1. Easy (1.67 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (4.81 stars, 212 notes)
3. Normal (3.35 stars, 111 notes)
4. Teras' (4.99 stars, 290 notes)

Nekoo[] wrote:

General~
=3 :3


Teras'~
- Seeing the same things as in the Insane, sudden changes in the middle of a combo, and I say the same here, not gonna make you change it, I just don't think it plays well.
- I'm not really a fan of such a huge spacing in streams but that's just an oppinion, no need to change that.I'm a huge fan of them xD
- I would set the OD to 8 but well that's up to you xD I prefer when the OD is high
00:21:722 (9) - How about adding a new combo here? Fixed.
00:43:076 (12) - How about putting a new combo on these sort of spacing change?Fixed.
00:49:743 (7) - ^ ^

Nekoo[] wrote:

General~
=3

Easy~
00:10:993 (4) - Maybe it would look better to place this ethier 1 grid up or next to 00:10:160 (2) done
00:16:410 (2) - Place this without using grid snap and it will be lined up with 00:15:160 (1) ^
00:48:910 (4) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 down? ^
01:04:951 (4) - The clap at the end of this slider REALLLLYY sounds off to me, I would probably remove it. ^

Normal~
00:17:243 (3) - I think this is way to confusing for a normal map, I would fix the spacing here cause really, it's evul =3I'm not allowed to be evil? fixed
00:52:451 (6,7) - This sounds really weird, how about moving 6 to red tick and 7 to the big white and then increase the 7th's slider to end at the white? done
01:03:493 (3,4) - This part just bugs me cosmitically, it just looks ugly with sliders covering the notes etc, just a point out.changed

Hard~
-Would probably increase the OD by 2 cause it's really annoying now >.< done
Looks fine otherwise.

Insane~
-Is there a reason to why you change the spacing like everywhere in the same combo? Like 00:08:910 (7), 00:35:785 (6), 00:38:076 (3), 00:48:285 (4,5,6) I'm sure it's intentional, I just think it's really weird, although I wont ask you to change it =P
00:07:035 (2) - Uhm I hope that this is just an error, increase the slider so that it ends on the red tick =Pmy bad, fixed

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General;
- Everything is fine (song folder)
- Nice song
- Check kiai time, it has to start and end on a note hmm, ill think about this for a bit

Easy;
- 00:10:160 >> one grid up done
- First kiai time should end at 00:18:910
- 01:04:951 >> delete one repeat, extend the slider until 01:05:993 then add a note at 01:06:140 ill think about it
- 01:15:160 >> second kiai time should end here
- 01:29:535 >> silence this timing section completely I didnt want this completely silenced, but ill think about it
- You tried to silence the last spinner gradually but it really doesn't sound like it does. it does to me o_o

Normal;
- 00:57:868 >> delete 3 repeats
- 00:58:910 >> make a slider like the one there ^ but just one repeat done those 2
- Again check kiai time, if possible make the same in all diff.
- 01:29:535 >> silence this timing section completely
- You tried to silence the last spinner gradually but it really doesn't sound like it does.

Hard;
- First kiai time starts and ends on a note but I'll be better if it ended at 00:19:326
- Second kiai time should end at 01:15:576
- 01:20:368 >> (4) overlaps slider (5)...kind of ugly yeah, fixed
- 01:29:535 >> silence this timing section completely
- You tried to silence the last spinner gradually but it really doesn't sound like it does.

Teras';
- First kiai time ends here 00:20:160
- Second kiai time ends here 01:15:993
- Maybe end 3rd kiai time here 01:28:076 ??

Insane;
- First kiai time ends at 00:19:535
- 01:29:535 >> silence this timing section completely
- You tried to silence the last spinner gradually but it really doesn't sound like it does.

* Nice maps, star, I personally like it how you mapped insane from 00:17:243 to 00:30:160 :3

Bikko wrote:

My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!


RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
GREEN : NAZI
PURPLE : DO NOT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY

[Teras']
- Decrease OD 1 Tick. I know what you(Teras) prefer, but OD 9 is pretty unusual case. If your map has over then 180 bpm, I can agree with you.... but... IMO, This overall speed is can not associate This note's flow and density. 144 bpm is not so fast.
- Well... These Evil streams are necessary? I can not say 'This is impossible.', but 8~9 note streams of 144 bpm are pretty crazy to me. also, look these spacing... wow... This is extreme streams map as well.[/color]

00:06:514 (10,11,12,13) - move to right 1 gridNope.
00:21:722 (9) - New combo here Nope.
00:25:576 (11) - New combo here, and delete 00:25:993 (1)'s new combo Kay.
00:26:305 (3,4) - I couldn't found any valid reason for this spacing. Distance snap.
00:30:055 (4/4 1x bpm S) - Do not postioning sound change timing section at where exist note exactly. If player hit this note little fast, this section do not work for this note. volume reducing timing sections are same as well, but I couldn't find another questionable section. (00:05:993 - this one is on slider... so, maybe fine? but I recommend to modify this one too.) The sections you point out. There are no way I can change them.
00:08:076 (6,7) - spacing error? If it is on intention, fine. Small jump, not an error.
00:16:410 (4,5,6,7,8) - move to left 1 grid, right 1 grid. Kay.
00:40:160 (1) - new combo here Nope.
00:44:326 (2,3,4,5,6) - These spacing is little distorted. Isn't it? Not really
00:54:951 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:56:826 (7,1) - I know (7) is 1/2 slider so maybe most of people do not confuse on this, but IMO, it is still too close. I find no problems with this. Insane is insane.
01:18:076 (7) - move to 1/8 gird right, 1/8 grid down without grid snap. yeah, absolutely no meaning nazi work, you can laugh for this. I don't see anything there.. <.<
01:25:576 (8) - move to 1/8 gird down without grid snap. 0.0x distance snap is not perfect. ...yes. this is just my hysteric. absolutely no meaning.^
01:26:618 (12,13) - this spacing is intentional? If not, fix.Sigh.. intentional.

sonnyc wrote:

Random modding

Teras'
00:30:055 (8) - Eliminate Whistle Fixed ~
01:09:743 (11) - 1 Grid down Done.

Vikon wrote:

[General]
seems the default soft-clap doesn't fit the song, consider to use other sound instead? (e.g. the attachment) Ill think about this for a bit

[Easy]
00:14:743 (4) - add clap? done
00:17:243 (1) - add finish? ^

[Normal]
00:36:826 (4) - add whistle? ok
00:45:785 (1) - this spinner is too short for normal I though auto bonus was 4000 for normal?
01:13:910 (1) - ^
01:26:410 (2) - end this slider at 01:26:826 ? and start the spinner at 01:27:035 ? done

[Hard]
01:26:201 (1,2,3) - spacing? fixed

[Insane]
01:13:285 (3) - make it symmetric done

star~

Vikon wrote:

[Teras']
00:00:785 (4,6) - these sliders are too near the edge? I don't see any problem
00:09:743 (11) - add clap? Nah
00:13:076 (12) - ^ ^
00:16:930 move this timing point to 00:16:826 (kiai end with hitobject) I don't see a problem with it being placed where it is now
00:30:055 move this timing point to 00:30:003 (at least place it before 00:30:055 (8) )Done ~
00:44:535 (3,4,5) - spacing No problems with the spacing there according to me...


star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+12, or maybe more. ok
remove the sliderwhisltes....... i mean if you want to add whistle to slider's beats, don't add them on the slider, it will change the sounds of sliderslide (more noisy), check your diff and find them and remove (unless you use them on purpose! 00:05:160 (3) - this one..? just guessing. but, in [Normal], 00:52:451 (6) - can't feel this one is on purpose too.) will look into it
a little thing for the spinner.... usually find it sounds strange when a short spinner come between notes.... mute spinnerspin and spinnerbonus, maybe? silenced most in hard/insane

hating default soft-hitclap, but can't think of sth better (must be a lot) atm... k. ill try to find a better one

[Easy]
00:09:743 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing... 3: 1 grid right. done
00:45:576 (3) - ...needn't to be such quiet... use a 70 or about volume for the finish at the end is enough. ^
fair enough.

