Odaril wrote:

General
Why is there "beatmario" in the tags ? because he is singer

Easy
There are parts completely blank of notes, it makes breaks that feel weird imo.
00:15:490 (1,2) - This kind of stack might be confusing for a new player because of the rythm: unstack ?
01:37:240 (1,2) - (2) is too close to (1)

Normal
Same comment as for Easy.
00:58:990 (5) - About slowdowns: they shouldn't be used to represent a note being held in a vocal like you do here. Regular speed sliders are fine. Imo it's just a way to avoid having to make long sliders which are a lot harder to do than short ones. Slow downs should only be used when the song is clearly slower, and even then, avoid using 0,5x speed as it's really awkward to play. Same goes for speed ups (you didn't use any, but while I'm at it), and don't go up to 2,0x, it plays bad. To represent held notes, you can also use a spinner. And last but not least, speed changes are cofusing, avoid using them in a Normal/Easy diff.

all fixed~

Hard
Same comment as the two other diffs.
00:27:490 (6) - See Normal's comment about slider speed changes.
00:45:490 (6) - ^
00:58:990 (3) - ^
01:19:802 (4) - ^

But this is hard, i think that i can use it in hard diff

Overall it wasn't bad, although the many blanks make the map a bit weird.

If you have any question, come talk to me in PM ! If I don't appear in the user panel list I'll probably be on IRC anyway.

kino77 wrote:

Hi~Sorry for delay...

[Easy]
00:12:490 (1) - Volume 70% like [Hard]
01:01:708 - Remove these 2 timing section for its not necessary?
01:03:115 (1) - Remove finish?
01:21:115 (1) - ^
01:24:865 - Add note round here?
01:30:490 - Finish?
01:33:115 (1) - Remove finish?

[Normal]
00:12:490 (1) - Volume 70% like [Hard]
00:40:990 (1) - stack with 5?
00:41:740 (2) - stack with 00:39:490 (3)?
01:11:927 (7) - Finish?
01:15:115(1) - Remove finish?
01:22:802 (3) - ^
01:25:240 - Add note round here?
01:33:115 (1) - Remove finish?
01:34:802 - ^

[Hard]
00:53:740 - Add note?
01:06:490 (1,2) - This jump is too much > <
01:15:115 (1) - Remove finish?
01:31:990 - Add note round here?

Star nice voice~!

Fixed. Thank you!

Kite wrote:

Beautiful song... and nice mapset.
You should map the break in [Hard] 01:21:865 though :p
Some tags you could add : mountain of faith mof fall of autumnal waterfall theme arrange zun
Can't really find anything wrong in it~ have a star~

Yay~ Added and mapped break time! Thank you

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
00:12:490 ~ 00:45:490 - рекомендую понизить звук на 10-15%

[Hard]
tick rate 1
00:55:615 - один грид влево
00:56:365 - один грид вправо

[Normal]
00:17:740 - спейсинг

[Easy]
00:47:740 - whistle добавить, финиш убрать, как в нормале.

Я ожидал худшего, если честно. Молодцом, лови звезду. eeh...

Odaril wrote:

Easy
You could make your sliders more symmetrical (although it's a bit nazi from me). This guide will help you for it.

Normal
Same for sliders, but it's nazi of me again.

Hard
I still don't agree with the use of 0,5x slider speed... but it's your call.

Not bubbling atm because I think there is still room for improvement.

Fixed. Tried to make sliders symmetrical. Thank you~

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Wow, this is your first beatmap? This is very impressive. Oh, thank you
Just a minor suggestion, but I think having a silent sliderslide up to 00:48:490 would sound a lot better imo. Done it in Easy diff

[Easy]
00:54:115 (1,2) - I don't like to see stacks in easy difficulties.
01:03:115 (1) - Potentially confusing as to when it will end. Maybe a long slider instead of a repeating one?
01:10:052 (2,3) - Stacks, derp
01:11:552 (2,3) - ^
01:13:802 (3,4) - And this is the main reason why I don't like them: you end up doing a different rhythm and it's incredibly likely that it will be read incorrectly.

[Normal]
Hrm, maybe increase AR/OD by 1? It's very similar to Easy otherwise.
And that's it, really. Nice.

[Hard]
~

I mostly just have issue with the stacks in easy. Let me know if/when you make changes and I'll bubble.

James2250 wrote:

Easy:
00:45:490 (1) - I don't think this needs to be completely silenced - same for Normal (Hard has volume on it)

Normal:
Looks nice

Hard:
00:27:490 (6,1) - don't overlap
01:07:802 (3,1) - space out more?
01:36:115 (9,1) - ^
01:42:677 (1) - why end this difficulty differently than the other difficulties? Not a problem just wondering

No major problems, maps all look nicely done
Have a star~ (doesn't deserve 2 kudosu btw )

rockleejkooo wrote:

это настолько божественно :'> прошу, доделай мапу!
и да, дал бы миллион звездочек, но могу только одну :<

Спасибо большое
обязательно доделаю <3

ShiroKitty wrote:

Hi^^
Modding as requested ^^

Easy:
01:01:802 (3) 1 grid down

Normal:
Nice! ^^

Hard:
00:55:802 maybe add note?

