[EZ]
circle size-1,distance snap is too low and the note is too thick...
00:10:895 (2) - whistle?

[NM]
OA+1
00:11:971 (3) - whistle?
01:22:659 (3) - clap
Soooooooo many repeat phase...

[adron zhero]
00:31:498 (2,3) - overlapping problem?
00:42:687 (3,4) - 1 grids up

[SK]
circle size-1
looks great

star and good luck

adron zhero wrote:

SadKangaroo wrote:

The only I have to say is:
Djnn,the only modders you SHOULD listen are BATs.

Seriosly, if the only moders you SHOULD listen are BATs, there would be no point listening non-BATs moders, would it?

Well,I was just talking about suggestions.I don't like when modders are trying to teach somebody how to map.Better or worse - each mapper could map as he wants.
If you making mistakes,yes,you SHOULD fix it,if you want your map to be ranked.Otherwise I can ignore each suggestion,if I don't want to make any changes.But the point of modding is to help,not just write at least 1 suggestion to receive some kudos.

yangzd88 wrote:

[SK]
circle size-1 I think it's fine.
looks great

Thanks.

Disable letterbox in breaks.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Your artist should be Groove Coverage, and your title should be Poison (Nightcore Mix). Add Alice Cooper to tags, he made the original.

AHEM.

Hi

[General]
1) When I saw the SB, there is one leaf is stopping pulsing at 00:25:814
2) Disable Letterbox during breaks, since you have a SB

[Timing]
Your timing is bitttttt off
1) BPM : 168,800 Offset : 1.666
2) BPM : 168,800 Offset : 94.054

[Easy]
00:20:131 (6) - New combo, very long for easy diff
00:20:841 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:24:394 (x) - Add note here?
00:36:116 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy diff
00:47:483 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
00:56:363 (6) - Add clap at end?
00:58:139 (7) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:27:267 (2) - End at 01:27:622?

[Normal]
All is unsnapped notes in timing, please snap it (Timing -> Resnap all Notes -> Yes)

00:20:131 (x) - Add note here?
01:31:895 (1) - A bit far from spinner, since this is a normal diff

[Adron Zhero's Poison]
01:31:175 (4) - Move 1 grid down and right?
01:44:673 (11) - Move 1 grid up?

[SK's Insomnia]
Fine~

Good song
STAR

Hi :3
Green = Sugestion
Orange = I think you should fix it.
Red = You need to fix it.


[General]
Remove the "Nightcore - Poison (Djnn).osb" and fullsubmit

[Easy]
00:18:000 (2) - Add clap ?
00:36:116 (1) - Move 1/2 later and end it at the same spot it was. Add note.
00:51:390 (1) - Add finish
00:58:139 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - [Nazi] Move 1 grid up
01:14:124 (5) - Remove clap and add finish
01:27:267 (2) - Reduce by 1/2
01:29:043 (4) - Extand by 1/1

[Normal]
00:20:131 (x) - Add note
00:22:973 (8) - Add note
00:57:074 (x) - Add note
00:59:915 (x) - Add note
01:45:739 (2) - Remove clap
01:45:739 (2) - Remove clap
02:11:314 (2) - Remove clap

[Adron Zhero]
00:10:185 (3) - Remove clap and add whistle
02:22:504 (1) - Move 1/2 later and end it at the same spot it was.

[SK]
Fine :3

Star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

[General]
Remove the "Nightcore - Poison (Djnn).osb" and fullsubmit

If I did, there wouldn't be a storyboard.

There are 2 .osb file.
Keep "Groove Coverage - Poison (Nightcore Remix) (Djnn).osb" and remove "Nightcore - Poison (Djnn).osb"

Greetings from #modreqs!

Overall

Pretty sure all diffs but Easy had no breaks in them at all (those tiny blinks in adron zhero's diff don't count ). Wouldn't hurt to add them, even if just for a few seconds.

