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L'Arc~en~Ciel - Daybreak's Bell

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RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 January 2011 at 06:41:29

Artist: L'Arc~en~Ciel
Title: DAYBREAK'S BELL
Tags: Ouendan Authentic m980 lepidopodus
BPM: 156.24
Filesize: 8407kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gekiretsu ni Ouen (4.57 stars, 397 notes)
  2. iNiS980 (4.42 stars, 315 notes)
  3. Kakan ni Ouen (3.6 stars, 273 notes)
  4. Karei ni Ouen (4.6 stars, 405 notes)
  5. Kigaru ni Ouen (1.97 stars, 163 notes)
  6. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1112 notes)
Download: L'Arc~en~Ciel - DAYBREAK'S BELL
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ouendan 2 is better than your mother
Last edited by RandomJibberish , edited 23 times in total.
Sonic Fumes
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Sonic Fumes
:)
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RageTH
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RageTH
Haven't downloaded yet,
but shit, this song is so cool.
Kurai
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Kurai
:3

Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Kakan ni Ouen]
02:21:121 (1) - Sounds weird, Remove
02:33:411 (1) - ^
03:21:031 (1) - ^
03:33:320 (1) - ^

That's all I think :3
Star
Nharox
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Nharox
[Overall]

Please, lower the volume (maybe by two) and remove the (fe-)male "woo" sounds. I know it's typical for the Ouendan 2 Style but it doesn't fit at all.

I'm not sure if this is allowed. Anyway, I'd change it, you just have to lower the circles a bit.

Also, better BG because 800x600 is not cool. And delete the .osb.

SPOILER

But except that, it really feels like a Ouendan map. Well done. :) Btw. I'm glad to see some japanese songs not being anime related. :P

[Karei ni Ouen

02:45:316 (1) - Replace that stream with a repeating slider.
03:17:575 (1) - Same as above.

[Gekiretsu ni Ouen] is fine.

Kakan ni Ouen

01:26:204 (1) - Too close to the previous slider, spacing is confusing.
02:30:722 (1) - Same as above.

Kigaru ni Ouen

00:51:449 (4) - Too close to the previous slider, spacing is confusing.
00:54:137 (3) - Same as above.
03:06:054 (1) - ^
03:09:126 (3) - ^
03:18:343 (1) - ^

Why don't you use normal diff names? :(
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
The diff names are authentic. I also prefer the BG I have, although I'll see if I can find a higher quality version.

Done a couple of the other suggestions~

'K BG's 993x745 now, as HQ as I can get it.
m980
Elite Mapper
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m980
Lol
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
Personally I like this song so I star this and hope it get ranked soon.

Anyway, is there any left slot for semi-authentic Taiko diff? If it is, I can make it for you.
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Go ahead and make a Taiko diff if you want to.

I'm also considering getting rid of Gekiretsu ni Ouen as it's a similar style and difficulty to m980's diff, and I won't have wasted my time as Karei ni Ouen is just a flip with small changes. That'll also bring it down to four (an authentic set of sorts) plus Lepidopidus' Taiko diff...

But I do like my whole authentic set to be there, so hmm...
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
Taiko map finished. Semi-authentic so it's based one authentic map (which is actually ranked once, yeah, that TV size one.)
You can change the name of the diff anyway you want.

Download: L'Arc~en~Ciel - DAYBREAK'S BELL (RandomJibberish) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Soaprman
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Soaprman
All the osu! difficulties played well. I'm not good enough at taiko to play the taiko oni, but it looked/sounded good. You might consider making a background image for it with the main bg image lowered and one of those black bands with the name of the song on it?

If you do decide to remove a difficulty, I'd suggest removing Karei no Ouen since it's the "hard rock" of the bunch, although the hard rock mod applied to Gekiretsu pushes the OD up a bit high... whatever. Just my opinion. :P

Even though I had no real modding to do, thanks for posting this in my queue. It's a good map and I enjoyed playing it.
Krisom
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Krisom
I'm modding authentic shit cuz I'm that cool

General-
Add m980 to the tags ~ (free kudosu! yay!)

Kigaru ni Ouen-
02:18:433 up to 02:41:475 (1) - I'm pretty sure you could move everything some grids down to avoid those sliders touching the HP bar, and about 02:43:011 (1,2) - , you could try something like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26686
03:07:590 (2) - Add a clap at the start
03:45:993 (1) - This is the most weird hitsound I've ever heard on a slider *.*" Why is the sliderwhistle like that :/?

Kakan ni Ouen-
02:26:882 (7) - / 02:39:171 (7) - Somehow, I can't hit these notes. And somehow, I a able to hit them on the last chorus *-*
Great~

iNiS980-
No kiai time? fine, I guess :v
03:17:575 (x) - Add a note? I always hit 03:17:767 (1) - early ;_; (besides, you added this :03:29:864 (1) - )
Stop mapping great stuff, you make me look like a noob ;~; (I love your iNiS maps so much!)

