General
Your current .mp3 has a bit rate of 320kbps. It should be under 256kbps, so lower the quality a bit
Is it necessary? I don't want impairing quality of mp3 file anymore. It was damaged already.
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Why is the BPM 150.01? Just make it 150BPM
I believe this BPM is correct. I already contact with a modder who is good at timing, maybe he'll handle this more correctly.
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EDIT2 : I modify its bpm and offset. just 0.01 bpm and 4ms, but I feel it is better than what it was. as a result, your opinion was right.
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Your skin is AWESOME. Seriously, especially the spinner, and I usually hate spinners XD
The song is really cool too *_*
hahah

Easy
It kinda feels bordering on the easy+ side, but I thought this was really fun to play XD

00:30:441 (3 - 5) - Move one grid right
this suggestion is against its distance snap.
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00:51:040 (3) - I think it would sound better if you moved this to the previous white tick (00:50:840)
...well, I can't understand this. If your suggestion was 'make one note more at white tick' I can agree. but, this is little wierd. also, It has same beat with 00:47:840
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01:21:638 (3) - Move one grid left
I found out this slider was non-symmetrical. I just modify it.
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01:24:038 (3, 4) - Right one grid
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01:26:438 (1) - Same thing
01:29:238 (end of 2) - Move slightly closer to (1) of next combo?
I didn't follow your suggestion totaly, but I tried fix them all with effort. maybe fine now.
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01:45:636 (1) - Change whistle to finish?
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01:46:836 (end of 2) - Move down one grid
moved 2/3 grid down (....well, I'm so silly)
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01:49:636 (3) - Lol spacing. Move one grid right
oops
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01:52:036 (1) - Change to finish?
01:58:436 (1) - Same here
02:17:434 (3) - Again, move to previous white tick (02:17:234)
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02:33:633 (5) - New combo here (if you do, remove new combo on next note)
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Most of these are minor things, so really nice difficulty!

Normal
00:19:242 (1) - Change whistle to finish
Some really nice patterns going on here
01:10:439 (6) - Change to finish? If you do I suggest also changing the hitsounds on (4, 5)
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01:36:037 (5) - New combo
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01:52:036 (1) - Change hitsound to finish
01:58:436 (1) - Same thing
02:04:835 (1) - Add finish (I think it sounds good and it keeps it consistent with the part coming right after)
I just understand you have some discontent for sound of this map. maybe I should find sound modder to handle this. but now, I'm not sure about your suggetion. I'll consider about it carefully.
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02:17:634 - Put a circle here?
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03:02:431 (5) - New combo
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I really like this as well ^_^

Hard
00:13:243 (2) - Move one grid right
this suggestion is against its distance snap. I can't move this with distance snap + grid snap. but I tried it without gird snap and make them(00:12:843 (1,2)) in symmetry. maybe now better than what it was.
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01:04:039 (1, 3) - Move left one grid
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01:08:039 (4 - 6) - Move one right
I move it witout gird snap, maybe find now.
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02:37:633 (3, 4) - Move (3) one grid right and (4) two. Also maybe start slanting them upward slightly so the end of (4) is closer to (1)?
this suggestion against its distance snap. I can not move them with distance snap.
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By the way, I watched Insane and Madness just for the heck of it, and the appears to be a lack of hitsounds throughout half of the song (like the beginning and in the middle). Is this intentional? O_o Also, lol at Insane having a higher max score than Madness
lack of hit sounds was intentional. in fact, I don't like hitsounds so much except clap. and 'insane has higer max score than Madness' was intentional too. (I was failed about this on my first ranked map, but they has very similar max score too) because Madness diff can not enjoyable with mouse. most of player use mouse, so I think, If Madness diff has much more max score than Insane, This is unfair.

ANYWAYS. Really awesome mapset (from what I can tell anyway, haha) so +1 star!
EDIT: I forgot to press the "Star this map!" button OTL
I appreciate.

