1. Dream (3.48 stars, 124 notes)
2. Hard (2.68 stars, 94 notes)
3. Mk's Easy (1.41 stars, 53 notes)
4. Normal (1.6 stars, 51 notes)

Easy by MkGuh
Normal by me
Hard by me
Dream by me

gokugohan12468 wrote:

First 1# w/
Can i make a diff?

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Bychan <3 Call me when its ready >W<

ecdonald wrote:

Sis puella magica<3

why don't you add "mami tomoe" to tags? every characters but her are in the tags XD

1. 00:15:452 - Misisng Clap.

1. 00:04:911 (1) - 00:06:938 (1) - Redundant NC imo. It makes the combo too short.
2. 00:15:451 (1) - Missing hitsound.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Mk's Easy]

1. 00:15:452 - Misisng Clap.

[YuBy's Normal]

1. 00:04:911 (1) - 00:06:938 (1) - Redundant NC imo. It makes the combo too short.
2. 00:15:451 (1) - Missing hitsound.

And again the ByBy spacings. I'll call things like 00:03:290 (1,2,3) - or 00:06:127 (2,3,4,5) - etc in Hard. Can I ask what those patterns are aiming to express in the first place? Parts like there feels pretty consistent in sound, and using such inconsistent spacings feel really random and unstable personally. Furthermore, the change of spacing is like 1.4x to 1.6x, which is really small in range. That small change doesn't feels effective enough to deliver players that a different pattern is getting in use.

I had a feeling to go through a discussion regarding your spacing logic after seeing several maps made by you.

1. Uncheck widescreen support on all diffs (it is only unchecked on one of them)
2. I have no idea why you put all the characters in the tags though, to me it doesn't really make sense.
3. Check AiMod for tags conflict.
4. In general it felt like all difficulties used too much whistle so to me it was a bit annoying, but it might be just me.

1. 00:27:614 (1) - you can curve this better for a nicer blanket - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4808340

1. 00:06:735 (2) - remove this, I don't see a point in this hit circle, there is nothing in the vocals and the song doesn't really ask for it either (and this is a normal, there is already enough 1/2)
2. 00:22:141 - add a hit circle here, it would fit the vocals! (or use a reverse slider to vary the rhythm a bit), but if you want to map to the insturments instead of vocals it's fine as well, I just thought it would fit nicely here

1. 00:06:938 (5) - it would flow better if this slider had a similar direction to this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4808401 - right now it doesn't flow too well because of this --> http://puu.sh/nW0Ye/890f30aa68.jpg - it felt wrong to play, also, if you think it will ruin the following pattern here's a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4808432
2. 00:13:019 (1,2,3) - this would flow so much better! :3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4808457

1. 00:10:992 (3,4) - I feel like a slider would fit better because there is nothing "big" on 00:11:195 (4) - example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4808519
   OR
   00:10:992 (3,4,1) - ctrl+G on these so the rhythm would be really awesome because hit circles fit 00:11:398 (1) - because of the piano, but of course up to you
2. 00:18:695 (3,4) - same here - http://puu.sh/nW27H/ae8efb491a.jpg
3. 00:20:722 (3,4) - and same here

MkGuh wrote:

Fix clap for me if it's really missing XD

ByBy13 wrote:

Sorry no I will make the whole set by myself

1. Add Japanese title of the anime to the source/tags or get ssmebody ore familiar with Japanese metadata.
2. Give us a hint of who did the collabs. There are way too many names in the tags, I am confused and I believe a few more players will be confused, too.

1. 00:20:317 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is too much for the easiest diffficulty. The stack of 00:19:911 (4,2) - could be questionabl to the players, but when you mix it with intense 1/1 chain it gets really complicated.
2. 00:32:479 (1,2) - the transition here feels forced. While players will be able to play it well, it looks visually untidy. Why not try something like this?
3. 00:39:776 (1) - instead of using curves you could go with more intense 1/1 rhythm in order to stress the music at this point. This would help you get rid of the only slider with a tricky curve. Totally up to you, though.
   
   Looks cool.

1. AR4 kills the difficulty for me, with such a SV and spacing set up, using anything lower than 5 is pretty difficult to read due to the way SV/AR balance gets broken.
2. 00:22:749 (1,2,3) - I see your intention here, but after a soft and consistent 1/1 Easy jumping to 3/2 gaps feels somewhat unnecessary. Why don't we map the beat on the white tick with a repeat added to 00:22:749 (1)?
   Note: I would expect all 3/2s be changed in a similar way or remain untouched depending on your decision regarding this patern.
   
