks like there are quite a lot blue tick notes. This is the reason why I ask you to make an easier diff.

02:02:165 (1) - You may silence the end of the spinner.

[Hard]
00:54:040 (3) - Stack it under the end of the (2) slider.
00:39:790 (3) - I prefer if you change this into a note. Then move 00:40:165 (4) backward one 1/4 tick, add one more repeat. Yeah, nice.
00:42:290 (3) - How about, add one more repeat then remove the (4).
00:43:790 (4) - Change this to a note. Move 00:44:165 (5) backward one 1/4 tick, add one more repeat.
00:56:040 (3) - Move this forward one 1/4 tick.
01:08:415 (9) - I know what you did but better stack it under the end of slider (8).
01:09:665 (3) - Move it one tiny grid left. Ahh, I actually don't like nazi mod.
02:02:165 (1) - You may silence the end of the spinner.
Star. Nice map.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

[General]
1. Looks like you need an [Easy] diff.
2. Is the offset too late? I'm not sure. Maybe little. ;_; -5ms.
3. You better end this (02:50:165) kiai on 03:06:165. OK~

[Storyboard]
The "weird light stuff.png" appears too short. Consider lengthen its appearance? I don't know if it made any difference but I did something there. 8)

[Normal]
-- Nice normal diff. But looks like there are quite a lot blue tick notes. This is the reason why I ask you to make an easier diff. Awww ok, I guess I'll start working on it again, then. ;_;

02:02:165 (1) - You may silence the end of the spinner. OK~

[Hard]
00:54:040 (3) - Stack it under the end of the (2) slider. OK~
00:39:790 (3) - I prefer if you change this into a note. Then move 00:40:165 (4) backward one 1/4 tick, add one more repeat. Yeah, nice. I think it feels very out of place when (4) starts on a blue tick.. So no. ;_;
00:42:290 (3) - How about, add one more repeat then remove the (4). I'm not sure what you mean by "repeat"... ;_;
00:43:790 (4) - Change this to a note. Move 00:44:165 (5) backward one 1/4 tick, add one more repeat. Once again it feels awkward if the slider starts on blue tick. ;_;
00:56:040 (3) - Move this forward one 1/4 tick. OK~
01:08:415 (9) - I know what you did but better stack it under the end of slider (8). I don't like how the pattern stacks that way but... Well, OK~
01:09:665 (3) - Move it one tiny grid left. Ahh, I actually don't like nazi mod. ^
02:02:165 (1) - You may silence the end of the spinner. OK~
Star. Nice map.
Thank you~ ^^
James2250
Why are the 1's on the hitcircle slanted like that, make them vertical
Kiai time has to be the same on every difficulty
It looks like every combo burst faces the wrong way when it comes out apart from comboburst-0, double check this
I agree you need an easy~

Normal:
03:06:41 timing section isn't being used
00:27:410 (1,1) - too close to the end of a spinner for a normal, not sure how you want to fix this
no other problems

Hard:
Maybe I am just not in the mood for nazi'ing but map all looks ok to me

*star*
Topic Starter
Lanttu

James2250 wrote:

Why are the 1's on the hitcircle slanted like that, make them vertical The font is like that. >:
Kiai time has to be the same on every difficulty Oops, how come it's like that in normal..? x_x *fix*
It looks like every combo burst faces the wrong way when it comes out apart from comboburst-0, double check this checked, but does it matter if I flip any of them? I checked also how the combobursts work during the gameplay and they came from different side of the screen and flipped different way every time. ._.
I agree you need an easy~

Normal:
03:06:41 timing section isn't being used Actually it is used. ;_;
00:27:410 (1,1) - too close to the end of a spinner for a normal, not sure how you want to fix this I don't know how to fix it either, so I don't know what to do. ;_;
no other problems

Hard:
Maybe I am just not in the mood for nazi'ing but map all looks ok to me

*star*
Thanks~ o/
Kite
Wow, really nice map, lovely skin and nice sb~

SPOILER
Nice use of hitsounds~

[Easy]
Okay~

[Normal]
Okay~

[Hard]
01:11:160 - You should totally map this break the way you did the previous part, its a lot of fun
02:34:160 - ^
02:42:910 - Add beat?
02:43:410 - ^
02:43:535 (7) - remove
Topic Starter
Lanttu

-_Kite_- wrote:

Wow, really nice map, lovely skin and nice sb~ Aww, thank you~ ^^

[Hard]
01:11:160 - You should totally map this break the way you did the previous part, its a lot of fun lol, OK. :3 I try to map those soon, right now I'm too lazy.
02:34:160 - ^
02:42:910 - Add beat? OK~
02:43:410 - ^ It sounded weird to my ears that way.. ;~;
02:43:535 (7) - remove ^
Thank you~ ^^
LesTrucsRoses
[Normal]
SPOILER
No Problems found.

