Yo Kiviman, I'm so sorry for being so late, school got me fucked up for a whole month, to the point I was even unable to come online for 2 weeks ;-;. Anyways, I'm here to mod it (finally XD). Keep in mind that: 1. I'm a little bit rushed, so it may not be as organized as I usually mod, but quality will still be intact (or at least I'll try to mod as best as I can); 2. Lots of suggestions are related to how I see the map, so you may see a lot of subjectivity in my mod; 3. I'm not counting Extra diff for any of my suggestions, since it's not ready, I'll consider it doesn't exist for now.
[General]
If you have yet to consider it, this map needs a full spread. There can easily be an Easy diff, and also a diff between Normal and Hard (Normal+ maybe, or there's also the probability of making Hard into Insane and the new diff into a Hard). Point is, that diff could have more diffs to make spread more comfortable and made available for a wider range of players (Since people are starting to practice 9k now, the Easy diffs are the diffs most played atm, so if you want your map to be played, there's one more reason to make an Easy, or at least request a GD or something lol).
Why don't you map the first 1.5 seconds of the song? I can somewhat understand on Normal, but Hard should have that part mapped, since it feels uncomfortable to simply have it ignored.
I'm having this problem with the beatmap, the use of the columns 1 and 9 (going from a 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9 thingy). Those columns are mainly used for pinky fingers, which makes even a single note more uncomfortable than it looks. So you kinda have an idea of the problem here. The number of notes and patterns made with columns 1 and 9 make the map a lot more difficult and uncomfortable than it should be, and while, technically, there's no problem in that area, playing-wise, it is. I'm not saying to completely remove them (it would be a 7k then), just to lower the number of patterns and notes that uses such columns, as they are really uncomfortable while playing.
Why no Full Version, Full Version is better than TV Size ;-; (Not talking because I hate TV Sizes, even tho I don't like to map them lol)[Normal]
00:04:250 (4250|7,4357|7,4681|1,4789|1) - These feel way out of place, considering the difficulty of the map as a whole (not talking about SR). Heck, even I'm having trouble hitting it, since it feels so sudden. I would reccomend doing something like
THIS00:40:940 (40940|3) - LN is over-extended, should be finished here 00:41:048 -. But since I wouldn't reccomend such short LNs on these diffs, I reccomend you to delete that LN and make it into a single note (if you want, you can make it a double or triple note, but the LN removal is a must imo)
00:45:446 - Missing note?
01:19:805 (79805|8) - shorten this LN up to here 01:20:021 - and add a LN here 01:20:021 (80021|4) - (doesn't need to be on that column exactly)
[Hard]
00:23:242 - Make it something like
THIS for more coherence with the music, and more comfortable
00:26:696 - LN here? To represent the stream-ish sound that pop ups here (that section feels empty playing-wise too)
00:40:940 (40940|4) - Remove and make it into something like this 00:40:940 (40940|5,40994|3,41048|5) - (if not, LN is still too long, sound isn't that prolonged)
01:27:791 - Map the finishing sounds, it feels weird to simply ignore them
That's all I can see from a (very) quick look at the map, didn't even thought about going in-depth tbh XD. Anyways, I covered my main worries regarding this map, in the future, you can call me back to make a more in-depth mod when it receives some more mods, but for now, this is my mod
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Good luck with your beatmap!