[Skin]
The reverse arrow kind of sticks out as it is. Maybe have a more transparent background and a brighter color on the arrow itself?
I'm not sure about this.
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With that hitcricle overlay, I'd use darker colors on the slider tracks instead of white.
oh, how can I change it? I want to change it, but I don't know how to change it.
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I didn't know you could associate sounds with combobursts. That's awesome. Were these from the kr voice set as well? I remember Jam being incredibly annoying with the kr voice set, hehe. Air slash all day and annoying my friends was the best.
These are JP version voice from PC version. My DVD device on PC was broken long days ago, so I can not export KR voice set from PS2 DVD. I can record it with analog device and convert it, but It takes too much time and effort. and, I prefer Jam's JP version voice more than KR version. IMO, ROBO-KY, SOL, Bridget,Ino... many character's KR voice sets are better than JP version, but Jam's is not. unfortunately.

There's a couple pixels in your hp bar that you may have forgotten to delete.
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[General]
Um, this stack leniency is unrankable.
oh, I didn't know about this. I really want to make it 0.2, but rule is rule, criteria is criteria. I understand I must follow this. I ask it to a BAT, he said "all to the left(0.2)" is unrankable. so, I change it to the 0.4 (2 ticks to the right) at [M],[I],[H], and [N],[E] has 0.7 now. ah... *sigh*
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Remove "Game" from tags. It'll be in the genre.
oh
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[Easy]
Actually, looks good. Nice.
I'm very happy.

[Normal]
00:48:040 (1) - Maybe lower this a few grids/curve it a bit to reduce overlap? Breaking distance snap for this small thing won't matter.
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Nice, nice.

[Hard]
01:21:238 (4,5,6) - Maybe reverse these three so that they're facing the opposite direction?
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[samijul]
Should see if you can get a taiko bg for this. Jam's head is being cut off by the play field.
Sounds fine to me, as usual.
I'll
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EDIT2 : modified

[Insane]
Where are the hit sounds? So few of them in this diff.
well, sound issue again... hm...
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EDIT2 : modified

Holy crap, those jumps are crazy. Too hard for me. T_T
Jump is justice.

[Madness]
HP drain 9? That's way too high - especially on a jumpy map like this when you expect to have a higher amount of misses.
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Kind of lacking in hit sounds on this one too.
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Difficulty is way too high for me to mod, sorry.
I understand.

A lot of symmetry style mapping, so it's hard for me to do much suggesting, hehe. Looks great, though, beyond the ridiculous difficulty on Madness.
in fact... Madness diff is not so difficult. because density of notes is too low. (look kirby mix things, crazy spacing + ridiculous density. They are only for tablet + keyboard users. lol.) most of testers(of course, almost top class players) got few misses and high ACC on my [Madness]. just hit the all notes, high ACC is guaranteed. This is my mapping style maybe. easy beat, but crazy spacing.

Al2e mod.

[Madness]___★★
- Sound
01:32:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't put clap for many time. It a bit annoy. You can put like (Clap> None >Clap >None...)
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- Spacing
03:04:040 (1,2) - You see what problem is? (The spacing is too far)
how about 1:37:640? there is same combo too.
that is enough to get 300s, sliders adjudge ot hit is much more lenient then circle...
well, I agree with you that is little strange spacing. but It is readable and beatable.
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- Other.


This diff. put a lot of jump.That was not a human can do.
When you use mouse to play this game you will find that. It is impossable.
That's why [I] has more max score than [M].

I can't believe [M] is perfectly impossible to mouse player. anyway, It's possible to touchscreen or tablet. I always find tester when I make the map. They got good result at my [M] with few play count. also, This is my best result when I test it.


Too many mappers who use mouse don't care about 'This map is possible with touchscreen or not.' Most of map in OSU! are humanly impossible to touchscreen because of their density of notes. even [H] diffs!!!! damn without thinkng notes. so, tell me. IN THIS SITUATION, WHY I CONSIDER ABOUT MOUSE PLAYERS AT MY [M]? and, [I] has more max score than [M], if someone is a mouse player and he wants fun and ranked score, [M] is not for him so plz play [I]. [M] is just challenge diff for touchscreen or tablet.

well, If someone can get FC at [M] with mouse, He deserves be called The Mouse Champion. maybe this can be enjoyment of my [M].


