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CINDERELLA PROJECT - Shine!!

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Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Feb
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 21. September 2015 at 19:54:55

Artist: CINDERELLA PROJECT
Title: Shine!!
Source: ???????? ????????? 2nd????
Tags: THE IDOLM@STER GIRLS 2nd SEASON synpoo taku opening theme tv size moe train
BPM: 174
Filesize: 2851kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,79 stars, 423 notes)
  2. Normal (1,94 stars, 128 notes)
  3. Synpoo's Hard (3,27 stars, 268 notes)
  4. taku's Extra (4,57 stars, 112 notes)
Download: CINDERELLA PROJECT - Shine!!
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to moe for me

somebody get me down from this moetrain.
THAT 17 YEAR OLD LOLI HOLYSHIT

I'd appreciate it if someone can give me the video - I'll love you forever.

taku's something extra: wip i think <= dont mod this
Last edited by Feb , edited 12 times in total.
Synpoo
616 posts
Joined August 2013
Synpoo
hi

might need to fix spread but w/e, it's easier to increase sr than lower sr imo: http://puu.sh/jVz5J/b6ec1ba94f.rar
hope you like it xd
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Feb
wtf why u so fast - the god.
thank you!
Kbuns
91 posts
Joined July 2014
Kbuns
Hi there, m4m from your queue :)

Said not to mod the Easy so I won't.

Normal
00:01:544 (2,4) - Slight overlap, consider repositioning (2). Don't forget to fix (3) blanket if you do
00:04:647 (1) - Make this more symmetrical please :'(. http://puu.sh/jWMNf/27a2a1348e.jpg
00:14:303 (1,3) - Fix blanket http://puu.sh/jWMTt/4d39bede11.jpg
00:18:268 (3) - Uneven http://puu.sh/jWMWa/11e4a1f9ee.jpg
00:19:820 (1,3) - Ugly overlapping please fix
00:21:544 (5,1) - If you want to try and overlap like this, be more careful about the placement of the slider body. It's uneven with the slider head and end of (1) and it looks really bad.
00:22:578 (1,2,3) - Really ugly overlapping, I'd suggest outright changing the pattern.
00:24:475 - Why is this empty? Either put a circle here or make (4) a reverse slider.
00:24:647 (1) - Boring slider. Try some slider art here?
00:42:578 (6) - Symmetrical please
00:43:268 (7) - ^
00:46:716 (4) - Unsnapped. End slider here 00:47:406 -
01:10:510 (3) - Make this slider symmetrical please
01:12:578 (1) -
01:07:751 - I'd remove this finish. It emphasizes a reverse arrow which doesn't make much sense here.
01:08:441 (6) - Remove all finishes on this slider.
00:24:647 (1) - Don't like this finish either. The one on the slider end is ok.
00:34:820 - Consider removing finish
00:35:682 (1) - Finish does not belong here. This is a pickup note. If anything, it should be here: 00:36:199 -
00:42:234 (5) - Remove imo
01:00:337 (6) - Consider adding a finish on this slider head. Similar rhythm as this where you placed a finish 00:59:130 (4) -
01:00:854 (7) - I would remove the finish on this slider end and add one here: 01:01:889 (1) - This makes the finishes on this reverse slider 01:03:268 (5) - sound like it's trying to build up the music more effectively. Good b/c leading into kiai time
01:17:061 (5,1) - Consecutive finishes like this diminish the effectiveness of the finish. Consider removal of the finish on (1) since it's a long beat the doesn't require much emphasis.
01:19:475 - This finish sounds random.
01:26:027 (1) - Think about removing finish.
01:26:027 (1,3) - Pretty bad overlap. Consider fixing.
This diff needs a good amount of polishing. Good start in terms of playability, but aesthetically it needs work.
My little bit about hitsounding: I try to avoid placing finishes on beats one and three because those are generally weaker beats than two and four. For me, the primary reason to add a finish is to emphasize a note, but most of the time, when you do this on beats 1 and 3, it sounds pretty weird when you do so. However, this is not to say that you should never place finishes on beats 1 and 3, just do so when there is a well defined note that should be emphasized, i.e. not a pick-up. Take this comment how you will.

Synpoo's Hard
00:02:923 (2) - Space this out? Feels crowded
00:22:923 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Honestly, I love what you did with 00:22:923 (2,3,4) - but it feels like a waste to not use that rhythm twice. It's clear that the main reason you chose to do this is because there's a well defined rest here: 00:23:268 - but, with such an unusual rhythm, it feels out of place if it's not repeated. Obviously what you have is fine, but this is my personal preference.
00:23:958 (2,3) - Consider using 1.4x DS instead of 1.3 on these to make the spacing consistent.
00:27:578 (1,2,3) - I hate the way this flows. I'd like to see you replace (1,2) with a 1/2 slider that flows into (3). Alternatively, you could stack them all on (3). I just don't think that there should be a change in spacing like this here.
01:03:958 (1) - Consider spacing this out? I don't like the way it looks/reads.
01:11:027 (2) - Consider stacking this on (3). This circle has no musical relation to the slider end that it's stacked under so the stack doesn't make much sense to me.
01:12:578 (3,1) - Make parallel please
01:21:544 (1) - I'd prefer you changed this slider to a 1/2 slider and added a circle where the slider end currently is. Having a 1/1 slider here shoots down the 1/2 rhythm that you've been building up and doesn't make much sense aside from suiting the vocals better while hurting playability.
01:28:958 (3) - I'd like to see you space this out. Give the last note some room to breathe :'(