   Definitely not a difficulty I'd label as a Normal for a song like this. DEspite what the Star Rating tells, the difficulty feels too boosted, in my opinion. And let me tell you why, the song itself is fairly simple and calm and for that reason I expect little or no challenge from a Normal difficulty mapped to this song. While this difficulty is excessively forcing 1/2 beats. I am definitely not okay with this.

1. 00:21:533 (4,5,6) - not exactly sure about the flow here, I would prefer (6) to be a straight slider both for the sake of flow and representing the song. (as a straight slider gives a slightly "faster" feeling of the map.
2. 00:08:154 (1,4) - 00:27:614 (1) - 00:42:208 (1) - more of a personal dislike, but is there really a reason to curvve the sliders this way? There is absolutely nothing that would suggest a red anchor-slider, as a result, I feel like the sliders are going on on their own rather than actually meaning something in the song.
   
   Seems alright except for the things mentioned above.

1. 00:11:195 (4) - therre is no need to jump on this beat, it has practically nothing that would suggest a jump. Please, tone the jump here or get rid of it.
2. 00:29:235 (1,2,1,2,3) - try to get more opinions on the way the thing flows here. While it is most probably fine, I'd prefer to hear more from the testplayers just to make sure.
   
   Seems to be fine.

Bakari wrote:

Add Japanese title of the anime to the source/tags or get ssmebody ore familiar with Japanese metadata.

fmm I think the source is "魔法少女まどか☆マギカ" , and the tags are "梶浦由記 鹿目まどか 暁美ほむら 巴マミ 美樹さやか 佐倉杏子 キュウべえ"(optional)

Bakari wrote:

ByBy13 wrote:

Sorry no I will make the whole set by myself

Oh you.

[General]

1. Add Japanese title of the anime to the source/tags or get ssmebody ore familiar with Japanese metadata. Added plus I am familiar with japanese metadata.Kinda.
2. Give us a hint of who did the collabs. There are way too many names in the tags, I am confused and I believe a few more players will be confused, too. Sure I will <3

[Collab Normal]

1. AR4 kills the difficulty for me, with such a SV and spacing set up, using anything lower than 5 is pretty difficult to read due to the way SV/AR balance gets broken.
2. 00:22:749 (1,2,3) - I see your intention here, but after a soft and consistent 1/1 Easy jumping to 3/2 gaps feels somewhat unnecessary. Why don't we map the beat on the white tick with a repeat added to 00:22:749 (1)?
   Note: I would expect all 3/2s be changed in a similar way or remain untouched depending on your decision regarding this patern.
   
   Definitely not a difficulty I'd label as a Normal for a song like this. DEspite what the Star Rating tells, the difficulty feels too boosted, in my opinion. And let me tell you why, the song itself is fairly simple and calm and for that reason I expect little or no challenge from a Normal difficulty mapped to this song. While this difficulty is excessively forcing 1/2 beats. I am definitely not okay with this.
   I remapped the whole difficulty by myself, making it more easier.I hope it's fine now.Btw,setted the AR to 5

[Collab Hard]

1. 00:21:533 (4,5,6) - not exactly sure about the flow here, I would prefer (6) to be a straight slider both for the sake of flow and representing the song. (as a straight slider gives a slightly "faster" feeling of the map.
2. 00:08:154 (1,4) - 00:27:614 (1) - 00:42:208 (1) - more of a personal dislike, but is there really a reason to curvve the sliders this way? There is absolutely nothing that would suggest a red anchor-slider, as a result, I feel like the sliders are going on on their own rather than actually meaning something in the song. fixed mine
   
   Seems alright except for the things mentioned above.

[Dream]

1. 00:11:195 (4) - therre is no need to jump on this beat, it has practically nothing that would suggest a jump. Please, tone the jump here or get rid of it. fixed
2. 00:29:235 (1,2,1,2,3) - try to get more opinions on the way the thing flows here. While it is most probably fine, I'd prefer to hear more from the testplayers just to make sure. flows fine for moe but yeah I will do
   
   Seems to be fine.

Despite for a few things I disagree with completely, I believe that the set can be a good one if enough time and effort is put into checking and apllying things.

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Best of luck!