[Normal]
00:03:910 (1,2) - add whistle to the end. done
00:57:868 (1,2) - strange... what i think is you should follow the vocal here so both slider should repeat for 3 times. but not 1 for 4 times and 2 for only twice. thats how i had it originally, but fixed
01:06:410 - add a note? done

[Hard]
00:00:160 (1...) - for the first part... don't know your hitsounds is following....what...
a suggestion, o=normal, x=whistle.
oooxooxooxooxoox ooxooxoxoxo ....blablabla
have try with this. add sliderwhistle to the last xoxo if you want. done
00:14:118 (4) - 1 grid down + 1 grid left? don't know if you set it here on purpose. fixed
00:32:451 (1) - hating short spinners since it sounds..= =...won't list other short spinners. your choice.
00:53:493 (8) - try to make it better... i tried
00:58:701 (5) - a new combo on this. and... if i were you i'll still use the same shape as 1234, but spacing increase a bit, to show an ECHO effect. strongly suggest you to do so XD if i understood that right, done

[Teras']
overall 9? why?!!!!!! this song is only BPM 144 so don't be that hell. also lol at the 4.8x star rating. thought i fixed that? oh well, I guess Teras will have to fix it along with changes
00:21:722 (9) - new combo? this combo is too long imo.
01:19:639 - add a note?
nice job

[Insane]
star rating wins.
first part's hitsounds... same as hard. ok
00:16:826 (1,2) - spacing. people will easily think it's 1/2. fixed i think
00:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't have a "jump" feeling here. ill think about changing it
00:58:701 (1,2,3,4) - same as what i said in Hard= =

starred. not bad.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.


[Teras']
overall 9? why?!!!!!! this song is only BPM 144 so don't be that hell. also lol at the 4.8x star rating. Fixed the overall and yah. My diff is a trap <.<
00:21:722 (9) - new combo? this combo is too long imo. Done.
01:19:639 - add a note? Done.
nice job

starred. not bad.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.


[Teras']
overall 9? why?!!!!!! this song is only BPM 144 so don't be that hell. also lol at the 4.8x star rating. Fixed the overall and yah. My diff is a trap <.<
00:21:722 (9) - new combo? this combo is too long imo. Done.
01:19:639 - add a note? Done.
nice job

starred. not bad.

1. unsnapped inheriting timing sections

• 
  00:16:213(1,2) feels like you should add a repetition to 1 and move 2 to 00:16:838(white tick)

KuraiPettan wrote:

:3

Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
00:01:838 (3) - Remove whistle at end
00:03:922 (1) - Add whistle[/color] ^
01:04:963 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning and add whistle ^

[Normal]
00:58:713 (2) - Jump in a normal diff D: change it. fixed
00:59:755 (x) - Add note ? ok

[Hard]
01:14:338 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was done

[Insane]
00:52:463 (6) - 00:52:463 (6) - Remove reverse Ill think about this one

;D

KuraiPettan wrote:

:3
[Teras']
00:09:755 (11) - Add clap ? Nah.
;D

[DBF] wrote:

[Overall]
Well.. nothing special. All fine with spacing.

[Normal]
00:47:880 (2) - need bit.
00:59:547 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:26:422 (2,3,4) - little hard to reading. Same colors like shirt.
00:32:463 (1) - will be better if you put end in 00:33:505. I understand you try make it for voice, but better if you
gonna keep it to BPM. Also add finish in hitsound and remove whistle.

