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Camellia as "Bang Riot" - Blastix Riotz [OsuMania]

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wohooo
Topic Starter
Aruel

[Baim] wrote:

wohooo
Thank you for kudo stars Baim! :▷
DeletedUser_259972
이거 요즘 모딩이 안 들어와서 큰일이네 ㅋㅋㅋ

여기 쿠도수 하나 주워왔소



히헿
CLSW
아니 미친 이걸 진짜 랭크시키시려고
Topic Starter
Aruel

jakads wrote:

이거 요즘 모딩이 안 들어와서 큰일이네 ㅋㅋㅋ

여기 쿠도수 하나 주워왔소



히헿
>< 쿠도수 고마워!!

CLSW wrote:

아니 미친 이걸 진짜 랭크시키시려고
하하하 이미 올때까지 왔습니다 BN도 한분은 이미 모셔놨습니다!! 하하하하하하하하하!!!!!
Topic Starter
Aruel
Okay I will do self-modding it with guest differs after discuss.

For make consistency with diffs and fix some ghost note and wrong snaps

The time is coming.
NinjaSM
Holy shit, If you rank this I'm officially gonna call you the king of beatmapping, I find it hard to believe this can even get ranked

Played GRAVITY (With no fail RIP) and it's a very challenging beatmap

It's probably the first 7 star 4K song to get ranked,I would like to see people struggle to get a rank on it XD
Ochasan
ADVANCED Setup :

00:26:716 (26716|3) -
00:26:775 (26775|1) -
00:26:834 (26834|2) -

i have problem with this notes

can you remove/move to right/left to make that easy please?

thanks :D
Shinzo-

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with _FrEsH_ChICkEn_


ok since the hardest diff is 7* i'll just mod the hardest diff, sorry for that

4K

[1|2|3|4]


Mod Inside
[General]

AiMod
  1. No Problem
Timing
  1. No Problem
Difficulty
  1. suggest for the jinjin's diff name... for EXHAUST+ or you can use Lv. since i never see EXTRA diff in sdvx xD
Hitsound
  1. No Problem
Metadata/Song Setup
  1. delete "RIOT" from Tags ? it's already in tittle and artist
File/BG/etc.
  1. Hey please delete that OSB file

[GRAVITY]
00:00:935 (935|1,1052|2,1169|1) - Ctrl H please... that jack is un-necesarry
00:02:224 - 00:02:341 - i think it should be 2 note since you are alyering that synt and the hithat
00:04:099 - 00:04:216 - here too. etc
00:06:033 (6033|2) - ghost note please
00:15:584 - 01:30:584 - INFINITE is harder on this part
00:20:271 (20271|1) - just delete this, inconsisten with the others... tho idk why it's 3 note xD btw if you reject then please remove the finish or clap and add to 00:20:271 (20271|2) - or 00:20:271 (20271|3) -
00:22:615 (22615|1) - move to 00:22:556 - ? since i didn't hear kick on 00:22:615 (22615|1) -
00:25:896 (25896|0,25896|1,25896|2) - reduce 1 note please.. since no kick.. tho on INFINITE just 1 note
00:26:775 - should be 2 note
00:30:701 - 00:30:876 - should be a note here... tho the INFINITE has a note on 00:30:701 -
00:31:521 - on this part... it's kinda inconsisten for the snare and kick... maybe make it 3 note for snare and 2 note for kick
00:34:392 - i hear a same kind of sound with 00:34:334 -
00:36:091 - i hear a kick
00:38:259 (38259|0,38259|1) - delete one of it ? i hear no kick
00:40:427 (40427|0) - maybe just change this one into a normal note.. since 00:40:427 - there is a kick and you wont have a reason of what sound is that LN.. is it ?
01:00:466 (60466|0) - move to 4... look more better than a 1/4 jack like 01:00:408 (60408|0,60466|2,60466|0,60525|2) -
01:07:029 (67029|2,67146|0) - Ctrl H and move 01:07:498 (67498|3) - to 3 for pitch
01:21:677 (81677|2,81912|1,82146|2,82380|1,82615|2,82849|1) - better to move them to 1 & 4
01:33:162 (93162|3,93162|0,93191|1,93220|2,93250|3) - well actually this stream didn't start here.. it's start 01:33:044 -
01:34:392 - 01:34:861 - missing note
01:35:388 (95388|0,95447|3) - better to delete since no kick
01:37:380 - add note on 3
01:37:615 (97615|0) - move to 01:37:673 - since the kick is in 01:37:673 - not 01:37:615 -
01:37:849 - 01:37:908 - missing ?
01:38:845 (98845|1,98904|0,98962|1) - better to delete, since there's no kick but 01:39:021 (99021|2,99080|3,99138|2,99197|3) - has
01:47:400 - add note on 1 for kick
01:47:927 - what about 2 LN ? i think it's fit to the music... i mean add LN like 01:47:927 (107927|0) - on collumn 2
01:55:427 (115427|0) - better to delete, since there is no kick like01:55:251 (115251|2,115251|3) -
01:55:603 (115603|3,115603|0,115779|3,115779|2) - here too... actually it's better to just 2 note for the kick... cuz if you add 2 note for snare too ... then should be 2 note too on 01:55:017 - 01:55:134 - and it means dead
02:01:814 (121814|2,121931|2) - delete ? hear nothing.... re-arrange if yes
02:02:459 (122459|1,122459|2,122517|0,122517|3) - why 2 note ? what about 02:01:755 - 02:01:990 - 02:02:048 - ? they are same

