1. Another (4.99 stars, 500 notes)
2. Hyper (4.81 stars, 426 notes)
3. Standard (2.84 stars, 220 notes)

1. The offset seems slightly early. I got Offset: 2,106
2. I don't know if you're going for ranking with this but I'll say anyway. If you are, you'll need to reencode the MP3, since it is at 320kbps. Could you reencode it down to at least 256? (Since this map was uploaded before the max limit was 192, so you can have 256 with this).

The red section at 01:21:415 has a different offset to the ones in the other diffs . It is only 2ms, but you should still make it the same as in the other diffs.

Also, this seems too hard to be a "Beginner" diff imo. Having jumps and other stuff in a Beginner doesn't usually work. I think you should rename this to "Standard", and then make another, easier "Beginner". I think that would work better since the harder parts in this would make sense if this was "Standard".

1. Sliderticks sound extremely soft. I'll give you some specifics about this. You don't necessarily need to change them, it just sounds a bit awkward. The only time you really need to change sliderticks is when they're silent, because even if this is an easier difficulty, breaking a combo because of a slidertick you can't hear is just plain unfair.
2. 00:26:787 (6) - The slidertick here could be a bit louder. I only barely caught it my first time looking through this.
3. Section starting at 00:54:732 - The sliderticks here are also on the soft side. I could deal with the volume being turned up a tick.
4. 01:02:129 (2) - Much too soft. Much, much too soft.
5. 01:06:239 (3), 01:10:143 (6), 01:13:431 (5), 01:16:719 (5) - Silent/close to it? No thank you.
6. 01:46:102 (5) - Slidertick at 01:46:924 is much too soft.
7. 02:21:034 (2), 02:22:677 (4) - Slidertick is much too soft.
8. 02:38:705 (2) - ^
9. 02:41:992 (3) - ^ to a certain degree. Don't know why, but I can hear this much more easily than the previous point I mention.
10. 02:45:280 (3) - ^
11. 02:51:855 (3) - ^
12. 02:58:431 (1) - A Finish to send this off as just an aside in the echo would be a nice touch, don't you think?

1. These blue points are purely hypothetical. I would like you to try them and see how you like them.
2. Find a place to put a spinner, to add some score variety.
3. 00:28:225 (6) - Put a Clap on this. It helps accentuate the end of the phrase and sounds pretty sexy.
4. 01:02:129 (4) - Put a New Combo mark on this.
5. 01:02:951 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark from this.
6. 01:04:595 (2) - Put a New Combo mark on this.
7. 01:10:143 (6), 01:13:431 (6), 01:16:719 (8), 01:50:006 (6), 01:53:294 (6), 01:56:581 (2), - Remove the Clap from the endpoint.

1. Find a place to put a spinner, to add some score variety.
2. 00:41:582 (12) - Put a Finish on this. It sounds nice and accentuates that big finishing part.
3. 01:47:746 (1) - ^

Mogsworth wrote:

Sorry if this seems really nitpicky, but these are things I just can't ignore.

Standard:

1. Sliderticks sound extremely soft. I'll give you some specifics about this. You don't necessarily need to change them, it just sounds a bit awkward. The only time you really need to change sliderticks is when they're silent, because even if this is an easier difficulty, breaking a combo because of a slidertick you can't hear is just plain unfair.
2. 00:26:787 (6) - The slidertick here could be a bit louder. I only barely caught it my first time looking through this.
3. Section starting at 00:54:732 - The sliderticks here are also on the soft side. I could deal with the volume being turned up a tick.
4. 01:02:129 (2) - Much too soft. Much, much too soft.
5. 01:06:239 (3), 01:10:143 (6), 01:13:431 (5), 01:16:719 (5) - Silent/close to it? No thank you.
6. 01:46:102 (5) - Slidertick at 01:46:924 is much too soft.
7. 02:21:034 (2), 02:22:677 (4) - Slidertick is much too soft.
8. 02:38:705 (2) - ^
9. 02:41:992 (3) - ^ to a certain degree. Don't know why, but I can hear this much more easily than the previous point I mention.
10. 02:45:280 (3) - ^
11. 02:51:855 (3) - ^
12. 02:58:431 (1) - A Finish to send this off as just an aside in the echo would be a nice touch, don't you think?

Hyper:

1. These blue points are purely hypothetical. I would like you to try them and see how you like them.
2. Find a place to put a spinner, to add some score variety.
3. 00:28:225 (6) - Put a Clap on this. It helps accentuate the end of the phrase and sounds pretty sexy.
4. 01:02:129 (4) - Put a New Combo mark on this.
5. 01:02:951 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark from this.
6. 01:04:595 (2) - Put a New Combo mark on this.
7. 01:10:143 (6), 01:13:431 (6), 01:16:719 (8), 01:50:006 (6), 01:53:294 (6), 01:56:581 (2), - Remove the Clap from the endpoint.

Another:

1. Find a place to put a spinner, to add some score variety.
2. 00:41:582 (12) - Put a Finish on this. It sounds nice and accentuates that big finishing part.
3. 01:47:746 (1) - ^

Standard's okay, Hyper is really damn nice, Another is one I'm ambivalent towards.

Only not popping because of superficial things/it'll pop when you reupload. I'll be happy to rebubble, though.

Alace wrote:

oh thanks for the modding
it`s really useful