[Insane]
00:32:463 (1) - same like normal mod.

noneed wrote:

Hi roflninja :3 hi

Easy:
Don't you want to add a little break in easy?maybe from 00:18:922 to 00:30:172.beginner would appreciate it.. Ill think about it
00:16:422 (2) - just suggestion:delete the slider and start the spinner here. done
00:48:922 (4) - 1 grid left or (3) one grid right ^
01:08:088 (4) - don't you want to make this slider like 01:04:963 (4)? did that to change the pattern
fine map.

Normal:
00:17:255 (2) - spacing its a 0.5x slider, so spacing should be fine
00:38:505 (3) - hmm the second 'repeat' is a bit hidden by (2).move the slider a bit up? done
nice

Hard:
00:16:005 (1) - delete it? i like the way that flows, but maybe
00:23:297 (8) - 1 grid right done
that was fun to play ^^'

Insane:
awesome!

Teras:
also

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:713 - This repeat is not at the right place.
00:58:505 - Add a finish?

[Normal]
01:20:588 (3) - It's out of grid snap.Make it more simmetrical.

[Hard]
Wow,it became that hard so harshly
I could say that it's an Insane...but well.
01:10:380 (2) - This circle is completely hidden,don't think it's rankable.

[Insane]
00:59:338 (4) - Stack with 00:58:505 (4).
01:20:380 (2) - Again,tis' hidden.

Good luck,star~

Teras wrote:

Mr. rofl
Here I am with mah ninja mod. that made me laugh xD

Just some random suggestions for the hitsounding mainly. Duh.

[Hard]

00:53:505 Put the finish here. Not on the end of the slider.
00:56:838 Add finish.
1:01:838 Add whistle.

[Insane]

00:13:505 Add finish.
00:29:338 New combo? That stream is kinda long.
00:55:797 Remove new combo
00:56:838 I would put the finish on this slider here instead of the end of it. Also. I would recommend that you increase it's length by 1/2 tick.
1:27:255 I would move this spinner 1/2 tick forward and then put a note here. Note that you will have to shorten the spinner if you do this.

Leorda wrote:

Ahai

[General]
Delete OSB theres no osb in my folder o.o

[Easy]
Increase the HP Drain? ok

00:06:838 (1) - Remove clap?
00:07:255 (2) - Clap?
00:07:671 (3) - Remove clap?
00:08:088 (4) - Clap at start?
00:09:755 (1) - Clap?
00:10:172 (2) - Remove clap?
00:10:588 (3) - Clap?
00:11:005 (4) - Remove clap at start and add clap at end?
01:03:505 (1) - Remove clap?
01:03:922 (2) - Clap?
01:04:338 (3) - Remove clap?
01:06:838 (1) - ^
01:07:255 (2) - Clap?
01:07:672 (3) - Remove clap?
01:08:088 (4) - Clap at start?
01:09:755 (1) - Clap?
01:10:172 (2) - Remove clap?
01:12:255 (3) - Remove clap at end and add clap at start?
01:13:088 (4) - Clap?
01:16:838 (3) - Remove clap? all done except this one

[Normal]
Try add clap on 2nd and 4th white tick will try to

00:26:005 (4) - Make symetric? done
00:49:130 (3) - Extend to white tick?done
01:00:588 (3) - Not stack perfectly with 00:59:963 (2) at end fixed

[Hard]
Try add clap on 2nd and 4th white tick will try to

00:24:130 (2) - Not stack perfectly with 00:23:505 (1) at end fixed
00:50:171 (1) - Finish? ok

[Insane]
00:03:088 (2) - Not stack with 00:02:255 (4) fixed

I can't find something wrong ･ﾟ･(ﾉД`;)･ﾟ･
Great song
STAR

P.S It's okay if you mod some crappy mod

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi ninja sorry for the delay ;_; it's alright