ok im sorry if that short... some parts are shouldn't be mentioned xD

ok good luck duck xD
and im waiting for your mod :D
Topic Starter
Aruel

NinjaSM wrote:

Holy shit, If you rank this I'm officially gonna call you the king of beatmapping, I find it hard to believe this can even get ranked

Played GRAVITY (With no fail RIP) and it's a very challenging beatmap

It's probably the first 7 star 4K song to get ranked,I would like to see people struggle to get a rank on it XD
LOLOL I want to see that too XD

Ochasan wrote:

ADVANCED Setup :

00:26:716 (26716|3) -
00:26:775 (26775|1) -
00:26:834 (26834|2) -

i have problem with this notes

can you remove/move to right/left to make that easy please?

thanks :D
Fixed more comfortably with reference your suggestion. Thanks :)
Topic Starter
Aruel

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY


M4M

M4M with _FrEsH_ChICkEn_


ok since the hardest diff is 7* i'll just mod the hardest diff, sorry for that

4K

[1|2|3|4]


Mod Inside
[General]

AiMod
  1. No Problem
Timing
  1. No Problem
Difficulty
  1. suggest for the jinjin's diff name... for EXHAUST+ or you can use Lv. since i never see EXTRA diff in sdvx xD
- Yes but I never saw EXHAUST+ on SDVX too XDD
Hitsound
  1. No Problem
Metadata/Song Setup
  1. delete "RIOT" from Tags ? it's already in tittle and artist
- RIOT DESTRUDO. It's that character's name XD
File/BG/etc.
  1. Hey please delete that OSB file
-aaa... I deleted that a long time a go owo

