Surono wrote:

-Sh1n1- wrote:

1. 04:45:165 (1) - mmm spin... Ok looks good, we will add bookmarks to the last part to understand what I mean, Ok? 00:10:392 - bookmark (1), 00:17:665 - bookmark (2), 01:52:211 - bookmark (1), 01:59:483 - bookmark (2), last part (here is the problem with consistency): 04:44:938 - bookmark (1), 04:52:211 - bookmark (2), 04:59:483 - bookmark (1), 05:06:756 - bookmark (2). All bookmarks (1) should be the same and all bookmarks (2) the same too, try to fix it to the last part. Huugggggggg Sh1n1111. *shini*, and game ovvaahh will blame me xO xP, this not problem.. in last part is..... FADE OUT SH!N!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDD thx your mod lelelelele

jajaja you didn't understand me, sir baka~~ xD, I mean that spin 04:45:165 (1) - is covering for example this part from 01:52:211 - to 01:59:029 - and whats next? patterns from 01:59:483 - to 02:06:302 - right? so... this part should be in 04:52:211 - to 04:59:029 - ...

:'D many different on you and me, but how u apply my mod dem? because my mod are based on structure and you mod my map based on hitsounds~~

1. Ada beberapa spot yang bisa diganti, semisal 00:18:347 (13) - jadi d buat emphasize cymbal yang ada di 00:18:574 (14) - . Preference sih, tapi ngeflownya dan ngikutin musiknya lebih enak kalo yang ini diganti d, terserah kok tapi. Saran gw sih, kalo emang mau ikutin musiknya ya ikutin aja drum/cymbalnya, tapi kalo emang buat variation sih gw gabisa kata deh.
2. 00:36:302 (87) - Sama kaya di atas, again preference.
3. 02:32:893 ~ 02:33:802 ddd kkd buat flow, imo lebih enak daripada yang sekarang, kesannya maksa gitu
4. 02:37:665 (145) - bisa diganti d, biar 02:35:620 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - pattern tripletnya seimbang ddk 2x, ddd 2x
5. 02:40:165 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkd? Flows better and follow vocal sama musiknya juga kalo menurut gw
6. 03:11:074 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - bisa dibuat kaya gini, karna dengan begini vokalnya juga diemphasize bisa kan, di kata "kalian" situ
   
7. 03:21:074 (65,66,67,68,69) - sama 03:22:211 (72,73,74,75,76) - sebisa mungkin patternnya bedain, karena melody mereka jelas" beda tapi mereka ada di satu pattern yang sama, jadi meninggalkan kesan kalo mereka itu 'serupa tapi tak sama', padahal beda 180 derajat lol
8. Part sesudah kiai kedua, sebelum kiai ketiga bagus owob
9. Mungkin itu aja sih major comment dari gw, gausah kd juga gapapa =v=

Senritsu wrote:

Hey sorry for late
I'm finally done with the translation >_> anjay beneran XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

SPOILER

The rain is falling down again this evening
Suddenly comes up the memories that keep hurting my heart
Wound which is possible to be healed
Wound which i hope never existed

I remembered when Dad left, after then we started to starve to death
Behavior that regularly makes me live undecided on the street
The time when i still don't understand, the meaning of divorcement
The thing which destroys every precious things, which i once ever had

It's normal if the me right now, envying all of you who live
All blessed thanks to lively atmosphere whithin your very family
The thing that always i compared with this dark-sullen world of mine
The world with no pride which helps me can survive this painful life

Maybe for a while i can forget everything
With the liquor i held tight onto my hand right now
Or carving my arm with the glass that hurts me now
I want to forget everything, i will do anything!

But then if i start to realize, from the remnants of being drunk last night
The ache of this wound, i started to feeling it deeply
At the time when i have understood how really it feels to be loved
The thing which i have never had, since i had to live on the street

It's normal if the me right now, envying all of you who live
All blessed thanks to lively atmosphere whithin your very family
The thing that always i compared with this dark-sullen world of mine
The world with no pride which helps me can survive this painful life

Crap

Sekalian deh ya okee
[lagi depresi diare bapersich]

1. Ada beberapa spot yang bisa diganti, semisal 00:18:347 (13) - jadi d buat emphasize cymbal yang ada di 00:18:574 (14) - . Preference sih, tapi ngeflownya dan ngikutin musiknya lebih enak kalo yang ini diganti d, terserah kok tapi. Saran gw sih, kalo emang mau ikutin musiknya ya ikutin aja drum/cymbalnya, tapi kalo emang buat variation sih gw gabisa kata deh. iyo.. kan ada beda pitch, dan ini insta don kat 00:18:347 (13) -. so yg di point si mbak itu ya mah harus ttp kat.. buat variasi.. gitar flow juga berasa beda XD
   
2. 00:36:302 (87) - Sama kaya di atas, again preference. wups... kek mapping orang Jepan gw nih kwkwk. fix
   
