Hard:
-00:54:875 (4,5,6,7) - When the lyrics have added emphasis like this, increase the spacing a bit. Not by too much, but just a few grids farther apart. Too far is just annoying to play.
Also, the map is mostly 1/2 stream after 1/2 stream after 1/2 stream after 1/2 stream after 1/2 stream after 1/2 stream. This is boring. Follow the vocals a bit more, it'd make the map a lot funner. Like, say,
00:56:860 (1) - This shouldn't be a repeat slider, it should be a beat-long slider.
That change alone makes it play better. There are a lot of changes you can make, look through the map and see where you can ditch a 1/2 stream in favor of mapping a bit more to the vocals/melody.
Normal:
1. Move the 1/2s so the aren't touching each other like they do now.
2. Sorry, but this difficulty is boring and repetitive. Group of 3 1/2s over and over and over and over... Again, use the vocals to your advantage to create some interesting patterns. Don't map exactly to them, but use them as a basis to create a funner map.
Easy:
00:33:919 (1) - Move the middle slider node one grid to the right, to make the slider prettier.
00:40:978 (4) - Remake this slider please, it isn't pretty. It's not balanced.
00:48:037 (3) - Make the tilde stronger please.
01:31:272 (1) - Remake please, it isn't balanced. It should be balanced, not look like it's ready to collapse.
02:55:978 (1) - ^
03:16:272 (2) - ^
Also, less hit objects, especially sliders. Instead, place them to the vocals that are 'strong'. As it is it's fine, though. However, for 4 minutes it's... blah.
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No star for now, PM me when you've made changes so I can look it over again, please.