[GRAVITY]
00:00:935 (935|1,1052|2,1169|1) - Ctrl H please... that jack is un-necesarry - It's not jack also you can see it has same pattern 00:02:341 (2341|2,2459|2,2693|2,2810|2) -
00:02:224 - 00:02:341 - i think it should be 2 note since you are alyering that synt and the hithat
00:04:099 - 00:04:216 - here too. etc - hmm... I don't think so :p
00:06:033 (6033|2) - ghost note please - Have smilar sound with 00:06:150 (6150|0) - this.
00:15:584 - 01:30:584 - INFINITE is harder on this part - That's guest diff. also don't have to make harder all parts
00:20:271 (20271|1) - just delete this, inconsisten with the others... tho idk why it's 3 note xD btw if you reject then please remove the finish or clap and add to 00:20:271 (20271|2) - or 00:20:271 (20271|3) - For emphasis a new part of song
00:22:615 (22615|1) - move to 00:22:556 - ? since i didn't hear kick on 00:22:615 (22615|1) - Please read my pattern ;w;
00:25:896 (25896|0,25896|1,25896|2) - reduce 1 note please.. since no kick.. tho on INFINITE just 1 note - Removed a one note
00:26:775 - should be 2 note - added and re-arranged
00:30:701 - 00:30:876 - should be a note here... tho the INFINITE has a note on 00:30:701 - Nice catch owo)b
00:31:521 - on this part... it's kinda inconsisten for the snare and kick... maybe make it 3 note for snare and 2 note for kick For emphasis a new part of song
00:34:392 - i hear a same kind of sound with 00:34:334 - Added!
00:36:091 - i hear a kick - It's my intention
00:38:259 (38259|0,38259|1) - delete one of it ? i hear no kick - I'll consider this
00:40:427 (40427|0) - maybe just change this one into a normal note.. since 00:40:427 - there is a kick and you wont have a reason of what sound is that LN.. is it ? -hmm Okay :p
01:00:466 (60466|0) - move to 4... look more better than a 1/4 jack like 01:00:408 (60408|0,60466|2,60466|0,60525|2) - That's not good for playing
01:07:029 (67029|2,67146|0) - Ctrl H and move 01:07:498 (67498|3) - to 3 for pitch - Pitch is not important actually
01:21:677 (81677|2,81912|1,82146|2,82380|1,82615|2,82849|1) - better to move them to 1 & 4 - No sorry
01:33:162 (93162|3,93162|0,93191|1,93220|2,93250|3) - well actually this stream didn't start here.. it's start 01:33:044 - No XDD
01:34:392 - 01:34:861 - missing note - Added a one.But I couldn't hear sound on here 01:34:861 -
01:35:388 (95388|0,95447|3) - better to delete since no kick -Please read pattern ;_;
01:37:380 - add note on 3 - Added
01:37:615 (97615|0) - move to 01:37:673 - since the kick is in 01:37:673 - not 01:37:615 - No sorry
01:37:849 - 01:37:908 - missing ? - Added
01:38:845 (98845|1,98904|0,98962|1) - better to delete, since there's no kick but 01:39:021 (99021|2,99080|3,99138|2,99197|3) - has - I followed just main sound
01:47:400 - add note on 1 for kick - It's for pattern
01:47:927 - what about 2 LN ? i think it's fit to the music... i mean add LN like 01:47:927 (107927|0) - on collumn 2 - I'll consider it
01:55:427 (115427|0) - better to delete, since there is no kick like01:55:251 (115251|2,115251|3) -
01:55:603 (115603|3,115603|0,115779|3,115779|2) - here too... actually it's better to just 2 note for the kick... cuz if you add 2 note for snare too ... then should be 2 note too on 01:55:017 - 01:55:134 - and it means dead - No You can hear 32 beat sound start on two notes.
02:01:814 (121814|2,121931|2) - delete ? hear nothing.... re-arrange if yes
02:02:459 (122459|1,122459|2,122517|0,122517|3) - why 2 note ? what about 02:01:755 - 02:01:990 - 02:02:048 - ? they are same - No sorry

ok im sorry if that short... some parts are shouldn't be mentioned xD

ok good luck duck xD
and im waiting for your mod :D
Thank you for mod! and I will mod your map until this week! :)
Jinjin

jakads wrote:

Jinjin's EXTRA
안녕하시옵소서 마니에라전하

00:02:048 -
00:05:798 -
노트 하나씩 추가! percussion은 여기에 안넣으려고요 ㅠㅠ

00:14:763 (14763|1,14880|0,14998|2,15056|1) - 여기 소리 안 들려요 :? 지웠습니당

00:21:619 -
00:21:736 -
노트 하나씩 추가!그냥 간단하게 1/2 비트로 놓아도 될것 같아요 :D

00:23:494 -
00:23:669 -
00:26:248 - 이건 약간 수정했습니다
노트 하나씩 더 추가! 이부분도 위와 같이 ㅠㅠ

00:26:834 - 1 없애주세요

00:27:419 -
00:39:373 -
00:39:724 -
00:41:248 -
00:41:599 -
01:55:486 - (3)
01:57:361 -

노트 하나씩 더 추가! 약간 수정하였습니다

02:05:505 (125505|1,125505|2,125740|1,125740|0,125974|2,125974|1,126209|0,126209|3) - 1/4로 한칸 늦게 옮겨주세요. 넵!


