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Unnecessary transparencies on: mist1.png, mist2.png, weird light stuff.png. Consider cropping them more.
[General]
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[Hard]: Beyond the void nitro+ nitroplus chiral latin
[Normal]: Beyond the void nitro+chira
[Storyboard]
01:38:775 Storyboard Overloads, reduce unnecessary transparencies to reduce this:
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[Hard]Even if you can make pretty hit circle/slider patterns, it's useless if it doesnt match up with the song's musical patterns.
00:32:900 (5) - Mapping to silence? doesnt seem to be following anything.
00:34:900 (6) - Sounds awkward, doesnt seem to be following anything.
00:36:900 (5) - Sounds off, maybe move 1/4 later?
00:38:650 (4,5) - Theese sound really awkward.
00:40:900 (6) - 1/4 Later?
00:42:900 (5) - uhh is in the mid of 2 sounds? i cant tell which of the 2 im supposed to be hearing to click it.
00:44:900 (7) - 1/4 later?
00:57:900 (4,5) - Mapping to silence?
00:59:400 (4) - I think this section should be following the vocal instead, if you change this make sure that (3) is a NC.
01:01:900 (4) - Sounds off
01:21:150 (4,5,6) - Avoid swapping musical patterns in middle of the same combo and more importantly in stacks/streams like this.
01:21:900 (8) - Mapping to silence?
01:24:400 (4,5,6) - I cant tell which pattern are you mapping to here?
01:30:900 (6,7,8) - Sounds awkward.
01:31:400 (9) - Mapping to silence?
01:32:150 (1) - ^
01:32:650 (3) - New combo. (You switch to the vocal pattern)
01:35:400 (4) - Sounds awkward, the vocal sounds like it starts 1/2 a beat later
01:38:650 (2) - The vocal doesnt last long enough for the length of the slider.
01:41:650 (6) - Expected it to end 1/4 earlier.
01:47:275 (4) - Sounds 1/4 later to me.
01:47:525 (5) - Mapping to silence?
01:48:650 (2,3) - Maybe you should remove (3) and make (2) end where (3) was at.
01:49:275 (4) - New combo
(...) I could go on, but this seriously needs a remap at this point, im sorry orz
[Normal]01:32:150 (8) - Mapping to silence?
01:48:650 (2,3,4) - Sounds Awkward, maybe end (2) half a beat earlier, then start another slider from (3) to (4)
02:25:150 (6,7) - maybe theese 2 should be in a separate combo.