[General]
- I don't like the custom clap, it's too sharp. The normal hitsound (non-costum) just like on Teras' diff, sounds good imo or maybe you can lower the volume of the soft-hitclap file hmm...
- Please add something on Teras' diff name, only Teras' as diff name feels like it lacking some impact
- Umm...the tags are too long and I'm too lazy to check it. Well, as long as Teras is on the tags it's fine might remove a few then

[Easy]
00:32:463 (4) - a note on 1/2 beat will confuse novice player especially if the majority of the notes before are on 1/1 beat, so I suggest to move this back 1/2 beat to white tick then lengthen the slider 1/2 beat to red tick ok
00:57:880 (1) - this is fine cause there are time for the player to pause and the song is there to guide them
01:04:338 (3) - same case as above, my suggestion is to delete this then move 01:04:963 (4) to where (3) was ^
01:16:838 (3) - NC done
01:27:255 (1) - remove finish ^

[Normal]
00:36:838 (4) - change to finish is better imo done
00:56:838 (3) - add finish on the start of the slider and remove the one on the end ^
01:03:505 (3) - NC ^
01:16:838 (2) - ^ ^
01:27:046 (1) - remove finish ^

[Hard]
00:17:255 (5) - this 0.5 slider is very too sloppy, try using 0.7x or 0.8x speed or a spinner ill keep this for now
00:36:838 (3) - finish is better :3 done
00:50:796 (3) - put the whistle on the start and the end only, this sound weird because of the whistle sliderslide ^
00:51:838 (6) - ^ ^
00:55:796 (6) - ^ ^
00:59:963 (3,4) - if possible please put the start of the (4) slider above the (3) slider ^
01:27:255 (1) - remove finish ^

[Insane]
00:17:255 (2) - same problem as in hard diff again, ill keep it for now
01:07:046 (3) - the jump is a little weird, most of your jump on the kiai time is a jump between slider on the end of every lyric. That's why I feel this is a little out of place ok,changed
01:27:463 (1) - remove finish done

Good map and Good Luck ninja

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Teras']
00:17:046 (1) - shorten this by 1/1 beat than add a note at 00:20:172 I prefer how it is right now
00:27:672 (3) - if you're following the music shouldn't this be a single note and 00:27:984 (4,5) - should be move back by 1/4 beat? Nah, I love my type of mapping. And I use these alot. So I will keep it as it is. Then about the diff name. I dunno what to call it.

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*mp3 sounds a bit strange (quality-wise). Starts out sounding great (perhaps 320kbps quality), but then for the rest of the song it's low and questionable. Can you try to find a higher bitrate (max of 256kbps) mp3 for this map? Ill look into is then
*Are all of the tags really necessary? o-o; not really
*The ending spots for kiai could be more consistent throughout the difficulties. Right now they end at different spots or in the middle of spinners. =s ok
*180 offset sounds better, but if you find a new mp3 it won't matter. :c changed for now

[Easy]
00:16:422 (1) - expected this to be a lower volume (or gradually decreasing towards silence). gradually decreased

[Normal]
*Difficulty settings are a bit low. I suggest raising drain, overall difficulty, and approach rate one tick each. ok
00:17:047 - expected a note here added
00:45:797 (1) - this is a bit too sudden for a Normal diff, so I suggest removing it. changed to a slider

[Hard]
00:23:088 (6,7,8,1) - (nazi) could you move 6,7,8 up and to the left a grid so that 8 doesn't overlap 1? Actually, do the same for 00:21:846 (1,2) too (since I thought they were a stream). done
00:32:463 (1) - Fine as opposed to Normal's.
00:40:171 (1) - A bit short (even for hard). leaving this one for now

[Insane]
00:39:130 (6,7) - Actually, I expected 6 to be the longer slider and 7 the shorter one o-o; ill think about that one

[Teras']
*Some evil streams near the beginning; mainly 00:15:588 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), but orz