1/4로 한칸 늦게 옮겨주세요 설명이 참 뭐시기했는데
이 뜻입니다
->
모딩 감사합니다 ~
좀만 더 수정하고 보내드리겠습니다 ^^
Topic Starter
Aruel

iJinjin wrote:

좀만 더 수정하고 보내드리겠습니다 ^^
넵 셀프모딩은 중요하져
참고로 저도 그래비티 스냅이 확신이 안서기때문에... 만약에 참고하실거라면 조심하셔ㅇ읍! 읍!!
Jinjin
Topic Starter
Aruel

iJinjin wrote:

http://pastebin.com/hNrE3780 update
UPDATE!
SpectorDG
my osu lmao

Topic Starter
Aruel

SpectorDG wrote:

my osu lmao

WHAT THE FUCK O.O
SpectorDG

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

SpectorDG wrote:

my osu lmao

WHAT THE FUCK O.O
idk lol
[Crz]Player

SpectorDG wrote:

ilhamsyah849
Nice map :) i'm very like this map
but see that
Gravity
01:36:443 (96443|1,96443|1) - in column 2, there have 2 note, please delete 1
No kudosu
Frostcage


watched it in auto mode..
It missed two.
That's a either a problem or a testament X'D
Topic Starter
Aruel

Frostcage wrote:



watched it in auto mode..
It missed two.
That's a either a problem or a testament X'D
Maybe that's only your problem. It doesn't get missed on my PC. also other PCs were so.

*Edit: Damn sorry. I missed the overlap notes ;w; lol
DJPop
~BASIC~
• Very difficult to make easy diff for this kind of song :o
00:23:201 (23201|0) - make LN, end at 00:23:552 -
00:23:494 (23494|1) - remove
00:23:669 (23669|2,23904|3) - move to 00:23:552 -
00:25:544 - should add note here
00:26:130 (26130|0) - as sound goes, should really be moved to 00:26:013 -
00:26:599 (26599|1) - as sound goes, should really be moved to 00:26:716 -
00:26:834 (26834|3) - should be ended at 00:27:537 - then remove 00:27:537 (27537|2) -
00:29:412 (29412|0) - should be at 00:29:353 - or removed
01:55:662 (115662|2) - move to lane 4

~NOVICE~
00:25:544 (25544|1) - should be double note lane 1,3 instead
00:44:177 (44177|0) - if intended to match with vocal, change this note to LN and remove 00:44:294 (44294|2,44412|3) -
01:41:365 (101365|3,101443|2,101521|1,101599|0,101677|1,101755|2) - could be too hard so I'd suggest placing notes on vocal instead
01:42:654 (102654|3) - if apply to vocal, remove this note
02:05:037 (125037|2) - remove
02:05:271 (125271|3) - add note lane 3 (optional)

~ADVANCED~
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:18:337 - ^
00:21:619 - ^
00:22:673 (22673|1) - remove, no kick sounds here
01:33:220 (93220|3) - ^

~EXHAUST~
00:05:388 (5388|0,5623|1) - it's different compared to 00:01:521 -
00:11:130 (11130|3,11189|2,11248|1,11306|0) - should use LN here instead
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:17:986 (17986|1) - remove, no kick sounds here
00:21:736 (21736|0) - ^
00:22:673 (22673|2) - ^
00:44:412 (44412|0) - what sound is this LN matched to? If it's vocal, it should be started at 00:44:177 -
01:33:220 (93220|2) - remove, no kick sounds here

~Jinjin's EXTRA~
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:21:619 - ^
00:22:673 (22673|0) - remove, no kick sounds here
01:33:220 (93220|2) - ^

~Shirou's INFINITE~
00:07:849 (7849|1,7966|2) - should be short 1/2 notes instead
00:14:412 (14412|1) - doesn't look good imo, end on the same position as left-most lane and add note at 00:14:646 -
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:21:619 - ^
00:22:673 (22673|0) - remove, no kick sounds here
01:33:220 (93220|1,93220|0) - ^
01:55:486 - intended blank here?

~GRAVITY~
• Can't handle this :(
00:22:673 (22673|3,22673|0) - remove, no kick sounds here
Topic Starter
Aruel

DJPop wrote:

~BASIC~
• Very difficult to make easy diff for this kind of song :o
00:23:201 (23201|0) - make LN, end at 00:23:552 -
00:23:494 (23494|1) - remove
00:23:669 (23669|2,23904|3) - move to 00:23:552 -
00:25:544 - should add note here
00:26:130 (26130|0) - as sound goes, should really be moved to 00:26:013 -
00:26:599 (26599|1) - as sound goes, should really be moved to 00:26:716 -
00:26:834 (26834|3) - should be ended at 00:27:537 - then remove 00:27:537 (27537|2) -
00:29:412 (29412|0) - should be at 00:29:353 - or removed
01:55:662 (115662|2) - move to lane 4