[Normal]
SPOILER
No Problems found.

Excelent SB, song, and map.
thekillerhjkhjk
wow, just wow... this map is amazing! This is by far in the top 5% of maps ive seen. favouriting~

Hard:
nothing

normal:

Nothing

Easy:
nothing

strange... i usually find a bit more stuff to mod...

defenately deserves a star
Topic Starter
Lanttu
Aww, thanks both of you~ ;3;
FireballFlame
Hard diff:
01:51:160: This slider caught me off guard on my first playthrough, since it differs from the rhythm of everything around.
Maybe adapt it to match this?


Couldn't find anything else, nothing on Easy or Normal either.

Star!! :)
Leorda
Moi

[General]
1) You need a default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png and default-x.png. Because I'm using the default in my skin
2) Perhaps, disable "Letterbox During Breaks"? Since you have a SB

[Easy]
Good job Lanttututu

01:06:160 (3) - Should new combo here, since the pattern are changed
01:39:160 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern?

[Normal]
00:33:160 (3) - Must new combo, since the pattern changed
01:08:035 (4) - ^
01:10:035 (4) - ^
01:55:660 (3) - ^
02:24:160 (3) - ^
02:56:160 (3) - ^


[Hard]
00:51:660 (4) - New combo, since the pattern are changed
00:52:535 (6) - The whistle are not fit for me
01:10:410 (5,6) - Do not use jump in one combo, otherwise, player get surpised

01:14:035 (5) - New combo, since the pattern are changed
01:36:160 (5) - ^
01:40:910 (5) - ^
01:51:660 (4) - ^
02:42:910 (4) - ^
02:50:660 (6) - ^

Are you make those skin with Photoshop or GIMP???
Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) You need a default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png and default-x.png. Because I'm using the default in my skin I thought you needed those only if making a whole new skin... O_O I'll try to make them as soon as possible.
2) Perhaps, disable "Letterbox During Breaks"? Since you have a SB OK~

[Easy]
Good job Lanttututu XD

01:06:160 (3) - Should new combo here, since the pattern are changed OK~
01:39:160 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern? I tried to do something. ;_;

[Normal]
00:33:160 (3) - Must new combo, since the pattern changed OK~
01:08:035 (4) - ^ OK~
01:10:035 (4) - ^ OK~
01:55:660 (3) - ^ OK~
02:24:160 (3) - ^ OK~
02:56:160 (3) - ^ OK~

[Hard]
00:51:660 (4) - New combo, since the pattern are changed OK
00:52:535 (6) - The whistle are not fit for me
01:10:410 (5,6) - Do not use jump in one combo, otherwise, player get surpised[/color] I don't think new combo fits here.. ;_; And it's not that big jump, I hope it's fine.
01:14:035 (5) - New combo, since the pattern are changed OK~
01:36:160 (5) - ^ OK~
01:40:910 (5) - ^ OK~
01:51:660 (4) - ^ Fixed this like the previous post said. :3
02:42:910 (4) - ^ OK~
02:50:660 (6) - ^ OK~

Are you make those skin with Photoshop or GIMP??? Everything is photoshopped. :3
Nice song
STAR
Thank you~ ^^ Also thanks to FireballFlame, did your suggestion too~
Clare
hi~i can't DL your map, make sure this map is submit
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Clare wrote:

hi~i can't DL your map, make sure this map is submit
Oh man. D: *Full Upload*
Sakura
Alright then~ one slider fix for map flow and Bubbled~

Edit: Denying kudosu because it was just a small thing
Alace
Pretty good one
i still prefer to wait for another BAT checking this
James2250
I still think combo burst 1 and 2 look better flipped...guess it doesn't matter
and shouldn't this be rankeddd
NatsumeRin
just wonder why this is still not ranked.
Sakura

NatsumeRin wrote:

just wonder why this is still not ranked.
Ask Alace?
Alace
why don`t other BATs just check this XD
Topic Starter
Lanttu
Because I can't find any BAT's that take requests. ;_;
James
stop complaining. its a game feature!

and i shall make you guys happy~
Selee
Congrat!~ ;)
Mashley
Holy awesome, good job
eveless
la...lamento!

:) really like this
Yamuto
WHere did you get this song i want ti pls!!!!!!!! :D
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