Skysphinx wrote:

2deep4me
instresting, will check laturz

CuticleThong wrote:

Mekadothong da-meka~!

Saatnya memenuhi M4M... avane `L_`

L E G E N D
d k = small notes
D K = large notes

Depression Oni
00:45:164 - tambahkan don jangan XD bagian selow itu
00:50:619 - sama seperti diatas, tapi tambahin katu ._.
01:27:210 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, karena vokal `L_` nope..
01:31:528 (27) - d `L_` ini sudah d
02:12:437 - d meibi pake meibi2 pula D:
02:16:642 (44) - k 2over4me
03:13:346 (27) - ^ no... over
03:15:619 (39) - katu ae. Keroso ono pitch over ~_~ i am not Jepan pipel orz
03:16:301 (42,43,44) - Ctrl+G no.. 44 keep karna kat. biar ada flow
04:41:982 (60) - katu Ups.. lupa ganti ini kat
05:00:619 - tambahkan don dah turun lagunya.. keep aja ~_~

Wes sak ngono tok. Asline iki pas mapping'e
Good luck sampe ranked

• 1. 00:24:825 (43) - Delete, add finish on (44]. Maybe add d at 00:24:371 - instead.
  2. 00:49:032 (142) - k -> d?
  3. 00:53:919 (159,160) - Delete (159), add finish on (160].
  4. 00:56:305 (171,172,173) - k d k -> d k? I think you should map more close to the lyrics.
  5. 01:00:624 (194) - Delete for a nice break that fits to the lyrics.
  6. 01:23:012 (65,66) - Delete (65), add finish on (66].
  7. 01:28:126 (8,9,10,11,12) - ddd d k -> d k k? (Delete 9 and 11, add clap on 10). Sounds smoother imo.
  8. 01:31:762 (28,29,30,31,32) - ^
  9. 01:51:764 (137) - Add clap, please.
  10. 02:06:651 (35,1) - Delete (35), add finish on (1).
  11. 02:14:266 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - Naahh, please map like before -> ddd d k d.
  12. 02:19:380 (55) - Delete, a triplett out of nowhere feels unatural somehow.
  13. 02:35:744 (134,135,136) - Delete (134) and (136), add finish on (135).
  14. 03:04:838 (286,287) - Delete (286), add finish on (287).
  15. 03:09:952 (8,9,10,11,12) - See last kiai.
  16. 03:13:588 (28,29,30,31,32) - ^
  17. 03:40:863 (25,26,27,28,29) - kdkkd -> kkdkd or kkd D. kdkkd is a very unusual combo and awkward to play, try to avoid this or shitstorm will happen lol.
  18. 03:48:477 (57,58) - Delete (57), add finish on (58).
  19. 03:55:750 (88,89) - ^
  20. 04:01:092 (106,107,108) - dkk -> ddk. Don't panic its not too monotone this way.
  21. 04:06:319 (8,9,10,11,12) - See first kiai.
  22. 04:09:274 (23,24,25,26,27) - dkkdd -> ddkkd.
  23. 04:09:956 (28,29,30,31,32) - See first kiai.
  24. 04:22:116 (96) - k -> d.
  25. 04:43:140 (66) - k -> K..
  26. 04:43:822 (69) - D -> K.
  27. 04:44:504 (72) - ^
  28. 05:06:778 (35) - d -> D.
  The map is a bit inconsistent at some parts and thus seems confusing.
  I guess this happened because you tried to map along the lyrics and the drums at the same time.
  My suggestion is that you should focus on the lyrics here and simplify your map with a few more breaks along the lyrics parts.
  Since approval depends on songlength only, it doesn't need to become so hard and complicated.
  I would prefer a calm and nice-to-play approved map here
  
  Other than that, good luck~

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi mod from my queue!