~NOVICE~
00:25:544 (25544|1) - should be double note lane 1,3 instead
00:44:177 (44177|0) - if intended to match with vocal, change this note to LN and remove 00:44:294 (44294|2,44412|3) -
01:41:365 (101365|3,101443|2,101521|1,101599|0,101677|1,101755|2) - could be too hard so I'd suggest placing notes on vocal instead
01:42:654 (102654|3) - if apply to vocal, remove this note
02:05:037 (125037|2) - remove
02:05:271 (125271|3) - add note lane 3 (optional)

~ADVANCED~
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:18:337 - ^
00:21:619 - ^
00:22:673 (22673|1) - remove, no kick sounds here
01:33:220 (93220|3) - ^

~EXHAUST~
00:05:388 (5388|0,5623|1) - it's different compared to 00:01:521 -
00:11:130 (11130|3,11189|2,11248|1,11306|0) - should use LN here instead
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:17:986 (17986|1) - remove, no kick sounds here
00:21:736 (21736|0) - ^
00:22:673 (22673|2) - ^
00:44:412 (44412|0) - what sound is this LN matched to? If it's vocal, it should be started at 00:44:177 -
01:33:220 (93220|2) - remove, no kick sounds here

~Jinjin's EXTRA~
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:21:619 - ^
00:22:673 (22673|0) - remove, no kick sounds here
01:33:220 (93220|2) - ^

~Shirou's INFINITE~
00:07:849 (7849|1,7966|2) - should be short 1/2 notes instead
00:14:412 (14412|1) - doesn't look good imo, end on the same position as left-most lane and add note at 00:14:646 -
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here)
00:21:619 - ^
00:22:673 (22673|0) - remove, no kick sounds here
01:33:220 (93220|1,93220|0) - ^
01:55:486 - intended blank here?

~GRAVITY~
• Can't handle this :(
00:22:673 (22673|3,22673|0) - remove, no kick sounds here
Thank you for mod!!! :>
Jinjin

DJPop wrote:

~BASIC~

~Jinjin's EXTRA~
00:17:869 - add some notes (I noticed sound here) Added ^^
00:21:619 - ^ ^
00:22:673 (22673|0) - remove, no kick sounds here okiee
01:33:220 (93220|2) - ^ It's for the simplification of 1/8 ;w; so i'll keep it~
thanks~

http://pastebin.com/0ijSXcvR Update
Nanatsu
[Crz]Player

Nanatsu wrote:


22222222
Feerum
Would say thats the only way to pass the Gravity: https://vine.co/v/e2I1jOgr7zW

Take some stars :3/
Topic Starter
Aruel
Thanks for kudosu stars Fee!
abraker
_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ pushing mapping limits at its finest!
MadBricktree
isn't this song's BPM 512, not 256?

info source
Topic Starter
Aruel

Minseo2000 wrote:

isn't this song's BPM 512, not 256?

info source
Actually 512 but can be use with 256. Also basically BPM of Bangin' Burst is 468 too.
I don't know how much time I took same question.
MadBricktree

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Minseo2000 wrote:

isn't this song's BPM 512, not 256?

info source
Actually 512 but can be use with 256. Also basically BPM of Bangin' Burst is 468 too.
I don't know how much time I took same question.
just posted since i haven't noticed anyone mentioning it in this thread =\
GAMI
maybe this pic is good for the BG ? owo
Lirai
Hi chicken, sorry for take so long

Mods
For all Difficulty
00:25:896 - remove hitsound. no has big sound for F and C

00:40:896 (40896|2) - add C
[BASIC]
00:14:646 (14646|3) - move to 1 for more easier pattern, it will be hard to easy players

00:18:396 - ~ 00:20:037 - Change to something other pattern. It is really not fit with here

00:22:615 (22615|0) - move to 3, 00:22:263 (22263|1,22615|0) - it looks heavy only left hand

00:31:111 (31111|3) - missing whistle hitsound

00:44:646 (44646|2,44880|1,45115|2,45349|1) - try to change this pattern, too hard unnecessarily