Insane
00:04:475 (1,2,3) - This triplet feels forced. No noteable 1/4 here
00:06:544 (1,2,3) - ^
00:14:992 (1,2,3) - ^
Strongly recommend removing the triplets and just making it a 1/2 rhythm
00:16:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm here needs serious revision. See: http://puu.sh/jWP8t/3d63e00f70.jpg
00:19:475 (6,1,2) - If you really want to do this rhythm, I strongly recommend the removal of (1) to make it more playable.
00:24:647 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Although I like your idea here, not enough changes in the music to warrant a DS increase during the stream. A mere direction change should suffice.
00:27:234 (6) - Space this out. You have so much room to work with, don't stack unless you have to :'(
00:30:165 - The 1/4 actually starts here.
00:31:716 (1) - Remove the finish on this slider head. Sounds really bad.
00:31:544 (4) - Move finish to this sliderhead
00:34:820 (2,1) - Awkward, forced rhythm.
00:39:820 (1) - Remove random finish
00:47:061 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream looks really bad. Convert slider to stream please. If you're going to stack a triplet at the beginning of the stream, you should use a higher DS for the rest of the stream so it's easy to discern when you should move your cursor.
00:45:682 (1,2) - Overmap
00:51:889 (5,1) - Blanket
01:01:199 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Awkward to play. Space (1) away. and move it to start here: 01:01:889 - Then, add a circle here: 01:01:716 -
01:03:268 (8,1,2) - (8) should definitely be stacked with (1,2). It's a silly mistake not to.
01:03:958 (1) - Recommend spacing this away.
01:04:647 (1,3) - Pretty bad overlap
01:07:751 (1,2,3) - Triplet not recommended here.
01:09:475 (4,7,1) - Stack properly
01:10:510 (2,3,4) - Extremely awkward. You should only start a triplet on a white tick in rare circumstances. Additionally, if you're going to put 1/4 where it doesn't belong, you should put in on an up-beat so that it emphasizes the next downbeat like this: http://puu.sh/jWPOo/8a2b8d7777.jpg try that rhythm <<
01:12:234 (1) - Space this out. No reason to be so cramped here.
01:12:923 (2) - So much finish spam :'( remove please
01:13:613 (2) - ^
01:15:337 (8) - Should be finish here, fits the rhythm of your other placements.
01:19:475 (1,2,3) - Blaaghghghhgh don't do this :'(
01:22:578 (3) - Remove finish
01:22:923 (5) - Move the finish here if you want
01:27:406 (5,6,7) - Remove, this rhythm: http://puu.sh/jWQ2F/8dae0814b5.jpg
01:28:441 (9) - Remove clap
01:28:958 (3) - Add finish if you like
gl~
Synpoo
616 posts
Joined August 2013
Synpoo

Kbuns wrote:

Hi there, m4m from your queue :)

Synpoo's Hard
00:02:923 (2) - Space this out? Feels crowded mmk, just a bit
00:22:923 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Honestly, I love what you did with 00:22:923 (2,3,4) - but it feels like a waste to not use that rhythm twice. It's clear that the main reason you chose to do this is because there's a well defined rest here: 00:23:268 - but, with such an unusual rhythm, it feels out of place if it's not repeated. Obviously what you have is fine, but this is my personal preference. ye can't skip the beat at 00:24:303 though
00:23:958 (2,3) - Consider using 1.4x DS instead of 1.3 on these to make the spacing consistent. no, 3 is clearly the stronger beat which is why i increased spacing from 2->3
00:27:578 (1,2,3) - I hate the way this flows. I'd like to see you replace (1,2) with a 1/2 slider that flows into (3). Alternatively, you could stack them all on (3). I just don't think that there should be a change in spacing like this here. nah, 1/2 slider plays bad there because it would be a passive slider, two circles are also better to represent the sharp syllables on each beat and the spacing provides emphasis for the held vocal
01:03:958 (1) - Consider spacing this out? I don't like the way it looks/reads. no, looks and reads (and plays) 100% fine
01:11:027 (2) - Consider stacking this on (3). This circle has no musical relation to the slider end that it's stacked under so the stack doesn't make much sense to me. a stack on 3 would make even less sense since a jump from 1->2 with none on 3 makes zero sense since 2/3 are completely different instruments (bass drum/snare drum). Also, the end of the slider and 2 both have bass drum hits which is the reason for the stack
01:12:578 (3,1) - Make parallel please mk
01:21:544 (1) - I'd prefer you changed this slider to a 1/2 slider and added a circle where the slider end currently is. Having a 1/1 slider here shoots down the 1/2 rhythm that you've been building up and doesn't make much sense aside from suiting the vocals better while hurting playability. plays fine tbh, the bass drum on the red here is barely barely audible so there's no reason to follow it when i could follow a more dominant vocal
01:28:958 (3) - I'd like to see you space this out. Give the last note some room to breathe :'( change the pattern a bit, was a little hard anyway

gl~
thx

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Artist:CINDERELLA PROJECT
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Creator:Feb
Version:Synpoo's Hard
Source:アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ 2ndシーズン
Tags:THE IDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS 2nd SEASON synpoo taku opening theme tv size moe train
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Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Feb

Kbuns wrote:

Hi there, m4m from your queue :)

Said not to mod the Easy so I won't.