"d" = Note
"k" = Note + Clap
"D" = Note + Finish
"K" = Note + Clap + Finisch
"->" = change to
"^" = see before

[Depression Oni]

• 1. 00:24:825 (43) - Delete, add finish on (44]. Maybe add d at 00:24:371 - instead. hmm.. keep
  2. 00:49:032 (142) - k -> d? n, this for emphasize vocal
  3. 00:53:919 (159,160) - Delete (159), add finish on (160]. ^
  4. 00:56:305 (171,172,173) - k d k -> d k? I think you should map more close to the lyrics. ....
  5. 01:00:624 (194) - Delete for a nice break that fits to the lyrics. ^ no.. i need 1/2 *bcus guitar arrange still playing then part before
  6. 01:23:012 (65,66) - Delete (65), add finish on (66]. ^
  7. 01:28:126 (8,9,10,11,12) - ddd d k -> d k k? (Delete 9 and 11, add clap on 10). Sounds smoother imo. no... i filll 01:28:126 (8,9,10) - this parts
  8. 01:31:762 (28,29,30,31,32) - ^ ^
  9. 01:51:764 (137) - Add clap, please. not have Drum high like 01:51:082 - this
  10. 02:06:651 (35,1) - Delete (35), add finish on (1). ^
  11. 02:14:266 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - Naahh, please map like before -> ddd d k d. ups my mistake 2over4mapping.jpg #jepenpowah
  12. 02:19:380 (55) - Delete, a triplett out of nowhere feels unatural somehow. okay, ur right majesty
  13. 02:35:744 (134,135,136) - Delete (134) and (136), add finish on (135). keep
  14. 03:04:838 (286,287) - Delete (286), add finish on (287). keep...
  15. 03:09:952 (8,9,10,11,12) - See last kiai. ^
  16. 03:13:588 (28,29,30,31,32) - ^ ^
  17. 03:40:863 (25,26,27,28,29) - kdkkd -> kkdkd or kkd D. kdkkd is a very unusual combo and awkward to play, try to avoid this or shitstorm will happen lol. wtf ur majesty.. dont make long word.. is not trouble.. is fine duh ~_~
  18. 03:48:477 (57,58) - Delete (57), add finish on (58).
  19. 03:55:750 (88,89) - ^
  20. 04:01:092 (106,107,108) - dkk -> ddk. Don't panic its not too monotone this way. follow guitar imo
  21. 04:06:319 (8,9,10,11,12) - See first kiai.
  22. 04:09:274 (23,24,25,26,27) - dkkdd -> ddkkd. okay used it
  23. 04:09:956 (28,29,30,31,32) - See first kiai.
  24. 04:22:116 (96) - k -> d. long vocal.. but okay
  25. 04:43:140 (66) - k -> K.. no have cymbal to emphasize
  26. 04:43:822 (69) - D -> K.
  27. 04:44:504 (72) - ^
  28. 05:06:778 (35) - d -> D. no stronk.. really outro..
  The map is a bit inconsistent at some parts and thus seems confusing.

1/2 is fine.. but if 1/4 is truth
I guess this happened because you tried to map along the lyrics and the drums at the same time.
My suggestion is that you should focus on the lyrics here and simplify your map with a few more breaks along the lyrics parts.
Since approval depends on songlength only, it doesn't need to become so hard and complicated.
I would prefer a calm and nice-to-play approved map here @_@ but music arrange JUST like this.. idk this comment awesome.. really thx for mod to fix overs parts

Other than that, good luck~

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Oke, untuk kali ini gw cuman ngemod Timing and BPM doang

Untuk Offset, set timing dimana spinner dimulai yaitu: 4938 Atau spinner-nya dihapus aja, supaya normal tepat di Note pertama nothing bla. dem iki malah ngopo XD

dan untuk BPM, menurut VirtualDJ. set Tempo-nya (atau BPM) menjadi seperti pada gambar



okay, gw cabut dulu ya. Moga2 nih BM di Rank'd juga, btw kenapa nggak buat yang Kantan, Futsuu and Muzu lagu epic, trus musicnya gitu2 aja.. susah buat di mapset imo

Ciao!

chaica wrote:

hi,from my queue,for m4m(TNA) wah si Chaca, cobalah Modding dalam bahasa Indonesia www /me laarriiii


[Depression Oni]

00:41:983 - k? yeah this vocal, but really forcing if me change to k *really worried about this..*
00:42:211(113,114) - Ctrl+G? - I think that sounds beautiful was connected to kd from dk 113 is drum chaca =w=
01:03:120 - k? or 01:02:665 - k? - In order to increase the uniformity 205 be a kat, really weird.. change 208 to kat
01:10:393 - k? - ^ not really need this
01:38:233 - Ctrl+G? - To match the hitsound nice suggest
01:38:802 - ddk? - ^If you accepted. ddk really weird.. change to ddd
01:40:506 - Since the low sound is ringing,and 01:39:256 - Because the color scheme is the same yep
02:24:256 - k? - high vocal sound? yep
02:41:983 - k? - kdd d ddk is better oke nice pattern
02:48:574 - k? - To try to align with dkd kdk yep, bagus juga
02:52:893 - k? - same as 02:41:983 a
02:55:733 - delete? - I feel no need. ok
04:29:483(187,188,189) - ddk? - feel so good? noo ._. 137 is drum high..