00:45:584 - http://puu.sh/nCH55/93fbb5c596.png is more comfortable to playing

00:58:826 (58826|2,59177|1) - move to 4.1 seems much better

01:24:959 (84959|2) - move to 4, no need jack with 01:24:373 (84373|2) - this

01:38:084 (98084|1,98259|2,98435|1,98611|2) - http://puu.sh/nuzap/1cd35b6845.png is more better i think
[NOVICE]
00:02:576 (2576|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable pattern

00:11:541 (11541|1,11716|1) - move to 1, 1 is too empty and 00:11:365 (11365|1,11541|1,11716|1) - it doesn't need jack. even it is not same sound

00:14:646 (14646|0) - move to 3 ^

00:24:138 (24138|1) - remove, ADV don't have note here also i don't think normal diff needs note in here

00:27:537 (27537|2) - remove for pitch balancy, check same part

00:49:334 (49334|0) - move to 2, it will hard for normal players

00:51:677 (51677|2) - switch the column to 4, too heavy only 2.3 but seems don't have to make pattern like this

01:27:771 - http://puu.sh/nv5ED/5bbe5025e6.png

01:41:365 (101365|3,101482|2,101599|1) - does it follow the vocal only? i can hear the 1/2 vocal and 1/3 beat.

01:43:474 (103474|1) - move to 1, ^
[ADVANCED]
00:04:334 (4334|3,4451|2,4568|3,4685|2) - Try to change it, too heavy at right

00:08:962 - http://puu.sh/nuzDQ/924de509a1.png

00:22:498 - add the note. feels too empty

00:25:544 (25544|2) - move to 1, no need jack in here

00:26:834 (26834|3,26834|2,26951|0,26951|1,27185|1,27185|0,27302|2,27302|3) - suggest to use only one note each others or follow the 1/4, much fit with this sound and can reduce useless notes.

01:00:466 - change it to something other patterns, it is too unnecessarily hard pattern

01:27:771 - ^

01:20:505 (80505|1) - move to 4, looks better

01:36:736 (96736|2) - remove, it is unnecessarily i think. even other difficulties don't have note in here.

01:40:427 (100427|0) - remove for consistency your pattern

01:43:826 - http://puu.sh/nCHqW/0a408fed43.png
[EXHAUST]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - does it really have 1/4

00:10:837 - http://puu.sh/nuA2A/950a4f3c33.png

00:17:986 (17986|1) - should be 00:17:869 - here i guess

00:20:388 (20388|0,20447|1,20505|2,20564|1,20623|0) - ctrl + h, 00:20:095 (20095|0,20271|0,20388|0) - it is too heavy

00:24:959 (24959|1) - move to 3 00:24:841 (24841|1,24959|1,25076|1,25193|1) - ^

00:33:513 (33513|0) - move to 2, just my personal suggestion.

01:15:935 (75935|2) - move to 1, seems more comfortable

01:24:841 - add one, same sound with 01:24:373 (84373|0,84373|1,84548|1,84548|2,84724|3,84724|2) -

02:01:052 - ~ 02:01:990 - i don't think it has 1/4 sound
[Jinjin's EXTRA]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH, does it have 1/4?

00:09:021 (9021|3) - move to 1, seems more comfortable.

00:28:767 - add one to 4? seems better

00:33:630 - 00:34:099 - add a one note each others, here has big sound also hitsound too. 00:37:380 - this part is kinda similar part and you used two notes without 00:38:318 - here

01:15:349 (75349|2) - normal note is more better, no has ln sound i think
[Shirou's INFINITE]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH

00:22:380 (22380|3,22439|2) - suggest to remove this, unnecessary note i think

00:26:013 (26013|3) - move to 3, seems more better

00:27:009 (27009|1,27361|2) - these two notes are should be nm note.