Gekiretsu ni Ouen-
Great~

Karei ni Ouen-
Greater~

Lepi <3

Nothing to mod here, just suggestions, if you just do the tag thing, don't feed me kudosu, it's not worth it :u
m980
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m980

Krisom wrote:

iNiS980-
No kiai time? fine, I guess :v
03:17:575 (x) - Add a note? I always hit 03:17:767 (1) - early ;_; (besides, you added this :03:29:864 (1) - )
Stop mapping great stuff, you make me look like a noob ;~; (I love your iNiS maps so much!)
No
Larto
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Larto
Revoved
NotShinta
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NotShinta
japanese
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Really Nice song
Star~~ ;)
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain
yawn
Larto
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Larto
BPM: 156,240
Offset: 171

Kakan ni Ouen:
00:45:497 (1,2,3) - Oh you silly. (2) goes 1/4 forward!
00:57:786 (1,2,3) - ^
01:50:015 (1,2,3) - ^
01:24:668 (2,1) - This spacing is a little silly too.
02:02:304 (1,2,3) - (2) goes 1/4 forward.
02:11:521 (1,2,3) - ^
02:29:186 (2,1) - Spacing.
03:02:981 (3) - amagawd offscreen.
03:04:517 (3) - ^

Kigaru ni Ouen:
00:43:192 (1) - oh my god this is ugly.
00:55:481 (1) - ^
01:24:668 (1,1) - Spacing is just a little weird.
01:59:999 (1) - MY EYES etc.
02:29:186 (1,1) - Spaciiing.

edit: sup.
avira0922
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avira0922
finally became a bubble
I love ouendan style
star~

Kakarotto_old
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Kakarotto_old
Hell yeah!
Awesome music.
tetsutaro
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tetsutaro
Song's cool.
What is the purpose of the difficulty iNiS980, anyway? No Kiai time and stuff?
Beatmap's fine, but Kigaru's quite demanding as the easiest map,
(could be easier while not breaking the rhythm)
and the overlength sliders in the rest of the maps ain't pretty too.
The Taiko Map is cooler with the Taiko cut, but nice work filling the gaps!
ztrot
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ztrot
hit-sounds are way to fucking loud I can't even hear the song the bpm is off to
Bpm 156.25 offset 161
pop~
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh

ztrot wrote:

hit-sounds are way to fucking loud I can't even hear the song the bpm is off to
Bpm 156.25 offset 161
pop~
not only loud but terrible and ear bleeding :o
NotShinta
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yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

ztrot wrote:

hit-sounds are way to fucking loud I can't even hear the song the bpm is off to
Bpm 156.25 offset 161
pop~
not only loud but terrible and ear bleeding :o
are they 'eck

I forgot why I posted here, something to do with nazing spacing for lolz
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

ztrot wrote:

hit-sounds are way to fucking loud I can't even hear the song the bpm is off to
Bpm 156.25 offset 161
pop~
not only loud but terrible and ear bleeding :o
Congratualtions, you made an interesting and constructive comment!

also, ztrot's BPM definately feels fast to me.
Dotsu
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Dotsu
~STAR~
gyt
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gyt
Some bad hitsound modding. Sorry..

[Kigaru ni Ouen]
So many finish sounds...

01:00:078 (1) - add claps to the slider? (like it's made in your other diffs)
01:21:392 (2) - delete finish at the start?
01:33:680 (2) - delete finish at the start and add whistle at the end?
02:04:594 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - It's terribly monotonous for me (finish-clap-finish-cla..). I suggest:
--02:06:144 (1,2) - replace finish at the start to clap and delete clap at the end.
--02:15:361 (1) - delete finish? (like it's made in your other diffs)
02:25:908 (2) - delete finish at the start?
02:38:197 (2) - delete finish at the start and add whistle at the end?
03:25:816 (2) - ^
03:38:104 (2) - ^
03:44:249 (2) - delete finish at the end? (like 03:50:393 (2))

[Kakan ni Ouen]
00:48:942 (3) - delete finish?
00:49:326 (1) - add finish at the start?
00:52:398 (1) - add finish at the start?
01:10:831 (1) - delete finish (like it's made in your other diffs)
01:53:458 (3) - delete finish?
02:12:289 (4) - delete whistle at the end?
03:11:991 (1) - add finish? (like it's made in your other diffs)
03:50:986 (6) - delete clap at the start?

[Gekiretsu ni Ouen, Karei ni Ouen]
02:46:069 (1) - replace finish to whistle? (like in first diffs)

[iNiS980]
This diff broken now. -> Resnap all notes
01:22:160 (8), 01:34:449 (8) and others - broken slider end + strange (useless?) timing sections

nice map :D
ztrot
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ztrot
I'm wrong you guys are right, let me know when you want the map re bubbled.
ztrot
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ztrot
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arien666
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Da don?
Larto
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Larto
Da don. Unsnapped notes on iNiS980. Don't kudosu this because it was nothing but reading AIMod. Rebubbled.
DeathxShinigami
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abalee
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I am curious that how could the blank between the notes and breaks appeared at [iNiS980]...?
James2250
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abalee wrote:

I am curious that how could the blank between the notes and breaks appeared at [iNiS980]...?
You are able to drag the breaks so it fits the song more~
RandomJibberish
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That's a feature that was added quite a while ago to make the breaks fall where you want them. You can drag the start and end of breaks around to make them land on beats etc
abalee
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abalee
I think it is useless oh... NVM...

but:
Kakan ni Ouen:
02:11:507 (1,2) - IMO it is not a EBA jump, more like a bad spacing.
RandomJibberish
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Oh shit how did that even happen

fixed

how many times has this been rebubbled now
abalee
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abalee
dunno
Larto
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Kigaru ni Ouen:
01:00:078 (1) - Is this supposed to be so terrifyingly ugly? I don't think it was there last time I looked...
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaafixed
Larto
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Larto
I think my mother is better than EBA.
RandomJibberish
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Ouendan 1, maybe
mm201
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m980 makes iNiS difficulties on iNiS sets like a boss.
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