After a long time of mod, so I might poor>< good luck! woke

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Taiko mod

Depression Oni

1. 00:15:393 (23) - should be k following your previous patterns ( 00:13:574 (15,16) - 00:11:756 (7,8) - ) or you can keep this pattern 00:15:393 (23,1,2) -, but 00:13:574 (15) - should be d because have the same sound Dem u LoooNng Word, this Flow btw
   
2. 00:20:847 (25,26,27) - here we have the same trouble as above, as I said, you could keep this pattern 00:22:665 (33,34,35) - on this part, only for consistency of sounds a
   
3. at 00:20:733 - and 00:22:552 - you should add notes, why? This is the reason: 00:18:802 (15,16,17) - if you want to use this triplet you should keep consistency to the next part or feels weird. u want me overmapped? thats why i reduced stream patterns for emphasize 1/2 *not make over.. i get rejected in TNA bcus this, and emphasize stream is already on 00:17:893 (10,11,12) - and 00:18:802 (15,16,17) - here. thx ur opiny
   
4. I'm wonder about 00:10:733 (2,3) - 00:12:552 (10,11) - 00:14:370 (18,19) - as dd and 00:16:188 (3,4) - as dk, why? if you want to add a variation of notes you could follow this pattern (please try first and if you don't like press Ctrl+Z): 00:10:733 (2,3) - should be dk because I feel an increase of sound, 00:12:552 (10,11) - is ok at dd imo because there isn't change of sounds, 00:14:370 (18,19) - dk too for the same reason as 00:10:733 (2,3) - and finally 00:16:188 (3,4) - should be dd to have a nice combination of patterns.i see... thx your really2 nice reason.. but I am not make variety.. just making Consistency pitch.. like this MUST dk and this must dd if they pitch is different..
   
5. 00:18:006 (11,12) - 00:19:824 (20,21) - 00:21:643 (28,29) - 00:23:461 (36,37) - if you follow my previous advice, you should change this too, for consistency a
   
6. I'm prety sure that 00:55:961 (169) - should be at 00:55:733 - right? follow voice better 00:55:847 (168,169,170) - strong pitch in here.. plis ;_;
   
7. 01:00:961 (196) - should be at 01:00:733 - and changed into d I Understand this.. if me interst this will change this.. but i have other Opiny... 01:00:847 - this drum so stronk.. so why i make kkd and fill thats vocal too? for emphasize this
   
8. 01:06:302 (221,222,223,224,225) - feels overmaped, I recommend you to delete 01:06:415 (222) - and 01:06:643 (224) - but maybe you want to keep one of both lol why to delete this? XD yeah this must keep, in this case delete only 01:06:415 (222) - lol okay
   
9. 01:08:233 (231) - should be at 01:08:006 - furthermore it must be d to add more emphasis to the next finisher ( 01:08:574 (233) - ) a
   
10. 01:11:756 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't like this part, why at 01:12:438 - is a rest? why you start a new pattern with triplet ( 01:12:665 (11,12,13) - )? you know... my pattern is enough.. i follow Vocal to be Patterns.. and vocal is for emphasize and size.. since this music have stronk vocal (:
    1:- first, you should move 01:12:665 (11,12,13) - to 01:12:438 - u want me 1/2 hit.. but boring for me, so thats my patterns is enough
    2:- after that you will need a note at 01:12:893 -, in this case must be d high vocal... bla okay.. wait other modders see this too
    
11. 01:15:506 (28) - move to 01:15:279 - and them change to d, same as 01:00:961 (196) - a
    
12. 01:28:120 (8,9,10) - ugh, is not confortable to play ddkdd ddd, more d? in this case you should a mini rest of triplets with one note in the midle, what about moving 01:28:233 (9) - to 01:28:461 -? looks nice imo, it's up to you I Understand this too, long ago i did this too.. but i place blue tick in 01:28:120 (8,10) - this pitch.. is gud for me
    
