[Normal]
- 00:27:846 (2) - It may be a little bit offscreen! I'd suggest you to move it down!
- 00:29:791 (4,5,1) - In my opinion you could have a better flow like that imo :
- 00:36:457 (3) - Maybe you can try to rotate it by 55 degress with selection centre to get a nice flow w/ 00:37:291 (4) - !
- 00:40:068 (1,2) - the flow between these objects could be improved imo! Maybe you can do something like that :
- 01:05:624 (4,5,1) - That triangle could be more polished!
- 01:48:679 (5) - you never use red anchor for your sliders in your map! I'd suggest you make a basic curved slider to keep your diff consistent!
- 02:08:957 (1,2,3) - The slider 02:09:791 (2) - 's return arrow is weirdly placed Maybe you can make the pattern like that o: :
- 02:55:346 (2) - It's be awesome if you can add some small curves c: like that
- rly gud!
[Hard]
- 00:32:013 (2) - Little blanket to fix!
- 00:36:735 (3) - It'd be weird to have a straight slider here because of 00:36:179 (2) - just before. The flow between 00:36:179 (2,3) - isn't good either o: I'd suggest you to curve one more slider or try another pattern!
- 00:39:513 (6) - Same here! Flow between this and 00:38:957 (5) - is kinda weird. I'd suggest you to rotate 00:39:513 (6) - by 50 degrees w/ selection centre! It is more enjoyable imo!
- 00:40:902 (3,1) - Small overlap! Be careful!
- 01:09:791 (2) - I'd suggest you to move that object at 491|102 for a better aestetic effect with 01:08:957 (1) - ! It'll also make a smooth jump w/ 01:10:068 (3,4,5) -
- 01:32:846 (1) - I'd suggest a NC here to emphasize the little stream!
- 02:13:124 (5,6,1) - That triple is kinda weird. Why don't you make a triple like those awesome things ? → 02:04:235 (6,7,1) -
- 02:26:179 (7) - I'd suggest a NC here aswell for the same reason!
- 02:43:402 (3) - ♥
- 02:43:679 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - You shape could be really better here! c:
- 02:49:513 (3,4,5) - ♥
- 02:58:957 (3) - This is a well placed note but I feel like you could improve that pattern like that :
Also , you'll get a smooth jump between 02:58:957 (3,4) - who would fits w/ the vocals here! - 03:14:235 (2) - The little blanket has to be fixed here
- rly rly gud
One word : Beautiful and chilling mapset! (:
You can call me agani whever you have enough stars! The mapset is truly brilliant!