3. 02:32:893 ~ 02:33:802 ddd kkd buat flow, imo lebih enak daripada yang sekarang, kesannya maksa gitu akhirnya ada yg notis ini, tapi ddd kkd, di setiap akhir pattern ada High drum.. so saya ganti ddk kkk. ini mayan deh dari pada di awalnya kkk yg maksa fixed about over
   
4. 02:37:665 (145) - bisa diganti d, biar 02:35:620 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) - pattern tripletnya seimbang ddk 2x, ddd 2x waduhh vocalmapping2over.. oke fix
   
5. 02:40:165 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkd? Flows better and follow vocal sama musiknya juga kalo menurut gw ye emang enak. akhirnya ini di notis juga. sebelumnya emang gini. tapi entah ngantuk tergiur reasonnya kwkwkwk
   
6. 03:11:074 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - bisa dibuat kaya gini, karna dengan begini vokalnya juga diemphasize bisa kan, di kata "kalian" situ 03:12:665 - hmm ada music... aslinya pengen fill dari awal vokal sampe selsai baru mulai lagi.. kalau di potong2.. berasa aneh.. keep dulu @_@ soalnya di kiai emang tujuannya aku mau ngisi2 flow guitarnya di pola vocal XD
   
   
7. 03:21:074 (65,66,67,68,69) - sama 03:22:211 (72,73,74,75,76) - sebisa mungkin patternnya bedain, karena melody mereka jelas" beda tapi mereka ada di satu pattern yang sama, jadi meninggalkan kesan kalo mereka itu 'serupa tapi tak sama', padahal beda 180 derajat lol kwkwkwkwkw, tapi kan berasa deja vuh =w=
   
8. Part sesudah kiai kedua, sebelum kiai ketiga bagus owob OwO)a
9. Mungkin itu aja sih major comment dari gw, gausah kd juga gapapa =v= =q=

Good luck~

jossieP wrote:

#M4M from queue

Hello, as noted on my thread, I'm an old modder U dont say :U, take it easy. >w< yeahh

[Overall]

1. The timing is not correct, these are the offsets you must use
   SPOILER

   
   Check the mod before changing the timing. thx pro timing, used this.. dem
2. As I always suggest on Taiko maps, please don't use volume changes on the map, the volume on tatsujin charts is always the same. a

[Emo Oni]

• There is nothing I really can say about this, you limited yourself to only follow those drums and add some duplets here and there

1. 01:12:665 (11,12) - maybe move them to the previous blue tick? just following the duplets yep this good
2. 02:17:438 - maybe add a katsu, I know the vocals leave an empty part here but it feels weird since you based most of your map on drums .. kat to over.. don
3. 04:45:165 (1) - okay a spinner following a long aaaaaaa on standard diff may have sense, but on Taiko the spinner is cleared a while before it is marked on the editor, so you will have like 2-3 seconds of nothing on the playfield, keep following the drumming on here, you did pretty well (y)

Your style is pretty basic, try playing a bit more with other patterns, taiko can be played as a different instrument to the song, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/61917 b...

Mame ga nyaa wrote:

Hi ~ Hai hai!! ww

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ahahah, oke XD

Depression Oni
・00:36:289 - change k yep this make me doubt.. bcus this modded by Senritsu.. but okay.. this map fully hitsounding on Vocal... so Changed
・01:38:334 - change d fixed, ddk kkd. okay, thats drum fits with don
・01:51:743 - change k 01:51:061 (130,133) - different pitch. on before is High Cymbal, and on u mentioned just cymbal
・02:31:516 - ^
・03:33:107 - ^
・04:09:698(25,26) - change k ? keep, is enough flow vocal

Timing
04:52:211 & 04:54:029 & 04:55:847 & 04:57:665
↓Fix
04:52:198 & 04:54:016 & 04:55:834 & 04:57:652

Ups.. lol BAKA AiMod XD

Good luck thx!! Also with Stars too~

Flying Pan wrote:

dem son. m4m. `L_`

[Depression of Diarrhea]
00:04:925 (1) - a spinner before first timing point is allowed? *pengetahuan baru* boleh aja, soalnya ini ada nada, dan ini bukan bagian metronome timing (kalau gw jadiin offset, metronome lagu bakal ancur.. music kan dimulai dari 00:10:379 - sini). so why not ga di pasang? kwokwowkow *Good4Uknow.3gp*

*depresi* aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

etto... wibu
00:24:925 (44) - d sir. low drum. i tihnk u prever durm than fokal iyo.. but i make emphasize with kat, but okay changed
00:17:880 (10) - delete thiz, consiztent widh 00:10:607 - is not about consistentcy. bcus this str0nks part of guitar.. orz
00:20:720 - maybe edd dog heer, like et 00:18:902 - ? 00:18:902 - not stronk like in here
00:22:539 - en heer ^