13. well... we have different tastes about mapping I guess because I feel your triplets off but I'm sure that you think that is ok, let' see, 01:29:483 (14,15,16) - I think that 01:29:597 (15) - at 01:29:824 - feels better (to me...), them 01:30:506 (20) - should be at 01:30:733 - and changed to d, finally 01:30:847 (22) - should be k to be ready to the next stream 01:31:074 (23,24,25,26,27) - i understand this.. nice.. but my patterns is gud imo bcus x xxx x x xxx x, and 23 is kat? is to over emphasize vocal.. 23 is don and kdkdk.. 24 starts to high. okay? XD
    
14. 01:34:597 (43) - same here, 01:34:597 (43) - should be at 01:34:370 - for me. What do you think? furthermore to keep consistency with 01:35:165 (46,47,48) - 01:36:074 (51,52,53) - 01:37:438 (57,58,59) - etc.... i guess.. d kdkdk is very fit imo for emphasize.. k kdkdk not really gud for me.., and i make thats different from before bcus have "differents" vocal flow.. u see?
    
15. 01:43:574 (93,94,95) - too weird, 01:43:688 (94) - should be at 01:43:461 - imo imo, flow vocal is fit
    
16. since 01:52:211 - you should keep consistency with the first part if you follow my advices. a
    
17. 02:38:233 (148) - is really necessary? I think no. delete please no :C i fill this vocal, 2str0nk4meh
    
18. 02:41:870 (168) - what about move this note to 02:41:643 -? vocal please...
    
19. 02:44:370 - you miss a note here? following your previous patterns I think yes Lololol, i just need this. thx for remind this. lel i just confuset for this vocal *in before this parts is place for rest. idk what i am typing lol
    
20. 02:44:938 (183,184,185,186,187) - why 5-plet? without 02:45:052 (184) - feels better, delete please you know? nice to see u hear on overvocalpitch bla bla. deleteeddede :^^^)
    
21. 02:55:393 (235,236,237) - 02:56:302 (240,241,242) - 02:57:211 (245,246,247) - off, decide, what you want to follow? look from 02:35:393 - to 02:38:574 - and you will understand me i understand.. but is no problem for me, this flow vocal.. in before is different flow on vocal, i know this.. really
    
22. 02:59:143 (254) - ? what happened here? I think is at 02:59:029 - right? u know? this flow vocal `L_`
    
23. from 03:02:438 - to 03:04:256 - you should delete some notes, overmaped detected D: D: D: D: D: plis dont say thiz overmeps btw.. dam i can PLay taco btw ;_; but idk.. maybe overmaped bcus i mosntahahrah. okay just delete 03:04:143 - this
    
24. 03:09:938 (8,9,10) - as I said before you know what I'll say right? ( 01:28:120 (8,9,10) - ) bwa
    
25. 03:08:574 - you should keep consistency with the first kiai if you added my advices. bwa bwa
    
26. 04:06:302 (8,9,10) - bla bla bla, you know xd O_O wait.. i not see this "bla bla bla", bcus this mainstream. and i did bwa bwa bwa. thx for made my dei :^^) i must st[xb]onk/b]k to reply this one one :^^^^) *rip english
    
27. 04:07:779 (15) - move to 04:08:006 - them 04:08:688 (20) - should be at 04:08:915 - and changed into d bla? okey i like bwa bwa *Rabbits Invasion. TV Size IntenFeles*
    
28. 04:12:779 (43) - feels better at 04:12:552 - wat de hell XXXXDDD no no weird flow4me
    
29. 04:16:415 (61) - move to 04:16:188 - and change to d please :^) i know righ. WHY YOU MAKE THIS DEM. ah comeon ur niceu Bee Bie eN btw.. dem dont make opiny long ;w; i just need to reply weird sound inconsistent or missing note or bla and do green word by me.. dem u. XD
    
30. 04:21:529 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - wth? are you sure? delete 04:21:870 (94) - move 04:22:097 (96) - to 04:22:438 - you not understand this? in before is kkddk *BY MUSIC, and kkddk *BY VOCAL* just dejavuhhhhh. and now kkddkdk is nice flow for Yeahhhhhahahfahefhaef :V;v:v;:V:V:V. thx look this for dlt rest.
    