Normal
00:01:544 (2,4) - Slight overlap, consider repositioning (2). Don't forget to fix (3) blanket if you do hnrg
00:04:647 (1) - Make this more symmetrical please :'(. http://puu.sh/jWMNf/27a2a1348e.jpg sure, i find it okay, but w/e right.
00:14:303 (1,3) - Fix blanket http://puu.sh/jWMTt/4d39bede11.jpg This was not originally meant as a blanket to the slider above but, since 3 fits in there aswell.. daheg.
00:18:268 (3) - Uneven http://puu.sh/jWMWa/11e4a1f9ee.jpg its fine in my opinion.
00:19:820 (1,3) - Ugly overlapping please fix hrng
00:21:544 (5,1) - If you want to try and overlap like this, be more careful about the placement of the slider body. It's uneven with the slider head and end of (1) and it looks really bad. it's okay imo.
00:22:578 (1,2,3) - Really ugly overlapping, I'd suggest outright changing the pattern.nah I like the pattern and the overlapping isn't to bad. It supports the music well.
00:24:475 - Why is this empty? Either put a circle here or make (4) a reverse slider. wups i forgot to make this repeat again after I reworked that pattern once.
00:24:647 (1) - Boring slider. Try some slider art here? I quite like this slider in this case.
00:42:578 (6) - Symmetrical please na I like how it is.
00:43:268 (7) - ^ ^
00:46:716 (4) - Unsnapped. End slider here 00:47:406 - whoops
01:10:510 (3) - Make this slider symmetrical please was thinking about it but nah.
01:12:578 (1) - ^
01:07:751 - I'd remove this finish. It emphasizes a reverse arrow which doesn't make much sense here. ok set whistle instead on the end.
01:08:441 (6) - Remove all finishes on this slider. yea lol
00:24:647 (1) - Don't like this finish either. The one on the slider end is ok. i think both are okay, but if someone else saying it I'll change it.
00:34:820 - Consider removing finish sure
00:35:682 (1) - Finish does not belong here. This is a pickup note. If anything, it should be here: 00:36:199 -sure
00:42:234 (5) - Remove imo no lol
01:00:337 (6) - Consider adding a finish on this slider head. Similar rhythm as this where you placed a finish 00:59:130 (4) - sure
01:00:854 (7) - I would remove the finish on this slider end and add one here: 01:01:889 (1) - This makes the finishes on this reverse slider 01:03:268 (5) - sound like it's trying to build up the music more effectively. Good b/c leading into kiai time agree on 7 rest no so much.
01:17:061 (5,1) - Consecutive finishes like this diminish the effectiveness of the finish. Consider removal of the finish on (1) since it's a long beat the doesn't require much emphasis. nh did whistle instead.
01:19:475 - This finish sounds random. it doesn't sound random it is. :)
01:26:027 (1) - Think about removing finish. hnrg ok.
01:26:027 (1,3) - Pretty bad overlap. Consider fixing. it's okay imo
This diff needs a good amount of polishing. Good start in terms of playability, but aesthetically it needs work.
My little bit about hitsounding: I try to avoid placing finishes on beats one and three because those are generally weaker beats than two and four. For me, the primary reason to add a finish is to emphasize a note, but most of the time, when you do this on beats 1 and 3, it sounds pretty weird when you do so. However, this is not to say that you should never place finishes on beats 1 and 3, just do so when there is a well defined note that should be emphasized, i.e. not a pick-up. Take this comment how you will. hitsoundcopier is a cunt.

Insane
00:04:475 (1,2,3) - This triplet feels forced. No noteable 1/4 here vocal?
00:06:544 (1,2,3) - ^ ok.
00:14:992 (1,2,3) - ^ i hear notes there.
Strongly recommend removing the triplets and just making it a 1/2 rhythm
00:16:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm here needs serious revision. See: http://puu.sh/jWP8t/3d63e00f70.jpg did sth else
00:19:475 (6,1,2) - If you really want to do this rhythm, I strongly recommend the removal of (1) to make it more playable. why lol completely fine atm
00:24:647 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Although I like your idea here, not enough changes in the music to warrant a DS increase during the stream. A mere direction change should suffice. I like how it is atm.
00:27:234 (6) - Space this out. You have so much room to work with, don't stack unless you have to :'( it's supposed to be a stack nothing wrong with. Just because I have room it doesn't mean I have to use ;).
00:30:165 - The 1/4 actually starts here. whoops
00:31:716 (1) - Remove the finish on this slider head. Sounds really bad. wether or not it sounds bad, but is meant to be there.
00:31:544 (4) - Move finish to this sliderhead why there's no crashsound at all.
00:34:820 (2,1) - Awkward, forced rhythm. not really
00:39:820 (1) - Remove random finish sure
00:47:061 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream looks really bad. Convert slider to stream please. If you're going to stack a triplet at the beginning of the stream, you should use a higher DS for the rest of the stream so it's easy to discern when you should move your cursor. this part is calm i can't have higher DS here, I like how the stream is done imo.
00:45:682 (1,2) - Overmap no, listen again.
00:51:889 (5,1) - Blanket no, look at the pattern what i wanted to do here. A blanket is not possible in the case I want.
01:01:199 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Awkward to play. Space (1) away. and move it to start here: 01:01:889 - Then, add a circle here: 01:01:716 - Yea I don't like this either, I was working on this quite some time now and I think i found good solution - I didn't like your idea, tho.
01:03:268 (8,1,2) - (8) should definitely be stacked with (1,2). It's a silly mistake not to. When I mapped it first, I did that, but if you listen closely to all 3 notes the first one sounds very different from the other 2, so the change was worth it it plays good.
01:03:958 (1) - Recommend spacing this away. wups I wanted originally this to look different. Changed it to what I actually wanted.
01:04:647 (1,3) - Pretty bad overlap its actually neat.
01:07:751 (1,2,3) - Triplet not recommended here. why ? it's fine.
01:09:475 (4,7,1) - Stack properly it's poorly overlapped not stacked :^)
01:10:510 (2,3,4) - Extremely awkward. You should only start a triplet on a white tick in rare circumstances. Additionally, if you're going to put 1/4 where it doesn't belong, you should put in on an up-beat so that it emphasizes the next downbeat like this: http://puu.sh/jWPOo/8a2b8d7777.jpg try that rhythm << wat it's completely fine? I emphasize the trumpet with the triplet.
01:12:234 (1) - Space this out. No reason to be so cramped here. I don't understand this one :o
01:12:923 (2) - So much finish spam :'( remove please nh... agree partially on this one.
01:13:613 (2) - ^ ^
01:15:337 (8) - Should be finish here, fits the rhythm of your other placements. why? there is no crashsound. or sth like that
01:19:475 (1,2,3) - Blaaghghghhgh don't do this :'( why it fits.
01:22:578 (3) - Remove finish why so
01:22:923 (5) - Move the finish here if you want ya why not sounds like a crash.
01:27:406 (5,6,7) - Remove, this rhythm: http://puu.sh/jWQ2F/8dae0814b5.jpg why should i do that. this would break the flow pretty badly.
01:28:441 (9) - Remove clap hrng.
01:28:958 (3) - Add finish if you like sure
gl~
thanks for mod~
updated.
Makeli
932 posts
Joined October 2013
Makeli
Hi! M4M from your queue.
These are all somewhat suggestions and are mostly me being a nazi.

