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OverallPretty sure all diffs but Easy had no breaks in them at all (those tiny blinks in adron zhero's diff don't count
). Wouldn't hurt to add them, even if just for a few seconds.
The storyboard timing is noticeably asymmetric. I'd adjust the timing points so that the same parts of the song are accompanied by the lights every time. Preferably at "poison" in "your lips are venomous poison". Maybe some milder pulsing during points beginning with "I wanna" that precede the "poison" parts.
Easy00:11:961 (1) - end this spinner one beat sooner.
00:14:625 (kiai begin point) - map "I wanna" in the lyrics.
most of the map - lots of things that sound like they should be mapped aren't, and lots of things that sound like they shouldn't be mapped are. Here's an incomplete list of examples - some good, some bad:
00:38:957 (1) through 00:49:259 (1) - parts like this are good. you have symmetric 1,2,3,4 combos and then a combo that combines the two neatly.
01:26:912 (1) - mapping the snare here and then cramming "one look" into one slider, then giving "could" and "kill" a circle and a slider, respectively, seems kind of sloppy. It would be better to do 1,2 how you did 3,4. (maybe extend the combo to 6 if you want to include the snare)
01:34:372 (1) - feels weird to have the word "touch" unmapped after 4.
01:26:912 (1) - I complained about this part earlier, but that you thought to map the same part the same way each time is a good thing. Do the same here as before.
I hope what I'm saying here makes sense.
Normalkind of the same stuff as in Easy, but not as severe.
Adron Zhero's Poison and SK's InsomniaGood stuff. Nothing to be modded here.
Final RemarksI'll be starring this. If for anything, for making a Nightcore map without an anime girl background. Way to innovate.