[Insane]___★★
- Spacing
00:15:240 (1,2) - Too far
00:16:640 (2,1) - ^
00:17:040 (2,1) - ^
01:06:640 (4,1) - ^
01:16:240 (15,1) - ^
01:24:440 (5,1) - ^
01:37:040 (4,1) - ^
01:51:840 (4,1) - ^
01:58:440 (1,2) - ^
02:43:040 (5,1) - ^
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- Others
There was the same problem in this diff..
You make a map for people. is making fun for them.
But this jumping map isn't.
Surely, I make the map for people's fun and enjoyment. Don't be intolerant because of you do not enjoy jumps. It is just personal preference. If I invade your map thread, and point out your all notes beacuse of just density of notes, and said 'This note is not for fun', you can be pleased it? Plz understand concept of my map.

[Hard]___★★★★
- Sound
00:38:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A lot of wistle
00:42:440 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^
00:48:840 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
02:04:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:08:440 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:240 (2,3,4,5) - ^
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- Others
This map is greater than other one.
Well, this diff has little jumps too, but it is ok? :P

[Normal]___
No Problem!
thx you

[Easy]___
No Problem!
I'm pleased.

[All]
You get one your name in the list!
It is a good map, but use a lot of x2.0. So, if you can change, change it.
STAR!

I'm very thank you. but unfortunately, I can not feel any enjoyment without jumps. [E],[N] maps for noobs so there is no jumps, but over than [H] diff, I use jumps for fun. It is my style and I strongly believe there is someone who can enjoy my jumps.

Sry for the delay…

[General]
Soft clap sounds terribly…
well... but I love that sound.

[Normal]
01:36:040 (1,2,3,4) - Sooooooo many finish
hm... I'm not sure that but...
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Can't find too much and just give a star
Thank you very much

Easy:
Fine.

Normal:
Fine.

Hard:
Fine.

Insane:
Soooo many random jumps and unreadable patterns...
readable to who is enough skilled to beat this diff's spacing.

Madness:
Random jumps.
I positioned it all in symmetry. It is on intuitive. and I refer many ranked map's irregular spacing jumps and Rated Mapping Techniques.

02:04:240 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner... But seeing how many objects were hidden throughout the diff, I guess it was made on purpose.
I'm not sure about this. I positioned it on purpose, and there is no criteria about this. most case it is just 'stacked with spinner' note. but sometimes I positioning it without thinking. in fact, easy and normal had this kind of positioning too. I modify them when before you summoned. I'll consider about this is fair or not. It is little different issue with just stacked note.
at least, I agree with you, this kind of positioning is must be sublated in easy and normal diffs.
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31's taiko:
Very nice diff.
samiljul'll be pleased

E N I I I I isn't a good thing, seeing as taiko doesnt "really" count could you make hard below 4.5 stars or so?
I couldn't. Already my [H] has too low life drain, but still can't reach 4.5. seriously, I don't believe this star diffculty system much. It is just guideline. 0.21 is not so far, and I can not believe my [H] is actually [I]. My [H] is totally [H].

The maximum width allowed for a combo burst is 500 so resize yours, as far as I know rest of the folder is ok
(some small nazi suggestions)
oops, It is really important thing. well, I must reboot my computer for this work. so,
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Easy:
01:18:440 (4,5) - align
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Normal:
00:46:840 (4) - stack with the previous "1"
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Hard:
02:52:840 (1) - stack with the previous "4"
this is in symmetry with 02:53:240 (2)
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Taiko:
~

Insane:
nice patterns
01:06:640 (4,1) - don't like this jump
01:09:840 (3,1) - ^
01:13:040 (15,1) - ^
01:16:240 (15,1) - ^
maybe that spacing is looks very weired to you. but to me, This kind of really short reverse slider in rapid long combo, very hard to read. because of my hand is always on my screen when I hit rapid long combo.
so, I make it jumps. delete that slider and put in 1 circle at that timing, and position. and look its spacing. This is logic of these jumps.
I don't care you understand it or not. anyway it is readable, beatable for mouse players too. well, enjoyable or not is just subjective.
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Madness:
harsh hp drain but looks good
I really didn't expect you say to this diff, 'good'
I'm very sorry but I can't reduce its Hp drain. If I reduce it's Hp drain just 1 tick, It is more easier diff then [I] by star difficulty system. This is why I don't believe star diffculty system. anyway, I respect star difficulty system a little, only for maplist order :P
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*star*

Well,I have some doubts about hitsounds,so you better listen the whole set,and then decide change or not.And,if you changing hitsounds,for example Whistle to Clap,don't forget to clear Whistle at first.