[Normal]

Check AiMod for unsnapped slider end
00:10:165 (1) - Return point should be on the white tick
00:21:544 (5,1) - Ugly overlap
00:59:130 (4,5) - This kind of overlap is just too much
01:06:716 (4,5) - ^
01:09:475 (1,2) - ^
To be honest almost all of the overlaps this diff has might be a bit difficult for a player rank 350k

[Hard]

Your kiai time bullshit conflicts with the other diffs. (Don't really know if it effects this mapset being ranked)
00:23:268 - I really feel like there should be a note here
Holy shit dude really well done map didn't really find anything else.

[Insane]

00:07:406 (6,8) - I would probably just stack these looks a bit awkward to me like that.
00:17:234 (6) - Stack this to 00:17:578 (1) - ? Looks awkward to me again.
00:19:475 (6,1,2) - Spacing with these plays awkward (maybe I just suck)
00:22:578 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - No claps and finishes in this thingy. Add whistles to 00:22:578 (1,1,2,1,2) - and remove every other whistle I didn't mention. Sounds better imo.
00:32:406 (4) - Would stack this to 00:32:751 (6) -
00:34:303 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Plays awkwardly. Especially the spacing with 00:34:303 (1,2,1) -
00:42:234 (7,8,1) - Awkward spacing again. I'd suggest you do all of these like 00:45:337 (2,3) - with 1.7x DS
00:49:130 (4) - Move closer to 00:49:475 (1) - or stack
00:49:820 (2) - ^ to 00:50:165 (4) - or stack
00:53:268 (3,1,2) - Last one of these that I'll point out you know what to do.
01:01:716 (1) - Add some distance to the 5 note burst before.
01:03:268 (8,1) - Huuuuuge jump all of a sudden
01:05:682 (5) - Closer to 01:06:027 (7) - or stack
01:11:889 (8,1) - Just stack these two
01:14:820 (5,6) - These two are too close
01:16:889 (8) - x:156 y:140
01:18:441 (4,5) - This jump feels awkward to me. Maybe go for something like this:
Highlighted notes
01:28:613 (1,2,3) - Holy shit huge jump. Maybe a bit smaller jump would be okay for an insane
Synpoo
616 posts
Joined August 2013
Synpoo

Maakkeli wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue.
These are all somewhat suggestions and are mostly me being a nazi.

[Hard]

Your kiai time bullshit conflicts with the other diffs. (Don't really know if it effects this mapset being ranked) since it's a guest diff i can have kiai time differ from the main mapper
00:23:268 - I really feel like there should be a note here no, there's a very clear pause in the rhythm that i'm following
Holy shit dude really well done map didn't really find anything else. thx xd
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Feb
Maakkeli

Maakkeli wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue.
These are all somewhat suggestions and are mostly me being a nazi.

[Normal]

Check AiMod for unsnapped slider end fixed from previous mod
00:10:165 (1) - Return point should be on the white tick why there's no sound
00:21:544 (5,1) - Ugly overlap overlaps aren't ugly especially not this one and flows fine imo.
00:59:130 (4,5) - This kind of overlap is just too much sliderhead and sliderend are seen which is important.
01:06:716 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:09:475 (1,2) - ^ ^
To be honest almost all of the overlaps this diff has might be a bit difficult for a player rank 350k I don't think so.

[Insane]