That's a very nice beatmap! )

Star:)

nante wrote:

Quick mod cuz I really like the song^^

[General]
Mp3 must be between 124 and 192 kbps. Yours is 239kbps. You have to re encode it.

[Easy]
01:30:115 (6) - new combo

[Normal]
00:58:990 (5) - move 3rd and last point of the slider 1 grid left, so it's simetrical
01:09:677 (2) - don't stack, I was sure it's gonna be on full beat
01:40:990 (4) - 1 grid down

[Hard]
01:32:177 (1) - remove new combo
01:34:990 (7) - remove finish
01:34:802 (6) - remove whistle and add finish

And now I like the map too Double star.

pieguy1372 wrote:

General: Is there a version of the mp3 that doesn't fa you mean not cutted? D:

Easy:

00:28:427 (1,2,3) - The timing here might be tough to get for a beginner
00:45:490 (1) - This slider isn't symmetrical. To fix it, move the 6th followpoint right one size 3 grid, the 8th one up one and right one, and the 9th one up one and right one.

Normal:

00:58:990 (5) - This slider isn't symmetrical. To fix it, move the 4th followpoint down one size 3 grid, the 6th followpoint right one, and the 7th followpoint down one.
01:17:177 (6,1,2) - (nazi) Not perfectly symmetrical

Hard:

00:13:427 (4) - (nazi) Not symmetrical
00:15:490 (1) - ^ (to fix, move the last followpoint down one size 3 grid and left one)
00:19:427 (4) - ^
00:21:490 (1) - ^
00:25:240 (3) - ^
00:27:490 (6) - ^
00:31:240 (3) - ^
00:34:615 (9) - ^
00:36:490 (4) - ^
00:45:490 (6) - ^ Note: You don't have to change any these, it's just minor nitpicky stuff I found.

Awesome map. *star*

Hellzero wrote:

It's perfect! ^^

Единственное что меня смутило в харде
00:34:615 (9) - конец слайда чуть повыше для симметрии?

Звезда и удачи с ранкингом.

senaya wrote:

Всё уже вдоль и поперёк исследовано
Добрая мапа, легко играется.

Там мп3 выше 192, но это вроде уже писали до меня. В папке с мапой есть пустой файл сториборды osb. Удалять необязательно, но когда будешь менять мп3, можешь заодно его удалить.

Успешного ранка
Кудосы за этот пост не прошу

Licnect wrote:

hi poor mod
just some suggest

[Overall]
offset 12493 will best for me
some hitsound to noisy for me

[Easy]
01:04:052 [2] add finish
01:22:990 [2] finish change whistle
01:23:740 [4] add whistle
01:40:990 [3] add whistle
01:41:740 [5] add whistle

[Normal]
01:03:115 [1] remove finish
01:34:615 [3] up 2 grid

[Hard]
01:03:115 [1] remove finish
01:10:990 [7] remove finish
01:11:927 [2] whistle change finish
01:12:490 [1] remove finish
01:24:490 [10] add whistle
01:42:490 [9] add whistle

your fist map?
looks good
star&fight!

Leorda wrote:

Privet

Easy
00:33:493 (3,4,5) - It's seems difficult for beginner player, change it something?
00:39:493 (2,3,4) - ^
01:05:555 (1,2) - It has no rhythm for me, move to 01:05:743?
01:17:555 (1,2) - Again, it's too difficult for beginner player, try move to 01:17:743
01:42:680 (1) - Must new combo to prevent any spinner bug

Normal
00:30:493 (1) - Move further away from 00:29:743 (2)?
00:32:368 (2,3) - I think this is better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55586
00:45:493 (1) - You should new combo for this spinner to prevent any spinner bug
01:06:493 (1,2) - You can make a pattern like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55587
01:15:680 (2,3,4,5) - It doesn't looks like zigzag pattern
01:42:680 (1) - You should new combo for this spinner to prevent any spinner bug

Hard
01:27:493 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:28:243 (2) - New combo?
01:42:680 (1) - You should new combo for this spinner to prevent any spinner bug

In kiai sections, the songs are reminds me of anime-style of Touhou......

1. Nothing

1. Nothing

Sakura Hana wrote:

[All difficulties]
Set slider tick rate to 2, sounds better and you have lots of awkward ticks.

[Hard]
01:42:680 (1) - End this spinner on the same spot as the other difficulties with a fade out as well?

[Easy]
01:10:993 (1,2,3) - Use the finish on (1) for consistence with the previous combo?

Pretty nice and smooth map

Rukarioman wrote:

Normal:
00:26:368 (2) - Move this endpoint a bit down to avoid overlap.
00:44:368 (2) - ^

Cool mapset, call me back to bubble

Rukarioman wrote:

Alright this map is really cool.