00:11:240 (2) - Clap.
00:14:440 (3) - ^
00:20:840 (3) - ^
00:24:040 (3) - ^
00:27:240 - ^
00:51:040 (3) - Move to 00:50:840? Sounds fun to me
01:13:040 (4) - I think you need to move to 01:12:840.
01:16:840 (1) - Finish?
01:21:240 - Add a note with clap please.
01:32:040 (7) - Move to 01:32:240 and add a clap.I like the sounding.
01:44:040 (2) - Clap.
01:47:240 (3) - ^
01:53:640 (3) - ^
01:56:840 (2) - ^
02:00:040 - ^
02:17:440 (3) - Move to 02:17:240?
02:33:240 - Add a note with finish?
02:47:640 - Add a note with clap?
02:51:240 (5) - Move to 02:51:040?

00:14:440 (4) - Clap?
00:20:840 (3) - ^
00:24:040 (3) - ^
00:27:240 (4) - ^
00:43:640 (6) - Move to 00:43:840 and add Finish?
00:46:840 (4) - ^ to 00:47:040?
01:04:040 (1) - How about:
01:19:240 (7) - Move to 01:19:440 and add a Clap?
01:47:240 (4) - Clap?
01:53:640 (3) - ^
01:56:840 (3) - ^
02:00:040 (4) - ^
02:32:840 (3,4) - Claps?
02:37:240 (2,3) - Delete and add a note at 02:37:440 (2)?
02:39:640 (5) - Remove Finish and add it to 02:40:040 (1)?

01:19:440 (2) - Add a clap?
01:22:640 (2) - ^
01:25:840 - ^
02:45:840 (2) - ^
02:49:040 (2) - ^
02:52:240 - ^

[Easy]

Well,I have some doubts about hitsounds,so you better listen the whole set,and then decide change or not.And,if you changing hitsounds,for example Whistle to Clap,don't forget to clear Whistle at first.

00:11:240 (2) - Clap.
00:14:440 (3) - ^
00:20:840 (3) - ^
00:24:040 (3) - ^
00:27:240 - ^
00:51:040 (3) - Move to 00:50:840? Sounds fun to me
01:13:040 (4) - I think you need to move to 01:12:840.
01:16:840 (1) - Finish?
01:21:240 - Add a note with clap please.
01:32:040 (7) - Move to 01:32:240 and add a clap.I like the sounding.
01:44:040 (2) - Clap.
01:47:240 (3) - ^
01:53:640 (3) - ^
01:56:840 (2) - ^
02:00:040 - ^
02:17:440 (3) - Move to 02:17:240?
02:33:240 - Add a note with finish?
02:47:640 - Add a note with clap?
02:51:240 (5) - Move to 02:51:040?
I follow your modding almost totaly, except change note's timing.
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[Normal]

00:14:440 (4) - Clap?
00:20:840 (3) - ^
00:24:040 (3) - ^
00:27:240 (4) - ^
00:43:640 (6) - Move to 00:43:840 and add Finish?
00:46:840 (4) - ^ to 00:47:040?
01:04:040 (1) - How about:
01:19:240 (7) - Move to 01:19:440 and add a Clap?
01:47:240 (4) - Clap?
01:53:640 (3) - ^
01:56:840 (3) - ^
02:00:040 (4) - ^
02:32:840 (3,4) - Claps?
02:37:240 (2,3) - Delete and add a note at 02:37:440 (2)?
02:39:640 (5) - Remove Finish and add it to 02:40:040 (1)?
I follow your modding almost totaly, except change note's timing. but, I follow about this thing - 01:04:040 (1)
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EDIT : ah, I mean,1:05:640's circles. I really don't understand beats like 01:06:540 :P

[Hard]

01:19:440 (2) - Add a clap?
01:22:640 (2) - ^
01:25:840 - ^
02:45:840 (2) - ^
02:49:040 (2) - ^
02:52:240 - ^
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[Madness]
Touchscreen,huh?
yeah
I like your hitsound work.
Just mind on adding some triple claps,like this:
01:19:640 (3)
But I think it's fine enough.
I change it in that kiai time section. second section has little different patters, so I didn't change that.
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