00:07:406 (6,8) - I would probably just stack these looks a bit awkward to me like that. nah I want it like that.
00:17:234 (6) - Stack this to 00:17:578 (1) - ? Looks awkward to me again. this flows bad I stack it on 00:16:199 (2,6) - here
00:19:475 (6,1,2) - Spacing with these plays awkward (maybe I just suck) fine
00:22:578 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - No claps and finishes in this thingy. Add whistles to 00:22:578 (1,1,2,1,2) - and remove every other whistle I didn't mention. Sounds better imo. i want to stay linear with my hitsounds in my diffs. so I have the clap where I need them and my fnishes as well the whistles are to often in this case. The beat itself emphasizes this section enough. No need for overusing whistles.
00:32:406 (4) - Would stack this to 00:32:751 (6) - would destroy the overlaps and then it'd look like shit. :/
00:34:303 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Plays awkwardly. Especially the spacing with 00:34:303 (1,2,1) - how so?
00:42:234 (7,8,1) - Awkward spacing again. I'd suggest you do all of these like 00:45:337 (2,3) - with 1.7x DS the spacing is fine.
00:49:130 (4) - Move closer to 00:49:475 (1) - or stack overlap is fine imo
00:49:820 (2) - ^ to 00:50:165 (4) - or stack ^
00:53:268 (3,1,2) - Last one of these that I'll point out you know what to do. yea they are fine.
01:01:716 (1) - Add some distance to the 5 note burst before. distance is enough for insane in my opinion.
01:03:268 (8,1) - Huuuuuge jump all of a sudden no? it's right before kiai lol its not like suddenly I'm leading to it.
01:05:682 (5) - Closer to 01:06:027 (7) - or stack they are ok.
01:11:889 (8,1) - Just stack these two why. No reason to. I didn't space it bcs of the short pause.
01:14:820 (5,6) - These two are too close I don't think so.
01:16:889 (8) - x:156 y:140 nah.. i tried. I like the current.
01:18:441 (4,5) - This jump feels awkward to me. Maybe go for something like this: uhh.. I think this is okay. I'll change if someone else points it out.

01:28:613 (1,2,3) - Holy shit huge jump. Maybe a bit smaller jump would be okay for an insane reduced it a little bit.

Thanks
Toyosaki
102 posts
Joined May 2013
Toyosaki
Hi, nm requested from my queue~!

General

  1. Every screenshot I make are ideas that can be grasp of your way! I will in any case forces you to do the same.
  2. Nothing to say in overall diff, all good.

Normal

01:00:854 (7)- I suggest you to bend the slider a little bit, end tail 288;176, and add or not an mid tail, 292;120?
01:14:130 (3)- Change the form? Because it's a bad "S" imo; http://puu.sh/k1A3p/74dde79266.jpg
01:27:751 (1)- Better form? well placed the "S", top tail 244;144, bot tail 92;184 and end tail 184;300? You can do better i think. c:

Nice diff~!

Insane

00:11:027 (4)- Maybe bend it to south and curve it a little bit? like this; http://puu.sh/k1Apt/8f6c20a299.jpg
00:19:820 (1)- I don't know about this, it match the song, the flow is here, but.. It's like you can make it different.
00:31:630- That note don't fit with the song, maybe try to del previous 1/4 slider, and put one note instead 00:31:544- ?
01:07:837 (2)- i suggest you to del this, cuz it's overmapping right here and nothing to support that. Stack 01:07:751 (1)- with the slider?

Good diff, really!

Well, good luck for ranking and sorry for delay. c:
Yataii! :D
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Feb

dekutai wrote:

Hi, nm requested from my queue~!

General

  1. Every screenshot I make are ideas that can be grasp of your way! I will in any case forces you to do the same.I think I'm to retarded to understand what you meant :^O
  2. Nothing to say in overall diff, all good. nice

Normal

01:00:854 (7)- I suggest you to bend the slider a little bit, end tail 288;176, and add or not an mid tail, 292;120? I think the straight slider is fine imo.
01:14:130 (3)- Change the form? Because it's a bad "S" imo; http://puu.sh/k1A3p/74dde79266.jpg ya adjusted slightly
01:27:751 (1)- Better form? well placed the "S", top tail 244;144, bot tail 92;184 and end tail 184;300? You can do better i think. c: ya i like this

Nice diff~!

Insane

00:11:027 (4)- Maybe bend it to south and curve it a little bit? like this; http://puu.sh/k1Apt/8f6c20a299.jpg dunno I think I wanna stay consistent here.
00:19:820 (1)- I don't know about this, it match the song, the flow is here, but.. It's like you can make it different. ya dunno I like this part imo but I adjusted the slider before so It's easier to hit imo.
00:31:630- That note don't fit with the song, maybe try to del previous 1/4 slider, and put one note instead 00:31:544- ? I hear sounds here imo and it plays fine imo.
01:07:837 (2)- i suggest you to del this, cuz it's overmapping right here and nothing to support that. Stack 01:07:751 (1)- with the slider? ? I mapped it to trumpet the stack is fine imo.

Good diff, really!

Well, good luck for ranking and sorry for delay. c:
Yataii! :D
Thank you!
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
kunka
From your Q.

General

※There is "toomoeforme.avi", However it doesn't reflection. Please put it again.
SPOILER
※Please hear a metronome from 00:26:027 - . I think that it understand that 1/2 beat is shift. It see 00:31:544 (9,1) - of the "Normal diff" and understand it. NC is clearly strange. I recommend the redraw of the line to a beat again here.
Normal

※Please remove "Widescreen support".
00:01:889 (3) - NC is necessary here.

00:06:027 (2,3) - Please surround it neatly.
SPOILER

00:06:716 (3) - NC?

00:20:337 (2,3) - I think that the double of the 1/2 slider is difficult. I recommend 1/1 slider.
SPOILER

00:28:785 (5) - NC is necessary here.

00:30:510 (8) - This thinks that 2 beat sliders are most suitable. And I think that it is not necessary to take rhythm of the 00:31:372 - . You could add clap if finished in 00:31:199 - .

00:34:303 (4) - Would you switch to a repeat slider? This could continue a flow.

00:36:199 (2) - I think that it is not necessary to prolong it to 00:36:889 - . 00:36:716 - is better.

00:41:716 (4,5,6) - This flow is very difficult in the "Normal diff". I recommend that I change the 00:42:234 - to the circle.

00:52:234 (7,8) - I felt it in strange rhythm. How about this?