31. 04:37:665 (35) - high pitch, need to be alone, 04:37:779 (36) - move to 04:38:006 - this nice? okayy Borhrorojrojrjo Broh brorhrorhr
    
32. 04:45:165 (1) - mmm spin... Ok looks good, we will add bookmarks to the last part to understand what I mean, Ok? 00:10:392 - bookmark (1), 00:17:665 - bookmark (2), 01:52:211 - bookmark (1), 01:59:483 - bookmark (2), last part (here is the problem with consistency): 04:44:938 - bookmark (1), 04:52:211 - bookmark (2), 04:59:483 - bookmark (1), 05:06:756 - bookmark (2). All bookmarks (1) should be the same and all bookmarks (2) the same too, try to fix it to the last part. Huugggggggg Sh1n1111. *shini*, and game ovvaahh will blame me xO xP, this not problem.. in last part is..... FADE OUT SH!N!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDD thx your mod lelelelele

That's all from me, really sorry for the loooooong delay, shitty laptop I'll buy a new one xD Best of luck sir, take my aye sir broh xD x^) funny to reply this opini. i cringing with laugh :'D many different on you and me, but how u apply my mod dem? idk blablba bwa. okay done STARS~~

1. No problem :3

• 
  
  <<Mapping>>

1. 01:10:165 (1,5) - change to k voice pitch is high?
2. 02:24:256 (78,79) - Ctrl + G vocal pitch is high is 02:24:483 -
3. 02:36:529 (138) - change to k　I think guiter pitch is High
4. 02:57:324 (246) - delete I felt that there is no need.
5. 03:23:802 (82) - change to k Because the vocals felt high
6. 04:26:643 (121,123) - delete & 04:26:756 (122) - change to big note K Vocals I felt that growth.

BlackHairEND wrote:

Hello! hai
From M4M
Lating mod sorry ;w; aha relax =w=

[General]

1. No problem :3

[Depression Oni]

• 
  
  <<Mapping>>

1. 01:10:165 (1,5) - change to k voice pitch is high? hmm but thats is soft voice.. but i hear high pitch on 01:11:074 - here, well i keep don bcus 01:11:302 - already have emphasize with kat *drum pitch*
2. 02:24:256 (78,79) - Ctrl + G vocal pitch is high is 02:24:483 - wuw nice flow. thx but keep for now XD * i feel weird on 79 if kat
3. 02:36:529 (138) - change to k　I think guiter pitch is High but, to over if change kat.. 140 already emphasize
4. 02:57:324 (246) - delete I felt that there is no need. but this will make 02:50:052 - inconsistent.. sorry ~_~ vocal is fit too with flow voice
5. 03:23:802 (82) - change to k Because the vocals felt high 01:41:983 - hmm.. why me make in here is kat? bcus vocal is clear, and on your paste is flow.. so i put don
6. 04:26:643 (121,123) - delete & 04:26:756 (122) - change to big note K Vocals I felt that growth. 04:41:302 - high vocal in here.. dem, and about cymbal not stronkss to be finisher

short mod sorry ;w; np, this gud for looks on vocal flow good luck thx

Surono wrote:

-Sh1n1- wrote:

1. 04:45:165 (1) - mmm spin... Ok looks good, we will add bookmarks to the last part to understand what I mean, Ok? 00:10:392 - bookmark (1), 00:17:665 - bookmark (2), 01:52:211 - bookmark (1), 01:59:483 - bookmark (2), last part (here is the problem with consistency): 04:44:938 - bookmark (1), 04:52:211 - bookmark (2), 04:59:483 - bookmark (1), 05:06:756 - bookmark (2). All bookmarks (1) should be the same and all bookmarks (2) the same too, try to fix it to the last part. Huugggggggg Sh1n1111. *shini*, and game ovvaahh will blame me xO xP, this not problem.. in last part is..... FADE OUT SH!N!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDD thx your mod lelelelele

jajaja you didn't understand me, sir baka~~ xD, I mean that spin 04:45:165 (1) - is covering for example this part from 01:52:211 - to 01:59:029 - and whats next? patterns from 01:59:483 - to 02:06:302 - right? so... this part should be in 04:52:211 - to 04:59:029 - ...