00:37:439 - missing note

01:32:634 (92634|2) - remove this or 01:32:400 - add a one note here for consistency your pattern

01:38:201 (98201|2) - remove W, W hitsound should be 01:38:318 (98318|2) - here
[GRAVITY]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH

00:19:099 (19099|3) - move to 3, 00:18:865 (18865|3,18982|3,19099|3,19216|3) - it's too long

00:19:216 (19216|0) - move to 2, 00:19:099 (19099|0,19216|0,19334|0,19451|0) - same reason

00:20:037 (20037|3,20037|2,20095|1,20095|0,20154|3,20154|2,20212|0,20212|1) - ctrl + h and 00:20:271 (20271|3,20271|2,20271|1) - make it 124 notes. for making consistency on your pattern

00:25:310 (25310|3,25310|1,25369|0,25369|2,25427|3,25427|1) - 23-14-23 is be better i think, nicely fit with 00:25:076 (25076|0,25076|3,25134|2,25134|1,25193|0,25193|3) - this

00:25:896 (25896|0,25896|1) - remove one note, don't have big sound for using two notes here

00:45:701 (45701|1,45701|2,45759|3,45759|0,45818|1,45818|2,45876|0,45876|3,46052|2,46052|3,46111|0,46111|1,46169|2,46169|3,46228|1,46228|0) - it is too overmapped imo, it is just scratch sound so no need two notes

01:13:865 (73865|1,74021|2,74177|3) - ctrl + h, seems more better i think, just my personal suggestion

01:35:974 (95974|2) - move to 2, 01:35:623 (95623|2,95740|2,95857|2,95974|2,96091|2,96209|2,96326|2,96443|2) - toooo long

01:38:787 (98787|0,98845|1,98904|0,98962|1) - stairs pattern is more better, really fit with this part and looks nice

01:44:294 (104294|1,104294|2,104412|3,104412|1) - seems you are just following vocal but two notes are too overed i think. reduce a one note each others

02:01:052 - ~ 02:01:990 - i don't think it has 1/4 sound
Topic Starter
Aruel

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi chicken, sorry for take so long

Mods
For all Difficulty
00:25:896 - remove hitsound. no has big sound for F and C

00:40:896 (40896|2) - add C
[BASIC]
00:14:646 (14646|3) - move to 1 for more easier pattern, it will be hard to easy players

00:18:396 - ~ 00:20:037 - Change to something other pattern. It is really not fit with here

00:22:615 (22615|0) - move to 3, 00:22:263 (22263|1,22615|0) - it looks heavy only left hand

00:31:111 (31111|3) - missing whistle hitsound

00:44:646 (44646|2,44880|1,45115|2,45349|1) - try to change this pattern, too hard unnecessarily

00:45:584 - http://puu.sh/nCH55/93fbb5c596.png is more comfortable to playing

00:58:826 (58826|2,59177|1) - move to 4.1 seems much better

01:24:959 (84959|2) - move to 4, no need jack with 01:24:373 (84373|2) - this

01:38:084 (98084|1,98259|2,98435|1,98611|2) - http://puu.sh/nuzap/1cd35b6845.png is more better i think
[NOVICE]
00:02:576 (2576|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable pattern

00:11:541 (11541|1,11716|1) - move to 1, 1 is too empty and 00:11:365 (11365|1,11541|1,11716|1) - it doesn't need jack. even it is not same sound

00:14:646 (14646|0) - move to 3 ^

00:24:138 (24138|1) - remove, ADV don't have note here also i don't think normal diff needs note in here

00:27:537 (27537|2) - remove for pitch balancy, check same part

00:49:334 (49334|0) - move to 2, it will hard for normal players

00:51:677 (51677|2) - switch the column to 4, too heavy only 2.3 but seems don't have to make pattern like this

01:27:771 - http://puu.sh/nv5ED/5bbe5025e6.png

01:41:365 (101365|3,101482|2,101599|1) - does it follow the vocal only? i can hear the 1/2 vocal and 1/3 beat.

01:43:474 (103474|1) - move to 1, ^
[ADVANCED]
00:04:334 (4334|3,4451|2,4568|3,4685|2) - Try to change it, too heavy at right

00:08:962 - http://puu.sh/nuzDQ/924de509a1.png

00:22:498 - add the note. feels too empty

00:25:544 (25544|2) - move to 1, no need jack in here

00:26:834 (26834|3,26834|2,26951|0,26951|1,27185|1,27185|0,27302|2,27302|3) - suggest to use only one note each others or follow the 1/4, much fit with this sound and can reduce useless notes.

01:00:466 - change it to something other patterns, it is too unnecessarily hard pattern

01:27:771 - ^

01:20:505 (80505|1) - move to 4, looks better

01:36:736 (96736|2) - remove, it is unnecessarily i think. even other difficulties don't have note in here.