01:03:268 (5) - When arrange it in x208 y304, is beautiful.
SPOILER

01:06:716 (4,5) - It's hard to look at a reverse part in overlap. I recommend that I bend little 01:07:406 (5) - to the right.

01:20:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - A flow and placement(overlap) are not good. How about this? Point 1: It perform stack in 01:20:854 (2,3) - in 01:19:130 (3) - .
Point 2: It perform stack the 01:22:234 (5) - on a tail of the 01:21:544 (4) - .
SPOILER

01:23:958 (1,2,3,4) - This flow is very difficult in the "Normal diff". I recommend that I change the 01:24:992 (3) - to the circle.
Synpoo's Hard

00:11:544 (1) - I think that the next 00:13:441 (1) - is short until. Would you do 00:12:923 - at the end?

00:24:820 (1) - ^ . Would you do 00:25:854 - at the end?

00:31:544 (5,1) - I think that NC is reverse.

00:32:923 (5,1) - ^

01:07:406 (6,1) - ^

01:08:785 (4) - I think that NC is necessary from a consistent flow. And I feel NC to be from this point oddly. For example, 01:09:475 (1) - 01:10:165 (5,1) - 01:11:544 (4,1) - I think that it is off a consistent flow. The same phrase of the latter half is similar, too. Please confirm it.

I think that rhythm and the placement are good overall.
Insane

00:01:199 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend the change of the turn to make a flow better. It becomes easy to connect to the next 00:01:889 (1) -
SPOILER

00:05:682 (6,2) - I recommend that I stack neatly. 00:06:716 (2) - end point x354 y188

01:06:716 (1,2) - I recommend that it surround the neatly. It become beautiful.
SPOILER

01:07:751 (1,2,3) - I feel rhythm to be oddly. Would you like to change the 01:07:751 (1) - to the slider? I think that the cymbals of the 01:07:751 - have good slider.
SPOILER

01:13:182 (1,1) - This is overmap. I recommend that I remove it.

GL　 ;)
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Feb

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From your Q.

General

※There is "toomoeforme.avi", However it doesn't reflection. Please put it again.
SPOILER
※Please hear a metronome from 00:26:027 - . I think that it understand that 1/2 beat is shift. It see 00:31:544 (9,1) - of the "Normal diff" and understand it. NC is clearly strange. I recommend the redraw of the line to a beat again here.
I don't quite get what you mean here, so I'll ask you by pm later.
Normal

※Please remove "Widescreen support".ok
00:01:889 (3) - NC is necessary here. yes true.

00:06:027 (2,3) - Please surround it neatly.
SPOILER
ya it sux quite a bit imo.
00:06:716 (3) - NC?
sure
00:20:337 (2,3) - I think that the double of the 1/2 slider is difficult. I recommend 1/1 slider.
SPOILER
would leave out 00:20:682 (3) - this beat and i don't want that.
00:28:785 (5) - NC is necessary here.
Sure.
00:30:510 (8) - This thinks that 2 beat sliders are most suitable. And I think that it is not necessary to take rhythm of the 00:31:372 - . You could add clap if finished in 00:31:199 - .
added the clap left the slider like it is I think it's okay imo.
00:34:303 (4) - Would you switch to a repeat slider? This could continue a flow.
okay.
00:36:199 (2) - I think that it is not necessary to prolong it to 00:36:889 - . 00:36:716 - is better.
I think it's quite alright imo. The Slider uses that bell sound or what ever it's called.
00:41:716 (4,5,6) - This flow is very difficult in the "Normal diff". I recommend that I change the 00:42:234 - to the circle.
maybe I have faith in normal players. :D (I hope Milan doesn't see this)
00:52:234 (7,8) - I felt it in strange rhythm. How about this?
ya changed it to normal white tick slider.
01:03:268 (5) - When arrange it in x208 y304, is beautiful.
SPOILER
yep. Good idea.
01:06:716 (4,5) - It's hard to look at a reverse part in overlap. I recommend that I bend little 01:07:406 (5) - to the right.
okay.
01:20:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - A flow and placement(overlap) are not good. How about this? Point 1: It perform stack in 01:20:854 (2,3) - in 01:19:130 (3) - .
Point 2: It perform stack the 01:22:234 (5) - on a tail of the 01:21:544 (4) - .
SPOILER
okay. did like you said imo.
01:23:958 (1,2,3,4) - This flow is very difficult in the "Normal diff". I recommend that I change the 01:24:992 (3) - to the circle.
I have strong faith in normal players :^D


Insane

00:01:199 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend the change of the turn to make a flow better. It becomes easy to connect to the next 00:01:889 (1) -
SPOILER
Sure why not xd
00:05:682 (6,2) - I recommend that I stack neatly. 00:06:716 (2) - end point x354 y188
uh i think that's fine imo.
01:06:716 (1,2) - I recommend that it surround the neatly. It become beautiful.
SPOILER
Sure.
01:07:751 (1,2,3) - I feel rhythm to be oddly. Would you like to change the 01:07:751 (1) - to the slider? I think that the cymbals of the 01:07:751 - have good slider.
SPOILER
My slider is just badly placed that's all, so I moved it somewhere else.
01:13:182 (1,1) - This is overmap. I recommend that I remove it.
how so? I follow vocal imo it's fine.

GL　 ;) Thank you!
Thanks for Mod :p
Synpoo
616 posts
Joined August 2013
Synpoo

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Synpoo's Hard

00:11:544 (1) - I think that the next 00:13:441 (1) - is short until. Would you do 00:12:923 - at the end?

00:24:820 (1) - ^ . Would you do 00:25:854 - at the end?