:'D many different on you and me, but how u apply my mod dem? because my mod are based on structure and you mod my map based on hitsounds~~

1. Ada beberapa spot yang bisa diganti, semisal 00:18:347 (13) - jadi d buat emphasize cymbal yang ada di 00:18:574 (14) - . Preference sih, tapi ngeflownya dan ngikutin musiknya lebih enak kalo yang ini diganti d, terserah kok tapi. Saran gw sih, kalo emang mau ikutin musiknya ya ikutin aja drum/cymbalnya, tapi kalo emang buat variation sih gw gabisa kata deh.
2. 00:36:302 (87) - Sama kaya di atas, again preference.
3. 02:32:893 ~ 02:33:802 ddd kkd buat flow, imo lebih enak daripada yang sekarang, kesannya maksa gitu
4. 02:37:665 (145) - bisa diganti d, biar 02:35:620 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - pattern tripletnya seimbang ddk 2x, ddd 2x
5. 02:40:165 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkd? Flows better and follow vocal sama musiknya juga kalo menurut gw
6. 03:11:074 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - bisa dibuat kaya gini, karna dengan begini vokalnya juga diemphasize bisa kan, di kata "kalian" situ
   
7. 03:21:074 (65,66,67,68,69) - sama 03:22:211 (72,73,74,75,76) - sebisa mungkin patternnya bedain, karena melody mereka jelas" beda tapi mereka ada di satu pattern yang sama, jadi meninggalkan kesan kalo mereka itu 'serupa tapi tak sama', padahal beda 180 derajat lol
8. Part sesudah kiai kedua, sebelum kiai ketiga bagus owob
9. Mungkin itu aja sih major comment dari gw, gausah kd juga gapapa =v=

Senritsu wrote:

Hey sorry for late
I'm finally done with the translation >_> anjay beneran XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

SPOILER

The rain is falling down again this evening
Suddenly comes up the memories that keep hurting my heart
Wound which is possible to be healed
Wound which i hope never existed

I remembered when Dad left, after then we started to starve to death
Behavior that regularly makes me live undecided on the street
The time when i still don't understand, the meaning of divorcement
The thing which destroys every precious things, which i once ever had

It's normal if the me right now, envying all of you who live
All blessed thanks to lively atmosphere whithin your very family
The thing that always i compared with this dark-sullen world of mine
The world with no pride which helps me can survive this painful life

Maybe for a while i can forget everything
With the liquor i held tight onto my hand right now
Or carving my arm with the glass that hurts me now
I want to forget everything, i will do anything!

But then if i start to realize, from the remnants of being drunk last night
The ache of this wound, i started to feeling it deeply
At the time when i have understood how really it feels to be loved
The thing which i have never had, since i had to live on the street

It's normal if the me right now, envying all of you who live
All blessed thanks to lively atmosphere whithin your very family
The thing that always i compared with this dark-sullen world of mine
The world with no pride which helps me can survive this painful life

Crap

Sekalian deh ya okee
[lagi depresi diare bapersich]

1. Ada beberapa spot yang bisa diganti, semisal 00:18:347 (13) - jadi d buat emphasize cymbal yang ada di 00:18:574 (14) - . Preference sih, tapi ngeflownya dan ngikutin musiknya lebih enak kalo yang ini diganti d, terserah kok tapi. Saran gw sih, kalo emang mau ikutin musiknya ya ikutin aja drum/cymbalnya, tapi kalo emang buat variation sih gw gabisa kata deh. iyo.. kan ada beda pitch, dan ini insta don kat 00:18:347 (13) -. so yg di point si mbak itu ya mah harus ttp kat.. buat variasi.. gitar flow juga berasa beda XD
   
2. 00:36:302 (87) - Sama kaya di atas, again preference. wups... kek mapping orang Jepan gw nih kwkwk. fix
   
3. 02:32:893 ~ 02:33:802 ddd kkd buat flow, imo lebih enak daripada yang sekarang, kesannya maksa gitu akhirnya ada yg notis ini, tapi ddd kkd, di setiap akhir pattern ada High drum.. so saya ganti ddk kkk. ini mayan deh dari pada di awalnya kkk yg maksa fixed about over
   
4. 02:37:665 (145) - bisa diganti d, biar 02:35:620 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - pattern tripletnya seimbang ddk 2x, ddd 2x waduhh vocalmapping2over.. oke fix
   