00:55:834 () - ket fits de ayaaaah pergi? WOOOooooooooooohhhhh ngeri `L_`
00:58:107 (180,181,182,183,184) - meybe cheng to k ddk. now iz strange imo sir Nice sugegshg stitoesng

*capek nulis bad english OWKOWKWOKWOKWOKWOKWOWKOWKOWKOWKWOKWOKWOKWOWKOWKOWKOWKOWKOWKOWKWOKWOKWOKWO*

01:26:743 (1) - D rasanya lebih pas deh. tp ntar gak konsisten. lupakan. tssnya berasa kek whistle. dan juga vocal tinggi mz
01:24:925 (67,68) - kalo gak mau atas ganti D yang ini paling gak D deh. K rasanya agak kekencengan oh iyo... dari pada K K yg ini gw ganti.. mending ganti yg D yang wajar bila saat ini.. oke gw ganti D yg di selanjutnya 01:26:743 -
03:06:743 (289,290) - ini juga gw ganti D yg di vocal

gak nemu apa2 lagi maz. good luck ya.

Flying Pan wrote:

gak mau ah situ juga gak lempar bintang ke map ane. lagian udah banyak juga wkkwk

EdamaMe411 wrote:

Sorry for delay,,>< haha XD
from my Queues D:

GoGo (`_J`)9

Depression Oni
00:04:925 (1) - maybe unrankable? Red line must put before first note,,,so,,offset 3107 aaa.. i guess this fine, bcus i just fill that wooozz, and if change offset to 3107... Metronome will broken

00:24:925 (44) -k,,,, sound cymbal !! yeah this cymbal.. but you know, this like finisher don.. but ddD is unrankable.. so just put ddd

01:05:607 (218) - d,,,because be emphasized to 01:05:834 (219) - dem son `L_`
01:12:880 (13) - d,,,because be emphasized to 01:12:880 (13) - a
01:20:152 (50) - ^ ,. .

01:20:152 (50) - add d,,,,2nd kiai time is a little lonely

03:48:561 (58) - d?,,I hear base and drum low sound 00:24:925 (44) -is don finisher, and your suggest time is kat finisher
04:22:084 (92) - d?,,because be emphasized to next k ye

04:26:402 - add note and,04:26:629 (117) - delete,,,it sound good.04:26:743 (118) - sound independence（bass Drum)
04:33:675 - add note and,04:33:902 (16) - delete,,,^ just mentioned delete, add note just make over patterns with music

04:56:289 - add note!!!,,,only 04:56:175 (18) - ,It could break the atmosphere of until now
04:58:107 - ^
05:01:743 - ^
05:03:561 - ^
05:05:379 - ^ is enough.. is fade out parts

finish= GL
（`・ω・）ノ☆

PatZar wrote:

perlu nih gw mod :V? :U

00:49:925 - dan 00:50:152 - add k, terus 00:50:380 (148) - jadiin D ye katnya buat ngisi itu2 suara, tapi vokalnya kek gitu. jadi tetep wae trus itu finisher kaga usah, part kalem mas bruhuhh
00:52:198 (155) - gw sih mendingan apus ini aje, lebih ngeinstrument imo enaknya drumnya gariz keraz mz
00:54:016 (161) - since ooX is allowed so, tambah K aja bener gapapa? tapi w mlz
01:22:766 (62) - delete, terus 01:23:107 - jadiin K kkddK ja la, finisher idk
01:24:925 (65) - D biar flow dremnya keraz mz, flow mah buat pola2 adja. sama buat kontrasin D finisher
01:31:289 (23,27) - ctrl+g biar sequencenya rapih gw selfmod kemarin2, jadi kkkdd d d (karna pletnya gw buat bertahap, dari kdd kkd kkkdd *k kk kkk*
01:40:493 (72,74) - biar ngeemphasis ctrl+g tetep wae, 01:39:250 (64,65,66,67,68) - deja vunya ini boz
02:06:630 (35) - delete terus 02:06:743 (1) - jadiin D
03:04:584 (285) - delte terus 03:04:925 (287) - jadiin K
03:06:743 (288) - D klo lu ganti yang 01:24:925 (65) -
03:22:311 (71,73) - ctrl+g klo lu ganti yang atas"nya itu
04:44:470 (70) - K biar klimaks 04:44:477 (70,72) - gw ctrl g

OzzyOshBurn wrote:

baby singer

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Cacadas maps yamyim >>:V<<

SYAHME wrote:

We need Surono maps

Volta wrote:

will be rejected because BG is not loli

Nishizumi wrote:

Goblok OD9 OD10

yg main jadi overdosis ni

Volta wrote:

Nishizumi wrote:

Goblok OD9 OD10

yg main jadi overdosis ni

fixed jd lebih goblok

Surono wrote:

Nishizumi wrote:

Goblok OD9 OD10

yg main jadi overdosis ni

fixed jd lebih goblok

not 10

" ngeosh sampe too lol :'V " - not Genocide