00:31:544 (5,1) - I think that NC is reverse.

00:32:923 (5,1) - ^

01:07:406 (6,1) - ^

01:08:785 (4) - I think that NC is necessary from a consistent flow. And I feel NC to be from this point oddly. For example, 01:09:475 (1) - 01:10:165 (5,1) - 01:11:544 (4,1) - I think that it is off a consistent flow. The same phrase of the latter half is similar, too. Please confirm it.

no changes to any of this, all the comboing is fine to me and it's all consistently starting on either a new set of vocals or a new loud instrument being introduced. i'll take another look at it if someone else brings up the comboing though, thanks

I think that rhythm and the placement are good overall.
update cuz there was a frickin double greenline at a spot xd
SPOILER
osu file format v14

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Feb
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Feb
thanks bae.
Lily Bread
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Lily Bread
hi,m4m from your queue.

[Metadata]
delete TAG"CINDERELLA".already exists in artist.

[Normal]
-SV change is not recommended in Normal diff,especially you don't have an Easy diff.i suggest you to use all 1.0x SV.
00:23:613 (3,4) - DS error.
00:18:268 (3) - i think grey node is better than red node.one red node makes sliders looks not good.
00:46:716 (4) - umm..i think this shape is not so good.you can make it better.

[Synpoo's Hard]
found nothing...

[Insane]
00:05:682 (6,2) - overlap them.
00:25:165 (2,2,3) - ^

00:10:165 - what about this? i think this fit the vocal better.
pic

00:17:061 (5,6) - they don't fit any music.try to use one slider from 5 to 6 to fit the violin.
00:42:234 (7,8) - DS error.time between them is 1/4.2 should be closer to 1.
00:02:578 (3) - suggest:ctrl+g for a better flow

though extra is not completed...is OD7 too low for an extra diff?i recommend od8.
Feb
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Feb

Lily Bread wrote:

hi,m4m from your queue.

[Metadata]
delete TAG"CINDERELLA".already exists in artist. okay.

[Normal]
-SV change is not recommended in Normal diff,especially you don't have an Easy diff.i suggest you to use all 1.0x SV. I used realitivley low sv already so I trust in Normal Players.
00:23:613 (3,4) - DS error. whoops
00:18:268 (3) - i think grey node is better than red node.one red node makes sliders looks not good. i like this red anchor points tho.
00:46:716 (4) - umm..i think this shape is not so good.you can make it better. i like it tho ;w;

[Insane]
00:05:682 (6,2) - overlap them. nah I want to stay consistent in sliderforms in combos.
00:25:165 (2,2,3) - ^ okay

00:10:165 - what about this? i think this fit the vocal better.
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i partly follow vocal but not only so the rhythm is fine.

00:17:061 (5,6) - they don't fit any music.try to use one slider from 5 to 6 to fit the violin. it works but it's bad i agree changed it.
00:42:234 (7,8) - DS error.time between them is 1/4.2 should be closer to 1. this not an error its wanted. :^)
00:02:578 (3) - suggest:ctrl+g for a better flow nah i like it how it is.

though extra is not completed...is OD7 too low for an extra diff?i recommend od8.

ya it's not finished I think he'll raise it don't worry.
fenks.
LinearFaze
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LinearFaze
M4M from your queue. If you find this post useful, please look at my post in your queue, thanks.

first word: unrank, suggest, note

[General]
  1. Taku's extra diff has different tags, fix this before you go for rank.
  2. very very inconsistent comboing
[Normal]
  1. for some reason the 1/2 1/1 used in this map is very confusing and sometimes doesn't follow the song
  2. 00:06:716 (1) - blanket (poor) - Pull the bottom end of that slider in a bit.
  3. 00:10:165 (1) - blanket (nazi) - bottom end is a bit too close
  4. 00:18:268 (3,4) - notes - holding the long note is fine, but this second slider feels like a ghost note after the pitch change
  5. 00:15:165 (2,3,4) - 00:19:820 (1,2) - 00:24:130 (4) - 00:36:199 (2,3) - 00:50:854 (5,6) - 00:56:889 (6,1) - 01:24:475 (2,3) - positioning - overlaps listed here don't look neat and feel forced because of the way the slider body and hitcircles are aranged
  6. 00:22:578 (1) - positioning - not an exact stack
  7. 00:24:647 (1) - timing - this note should be where a down beat is, your time signature is off by 2/1 (2/4 normally)
  8. 00:37:061 (3,1) - 00:43:958 (8,1) - notes - swap NC
  9. 00:42:578 (6) - 00:45:337 (2) - 00:50:854 (5) - 00:56:372 (5) - 00:59:130 (4) - notes - add NC
  10. 00:57:578 (1) - notes - remove NC
  11. 01:12:578 (1) - hitsounding - is it really necessary to have the triple finishes here?
  12. 01:22:234 (5) - positioning - odd stack
[Hard]
  1. pretty clean map not much to say
  2. AR -> 7.5?
  3. 00:11:544 (1,1) - notes - need to have 1 measure of rest time between spinners and objects in hard diff
  4. 00:31:544 (5,1) - 00:32:923 (5,1) - 00:57:578 (5,1) - 01:07:406 (6,1) - 01:10:165 (5,1) - 01:11:544 (4,1) - 01:21:199 (5,1) - notes - swap NC
  5. 01:08:785 (4) - 01:19:820 (5) - 01:22:578 (5) - notes - add NC
  6. 01:09:475 (1) - 01:20:510 (1) - 01:23:268 (1) - notes - remove NC
  7. 00:36:716 (4,1) - notes - this is a cruel stack
[Insane]
  1. AR -> 8.5? feels wayyy too fast rn
  2. RIP me
  3. 00:06:027 (7) - blanket (nazi) - recheck this one in relation to the notes before and after it
  4. 00:06:027 (7,1) - 00:32:751 (6,1) - 00:38:268 (6,1) - 01:03:268 (8,1) - 01:07:406 (3,1) - 01:08:441 (1,2) - 01:19:475 (1,2,3,4) - notes - swap NC
  5. 00:07:406 (5) - 00:27:406 (7) - 00:28:785 (5) - 00:45:423 (3) - 01:06:027 (7) - 01:11:544 (7) - 01:17:061 (9) - 01:18:441 (4) - notes - add NC
  6. 00:28:096 (1) - 00:44:992 (1) - 01:01:199 (1) - 01:06:716 (1) - 01:17:751 (1) - notes - remove NC
  7. 00:07:751 (7) - hitsounding - remove whistle?
  8. 00:15:682 (1,2) - blanket - is this supposed to be blanket?
Feb
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Linear Faze