The storyboard timing is noticeably asymmetric. I'd adjust the timing points so that the same parts of the song are accompanied by the lights every time. Preferably at "poison" in "your lips are venomous poison". Maybe some milder pulsing during points beginning with "I wanna" that precede the "poison" parts.

Easy

00:11:961 (1) - end this spinner one beat sooner.

00:14:625 (kiai begin point) - map "I wanna" in the lyrics.

most of the map - lots of things that sound like they should be mapped aren't, and lots of things that sound like they shouldn't be mapped are. Here's an incomplete list of examples - some good, some bad:

00:38:957 (1) through 00:49:259 (1) - parts like this are good. you have symmetric 1,2,3,4 combos and then a combo that combines the two neatly.

01:26:912 (1) - mapping the snare here and then cramming "one look" into one slider, then giving "could" and "kill" a circle and a slider, respectively, seems kind of sloppy. It would be better to do 1,2 how you did 3,4. (maybe extend the combo to 6 if you want to include the snare)

01:34:372 (1) - feels weird to have the word "touch" unmapped after 4.

01:26:912 (1) - I complained about this part earlier, but that you thought to map the same part the same way each time is a good thing. Do the same here as before.

I hope what I'm saying here makes sense.

Normal

kind of the same stuff as in Easy, but not as severe.

Adron Zhero's Poison and SK's Insomnia

Good stuff. Nothing to be modded here.

Final Remarks

I'll be starring this. If for anything, for making a Nightcore map without an anime girl background. Way to innovate.

Hello, hello~

General-
The SB is really poor. All I see are some pulsating leafs (wich do not fit the background). If you want to SB soemthing, I suggest you to search for VECTOR ART images rather than just pasting some leaves over a random art. (though I really like the fact that you mapped some nightcore wihout the typical anime girl at the background)
The offset feels really late to me. I get like 35 ms late :/. Ask for a recheck.

Easy-
Clapping pattern for this diff on the Kiai Time is not consistent. CHeck at what you did at Normal. A clap on every 2nd and 4th beat. Do the same here.
00:03:080 (3) - whistle
00:04:501 (6) - ^
00:05:212 (8) - whistle the repeat of the slider
00:08:053 (2,4) - The end of the sliders should have a whistle, not the start
00:36:116 (1) - Make it end at 00:37:181 - and add a finish
01:14:124 (5) - remove the clap, add a finish.
01:27:267 (2) - remove the whistle at the start
01:30:109 (5) - remove the whistle
02:22:504 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. (it should end at 02:24:102 )

Normal-
PLEASE add a break. Normal players are not ready to play a non stop diff yet.
00:25:814 (2) - finish
00:36:116 (1) - add a soft finish
01:37:213 (2) - Clap the start
01:46:094 (3) - unclap
01:51:422 (3) - ^
01:56:750 (2) - add a finish
02:11:670 (3) - unclap
02:16:998 (3) - unclap
02:22:326 (2) - add a finish

Adron's-
It's great, though I'm worried about the soft sections having the claps you use for the kiai times. Just use the drums (the custom soft whistle) for those sections.

SK's-
Same as adron's, great, and try to use just the custom whistle at the sections on where it's used.

Sk's is <3, so I'll star

Dunno if i said before, but BPM sounds too off in the final part of the song.

BPM should be:168,862

star

♥ Star ^^

starred ^^

Very good map,I would like do a guest diff,but I'm a mapper noob ><

edit:
you can give a kudosu to LRJ =>IRC mod

Download: Groove Coverage - Poison (Nightcore Remix) (Djnn) [Sidra's Toxic Jumps].osu

~Star

Sidramon wrote:

Very good map,I would like do a guest diff,but I'm a mapper noob ><

edit:
you can give a kudosu to LRJ =>IRC mod

Sidra,I'm sorry,I haven't downloaded your difficulty,but due to it's name it must be Insane,right? It's not accepted to have more then 2 Insane's in one mapset.

some people say,it's more an Hard than insane(4,7stars)^^"

star this map ! nice rythym

star!

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