5. 02:40:165 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkd? Flows better and follow vocal sama musiknya juga kalo menurut gw ye emang enak. akhirnya ini di notis juga. sebelumnya emang gini. tapi entah ngantuk tergiur reasonnya kwkwkwk
   
6. 03:11:074 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - bisa dibuat kaya gini, karna dengan begini vokalnya juga diemphasize bisa kan, di kata "kalian" situ 03:12:665 - hmm ada music... aslinya pengen fill dari awal vokal sampe selsai baru mulai lagi.. kalau di potong2.. berasa aneh.. keep dulu @_@ soalnya di kiai emang tujuannya aku mau ngisi2 flow guitarnya di pola vocal XD
   
   
7. 03:21:074 (65,66,67,68,69) - sama 03:22:211 (72,73,74,75,76) - sebisa mungkin patternnya bedain, karena melody mereka jelas" beda tapi mereka ada di satu pattern yang sama, jadi meninggalkan kesan kalo mereka itu 'serupa tapi tak sama', padahal beda 180 derajat lol kwkwkwkwkw, tapi kan berasa deja vuh =w=
   
8. Part sesudah kiai kedua, sebelum kiai ketiga bagus owob OwO)a
9. Mungkin itu aja sih major comment dari gw, gausah kd juga gapapa =v= =q=

Good luck~

jossieP wrote:

#M4M from queue

Hello, as noted on my thread, I'm an old modder U dont say :U, take it easy. >w< yeahh

[Overall]

1. The timing is not correct, these are the offsets you must use
   SPOILER

   
   Check the mod before changing the timing. thx pro timing, used this.. dem
2. As I always suggest on Taiko maps, please don't use volume changes on the map, the volume on tatsujin charts is always the same. a

[Emo Oni]

• There is nothing I really can say about this, you limited yourself to only follow those drums and add some duplets here and there

1. 01:12:665 (11,12) - maybe move them to the previous blue tick? just following the duplets yep this good
2. 02:17:438 - maybe add a katsu, I know the vocals leave an empty part here but it feels weird since you based most of your map on drums .. kat to over.. don
3. 04:45:165 (1) - okay a spinner following a long aaaaaaa on standard diff may have sense, but on Taiko the spinner is cleared a while before it is marked on the editor, so you will have like 2-3 seconds of nothing on the playfield, keep following the drumming on here, you did pretty well (y)

Your style is pretty basic, try playing a bit more with other patterns, taiko can be played as a different instrument to the song, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/61917 b...

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Depression Oni
・00:36:289 - change k yep this make me doubt.. bcus this modded by Senritsu.. but okay.. this map fully hitsounding on Vocal... so Changed
・01:38:334 - change d fixed, ddk kkd. okay, thats drum fits with don
・01:51:743 - change k 01:51:061 (130,133) - different pitch. on before is High Cymbal, and on u mentioned just cymbal
・02:31:516 - ^
・03:33:107 - ^
・04:09:698(25,26) - change k ? keep, is enough flow vocal

Timing
04:52:211 & 04:54:029 & 04:55:847 & 04:57:665
↓Fix
04:52:198 & 04:54:016 & 04:55:834 & 04:57:652

Ups.. lol BAKA AiMod XD

Good luck thx!! Also with Stars too~

Flying Pan wrote:

dem son. m4m. `L_`

[Depression of Diarrhea]
00:04:925 (1) - a spinner before first timing point is allowed? *pengetahuan baru* boleh aja, soalnya ini ada nada, dan ini bukan bagian metronome timing (kalau gw jadiin offset, metronome lagu bakal ancur.. music kan dimulai dari 00:10:379 - sini). so why not ga di pasang? kwokwowkow *Good4Uknow.3gp*

*depresi* aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

etto... wibu
00:24:925 (44) - d sir. low drum. i tihnk u prever durm than fokal iyo.. but i make emphasize with kat, but okay changed
00:17:880 (10) - delete thiz, consiztent widh 00:10:607 - is not about consistentcy. bcus this str0nks part of guitar.. orz
00:20:720 - maybe edd dog heer, like et 00:18:902 - ? 00:18:902 - not stronk like in here
00:22:539 - en heer ^