LinearFaze wrote:

M4M from your queue. If you find this post useful, please look at my post in your queue, thanks.

first word: unrank, suggest, note

[General]
  1. Taku's extra diff has different tags, fix this before you go for rank. well he's not finished so I'd updated it when I get it eventually.
  2. very very inconsistent comboing maybe.
[Normal]
  1. for some reason the 1/2 1/1 used in this map is very confusing and sometimes doesn't follow the song point it out then?... I think it's fine :/
  2. 00:06:716 (1) - blanket (poor) - Pull the bottom end of that slider in a bit. wasn't supposed to be blanket in the first place, but changed it anyway.
  3. 00:10:165 (1) - blanket (nazi) - bottom end is a bit too close it's fine.
  4. 00:18:268 (3,4) - notes - holding the long note is fine, but this second slider feels like a ghost note after the pitch change I don't think so. It plays fine for me. It's not like it's not in the song at all or sth.
  5. 00:15:165 (2,3,4) - 00:19:820 (1,2) - 00:24:130 (4) - 00:36:199 (2,3) - 00:50:854 (5,6) - 00:56:889 (6,1) - 01:24:475 (2,3) - positioning - overlaps listed here don't look neat and feel forced because of the way the slider body and hitcircles are aranged
    I like these kind of overlaps alot. I don't want to change them. I find them neat tho :).
  6. 00:22:578 (1) - positioning - not an exact stack ya fixed
  7. 00:24:647 (1) - timing - this note should be where a down beat is, your time signature is off by 2/1 (2/4 normally) I know what you mean, but it's not like a needed thing I could potentially add a new timing point here, but it's worthless imo. I'd wait for another opinion or I'll let someone else check the timing.
  8. 00:37:061 (3,1) - 00:43:958 (8,1) - notes - swap NC where'd my combo go on second lol. fixed both
  9. 00:42:578 (6) - 00:45:337 (2) - 00:50:854 (5) - 00:56:372 (5) - 00:59:130 (4) - notes - add NC sure
  10. 00:57:578 (1) - notes - remove NC ^
  11. 01:12:578 (1) - hitsounding - is it really necessary to have the triple finishes here? yes
  12. 01:22:234 (5) - positioning - odd stack
whoops


[Insane]
  1. AR -> 8.5? feels wayyy too fast rn idk it's fine for me o.o
  2. RIP me idk
  3. 00:06:027 (7) - blanket (nazi) - recheck this one in relation to the notes before and after it adjusted slightly.
  4. 00:06:027 (7,1) - I comboing Vocal here it's fine. 00:32:751 (6,1) - same 00:38:268 (6,1) - as before 01:03:268 (8,1) - Listen again to them they second pair is different from (8) Combo stays. 01:07:406 (3,1) - accidently nc'd 01:08:441 (1,2) - idk its fine imo 01:19:475 (1,2,3,4) - notes - swap NC i did some changings at the end.
  5. 00:07:406 (5) - would be pretty confusing nc if you ask me 00:27:406 (7) - fine. 00:28:785 (5) - fine. 00:45:423 (3) - did sth here. 01:06:027 (7) - it's still going :/ 01:11:544 (7) - no need 01:17:061 (9) - did sth here 01:18:441 (4) - and here notes - add NC
  6. 00:28:096 (1) - no. 00:44:992 (1) - yes 01:01:199 (1) - it's needed imo to give proper feedback to the player. 01:06:716 (1) - i think i changed this from before. 01:17:751 (1) - same. notes - remove NC
  7. 00:07:751 (7) - hitsounding - remove whistle? no its needed for the vocal.
  8. 00:15:682 (1,2) - blanket - is this supposed to be blanket? no LOL

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Synpoo
616 posts
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Synpoo

LinearFaze wrote:

[Hard]
  1. pretty clean map not much to say
  2. AR -> 7.5? no
  3. 00:11:544 (1,1) - notes - need to have 1 measure of rest time between spinners and objects in hard diff lol nope, ur wrong
  4. 00:31:544 (5,1) - 00:32:923 (5,1) - 00:57:578 (5,1) - 01:07:406 (6,1) - 01:10:165 (5,1) - 01:11:544 (4,1) - 01:21:199 (5,1) - notes - swap NC
  5. 01:08:785 (4) - 01:19:820 (5) - 01:22:578 (5) - notes - add NC
  6. 01:09:475 (1) - 01:20:510 (1) - 01:23:268 (1) - notes - remove NC
  7. 00:36:716 (4,1) - notes - this is a cruel stack

    no changes thx
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