01:40:427 (100427|0) - remove for consistency your pattern

01:43:826 - http://puu.sh/nCHqW/0a408fed43.png
[EXHAUST]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - does it really have 1/4

00:10:837 - http://puu.sh/nuA2A/950a4f3c33.png

00:17:986 (17986|1) - should be 00:17:869 - here i guess

00:20:388 (20388|0,20447|1,20505|2,20564|1,20623|0) - ctrl + h, 00:20:095 (20095|0,20271|0,20388|0) - it is too heavy

00:24:959 (24959|1) - move to 3 00:24:841 (24841|1,24959|1,25076|1,25193|1) - ^

00:33:513 (33513|0) - move to 2, just my personal suggestion.

01:15:935 (75935|2) - move to 1, seems more comfortable

01:24:841 - add one, same sound with 01:24:373 (84373|0,84373|1,84548|1,84548|2,84724|3,84724|2) -

02:01:052 - ~ 02:01:990 - i don't think it has 1/4 sound
[GRAVITY]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH

00:19:099 (19099|3) - move to 3, 00:18:865 (18865|3,18982|3,19099|3,19216|3) - it's too long

00:19:216 (19216|0) - move to 2, 00:19:099 (19099|0,19216|0,19334|0,19451|0) - same reason

00:20:037 (20037|3,20037|2,20095|1,20095|0,20154|3,20154|2,20212|0,20212|1) - ctrl + h and 00:20:271 (20271|3,20271|2,20271|1) - make it 124 notes. for making consistency on your pattern

00:25:310 (25310|3,25310|1,25369|0,25369|2,25427|3,25427|1) - 23-14-23 is be better i think, nicely fit with 00:25:076 (25076|0,25076|3,25134|2,25134|1,25193|0,25193|3) - this

00:25:896 (25896|0,25896|1) - remove one note, don't have big sound for using two notes here

00:45:701 (45701|1,45701|2,45759|3,45759|0,45818|1,45818|2,45876|0,45876|3,46052|2,46052|3,46111|0,46111|1,46169|2,46169|3,46228|1,46228|0) - it is too overmapped imo, it is just scratch sound so no need two notes

01:13:865 (73865|1,74021|2,74177|3) - ctrl + h, seems more better i think, just my personal suggestion

01:35:974 (95974|2) - move to 2, 01:35:623 (95623|2,95740|2,95857|2,95974|2,96091|2,96209|2,96326|2,96443|2) - toooo long

01:38:787 (98787|0,98845|1,98904|0,98962|1) - stairs pattern is more better, really fit with this part and looks nice

01:44:294 (104294|1,104294|2,104412|3,104412|1) - seems you are just following vocal but two notes are too overed i think. reduce a one note each others

02:01:052 - ~ 02:01:990 - i don't think it has 1/4 sound

Thanks for checking CADE!! No reply means fix! That means all fixed!!
Pang
안돼
Jinjin

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi chicken, sorry for take so long
[Jinjin's EXTRA]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH, does it have 1/4? Removed places where 1/4 was not audible

00:09:021 (9021|3) - move to 1, seems more comfortable. Applied

00:28:767 - add one to 4? seems better Added

00:33:630 - 00:34:099 - add a one note each others, here has big sound also hitsound too. 00:37:380 - this part is kinda similar part and you used two notes without 00:38:318 - here Emphasized some different parts instead, i think this works better

01:15:349 (75349|2) - normal note is more better, no has ln sound i think changed the LNs a bit
Thanks~

Update: http://pastebin.com/0DUhEqzX
Topic Starter
Aruel
Updated Jinjin's and Shirou's difficulties.
Shirou can't fix his difficulty due to his irl so I took it instead him. All applied!
Lirai
Last Check before bubble

[NOVICE]
00:43:709 (43709|0,43943|1,44177|2) - I suggest u to change this into LN instead of stair

[ADVANCED]
00:07:263 - add to 3
00:07:498 - add to 2, missing 1/4

00:08:787 - add to 4
00:09:724 - add to 2
00:10:662 - add to 4, should represent the scratch sound here, also good for hit timing for player

00:27:771 (27771|1,27888|3) - delete this double
00:27:830 - add to 3 for short stair instead

[EXHAUST]
00:13:709 - http://puu.sh/nPYM1/9635154198.jpg
01:28:709 - http://puu.sh/nPZ4L/68c68bfccd.jpg , better pattern instead kamui
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