00:55:834 () - ket fits de ayaaaah pergi? WOOOooooooooooohhhhh ngeri `L_`
00:58:107 (180,181,182,183,184) - meybe cheng to k ddk. now iz strange imo sir Nice sugegshg stitoesng

*capek nulis bad english OWKOWKWOKWOKWOKWOKWOWKOWKOWKOWKWOKWOKWOKWOWKOWKOWKOWKOWKOWKOWKWOKWOKWOKWO*

01:26:743 (1) - D rasanya lebih pas deh. tp ntar gak konsisten. lupakan. tssnya berasa kek whistle. dan juga vocal tinggi mz
01:24:925 (67,68) - kalo gak mau atas ganti D yang ini paling gak D deh. K rasanya agak kekencengan oh iyo... dari pada K K yg ini gw ganti.. mending ganti yg D yang wajar bila saat ini.. oke gw ganti D yg di selanjutnya 01:26:743 -
03:06:743 (289,290) - ini juga gw ganti D yg di vocal

gak nemu apa2 lagi maz. good luck ya.

Flying Pan wrote:

gak mau ah situ juga gak lempar bintang ke map ane. lagian udah banyak juga wkkwk

EdamaMe411 wrote:

Sorry for delay,,>< haha XD
from my Queues D:

GoGo (`_J`)9

Depression Oni
00:04:925 (1) - maybe unrankable? Red line must put before first note,,,so,,offset 3107 aaa.. i guess this fine, bcus i just fill that wooozz, and if change offset to 3107... Metronome will broken

00:24:925 (44) -k,,,, sound cymbal !! yeah this cymbal.. but you know, this like finisher don.. but ddD is unrankable.. so just put ddd

01:05:607 (218) - d,,,because be emphasized to 01:05:834 (219) - dem son `L_`
01:12:880 (13) - d,,,because be emphasized to 01:12:880 (13) - a
01:20:152 (50) - ^ ,. .

01:20:152 (50) - add d,,,,2nd kiai time is a little lonely

03:48:561 (58) - d?,,I hear base and drum low sound 00:24:925 (44) -is don finisher, and your suggest time is kat finisher
04:22:084 (92) - d?,,because be emphasized to next k ye

04:26:402 - add note and,04:26:629 (117) - delete,,,it sound good.04:26:743 (118) - sound independence（bass Drum)
04:33:675 - add note and,04:33:902 (16) - delete,,,^ just mentioned delete, add note just make over patterns with music

04:56:289 - add note!!!,,,only 04:56:175 (18) - ,It could break the atmosphere of until now
04:58:107 - ^
05:01:743 - ^
05:03:561 - ^
05:05:379 - ^ is enough.. is fade out parts

finish= GL
（`・ω・）ノ☆

PatZar wrote:

perlu nih gw mod :V? :U

00:49:925 - dan 00:50:152 - add k, terus 00:50:380 (148) - jadiin D ye katnya buat ngisi itu2 suara, tapi vokalnya kek gitu. jadi tetep wae trus itu finisher kaga usah, part kalem mas bruhuhh
00:52:198 (155) - gw sih mendingan apus ini aje, lebih ngeinstrument imo enaknya drumnya gariz keraz mz
00:54:016 (161) - since ooX is allowed so, tambah K aja bener gapapa? tapi w mlz
01:22:766 (62) - delete, terus 01:23:107 - jadiin K kkddK ja la, finisher idk
01:24:925 (65) - D biar flow dremnya keraz mz, flow mah buat pola2 adja. sama buat kontrasin D finisher
01:31:289 (23,27) - ctrl+g biar sequencenya rapih gw selfmod kemarin2, jadi kkkdd d d (karna pletnya gw buat bertahap, dari kdd kkd kkkdd *k kk kkk*
01:40:493 (72,74) - biar ngeemphasis ctrl+g tetep wae, 01:39:250 (64,65,66,67,68) - deja vunya ini boz
02:06:630 (35) - delete terus 02:06:743 (1) - jadiin D
03:04:584 (285) - delte terus 03:04:925 (287) - jadiin K
03:06:743 (288) - D klo lu ganti yang 01:24:925 (65) -
03:22:311 (71,73) - ctrl+g klo lu ganti yang atas"nya itu
04:44:470 (70) - K biar klimaks 04:44:477 (70,72) - gw ctrl g

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